private event

112.

Back in Lingcheng, after entering the house, Wang Qian threw away his luggage, without saying a word, he picked him up and put him against the wall of the entrance, and raised his head to kiss the smooth chin and neck.

Xu Zhixiao was originally only half a head shorter than him, but now that he was being hugged, he was suddenly much taller than him, and when he wanted to lower his head to reach his lips, he couldn't reach them.

Seeing him moving around uncomfortably, Wang Qian took a bite on his neck slowly, "Want to kiss me?"

Xu Zhixiao blushed hard, but said firmly: "No, you let me down."

"If you don't kiss me, why let you down?"

Xu Zhixiao stretched out his hand to grab Wang Qian's short hair, pulled it down with a little force, and Wang Qian raised his face.

Condescendingly looking down at this face that he never tires of seeing, Xu Zhixiao's heart itched so badly, he buried his head in obedience to instinct——

He couldn't kiss Wang Qian's mouth, so he simply bit his straight nose.

Wang Qian let out a laugh from his throat, loosened his hands that were clamping him, and let him down.

Xu Zhixiao's feet landed on the ground, and he raised his arms to hook his neck, and the two exchanged a long and deep kiss firmly.

Although it's only been six days since we last met, my miss is already piled up like snow.

113.

In the afternoon, the two cleaned up the house, then went out to the supermarket to do some shopping. In the evening, they went home and made dinner together.

After dinner, Wang Qian washed the dishes, and Xu Zhixiao went to take a bath first.

When Wang Qian went to take a shower, he stuffed their clothes into the washing machine.

Finally, when he finished drying his clothes and returned to the bedroom, Wang Qian was already sitting on the bed reading a book.

Not long after returning from the resort, the two naturally fell asleep on the same bed.

Although the full set has not been done so far, what should happen has almost happened.

Xu Zhixiao got under the covers, took out his mobile phone and went to Weibo, just in time to see a hot topic - #我的初吻是初恋#.

Although I don't know what to discuss about this proposition that usually holds true, Xu Zhixiao still clicked in to read it.

Then he asked casually, "Brother, was your first kiss for your first love?"

Wang Qian was still staring at the book, and just let out a casual "hmm".

Xu Zhixiao suddenly became curious, put down his phone and asked, "When? Middle school or university? Is the other party pretty?"

Wang Qian finally raised his eyes to look at him, his eyes were deep and vaguely meaningful, "I really want to know?"

Xu Zhixiao nodded.

Wang Qian put the book away and said in a leisurely manner, "You talk first, and I'll talk later."

"But I asked you first." Xu Zhixiao was a little reluctant.

"Forget it, anyway, I don't really want to know." Wang Qian made a gesture to get the book.

"Wait!" Xu Zhixiao stopped him, hesitated for a moment, and said frankly, "Okay, then I will say—my first kiss and first love are not the same person."

"Oh?" Wang Qian said indifferently.

Xu Zhixiao gritted her teeth and told the truth, "The first kiss was... that guy Li Yiyang."

Wang Qian's face was obviously cold.

To be honest, his impression of Li Yiyang has never been good.

Xu Zhixiao peeked at his expression, and quickly explained the matter, "It was actually an accident! That guy was drunk on his birthday, and he was going to kiss his girlfriend, but he fell and smashed me, and he even kissed him .But it just happened to happen, I swear!"

Wang Qian looked at him, squinting his eyes slightly, "What about first love?"

Xu Zhixiao was stunned for a moment, and then blushed.

He hummed in a mosquito-like voice: "..."

"Louder, I can't hear you."

Xu Zhixiao's heart thumped, his eyes closed, and he yelled out loudly, "It's you!"

Suddenly, an uncontrollable low laugh rang in his ear.

In the next second, he was pulled into a warm and firm chest, and his mouth was tightly gagged.

All senses and thoughts were forcefully plundered in an instant.

114.

Kissing is just the beginning.

In the middle of the kiss, Wang Qian suddenly turned over and pressed Xu Zhixiao under him. He stretched his hands in from the hem of his clothes, and walked unscrupulously on his body, with a slightly heavier force, stroking and kneading repeatedly.

