[Tomb BG] The wind comes to Wushan
Chapter 71
It's not pretty at all, except for the weird plot, the author's writing style is really horrible, it's like a beginner writing a novel.
In the middle of the novel, the camera even changed, from the self-report of the heroine to the self-report of the hero.
I pouted, how did such a novel become popular?Curiosity?
But the complaints belong to the complaints, I still watched it patiently.I watched it all night, and the next day I was so sleepy that I couldn’t open my eyes, but I’m glad I didn’t give up, because the change of perspective in the middle really improved the level of this article by more than one level.
Without the pile of gorgeous rhetoric, without all kinds of shocking God's perspective, the light writing style does not make the whole story less surprising, but more fascinating.
I just don't understand, the next few million words are written, why the weirdo is not willing to do a little embellishment for the first 10,000+ words?
The male and female protagonists in the story meet in Guazi Temple in Shandong, know each other in Xisha Undersea Tomb, and fall in love in Changbai Mountain.When the girl finally insisted on breaking the queen, the male protagonist willfully stayed with her even though he knew it was the best choice for the overall situation. In the end, the two survived the difficulty together without any danger.
Changbai Mountain Changbai Mountain, long-term guard, to Baitou.
they got married.
But they still couldn't settle down. They went to the desert together, went to the Snake Swamp together, explored the secrets of the ancient underwater buildings together, endured suffering together, and enjoyed joy together.
The weirdo promised in the copywriting that he would not abandon the pit, and would keep on writing, even if Xue Beifeng and Wu Xie were 80 years old, they could join hands to bring the robbery to the United States.
I flipped through the comment section of this book, and the discussion there was also full of enthusiasm, but the weirdo seemed to be a big name and never replied.Some people say that I’m here to watch the tomb robbers. Some people say that there is a boat show. Some people say that the author writes so much to cheat money. Some people say that there are too few girls around the hero. Strongly request to add more A busty... I thought about it, and I didn't know what to write, so I finally typed a sentence on it.
Wu Xie and Xue Beifeng are so happy.
I slept until dark, and when I read that article again, I found that my comment had been marked as a topic, and it was at the top.
Because the big-name weirdo who always only updates but never replies actually replied a sentence under my comment.
Yes, they are so happy.
>>>>>>
I remember that one summer vacation, the TV station rebroadcasted "The Legend of Condor Heroes". Because I love Gu Tianle and Li Ruotong so much, every time I went to the art class, I rushed home and watched an episode in front of the TV. I have already memorized some of the plot lines by heart.
When Yang Guo and Xiaolongnv met under the cliff 16 years later, I sat on the sofa with a tissue in my arms and cried. Staring at the TV in a daze.
You also like this TV series.
After a while, he hummed in a low voice.
Then come and see together.
I patted the empty seat next to me, but he didn't refuse.
I sniffed while watching TV and said to myself, Yang Guo is really infatuated, he waited for 16 years.
The weirdo took over: he was infatuated, but that was not the only reason why he waited for 16 years, he was just more afraid to find the truth, waiting is the gentlest torture, but the truth is the most desperate grief.
I despise him, oh uncle, you really don't understand romance.
Is it romantic?I don't think so.
This is romance, and people like you who have never experienced it will not understand it!Xiaolongnu jumped off the cliff by herself in order to let Yang Guo survive, and Yang Guo waited for her for 16 years, and finally the two met again and had a happy reunion.I think, if your book is also written like this, if Wu Xie and Xue Beifeng also come to such a life-and-death farewell, it will definitely sell more than it is now.
He kept silent, bowed his head in silence, not knowing what he was thinking.
Hey, say something.
As soon as I pushed him, I saw a drop of tears hit the back of his hand so straight.
You...why are you crying...
I was a little panicked all of a sudden.This is the first time I have seen a big man cry in front of me.
He coughed and said it was okay, he said, Zhuo Ran, you must know that stories are always just stories. In Jin Yong's story, Yang Guo and Xiaolongnv will meet again after 16 years of separation, but in my story, Wu Xie and Xue Beifeng... he He opened his mouth, hesitant to speak, and finally he raised his head and said with flushed eyes, how I wish they would never separate.
I don't know why, but I suddenly thought of the lover he mentioned who was far away in Changbai Mountain.I asked him cautiously, uncle, are you also waiting for your little dragon girl?
