A little sweet through the fragrant

It is a test of people's patience to revise the article, and Yuncheng will not ask people to revise the manuscript if it is not necessary.

After working together for several years, I have a good understanding of their own level, unless the article collapses, or part of it is cut off, it will not affect the internal forecast of the whole article.capacity, otherwise no change.

At present, the most changed part of Liu Wenbai's manuscript is that it has been cut off without affecting the plot of the whole story.

After cutting, he needs to complete the connection again, which is equivalent to cutting a plot, and he has to rewrite a paragraph.

The obvious problem is that he doesn't arrange events in a dense timeline.

The articles written in the past are arranged in a dense timeline, but that is a short article.

Most of them are directly spanned by him for a long time, picking and writing wonderful ones.

In the big adventure theme, using what Yuncheng taught him at the beginning, referring to the rhythm of a certain hot-blooded manga, he wrote very well at the celebration banquet after entering the dungeon and finishing the villain in the early stage. The problem lies in the adventure.

The first volume is almost unchanged, and the second volume begins. In order to keep the thrilling incidents during the adventure on the same day, to show that this happened on the same day, the protagonist has fled for a long time before gaining a short period of peace. , At the stage when there is no rivalry, I will write about the protagonist's actions, demeanor, and what he is doing in every detail, so that the rhythm is very, very slow.

This part made Liu Wenbai's face pale, he was afraid that Yun Cheng would tell him in a second that the manuscript was useless, so take it back and burn it.

The clerk in the shop mentioned this to a familiar scholar. Recently, there have been many people wandering in the shop. After sitting for a while, all they heard were "delete delete". It wasn't their articles, and their steps were weak.

The pressure on Liu Wenbai, the client, can be imagined.

Qian Manying took him here as a negative teaching material, and asked his painters to work hard to draw, "You don't want the boss to tear up the manuscripts yourself, do you?"

After Mu Hui and He Quan received the gossip, they didn't even think about celebrating the new year.

Especially Mu Hui, he wanted to go home, and he had to go out of Fucheng.

When the fine school ended another day, Liu Wenbai was blocked by the two of them, and they dragged him to a nearby tavern, ordered some small dishes, and asked him for news.

"Is it very strict?" Mu Hui asked.

"Of course it's strict." He Quan said, "The three of us spent several months collecting materials at the time. Although there was a delay in the training class during the period, this script has been written for a year...We still have to pay for the finishing touch..."

Liu Wenbai originally wanted to say that it was okay, but on the usual normal difficulty, it was because his transition and connection skills were not in place, so many parts were cut off, and all the rewritten parts were the connection parts, without any changes to the plot.

Thinking about it, after saying this, isn't that an admission that his writing is poor?So he nodded, blamed Yun Cheng, and repeated He Quan's words: "Of course strict."

By the way, I asked the two of them about their progress, "Have you finished writing? Last time I said that I wrote for a year, and my husband is about to have a baby. I haven't written it yet. Are you two the same?"

At the beginning of the same period, it was too the same.

He Quan is okay, it is already the end volume, after the end is finished, he will go through the inspection himself, and the manuscript will be handed in after a year.

Mu Hui was a little hesitant, "I have a book that I plan to rewrite..."

Liu Wenbai was startled, "What's wrong with you?"

Mu Hui rewrote the fourth volume, because a previous clue was buried, and he was not careful when reviewing the review. In the new volume, because of this clue, everything was wrong.

He was going to talk to Yun Cheng about this, but when he heard that Liu Wenbai's manuscripts had been being deleted, now that he heard that Yun Cheng was strict in reviewing manuscripts, he was heartbroken.

Liu Wenbai didn't care about saving face anymore, and asked Mu Hui to take the manuscript to the shop tomorrow, "Are you going home soon? Hurry up and show him, or you will make mistakes after you go home..."

It just doesn't feel like living.

Whether he will go home or not, he has to hurry up early, the shop will be on holiday, and Yun Cheng won't be really busy until New Year's Eve, so he has to jump in line to see about this matter.

Yun Cheng didn't know about this yet, and was confirming with Ye Cunshan the time to buy New Year's goods, whether to go during the mid-month vacation or wait for the annual leave.