Countless small electric currents aroused in Xu Zhixiao's body, his legs rubbed against the sheets impatiently, and he squeezed out short gasps and hums from his nasal cavity, his voice gradually fragmented, "Senior Brother..."

Wang Qian kissed his mouth fiercely, stuck his tongue in and entangled him fiercely, and at the same time moved his hands down, quickly pulled off his pants, accurately grasped his vital points, and began to play tricks in different ways.

"Um...don't...ah..."

Xu Zhixiao trembled all over his body, his forehead and the side of his neck were covered with sweat, and his rationality quickly collapsed under the erosion of desire.

With Wang Qian's lips and tongue down, he scraped, licked and sucked hard on his chest, leaving obvious marks in the slight tingling pain.

"Ah...Senior brother...haha..." Instinctively clinging to Wang Qian's strong shoulders, Xu Zhixiao's waist bounced violently, like a fish out of water, "Well...it's almost here...ha... ..."

The boundless waves were turbulent, and he was jolted in it, almost losing his soul.

However, just when he was about to be thrown to the top, a tyrannical force suddenly tightly bound his source.

"Woo... senior brother..." Xu Zhixiao subconsciously shook his head desperately, kicking his legs wildly, scratching with his fingers, and in just a few breaths, the corners of his eyes were forced to glow.

He stared blankly at the man above his head, unconsciously begging for mercy, revealing his weakest side, "Senior brother... um... save me... um... uncomfortable..."

Panting heavily, Wang Qian lowered his head and kissed his neck vigorously, picked up the thin skin in his mouth and grinded it with his teeth, until he let out a sobbing sound that implied pain, finally let go, and changed his tongue to lick it soothingly. kiss.

He asked hoarsely, "Who am I?"

"...um...you are senior brother...um..."

"Do you like brother?"

"I like it... I like it the most... Haha... Give it to me..."

Wang Qian firmly suppressed the turbulent impulse in his body, endured until his eyes were red, buried his lips again and kissed his lips desperately, grabbed his tongue and sucked it hard, stabbed the small depression under the tongue, and squeezed the soft lips Tortured red and swollen, terribly hot, "Baby, remember your words! You love me the most, only me!"

Xu Zhixiao's mouth was numb from the kiss, but the feeling down there slowly began to ebb.

He kicked his legs in a hurry, trying to grasp that comfortable feeling, but he didn't know what to do. He kept struggling in a hurry, two streams of hot tears rolled down from the corners of his eyes, and intermittent crying came out of his throat, "Woo ...Senior brother...hah...quickly help me..."

Wang Qian sucked away his tears pityingly, and finally regained movement in his hands, and he rose vigorously and quickly. There was no extra skill, but he could easily ignite the most primitive passion in his bones.

"Uh...uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!"

Xu Zhixiao suddenly let out a long moan, his whole body stiffened suddenly, and then he collapsed from exhaustion.

Wang Qian's chest heaved violently, as if it was full of gunpowder that was about to explode.He kept pecking and kissing Xu Zhixiao's facial features, but his fingers poked back with what he had just vented.

Xu Zhixiao suddenly opened his eyes wide.

Wang Qian said in his ear with a hoarse voice: "I know, baby, can you give it to me? I will cherish you for the rest of my life."

Xu Zhixiao shivered slightly, and countless sour, sweet, painful, and warm things overflowed from his heart.

He looked straight up at the man above him until the fog in his eyes completely dissipated, filled with deep dependence and love again.

After a long time, he finally raised his chin and pushed his lips up with difficulty, like a sacred and irreversible sacrifice.

For the first time since we met, he called out his name, the name hidden deep in his heart, which had made him toss and turn countless times, and made his heart ache countless times——

"Wang Qian, I love you."

115.

The morning sunlight was so thin that it was almost transparent, through the gaps in the curtains, quietly spilled into the window, fell on the cold floor, and also fell on the figures lying on the bed hugging each other.

Xu Zhixiao slowly opened his eyes against the dawn, as if a heavy snow had just fallen in his heart, quiet and heavy, extremely at ease.