He was startled, then shook his head, I'm not waiting for the little dragon girl, I'm waiting for the little turtle girl, the little snail girl, let her crawl faster and still be so slow... I've been waiting for 16 years but I'm not as handsome as Gu Tianle.
how come!I quickly waved, you are so handsome!You look better than this, I pointed to the appearance of Yang Guo in the TV series 16 years later, you are much more handsome and younger than him!Ah... How about I call you big brother too, doesn't it sound much younger?You treat me as Guo Xiang?
The strange man looked at me for a long time, and finally pulled the corner of his mouth reluctantly and said, you are not Guo Xiang.
Then who am I?I thought that the little dragon girl could be turned into a little turtle girl, you wouldn't say I'm Guo Shou, would you?
He sighed, stood up and said, you are Zhuo Ran.
what!Obviously what he was talking about was "The Legend of Condor Heroes" suddenly brought back to reality!Sure enough, he is still a very boring uncle, hum!I continued to watch my tv and took my tissue to shed my tears and ignored him.
Until one day later, I got something from the fat uncle who was drunk. At that time, I realized that there is no Lu Wushuang, no Cheng Ying, no Guo Fu, and no Gongsun Lv in the stories of weird people. Calyx, naturally there is no Guo Xiang.
Some are just him and her.
love each other.
>>>>>>
In the tenth year of my acquaintance with Weird, I encountered one of the life setbacks that almost everyone will encounter-failing an exam.It's just that I'm relatively weak, and the exam I failed was the college entrance examination.It’s not that I didn’t pass the cultural courses, but that I didn’t even pass the professional courses in the two art schools I liked.
I didn't dare to go home, I didn't want to see my father's disappointed look, so I hid in a small abandoned warehouse where I often went and cried.
I didn't expect that the weirdo would be the first to find me.
His flashlight flashed on my face twice, sat down next to me with a sneer, and said, it turned out that he didn't jump off a building, and there was some help.
... There are no tall buildings nearby for me to jump.
I can dance anywhere I want to.
After saying this, we were silent for a while, and I asked him reluctantly, so you didn't come to arrest me and go home.
He said everyone has moments when they just want to be alone and I know you are in that moment.
I said in my heart that you know that you are still here.
But the only good thing is that although he didn't leave, he didn't keep lecturing me like a grumpy grandma.We sat silently in the dark, like two planets that would never meet, traveling on their own orbits.
I don't know how long I've been sitting like this, but I suddenly had a doubt in my heart, so I asked him, uncle, do you always just want to be alone?
He didn't answer me immediately, as if he thought about it for a moment, he said, not before.
Well... when did it start?
He was silent for another moment, when I finally realized that the person I loved would never come back.
So uncle, you were dumped by your girlfriend!
The weirdo laughed at himself, yes.I was dumped.
Alas, if you lose a love, you will die and live for so many years. Can you be a little promising, but fortunately, you can still be saved if you didn't jump off the building.
I raised my chin proudly, thinking I had come back perfectly.
Yeah?The weirdo sighed, I also want to be rescued, tell me how to recover?
Suddenly asking me this way... I racked my brains to think about it, filtered all the few romance novels I had read in my mind, and finally suggested to him, you find someone else to fall in love with.
It's not as easy as you said.He dismissed me in a tone that a child understands something, and then he said something that sounded unbelievable to himself, even if he created an identical person, it wouldn’t be her, and I don’t want to Forget or something.
I interrupted him, since you can't let go, then you can go to her again, you have been waiting for her for ten years, as long as her heart is not made of stone, she will definitely fall in love with you!
Heart, move?
After the weirdo repeated it, he fell silent again.
If I had known the ending would be like this...
I'd rather her heart was made of stone.
I'd rather she... never fell for me.
Of course, I hate myself the most.
If I had stayed at that time, everything today might have been different.
We will live for a long time, and we will live more wonderfully than in the story.
...Zhuo Ran, the weirdo suddenly called my name, do you really like art?
Of course.
Then don't give up lightly for any reason or setback, because you never know which compromise will make you regret it for the rest of your life.
I nodded, assuring him, and myself, that I would never give up.
He gave me the flashlight, smiled, and said, it's late, go back, don't worry your father, I want to be alone for a while.
I really want to hit his forehead with a flashlight, what does it mean? This tree hole is me
In the middle of the novel, the camera even changed, from the self-report of the heroine to the self-report of the hero.
I pouted, how did such a novel become popular?Curiosity?
But the complaints belong to the complaints, I still watched it patiently.I watched it all night, and the next day I was so sleepy that I couldn’t open my eyes, but I’m glad I didn’t give up, because the change of perspective in the middle really improved the level of this article by more than one level.