There are many shops in Fucheng, and the goods are complete. Others bought for other people's homes have already been prepared, and the rest of their own things are bought.

Ye Cunshan rests in the middle of the month, and he wants to take a mock exam with his classmates.

They were thin-skinned and embarrassed to come to the door, so they asked Ye Cunshan to accompany them.

This exam was also organized by Ye Cunshan, so he agreed to accompany him.

It can only be arranged during the annual leave.

Yuncheng asked Cunyin again, "Are you going to help Xiaotian until the door closes?"

Chuyin nodded, "The guys I hired can do some simple calculations. After there are discounts, they calculate very slowly. I also taught them how to use the abacus when I was helping. I have to go home to practice after the Chinese New Year holiday."

Knowing how to count for no reason is a headache for the guys.

It will count, but the monthly payment will be different.

Liu Xiaotian told them that he will be assessed in the coming year, he is good at calculating accounts, and in the future he will only collect money to calculate money, so he doesn't have to go to work later, and the monthly payment will also be added.

Therefore, depositing silver is still very popular in the shop these days, and people have to ask him to learn abacus when they are free.

If you wait until the holidays and then go out to find someone to learn from, you will have to pay tuition fees.

He's going to be busy until the end of the year, and the cooked food and New Year's goods at home, such as buns, steamed buns, fried fruits, etc., will be made by someone else.

Yun Cheng originally wanted to ask the cook to come over, but Ye Cunshan said he would make it this year, "It's been a long time since I made it, let's do it ourselves."

It was Ye Cunshan who hadn't done it for a long time. Calculated carefully, after he went to Yu County to hire someone to help him, he cooked less, and even less after he came to Fucheng, so he studied late and cooked dumplings for himself.

Yuncheng asked how to make rice cakes, "Do you want to make rice cakes at home?"

That’s not necessary, there are a lot of things at home this year, there are so few simple things, it’s a new year’s taste to do it together, and the others are kept simple.

Ye Cunshan: "There is a rice cake shop, let's pay more, and ask them to give a few bowls of steamed rice, and a pot of rice cakes that have been pounded to be stamped. Let's eat some rice with sugar and make stamps together."

As he said that, he remembered something, "A classmate made an appointment to go to the temple to pray for blessings this year, but I declined. Let's go at home during the year."

I have been to the temple for saving money, and I went there when I asked Ye Da for a safe talisman. He said that the incense is very strong, and there must be many people during the Chinese New Year. Copies or engraved copies are fine, and they will be enshrined in temples, and other pilgrims will buy them in the future, which is also incense money.”

Some rich people have a lot of money and will donate golden bodies, but their families are no match.

No one read the scriptures at home, let alone in the shop.

Early the next morning, Yuncheng went to work at the Huaben shop, and told the treasurer Jin that he asked a clerk to go to a familiar study to buy scriptures. I know how much to buy, but I want to buy more delicate ones, not rough ones."

Liu Wenbai was delighted when he heard it, "Why are you looking for shopkeeper Jin? Look for me."

Yuncheng remembered that Liu Wenbai's house was selling books and sweaters.

"Your family still sells scriptures?"

Liu Wenbai said that he invited several study buddies to drink, and after many inquiries, he confirmed, "It's hard to say anything else. Many people don't buy it. With that spare money, they would rather go to a teahouse or tavern for an afternoon and read a book anyway. I have heard people say it a few times, and he has finished reading it, and he can still eat and drink, but if someone tells him, he doesn’t need to read it himself.”

But the scriptures are different. They all want to make the family smooth and safe.

I have something to do at home, so I want to burn incense and worship Buddha.

Incense money is only a few copper coins, and it is not good to take it out, so the scriptures are the first choice.

They are sold all year round, especially during the Chinese New Year. "People in Fucheng are more particular than our country people. They use scriptures to worship their ancestors."

Yuncheng didn't mind being talked about a lot by him, so he just regarded it as gaining knowledge and accumulating materials, turned around and told shopkeeper Jin that there was no need to ask, and he asked Liu Wenbai, "My whole family will go, how many books should I buy? "

Liu Wenbai: "Generally, ten or twenty books are enough. Does your family not usually go to temples? Ye Cunshan only goes after the final exam?"

Yuncheng rubbed his nose guilty, "Then why should we buy one hundred or two hundred copies?"