Wang Qian's hands moved suddenly, subconsciously found his, and crossed them like many times in the past.

The temperatures belonging to each other immediately blended into one.

Wang Qian's voice still had the hoarseness of just waking up, which sounded particularly attractive, "How long have you been awake? Why didn't you call me?"

"Just woke up." Xu Zhixiao's voice was very soft, as if he was afraid of disturbing the peace of the room.

"Is there any discomfort? Huh?"

Xu Zhixiao shook his head, and then felt a light and light kiss on his hair.

"What do you want for breakfast? Can I make you some porridge?"

"Well, I want lean meat porridge with mushrooms and a few drops of sesame oil."

"it is good."

……

"Brother, you haven't told me who your first kiss and love are?"

The person behind smiled lowly, folded his arms, and hugged him even tighter, then buried his head on his shoulder and kissed him deeply, making a clear and sweet sound, "Who do you say?"

☆, extra episodes never said 【End】

extra episode never said

01. The Truth of Dream X

When Xu Zhixiao was in the first year of high school, Li Yiyang was in the second year of high school, and had already talked about his second girlfriend in his life.

One day during the summer vacation, Li Yiyang took a disc and sneaked up to Xu Zhixiao, "Xiaoxiao, I'll show you something good!"

Xu Zhixiao was disgusted, "Are you a thief?"

The disc started playing, and the two men and a woman got straight to the point, flung themselves on the same bed and started moaning and chatting in circles.

Li Yiyang was sweating profusely, his eyes were red, and his breathing was short of breath.

Xu Zhixiao was very calm, and laughed at him with a paralyzed face: "You are too weak, so I can't stand it."

Li Yiyang was deeply dissatisfied. How could Xu Zhixiao, who was younger and less experienced than him, be stronger than him?

So, he found countless larger-scale films, vowing to break Xu Zhixiao's calm performance, but they all failed.

In the end, Li Yiyang, who didn't believe in evil, bought a low-quality calcium tablet from a street stall, slapped it hard in front of Xu Zhixiao, and sneered, "For the last time, I don't believe you can survive!"

Damn, even if it scares you, I will scare you!

Xu Zhixiao stared at the two naked men embracing each other on the cover, and for some reason, suddenly felt a strange feeling in his heart.

That afternoon, Li Yiyang left dejectedly after all, carrying the secret weapon that he had placed high hopes on.

Xu Zhixiao sat upright on the floor, the computer screen had returned to the desktop, but he remained motionless, with a blank and calm face.

After a long time, he slowly reached into his clothes, touched the back, and took them out—the palms were damp and hot, full of sweat.

Xu Zhixiao's face gradually turned pale.

That night, he had a terrible nightmare.

In the dream, two naked men were entangled wantonly, and he watched helplessly beside him, panting like a cow, his heart beating like thunder, and he was holding hot sweat in his palm.

I don't know how long it will take, but the emotions that have accumulated to the peak seem to be about to explode.

But he clenched his fists tightly, desperately suppressing the impulse in his heart, and kept warning himself: "No! Calm down! Calm down!"

Suddenly, someone pushed him hard from behind.

Xu Zhixiao was startled, turned his head subconsciously, and saw a familiar face with a signature smug smile.

He gritted his teeth, "Li Yiyang——!"

The body fell forward uncontrollably.

At the same time, something broke through the shackles in the body and erupted unscrupulously.

02. The worries of Xu's parents

Ever since they inadvertently "learned" about Xu Zhixiao's sexual orientation and had a deep understanding of the gay community, Xu's parents began to worry.

That boy Li Yiyang has an arrogant personality and disobedience to discipline. He has had more than three girlfriends in high school alone. He has a lot of messy experiences, but his own son is a blank sheet of paper. "Love" each other - if they are really together in the future, no matter how they look at it, Xu Zhixiao will be the one who suffers.

No, I have to think of a way!

So, in the summer vacation after the college entrance examination, Xu's father and Xu's mother directly enrolled Xu Zhixiao in a taekwondo class.

