A little sweet through the fragrant

Before entering September, Yuncheng has to prepare for the end of the course.

According to the arrangement of some training courses in later generations, it is very natural to reach the end of the course.

According to the teaching syllabus, it will be over after finishing what should be said.

Arrange homework when it is time to arrange homework, and those who need to earn tuition for the next semester will take the opportunity to do some sensational publicity.

Yuncheng took a lot of online courses in the past, so he has some experience in this.

It was prepared when the teaching plan was first made, and it is convenient to use when it is time to use it.

Combining the persuasion of the first lesson and the end-of-course training direction in the middle of the training, the third part will be advanced - how to create a book.

This lesson is mainly to sort out the direction, from setting the plot of the characters, to the selection of themes, and how the progressive sense of short plots and long plots are integrated and interlocking.

Except for Yuan Mo, among the lecturers, the scholars who are currently exposed to the content related to the collection of materials have sorted out how to collect the materials.

Yuncheng also shared the observation method learned in the screenwriting class, as well as the experiential things that he saw in many acting books.

In ancient times, there was no psychological counseling, and he had no time to keep an eye on everyone and be responsible to everyone. Here, the teaching is still biased towards the method, just telling them that during the writing period, some people may appear in the play, and teach them how to deal with it.

The past few months have been intensive studies, and they have not been given time to rest and think for themselves.

When Yuncheng organized the teaching materials, he didn't do too much detail. Before the end of the class, he gave them three days off to let them rest and think carefully. When the class ends, they will have time to answer questions.

The first batch of question-and-answer manuals have already been sold, and depending on the situation, the next few volumes may be engraved and published one after another by the end of the year and the beginning of spring.

The Q&A questions at the end of the class are very likely to be repeated. Yuncheng needs to familiarize himself with the Q&A manual to avoid inconsistencies.

Even though he has marked it on the pages of the book, different situations have different analysis, and different stages have different perceptions, and it is normal to have differences.

The three-day vacation is for the students, and the lecturers are still busy.

The managers of the training class, especially Du Zhiqiu, have reached the point where they have to work overtime until late at night to review manuscripts. They want to reply to the submissions of these students before they go home.

Except for a few lecturers who were called by Yuncheng to discuss the end of the course, others also participated in the manuscript review work.

Three days passed in a blink of an eye.

Catch up with a good weather, clear sky, neither cold nor dry.

This session is an open class, and there is only one lecturer, Yuncheng, regardless of class. The venue is in the open space in Zhuangzi, where the class was first attended.

It seems to have completed the loop, going around and returning to the origin again.

Yuncheng's lecture style is very obvious, he doesn't greet people too much, he goes on stage to say hello, and then he gets to the point, just like his writing style, in the vernacular, there is warmth and warmth, and there is a quiet warmth in the narration.

The theme of this lesson is about how to create a book. Yuncheng gave several examples for specific analysis.

Someone has a stalk, for example, he reads a certain novel, he thinks it is good-looking, and he can write it, so he writes it. This is a very conventional way of creation.

Some people are cute, and Yuncheng is very familiar with the development method because of the cute pair of cp, so I wrote an article. This method requires a very high ability to grasp the core, otherwise it will be easy to be confused and incomprehensible .

There are also pictures that appear in a flash of inspiration, that is, conventional inspirations. This needs to be emphasized. Not all inspirations can support a book. Some are only suitable for short stories, and some are not even suitable for writing. .

I will mainly talk about these three types. After sorting out and giving examples from the selection of stems to the character design, it is the core focus of today-how to distinguish whether this inspiration can support the entire book.

A very simple and rude way is still to take the example of the article about a down-and-out scholar who they are very familiar with meeting all kinds of beauties.

There is a clear difference between telling and writing the main plot.

Version [-]: What is the reason for this scholar to lead to the current desolate situation, what choice did he make because of this desolate situation, and then he met Goddess A, Demoness B, Ghost Girl D, and some other human girls, what did he go through? Obstacles, and what methods did they use to overcome the difficulties, successfully went to Beijing to rush for the exam, won the first prize in one fell swoop, and finally tied the knot with the noble lady and the heroine, and went straight to the top.

Version [-]: Many women help the down-and-out scholar to pass the exam, and finally he marries a noble woman from Kyoto.

Version [-]: Fragmentary scenes of the scholar being ambiguously entangled with various beauties.

Version [-] can still be saved. It can expand, classify, draw a map, and stage by stage the things outlined in one sentence, so that the plot of the characters can be arranged reasonably, and finally an incomplete stalk can be expanded into enough to support the content of the entire book. .

The third version is the scattered small stems, which Yuncheng believes will be the hardest hit area for "returning and rewriting".

Appropriate fantasies are possible and allowed. There are situations where men and women play against each other, and it would be too overbearing not to let them write this.

But there is a reality that breaks their hearts when they tell it, "Take this clip out, it's not enough to write pornographic and romantic stories, and I have to cope with a thousand words, and it's not enough to submit after writing."

Because of Yuncheng's face, it's not easy to talk about it here.

Stop drinking tea in time and ask them to think about it for themselves.