Liu Wenbai: "That doesn't need to be so many. For a family of four, ten copies are enough for each person, so make up forty copies."

After worshiping Buddha, Yuncheng became superstitious and disliked the number four as bad.

88 means that there is no need to collect money, and there is no shortage of money.

"Otherwise, 66 books, six or six will go smoothly."

Just as he was talking, Mu Hui came to the shop with his manuscript.

His face was pale, his eyes were big bags, and he didn't sleep well all night.

Yun Cheng was taken aback, "Why are you like this?"

Mu Hui glanced at Liu Wenbai, Liu Wenbai shook his head slightly, Mu Hui knew that Liu Wenbai hadn't told Yun Cheng, so he opened his mouth, talked, and pushed several manuscripts to Yun Cheng's hand.

With a height of 1.7 meters [-], standing at the table with his head downcast, it makes people feel unbearable to watch.

Yuncheng told him to sit on the stool by himself, "It will take a while for me to finish watching, you sit first."

Mu Hui is the one with the most unstable writing skills among them, but he is aggressive, willing to change, daring to try when he sees an opportunity, and has the courage to do it.

It is very difficult for him to write a story about solving crimes. Similarly, it is a type that readers have never seen before. There are not many logical loopholes, and some other shortcomings can be tolerated.

When dealing with his manuscripts, Yuncheng's review focuses on the logical chain of the plot, and other people's plots are a little exaggerated, as long as they don't collapse too much, he can accept it.

The first draft of the first volume was brought out by hand, and there was no problem.

From the second volume, they introduced the outline and filled in the details. Yuncheng also taught them to draw a fishbone diagram and a causal relationship diagram to record clues and timelines.The content padding is not bad.

The third book was written during the training class, and it is obvious that there is a hedging of ideas.That is to say, I used what I learned on the spot in my own script, which led to a sense of separation.

Looking at the cover of Yun Chenghe's book, it is marked with the words "first draft of the first edition".

No wonder it's such a thick stack.

There were waste manuscripts, and Yun Cheng took a pen and paper to make a brief record for fear of confusing the clues.

After reading these three volumes, it was time to reach the fourth volume that Mu Hui said he wanted to rewrite.

There are a lot of books and it takes a long time. It's time for dinner. Seeing Mu Hui's crumbling appearance, Yun Cheng couldn't wait any longer, so he said to him: "I think it's also a rewrite. If you change it forward, it will take more time than rewriting it." longer."

Moreover, the clues have been disrupted and reorganized many times, which will also confuse his memory.

The reason for his writing mistakes is that there are three versions of the third volume. If he writes too much, it will become chaotic. He forgets which things he has written and which things he has not written.

When I was still writing the next volume, I took the wrong reference book, which led to the wrong beginning and wrong steps.

Logically speaking, with the support of an outline and several mind maps, this kind of problem should not arise.

Mu Hui still trusts Yuncheng very much, knowing that he can't handle such a difficult subject matter, and writing a long novel, every step is done according to Yuncheng's requirements, confirmed by many parties, when the characters and clues are marked separately, there are errors It can be compared immediately, and there shouldn't be a situation where the entire book is wrong.

When he asked, Mu Hui's fingertips were trembling, and he took a piece of paper folded into the size of a palm from his arms, which was a mind map.

Open it and take a look, Yuncheng's eyes are dark.

"You don't even have any colored paints, and everything is written in brush and charcoal. How can you revise it all on the same copy? It's okay to change it. At least you can draw a frame and circle it, and mark the version inside it?"

Mu Hui said that it was for convenience at the time, and it was all minor changes, so he didn't care, and ended up cheating himself.

I was too anxious. I wrote something for a year and wanted to end it early.

Yun Cheng asked him if he was short of money, "Should be enough money to make money?"

I have been promoted last time, except for the retouching fee, there is also monthly money, unless there is a change in the family, it is enough anyway.

Mu Hui wiped his face, "I'm just in a hurry..."

Yun Cheng had nothing to say, so he could only tell him to experience the pain of being anxious, and give him some hope by the way, "A piece of good news, the first three volumes are very good, and there is no need to proofread and revise next year."

Liu Wenbai quietly reached out his hand on the table, wanting to observe and study these few manuscripts that Mu Hui didn't need to edit.

