The scumbag son-in-law dressed as a husband

The format, Xie Shu also knows a little bit, just like writing an argumentative essay in modern times, it is best composed of three parts, argumentation, demonstration, and finally a conclusion, which always requires some skills, or connecting the past and the future, or echoing from the beginning to the end, etc. .

Xie Shu also studied some ancient trial theory before. Although he has read a lot, he has never looked at them with the eyes of an exam.

Xie Shu said humbly: "I also ask the teacher to enlighten me."

Jiang Hong said lightly: "Generally speaking, poems and fus have at most [-] words to the end, but they can often be thousands of words, because this kind of genre is better than reasoning, and can reflect people's ability to speculate. reason.

Therefore, the most important thing to write a theory is to have a clear mind. In the imperial examination, it is clear at a glance. It usually starts with "the theory..." and ends with "... I would like to discuss it". Like the question I mentioned just now, a candidate's trial theory is answered in this way: "The theory is: Han Xing, the original is respectful and frugal, and the reform is at the end..." Finally, "..... .Then solidify the good will, catch the "Spring and Autumn" in case of praise or criticism. Be careful.'End." ①

When Xie Shu heard this, he already understood that this theory has a fixed phrase at the beginning and the end, which is a bit like a mathematical problem-solving format...

But since the teacher listed this article, he didn't just want to tell him this.

Although the teacher only talked about the beginning and the end, Xie Shu has already noticed the difference in this article.

This article is not only very fascinating at the beginning, it first points out Jia Yi's political views and his talent, and at the end it actually refutes the examination question from "Book of the Former Han".

Because the meaning of the last sentence is clearly satirical. The translated meaning is that Ban Gu is really good at writing history. The spring and autumn brushwork he used to praise and criticize characters is less than one ten-thousandth of "Spring and Autumn".

Xie Shu couldn't help but said: "Teacher, the trial theory you listed is really refreshing, can I let the students have a look."

Seeing that he only listened to the first and last two sentences, Jiang Hong saw the key points in it, and showed some approval. Then he took out this "On Jia Yi's Not To Gongqing" and handed it to Xie Shu.

Xie Shu took the article in his hand and couldn't wait to read it from beginning to end. Sometimes he read silently and nodded, and sometimes recited a few lines.

It wasn't until the end of this essay that Xie Shu calmed down his turbulent mood. When he raised his head, his eyes were already shining brightly when he looked at Jiang Hong.

Jiang Hong couldn't help feeling emotional. In fact, the first time he saw Xie Shu, he just saw that his identity was just in line with his own requirements, and his aspirations and demeanor were all top-grade, so he made the decision to accept him as a disciple. Xie Shu didn't have any idea about his talents and talents.

After all, Jiang Hong has enough self-confidence. Even if a mediocre talent falls into his hands, it is not a problem to get a fame. Besides, he has taught Lu Shuo a genius who is one in a million, and there are people who can match Lu Shuo. How many people?

So Jiang Hong didn't think about it anymore, but Jiang Hong didn't expect that the student he accepted in a hurry would give him such a big surprise. Not only was his talent so outstanding, but his interest in literature was also very rare.

Jiang Hong suddenly had an idea that his future achievements as a student were limitless, even surpassing...

After Jiang Hong thought about it, he came back to his senses. He kept his face calm and continued to take the school exam. Xie Shu said: "Rong Zhan, what do you think of this article?"

Xie Shu didn't hesitate, and said directly: "This article has sufficient and detailed arguments, eloquent arguments, and powerful refutations. It is a rare masterpiece."

Jiang Hong pondered and said: "Since you have seen the advantages of it, I will tell you how to write this trial theory today.