When Xu Zhixiao first heard the news, he thought he heard it wrong—why did he want to learn Taekwondo? !He has no interest in martial arts at all!

Xu's father's expression was very solemn, "Recently, there is a competitor in the company who is not safe. You should learn some taekwondo for self-defense."

Xu Zhixiao: "...Dad, shouldn't this kind of thing be called the police?"

Xu's father coughed: "It's just a precaution now, it's useless to call the police."

Xu Zhixiao: "But Taekwondo can't be learned in a day or two. After I learn it well, maybe the matter will be resolved long ago."

Mother Xu hurriedly said, "We are worried about your safety during this time."

Xu Zhixiao: "Then it would be more convenient to find me a bodyguard."

Xu Zhixiao has migraines, and has never been interested in sports, and refuses to learn Taekwondo no matter what.

Xu's father and Xu's mother had no choice but to find a bodyguard for him in the end, but they withdrew within two days after following him - the competitors were made up, so why do you really need a bodyguard?Burn money?

After getting rid of Taekwondo, Xu Zhixiao started to fiddle with the newly acquired DSLR, ran around to take pictures, and soon covered all the mountains and valleys around Yuncheng.

When Xu's father saw him, he was somewhat comforted, and privately said to Xu's mother: "Let him go to the mountains to run more and exercise, it's better than nothing."

Mother Xu was half worried and half helpless, so she could only sigh silently.

03. School Grass

After Xu Zhixiao joined the school newspaper, the first event he was assigned was the school's flag-raising ceremony.

This was the first time Xu Zhixiao saw Wang Qian, and as soon as he met him, he bowed down under his straight military uniform without any resistance.

And the other party, as the monitor of the national flag squad, devoted himself to protecting and raising the flag throughout the whole process, and didn't even notice him, the photographer whose entire face was blocked by the camera.

It was also at this flag-raising ceremony that he took that classic photo.

After the photos were submitted, Xu Zhixiao was named and praised by the teacher.It is said that this photo was seen by the school leaders, who greatly praised it, and deliberately removed the electronic version, intending to include it in next year's admissions brochure for national defense students.

Later, overhearing the girls in the class discussing the "Top [-] School Grass Ranking" on the Internet, Xu Zhixiao posted this photo on a whim.

After putting it up, he didn't pay special attention to the following.

Who knew that Wang Qian's charm was so great, and with just such a photo, he overcame obstacles all the way and directly entered the top three in the country.

When Xu Zhixiao recalled this matter again and went to search the results with great interest, he was also stunned by this prominent ranking.

... Is this also considered an indirect star-making?

At that time, Wang Qian's reputation as the head of Lingda University was almost known to everyone.

Wang Qian's classmates laughed at him, and he was coaxed to see the selected photo.

To be honest, Wang Qian also thought that the photo was taken very well.

Occasionally, he was curious about who took the picture.

It's just that at that time, he definitely didn't expect that his future would have so many intersections with this photographer until they became inseparable.

04. Candid filming

In fact, Xu Zhixiao has always believed that the fact that he was filming Wang Qian can be explained.Just like extreme photographers, in order to shoot storms, dare to run around chasing disaster weather, this is the embodiment of professional attitude and spirit of photographers.

Besides, he is not really a pervert, following Wang Qian everywhere.

It’s just that firstly, he often takes pictures at various ceremonies and activities, and Wang Qian happens to be a frequent visitor to these occasions; secondly, every time he meets Wang Qian on the road, he will always subconsciously take two photos quietly, and the result is often involuntary. I followed him all the way astray, and in the end I often forgot what I was going to do... that's all.

One day, the national defense students all attended a lecture and lined up back to the dormitory.

Wang Qian followed the team halfway, and suddenly, the students who were walking in front turned their heads and smiled at themselves very lewdly.

"Hey, Heavenly King, your little paparazzi has appeared again!"

"Heavenly King, hurry up and get dressed!"

"Then who, where's the sunglasses? Quickly put them on for the king of heaven! It's going to be on camera!"