Because the fragmentary pictures are too scattered and trivial, they are all supported by the sense of picture at that time.

If you insist on using it as the core stalk and expanding it into a story, you can only maintain the tone.

One beauty is not enough to contribute, so make up a few more.

People are here to make up the numbers, and the content cannot be made up. You have to be careful and write well. How to put it, you can’t repeat the tricks.

There were too many men present, the scholars were thin-skinned, and Yun Cheng was also a shameless person, so he stopped in time and didn't mess with them.

Because the examples in version [-] are too stimulating and can pierce people’s shame, Yuncheng believes that they will be deeply impressed, and they will clearly know what is a fragmentary and trivial stalk, what is a small stalk that can be expanded and saved, and what is complete , can support the core stalk of the whole book.

So the following content is sensational.

Sensation is not for selling books, nor for publicity for the second training class. This is Yuncheng's little expectation and goodwill for these students.I hope they will be able to gain something and get what they want after the class is over.

Revisited.

He has experienced very few setbacks in his life, and he has never been short of money. He has stayed in a friendly and friendly environment for a long time, and he is the one who is cared for and loved.

The opening of the training class is selfish.

He wants to expand the Huaben shop and stabilize its leading position in the industry.

I also hope that there will be more scholars to write, and the collision of brain holes will make this industry more prosperous. Only when they publish books will there be more audiences.

Among these scholars, if someone can come to him, the shop will develop the best, the distance is inconvenient, and the contribution is also good. The worst thing is that they can praise the works published by their shop, be willing to buy them, and drive some wind direction, which is also very good.

All of the above, related to the status of the Huaben shop, he has done it himself.

In the follow-up development, everything follows fate, and he does not force it.

This is the first time he has accomplished a major event - a long time span, a large number of participants, a large investment of manpower and material resources, and a far-reaching impact.

People have feelings, and he hopes that those who are willing to learn and persevere in hard work can go further in the future.

Before answering questions, there are some psychological counseling for prevention in advance.

What to do with Calvin, what to do if you can’t figure out what to do, is it because he is really bad at frequent rejections, and the criticism and blank stare that a serious scholar will suffer if he writes a storybook.

Some of them have been experienced by Yuncheng himself, and he has a little experience.

Some have been experienced by colleagues he once knew, and he talked to many people.

The end of this part, the end of the morning.

The Q&A is arranged in the afternoon, and those who have no questions can come.

In fact, after lunch, no one was absent from the audience.

Yuncheng's throat didn't rest well, and it was already hoarse in the afternoon.

Ye Cunshan stayed with him today, because he had never been on stage to give a lecture, so his "Yan Yu Ji" grades could not be given here, and it was Liu Wenbai who came to the stage to help.

Liu Wenbai chattered to Ye Cunshan: "Look at you, what's the use of writing cool articles?"

Ye Cunshan didn't bother to argue with him, "Go now."

Finish it early, go home early.

After the start, no one started to ask questions for a long time, and Yuncheng was amused, "If there's no problem, then I'll go back first?"

It was the last question-and-answer class, no problem, and I wanted to chat for a while, so soon some scholars raised their hands to ask questions.

The first question is to ask Yuncheng why and how he first wrote the script.

After his life experience was spread, the experience of writing a storybook to make a fortune was regarded as a peerless chicken soup.

Yuncheng, who actually took advantage of his previous life, dare not say that he made the chicken soup.

Now to answer, he said: "It is to live on."

It’s an old saying, except for the three or five rich kids who come here to study because of their hobbies, the rest are poor students.

They read, practice calligraphy and write articles, and have nothing else to do.

The fundamental reason for coming to study is also to live life.

Yuncheng needs to give them a little encouragement.

Because of the times, there is no internet here, few entertainment facilities, expensive books, many topics and many stalks, no one here has written about it, or if it is written, it will not spread far.

Readers will buy it for the freshness, which is a very suitable soil for them to start.

So Yuncheng briefly talked about the formation process of the first volume "Zuo Son".

When he first married Ye Cunshan, he started to conceive in late November.

For the next few months, it was all about ideas. I took a few pieces of blackened paper that had been turned from waste paper into new ones, and made records with the eyebrow pencil I got from the bank.

After January, when I settled down with Ye Cunshan in Yu County, I would tell stories to him, and I would still tell them in fragments.

During this period, he has been learning traditional Chinese characters and will practice on the sand table.

After the Jinghe paper was rolled out, the freedom of paper use was realized.

In the end, Yuan Mo was asked to transcribe his manuscript, and Yuan Mo was required to fill in the words and sentences, and add a description of the protagonist's appearance.

At the end of each volume, the thickness of his vocabulary book will be increased.

Yuncheng laughed, "You guys are better than me, at least you don't have to start learning by recognizing characters."

With this question in the lead, the follow-up questions gradually increased.

The amount is less than Yuncheng imagined, and the Q&A questions that have been sorted out in the book shop and published, only two people asked them today, and they are relatively easy to cause ambiguity.

One character, one plot.

The character design should not be too label-faced. Does that mean that all characters need depth and multiple aspects to express.