Since the first imperial examinations were held in the previous dynasty, the trial discussion has become a fixed topic, but the trial discussion in the previous dynasty is self-contained, informal, easy to follow one's inclinations, and deviate from the main point.Therefore, if you want to write a good trial theory, you must pay attention to the writing system. Nowadays, the most common structure of trial theory is "the style of head, neck, confidant, waist and tail", that is, there is a beginning, an argument, and an end. In this way, the writing naturally has a beginning and an end. , clearly defined.

In my words, the trial theory can also be divided into four parts: breaking the topic, the original topic, the topic and the conclusion. Wouldn't it be more subtle? "

Jiang Hong took a sip of tea, moistened his throat, and continued: "In an examination paper, breaking the questions is the most important thing. First, after seeing the test questions, the commentator needs to understand the meaning of the questions. Breaking the questions is the key point of the examinee's name. The sentence is also the first sentence of the trial theory.

The topic of the trial discussion cannot directly state the content of the topic, but it needs to be related to the topic, or hint, explain, so the key to breaking the topic is to be concise, and it is best to include but not reveal. Among them, one or two sentences are the top, and three or four sentences are the bottom.If the problem is not solved well, even if there is an outstanding article later, it will not be used again.Rong Zhan, do you understand? "

Xie Shu nodded deeply: "The teacher means that breaking the topic is the first of the theories, the meaning of an article..."

And if the trial theory is not well-conceived at the beginning, the examiner will not continue to read it. This sounds a bit cruel, but Xie Shu can understand.

Just like the composition of the college entrance examination, if you deviate from the key points of the topic at the beginning, then no matter how good the writing is, it is impossible to get a high score.However, there are so many test papers for candidates, and the ancient manpower was limited, and there was no time or energy to check them carefully, so although this method is crude, it is also a helpless move.

Jiang Hong saw that he was able to understand a little bit, and continued to say: "After the problem is solved, it will be the original problem. The original problem is also called a novel, that is, as the problem just now continues to diverge, the way of the original problem is different. It can not only explain the original story of the topic, but also explain the main content of the topic. If it is said that breaking the topic is the idea of ​​the whole article and determines the perspective of the entire trial discussion, then the original topic deeply reveals the inner core of the topic from this perspective. "

Worried that Xie Shu would not understand what he meant, Jiang Hong took the title just now as an example and explained: "I chose this passage from the "Book of the Former Han Dynasty", which is the narration of Jia Yi's life, and this "On Jia Yi's Not to Gongqing" To solve the problem, take Ban Gu's evaluation of Jia Yi as "Yi ends up early, although he is not a public official, it is not unrecognizable" as the starting point, and then goes on to explain that this person has the talent of Wang Zuo, and his political opinions can hit the current situation, but he is slandered by the old officials. In the end, Jia Yi was demoted and Yingcai died young.

The original topic serves as a link between the preceding and the following. If the original topic is clear, then the following topics will also be clear.The lecture topic is the main body of a trial discussion. In the whole trial discussion, the lecture topic is the longest and the content is the most detailed.The topic of the lecture requires an in-depth discussion of the topic, so not only a theoretical basis is required, but also examples are required.

For example, in this article, the commentators first discussed whether Jia Yi was really as Ban Gu said. According to Ban Gu's point of view, Jia Yi was slandered by others, so he was underappreciated and died of depression. However, the commentators raised doubts.

Then the commentator gave an example, Jia Yi was well-known in Luoyang and became a doctor at the age of 21.Aiming at the reform of the ritual system, he wrote "On Establishing the System and Prospering the Rites and Music Book", and aimed at the phenomenon of "backing the original and tending to the end" at that time, he wrote "On the Book of Accumulation and Storage", but Emperor Xiaowen listened to the slander and abandoned it.The reason for Jia Yi's tragedy here is not difficult to see, and it laid a theoretical foundation for later refuting Ban Gu's point of view.