Wang Qian was speechless. Looking forward, he saw that familiar figure coming towards him, carrying a schoolbag and holding a few books in his arms. It seemed that he was going to a hotel.

Xu Zhixiao was highly sensitive to the existence of national defense students. When he saw a large wave of army green coming in front of him, he immediately turned on the radar to search for a striking figure.

At the same time, he skillfully hid himself under the shade of the trees on the side of the road. The mobile phone with high-resolution lens was already in his hand and ready.

Wang Qian tried his best to control the naturalness of his expression and kept his eyes fixed on the face of the teasing eyes that the whole class knew well. Ren Xu Zhixiao took a few photos.

But he kept walking, and quickly followed the team past where Xu Zhixiao was.

Out of the corner of his eye, he clearly saw the man holding his phone, staring at the screen with all his attention, and followed the team in a daze to turn around and walk back, not even looking at the road under his feet.

Then, with a bang, the person directly bumped his head into the tree in front of him.

The movement was so loud that Wang Qian felt a pain in his forehead when he heard it.

"Ah—" Sure enough, Xu Zhixiao cried out in pain, covering his nose and forehead.

Many people in the team were secretly paying attention to him, and when they saw this scene, they all burst into laughter.

Wang Qian was helpless.

For the first time, he began to reflect on how lethal his growth was?That's obviously a boy, but he can do this, fanaticism?

Thinking about it, his thoughts involuntarily slipped back to the previous school grass ranking.

…If the unknown photographer hadn’t taken that photo of him at the time, wouldn’t this happen today?

05. The Mind of a Male God

After staying in the army for nearly two years, Wang Qian decided to leave the army very abruptly, which shocked the whole family.

Before his family could ask, he consciously dropped another atomic bomb and came out of the closet.

The Queen Mother sat upright on the sofa, her eyes glazed over, her face full of sadness.

Father Wang staggered a few steps trembling, went back to the room, picked up the mop, and beat Wang Qian so hard that his chest, back, hands, legs were all torn to pieces.

Wang Qian didn't say a word, and accepted it abruptly.

After fighting against the family for a few days, seeing that his parents still refused to let go, Wang Qian decided to deal with it coldly, and went back to Lingcheng directly with injuries on his back.

But he didn't expect to meet Xu Zhixiao on the first day back to Lingnan University.

Wang Qian resisted the momentary confusion in his heart, and acted very calmly, "Hello, I'll hand in the files."

Xu Zhixiao was stunned.

Wang Qian: "Is there any problem?"

Xu Zhixiao: "No, it's nothing. You sit down first, and I'll see if the materials are all ready."

Wang Qian nodded to show that he heard it, but his feet didn't move and he didn't sit down.

It's not that he doesn't want to sit, it's really, heck, what about him... There are still blue and red blood marks all over the place, even the trains are bought standing tickets, dare to sit now?

Just thinking about it makes my whole body ache.

Wang Qian immediately forced himself to divert his attention away from the wound.

Immediately afterwards, Xu Zhixiao naturally attracted all of his attention.

While Wang Qian secretly looked at him carefully, he skillfully controlled his eyes from being noticed——

Well, compared to the appearance he saw when he graduated, this person seems to have grown taller, but also thinner, but still very white.In such a hot place in Lingcheng, he has not been tanned for two years. How did he survive?

When I met him at school in the summer before, I seemed to have indeed seen him holding an umbrella... Boys are still afraid of the sun?Is it because of poor health?

But when he was secretly filming him all over the school, he was able to run and jump, full of energy...

Speaking of which, those photos are still in his computer...

Countless chaotic thoughts flashed through my mind.

Wang Qian gathered himself together, thinking in his heart, it seems that he must seize the time to settle the family.

06. Gifts for Singles' Day

On Singles' Day, the team members went out to party together and played from afternoon to night.

In the private room of KTV, a group of people eat, drink, sing and laugh, very lively.

After singing for more than three hours and playing a dozen rounds of board games, I even drank several hands of beer when someone suddenly suggested playing the game of kings.

In the first round, everyone was still cautious, and the "King" was also a little reserved, and only asked: "J of Hearts confesses to K of Diamonds in public."