Why would he change so much.

Yuncheng put away the manuscript directly, "Or you can also show others where you have revised, and exchange and learn from each other."

Liu Wenbai: "...I'll think about it again."

The manuscript was still returned to Mu Hui, Yun Cheng told him to go home for dinner, and asked Liu Wenbai to keep the scriptures for him before leaving, "I'll send someone to get it."

On the road, I told Mu Hui: "If you are not short of money, your previous goal is still there. It is to have a good work to support you, to have the right to speak in the Huaben shop, and to be able to take over Liu Wenbai and Yuan Mo's class in the future. Don't worry, follow what I told you, you should walk down-to-earth first, it will take longer, but practice makes perfect, in the future you will also be in their state of picking up a pen and writing, now I would rather trouble you, wait until you are familiar with it, you Only then did I know which steps can be omitted, so don’t skip it now.”

Mu Hui thought he would be scolded last night.

Because he has been writing for a year, and he has been receiving retouching fees, but he has not produced any results. If such a big mistake occurs, Yuncheng will not let him write it.

He tossed and turned all night, thinking that today was his last day to work in the shop, and if he came back next year, it would have nothing to do with this shop.

Walking now, stepping on the wet ground, listening to Yun Cheng talking to him, his heart gradually fell back to reality, and his tightly wrapped body also slowly warmed up.

Yun Cheng was talking, but he didn't hear a response. Looking sideways, Mu Hui was crying.

He really didn't have this experience, his hands and feet were numb when he stood on the street, and his speech was also numb, "Or should I scold you?"

Of course Mu Hui refused. He wiped his eyes and said that before he went home, he would sort out the clues and the relationship between the characters in these books, and hand them over to him for review before continuing to write.

Then hurriedly said goodbye.

Yuncheng stayed here for a while and came home late.

Cunyin and the others had finished their meal, and Yuanyuan was playing with Dongtao.

The child has really grown up. In the past, if she didn't see the adults in the morning, she would wait outside the door eagerly. I don't know when she got used to the family leaving early and returning late. She can only see a certain part of the people at this time.

Cunyin called him, "Sister-in-law, have you eaten yet?"

Yun Cheng shook his head, "You didn't go to work today?"

Cuyin went to the kitchen to warm up his meal, and said, "I'll come back and have a meal before going."

Yuncheng washed his hands, went to see Yuanyuan and the others, cared about the progress of Yuanyuan's delivery of toys, and learned something.

Yuanyuan and the others were playing in the alley in the morning, and Dongtao saw that no adults were watching them, so she whispered to Yuanyuan not to give everything away, and not to be too particular about reciprocity.

Yuanyuan is younger than her and doesn't have much contact with her, so she needs to patiently explain a few times before she can understand it.

Dongtao has played with her for a long time, and knows how to communicate with Yuanyuan, so she gave her an example, such as eating without giving back gifts.

This word made other children in the alley hear it, and when it spread, Yuanyuan became a fool, and she had to exchange gifts for something to eat.

Forget about being serious, someone actually traded half-eaten rough grain steamed buns for round dolls.

Yuanyuan must be reluctant to part with it, and she has her own logic, she likes it, and she will only return the gift if she accepts it, and she doesn't want the steamed buns.

The slightest quarrel between the children startled the adults out of the quarrel.

They didn't dare to talk about Yuanyuan, but if they wanted to talk about Dongtao, they would probably mean a wild girl, a lowly slave, who was good at meddling in the affairs of decent people, and scolded them harshly.

If the words are spoken out, Aunt Pingzhi and the others will go over, and they will also scold them for the sake of face.

Ye Cunshan was studying at the government office, and Yuncheng was busy in the shop at the time. After much deliberation, it was more suitable for a temporary helper to find the silver deposit.

After he came back, he stopped arguing and arguing, and went out and bought ten white flour steamed buns, threw them at his door, and asked if this was enough.

Yun Cheng: "..."

Cuyin came out with the food, "Where is enough? I asked her to continue buying, and she asked if it was enough, and I said no. If it is true that the children are arguing, I will let people see who has the most trouble. Does it make sense when she has a loud voice?"

Yuncheng saw the scratches on Dongtao's face, and asked if he was beaten.