Then the article elaborates that Jia Yi's talent can be compared with Yi Yin and Guan Zhong's, and the political ideas he put forward are even reminiscent of Kang Wang's prosperity, but he didn't get the same result.The quotations here are rich in reference, the contrast is sharp, the meaning of the topic is repeatedly emphasized, and the topic is discussed in depth. This is the essence of the topic. "

Speaking of this, Jiang Hong suddenly said: "Rong Zhan, do you know that the final conclusion of this trial is generally a summary statement of the previous article and expand the meaning of the question, but why is this article able to stand out? "

Xie Shu was silent for a moment, then slowly said: "Teacher, the author stated that Jia Yi's tragic ending was because Emperor Xiaowen was good at his words and could not be used. In this way, he directly refuted Ban Gu's point of view in the title, and finally sublimated the theme. It's a hint to ... learn from history."

As soon as he finished speaking, a trace of surprise flashed in Jiang Hong's eyes. He laughed loudly and said, "Rong Zhan, you used the word 'sublimation' very well. Yes, generally speaking, the conclusion of this discussion can be divided into several categories. , there are short and long, some praise first and then demote, some suppress first and then praise, and there are sentences in the Four Books and Five Classics as the end.

And the purpose of the allusion is to use history as a mirror and warn the present, so the best ending is like this. "

Hearing this, Xie Shu also suddenly understood that how to answer an essay should first guess the original intention of the questioner.

Often the historical facts intercepted by the author of the question are related to reality...Once this is figured out, the intention is not a problem, and the following discussion will follow naturally, and the final ending is self-evident.

At this time, Jiang Hong changed the topic again: "There are still many points in this trial theory. Now you are only getting a rough introduction. Don't be arrogant or impetuous. You should study this article carefully in the next few days."

The teacher warned so, Xie Shu immediately said respectfully: "Students remember the teacher's teachings."

Jiang Hong nodded in satisfaction, then remembered something and said: "Rong Zhan, Your Majesty will be in Jinling soon, how is the palace that your husband is responsible for building now?"

Hearing the teacher mentioning Yu Chuxi, Xie Shu couldn't help but smiled slightly and said, "My wife said that all the projects in the palace will be completed tomorrow, so I wonder if I can invite the teacher to go and inspect it together, if there is anything wrong with it, It’s time to renovate.”

Jiang Hongben just cared casually, but he didn't expect Xie Shu to take this opportunity to make such a request, but Jiang Hong didn't refuse, of course he could see how much his student cared about his husband.

When Xie Shu returned home, Yu Chuxi hadn't come back yet, Xie Shu waited for him as usual, holding the trial theory that he couldn't put it down just now in his hand, but his mind quickly drifted away.

For the past three months, Yu Chuxi has been so busy, running back and forth between the West Garden and his home. No matter how strong his physical strength is, he still has no appetite when he comes back, and he doesn't know how much he has lost in the past few days...

If things go on like this, what should I do?

Thinking of this, Xie Shu couldn't help frowning.

After an unknown period of time, Xie Shu suddenly felt a movement behind him, and then, a familiar breath pressed gently against his back, and covered his eyes with his cool hands.

Xie Shu's whole body froze, of course he knew it was Langjun's hand, once he held it, he would never forget it again.

Seeing that he didn't respond, Yu Chuxi couldn't help but whispered in his ear: "Why are you not surprised when I suddenly blindfolded you?"

When Yu Chuxi came in just now, he saw Xie Shu frowning and didn't know what he was thinking. It was rare for him to play tricks on him. Who knew Xie Shu would react like this?

Did he find himself coming in?

Xie Shu heard Yu Chuxi's implication, he gently held Yu Chuxi's fingertips and put them down, pulled him closer with his fingers crossed, and said with a low smile: "Mr. Is there a scent on you, I can smell it..."

Speaking of this, Xie Shu's throat suddenly tightened, and the root of his tongue froze.

Because at this time, Xie Shu realized that the hair on the temples of the gentleman in his arms was slightly wet, dripping with sweat, and under the thin shirt, the skin was more than snow.

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① by Ouyang Xiu