Everyone looked around maliciously, but they saw Wang Qian casually flipping over his own card and throwing it in the middle of the table. It was the diamond K.

Applause and laughter erupted immediately.

At this time, Yu Huan, who was sitting on the other side, also threw out the cards in his hand, with a smug smile on his face, "Hello, haha, I'm sorry, I'm the Jack of Hearts."

"Cut—what are you doing!" Everyone immediately sneered heavily.

Who doesn't know that these two are relatives, and it doesn't make any sense to confess their love in public, okay?What a disappointment!

The "King" finally realized that he was too merciful just now, but he couldn't change his words, so he had to add a restriction, "No, it must be more difficult! Yu Huan, you go to the Internet @王荣表白, you can only confess, nothing else Can't even say a word!"

If Yu Huan took advantage of the loophole and casually sent something like "I like my cousin so much", what would that sound like?Do you want the dignity of the king?

Yu Huan obviously despised him for being narrow-minded, and snorted, "I only have more than 200 followers on Weibo, so I post as soon as I want, who is afraid of whom?"

Immediately someone next to me was unhappy, "That won't work! What's the use of posting it if no one sees it? Hurry up and find a way to change it!"

Someone who was scrolling through Weibo hurriedly raised his hand, "Look at this, the school newspaper official posted a confession topic on Weibo, Yu Huan you @it, let it help you retweet, I guarantee you will hit the headlines in minutes!"

Everyone immediately burst into laughter, "Yes, yes! Hurry up! Anonymity is not allowed!"

Wang Qian suddenly coughed, "You all seem to be very excited?"

The person sitting next to him frowned, with a look of righteousness, "I would like to admit defeat, even if you are the boss, you are not allowed to play tricks, let alone use your lewdness to threaten us!"

Wang Qian couldn't help laughing, "Whatever you want." It's just a joke anyway, it doesn't matter to make everyone happy.

Yu Huan shrugged his shoulders, obeyed the public opinion, and made a high-profile "show of love" to Wang Qian on Weibo.

As soon as the news was released, everyone went crazy at the same time, and all kinds of serious "together", "grow old together", "early birth of a precious son", "full of children and grandchildren" filled the screen in minutes.

Wang Qian looked at the forwarded messages on the phone, half helpless and half funny, just about to quit Weibo, when suddenly, his finger was on the screen.

There was a slight movement in his heart, and a faint thought flashed through his mind.

After hesitating for a moment, he picked up his mobile phone and walked out of the box. He walked to the unoccupied corner at the end of the corridor, and finally clicked on the private message on the official WeChat account of the Lingnan University newspaper.

The faint gleam reflected on his face, making his expression look very serious, but his eyes were as calm and calm as ever.

A message was deleted and deleted, changed and changed, and it took a while before it was sent——

[Hello, I would like to anonymously say to @XZX: I was attracted to you at first sight, but unfortunately the timing of my heartbeat was not right, I can only regret to miss it.I don't know if you have someone you like now, if not, I hope you can give me a chance.This time, I don't want to regret anymore. 】

After staring at the message for a while, Wang Qian suddenly couldn't help but laugh.

It seems that the writing is too literary and artistic, and he feels his teeth hurt when he reads it.He really doesn't suit this style.

After laughing, he calmed down, put away his phone, and sighed silently again.

True or false, fictitious, deliberately making himself look like a sad crush, just to avoid being guessed by that person.

To engage in such a detour, just to determine what the other party's mind is now, really...

But in fact, thinking about it carefully, no matter whether the other party responds or not, and how he responds, I'm afraid he won't be able to really get a moment of peace of mind.

For a moment, the mouth seemed a little astringent.

Wang Qian unconsciously relaxed his shoulders and leaned against the cold glass wall. The chill immediately spread throughout his body along the nerves and blood vessels.

He closed his eyes, and his mind, which had been inexplicably chaotic and tense since just now, finally gradually cooled down and regained clarity.

Sure enough, it should be done step by step according to the plan.

Take your time, don't rush, there will always be a day.