The plot needs ups and downs, so that there will be twists and turns, and it will be exciting. Doesn't every plot have to be arranged like this?

Here, Yuncheng allows them to use the people around them as reference objects, so that they can observe what state they are in usually, and what state they are in when they are angry and happy.There are also more wicked ones, what is the state when eating melons and watching a show, and what is the state when one's own house collapses.

Generally speaking, in the progress of the plot, it is enough to give a response that fits the character, and there is no need to deliberately shape it.

Those who really need to arrange a deliberate plot to establish a character are usually the protagonist and the main supporting role.

Here in the plot, Yuncheng improvised a short play, called Ye Cunshan to come and play, and ordered two scholars who boldly raised their hands from the audience to come up, and let Liu Wenbai read his lines with a loud voice.

It's a very simple drama, Yuncheng looks for Ye Cunshan.

The first version is that he went to find Ye Cunshan, went straight there, and talked about the matter.

The second version is that he didn't see Ye Cunshan, and asked the scholar, where is Ye Cunshan, and got specific reverse guidance, and then found Ye Cunshan.

The third version is a continuation of the events of the second version. After he got the directions, he went to find Ye Cunshan after being pointed out by the second scholar.

When described in words, the behavior will be expanded a lot.

Those who need them to arrange ups and downs in the plot are generally big plots.

It is basically a two-paragraph summary of this kind of daily search for people and no major issues:

Yun Cheng went to a certain place to look for Ye Cunshan, but he couldn't find it. He asked Scholar One, but when he got there, he only saw Scholar Two. When he left a message with Scholar Two, Ye Cunshan came in and asked him why he came.

This kind of teaching is quite new, and they all love to watch it.

Yuncheng is no longer acting, as long as he can distinguish clearly, when to arrange a little twists and turns, and when not to arrange.

This thing is not something that can be understood by giving an example. Going back to the homework of the first class, if you don’t know it, just analyze it and find the answer from excellent works. This is the best answer book.

It ended earlier than expected, and he awarded certificates to the graduates.

Yuncheng originally wanted to make that kind of old-fashioned award certificate in yellow and red tones, but because of the expensive paint, he didn't realize it.In the end, it is a palm-sized graduation certificate for each person, and it is made of hard cardboard, which is convenient for storage.

The inner page was designed by Yuncheng, and the engraving workshop was assigned to engrave it, and the name was copied by the strong men in the shop.

All of them are stamped with the seal of the book shop, round and red, which is different from the square seals that are popular nowadays.

Some people know how to do it, saying that the little daughter of Yuncheng's family is called Yuanyuan, which may be the reason why they made the round seal.

It was because of Yuncheng's habit, and when they found a reasonable reason, Yuncheng accepted it.

Before the end of the show, Du Zhiqiu took the list of submitted manuscripts and called them loudly, asking them to stay for a while, and communicate with them about the location of the manuscript and the retouching fee.

Most of those who can come to Ju'an Prefecture to take the exam live in the townships and counties below, and only a few are driven here from other places.

There are many studies in this cooperation, and Yuncheng said that even if the distance is far away and it is a little troublesome, the manuscripts made during the study in Fucheng should be given a perfect ending.

It’s best if the scholars have already finished their manuscripts, so hurry up and finish the review, and the money and goods will be cleared.

It doesn't matter if there is a familiar study in my hometown, we can reach cooperation indirectly.

What's more troublesome is that there is no cooperative study in my hometown, and they haven't finished writing the book.

Let's wait for them to finish writing here, and see if Xie's caravan and the security guards in Fucheng go there, they can take it with them.

Another way is to sell stems to the study. The retouching fee will be slightly lower, which is equivalent to a manuscript fee divided between two people.

They are all waiting to use the money, anxious to go home, and afraid of causing trouble if they delay for a long time. The choices are quite consistent, and they are all the second.

We're done here, it's getting dark.

I discussed with Xie's family that they will be given a few more days to clean up the village after the class is over, and everyone can go home first.

Yun Cheng took the mule cart, Ye Cunshan drove the cart, and everyone greeted them with smiles along the way.

Cars are faster than people's legs and feet, and the couple only talked when they were far away.

Yun Cheng was very happy, "It's finally over."

Ye Cunshan said that there was rock sugar pear water under the stool, and asked Yuncheng to take it out and drink it to moisten his throat.

"Looking at their status, I feel that they have learned something, so you can rest assured."

Yuncheng took out the bamboo tube from under the stool, the water in it was cold, and it was sweet to drink.

"Well, I'm most afraid that I won't be able to finish class today."

I am afraid that I will face a hell of questions, I am afraid that there will be questions that he cannot answer, and I am afraid that what he said will conflict with the previous explanations, and I am even more afraid that he will think that he has finished teaching, and some people will still say that he has not learned and does not understand.

He said to Ye Cunshan: "Writing can be more twists and turns, but life should be smooth and smooth. I would rather be lighter."

Don't have any legends for people to sing and spread, he just wants to feel at ease.

Such a day is coming.

The author has something to say:

There are many revisions in this chapter, so I didn't have time to write a lot, I will make up the words tomorrow qwq

Good night, readers!

see you tomorrow!

muah!