Cunyin said that he had been given medicine, "When you talk about children fighting, why don't you think about how fiercely she beats the children."

Dongtao was praised by Cunyin and comforted for a while by Aunt Pingzhi when she gave her medicine, so her mood was quite stable.

It was seeing Yuncheng come back and knowing about it that he became nervous again.

Because if she didn't say that to Yuanyuan, she wouldn't provoke other children.

Yun Cheng also praised her.

Look at her face, and ask Aunt Pingzhi to take someone to the clinic in the afternoon, "You're a pretty girl, don't leave any scars."

Cunyin sat next to him in a daze.

When he first came to Fucheng, he was playing games with Cheng Wenjie, and his face was injured, and some people told him to go to the hospital.

At that time, the picture was fresh, and he was afraid of spending money, so after a few words, he stopped going, but he used a lot of snow muscle cream.

In return, she embroidered cotton dolls.

It's been so long.

Deposit silver and pat the head.

The frequency of thinking about Lu Ying is slightly higher recently, and he thinks it is a normal miss that he hasn't communicated for a while.

Tell Yuncheng: "Then I will take her there this afternoon."

As for Yuanyuan, she was well protected, she cried when she saw the scratches on Dongtao's face, and she was fine after being coaxed.

In the afternoon, I stuck to Yuncheng, asking what circumstances required a return gift and what circumstances did not.

Even if Yuncheng told her, she might not understand.

Judging from the child's posture of holding someone up and looking up, Yuncheng felt that she might either want to ask questions or be clingy.

Still freaked out by what happened in the morning.

When Ye Cunshan came back in the evening, no one mentioned it at the dinner table. When he returned to his room at night, Yuncheng said to him, "Should we teach her in advance?"

He also said, "I think winter peaches are pretty good."

Now relying on the adults in the family to provide food, but if she wants to put Yuanyuan first in everything, she will give priority to Yuanyuan and dare to stand up for Yuanyuan when things happen.

Ye Cunshan was stunned when he heard that, "Is there someone coming to our house to swear and beat people?"

Yun Cheng shrugged, "I blame you for not being dignified."

It happened to be a rest tomorrow, and Ye Cunshan said to give him a dignified one.

"After the exam, I will bring my classmates to my home to have a chat, and talk about how scholars bully the villagers."

It's not easy to beat, and it's lost when you scold.

If you want Yuncheng to say that Ye Cunshan's approach is not good, in modern times, he would still applaud after listening to it, it's pure fun.

It just works at this time, look at Boss Xie, the bigger the business, the more timid a person is.

The same is true for ordinary people. You have to know what you might encounter before you know how to be afraid.

Yun Cheng lowered his eyes and thought for a while, "Let's not go too far. I ordered the scriptures at Liu Wenbai's house today. Let's be calm and peace is the most important thing."

Ye Cunshan agreed.

This scene was too embarrassing, at noon the next day, Yuncheng took Yuanyuan Dongtao to the Huaben shop, handed over the venue to Ye Cunshan, and when he came back, he had to give him a disrespectful evaluation.

"You are not here, who will show this majesty."

Only Cunyin was very supportive, "I saw it, I asked for leave and ran back, and I was still chatting with someone in the alley, saying that like yesterday, if I beat someone, I can go to a lawyer."

The most famous Zhu lawyer in Fucheng is sitting in their Huaben shop!

The younger brother joins in, and also joins in.

Ye Cunshan poured a glass of rice wine and clinked glasses with Cunyin.

Yin and Yang were strange, Yun Cheng said, "Your sister-in-law seems to think I'm ashamed."

Yuncheng hurriedly served Ye Cunshan with vegetables and wine, asking him to talk about how majestic he is today.

This stinky man couldn't get down the steps, so he wanted to carry them.

"You want to know now? It's too late."

Yuncheng took his wine glass, "I think you are drunk and drifting away."

Cuyin couldn't help laughing beside him.

Ye Cunshan put the pressure on Cunyin, "I think your skin is itchy and you deserve a beating."

Deposit silver: "..."

Well, he shouldn't be back today to cheer.

The author has something to say:

I’m off work today, so I won’t write tonight, hehe

Say good night to everyone in advance, and see you all readers tomorrow~ Meme!