He picked up his phone and wanted to delete the private message, but after thinking about it, he decided to forget it.

Consider it a gift.

Let that person know that in this world, someone is always watching him, just as he has always been watching him.

The author has something to say: today the three chapters will be published together, and the extra episode will not be published separately.

The full text is over here, and there will be no updates later.It has been just an update before, and almost no author has anything to say. Today, I can finally chatter, so I can make a summary for myself and this story.

Some of the material in this story is derived from reality.

I started thinking about it in the first half of the year, but I wrote the beginning of two editions, but I didn't continue to write because I couldn't figure out the train of thought.

Inspiration came suddenly last month, and after several days of rushing, I finally wrote it.Because there is no outline, I revised it from the front to the back while writing it. After repeated overhauls four or five times, I finally felt that the full text was more coherent.

This is the first time I tried this kind of extreme fragmented writing. I wrote it in a rusty way, and it may not be very smooth for everyone to read.

And I deliberately changed a lot of inherent writing habits.

In this story, there are almost no descriptions of the environment, appearance, atmosphere, and emotions. There is also no background setting and straightforward lyricism, and there are almost only line-drawn narratives.

In fact, the ones that I don’t have are what I’m really good at, but because I want to practice what I’m not good at, I wrote it like this on purpose.

In the process of writing, it is really not easy to restrain one's own habits. The content that was deleted back and forth may have [-] to [-] words, all of which were written unconsciously according to old habits, alas.

Overall, give this story a 63, just a passing grade, but with a lot of room for improvement.

The lack of an outline still affects the quality of the article after all, so the extras are almost always used to fix bugs, but even so, the handling of Wang Qian's emotional line may still be a bit unnatural, alas.

For the entrepreneurial process mentioned in the article, I borrowed from my friends’ personal experience and made a certain degree of beautification, but it cannot be said to be too exaggerated. In reality, there is indeed an entrepreneurial team that has achieved good results from the beginning.In order to avoid dissatisfaction from friends who research evidence, let’s briefly say this here. Please treat it rationally. Of course, you can’t believe what is said in the article, after all, it has been processed by art.

The career line is almost just an auxiliary in the text, and this is essentially a love story.Therefore, the career line is relatively small, especially in the later stage. I hope that everyone will not feel that the result is unbalanced, because this is not the focus in the first place.

Of course, if I have the opportunity and time in the future, I also want to try to write this kind of double-line long article.But that's for later.

It is a pity that Wang Qian's image has not been shaped, and it is still weak. This is related to the perspective of the subject of this article.

I used to prefer to use God's perspective when writing, but this time Wang Qian's perspective did not appear until very late (chapter 17, more than halfway through).

Because some of the foreshadowing of the plot was put very late, and it didn’t appear until the confession, so in order not to interrupt these ambushes, I couldn’t release Wang Qian’s episode in advance, which also affected the richness of his characters until the end. All appear thinner.

Xu Zhixiao's shaping was relatively successful.There is a change from being introverted and shy at the beginning to being well-behaved and considerate that I gradually become familiar with later.However, due to space and writing limitations, the writing may not be very clear and natural, which is also a point that needs to be improved.

On the contrary, I like the role of Li Yiyang more. Although he only appeared twice, he feels well portrayed.

He actually has a story.

I originally wanted to write about him in the episode, and explain clearly the follow-up of his marriage contract problem, but after writing thousands of words, I found that I didn’t have the strength to continue writing, so I had to give up.

In short, you can imagine the brown-haired, blue-eyed and unpredictable British guy and the careless and unrestrained son-in-law. The CP attribute is a gentle ghost, animal idiot x romantic ruffian straight guy. They attack each other, and develop from accidental sex to unilateral forced love. Finally finally tossing together the story.

I personally like this setting very much. When I wrote that the two of them confront each other, I also feel that sparks are radiating, but because of the lack of energy, I can only leave one regret.

I am very grateful to every reader who has seen the end. Your existence makes me feel that writing is a significant thing, and I am willing to keep writing, study hard, and strive to make myself better at writing.

Looking forward to seeing you in the next story^