Without the pile of gorgeous rhetoric, without all kinds of shocking God's perspective, the light writing style does not make the whole story less surprising, but more fascinating.
I just don't understand, the next few million words are written, why the weirdo is not willing to do a little embellishment for the first 10,000+ words?
The male and female protagonists in the story meet in Guazi Temple in Shandong, know each other in Xisha Undersea Tomb, and fall in love in Changbai Mountain.When the girl finally insisted on breaking the queen, the male protagonist willfully stayed with her even though he knew it was the best choice for the overall situation. In the end, the two survived the difficulty together without any danger.
Changbai Mountain Changbai Mountain, long-term guard, to Baitou.
they got married.
But they still couldn't settle down. They went to the desert together, went to the Snake Swamp together, explored the secrets of the ancient underwater buildings together, endured suffering together, and enjoyed joy together.
The weirdo promised in the copywriting that he would not abandon the pit, and would keep on writing, even if Xue Beifeng and Wu Xie were 80 years old, they could join hands to bring the robbery to the United States.
I flipped through the comment section of this book, and the discussion there was also full of enthusiasm, but the weirdo seemed to be a big name and never replied.Some people say that I’m here to watch the tomb robbers. Some people say that there is a boat show. Some people say that the author writes so much to cheat money. Some people say that there are too few girls around the hero. Strongly request to add more A busty... I thought about it, and I didn't know what to write, so I finally typed a sentence on it.
Wu Xie and Xue Beifeng are so happy.
I slept until dark, and when I read that article again, I found that my comment had been marked as a topic, and it was at the top.
Because the big-name weirdo who always only updates but never replies actually replied a sentence under my comment.
Yes, they are so happy.
>>>>>>
I remember that one summer vacation, the TV station rebroadcasted "The Legend of Condor Heroes". Because I love Gu Tianle and Li Ruotong so much, every time I went to the art class, I rushed home and watched an episode in front of the TV. I have already memorized some of the plot lines by heart.
When Yang Guo and Xiaolongnv met under the cliff 16 years later, I sat on the sofa with a tissue in my arms and cried. Staring at the TV in a daze.
You also like this TV series.
After a while, he hummed in a low voice.
Then come and see together.
I patted the empty seat next to me, but he didn't refuse.
I sniffed while watching TV and said to myself, Yang Guo is really infatuated, he waited for 16 years.
The weirdo took over: he was infatuated, but that was not the only reason why he waited for 16 years, he was just more afraid to find the truth, waiting is the gentlest torture, but the truth is the most desperate grief.
I despise him, oh uncle, you really don't understand romance.
Is it romantic?I don't think so.
This is romance, and people like you who have never experienced it will not understand it!Xiaolongnu jumped off the cliff by herself in order to let Yang Guo survive, and Yang Guo waited for her for 16 years, and finally the two met again and had a happy reunion.I think, if your book is also written like this, if Wu Xie and Xue Beifeng also come to such a life-and-death farewell, it will definitely sell more than it is now.
He kept silent, bowed his head in silence, not knowing what he was thinking.
Hey, say something.
As soon as I pushed him, I saw a drop of tears hit the back of his hand so straight.
You...why are you crying...
I was a little panicked all of a sudden.This is the first time I have seen a big man cry in front of me.
He coughed and said it was okay, he said, Zhuo Ran, you must know that stories are always just stories. In Jin Yong's story, Yang Guo and Xiaolongnv will meet again after 16 years of separation, but in my story, Wu Xie and Xue Beifeng... he He opened his mouth, hesitant to speak, and finally he raised his head and said with flushed eyes, how I wish they would never separate.
I don't know why, but I suddenly thought of the lover he mentioned who was far away in Changbai Mountain.I asked him cautiously, uncle, are you also waiting for your little dragon girl?
He was startled, then shook his head, I'm not waiting for the little dragon girl, I'm waiting for the little turtle girl, the little snail girl, let her crawl faster and still be so slow... I've been waiting for 16 years but I'm not as handsome as Gu Tianle.
how come!I quickly waved, you are so handsome!You look better than this, I pointed to the appearance of Yang Guo in the TV series 16 years later, you are much more handsome and younger than him!Ah... How about I call you big brother too, doesn't it sound much younger?You treat me as Guo Xiang?
The strange man looked at me for a long time, and finally pulled the corner of his mouth reluctantly and said, you are not Guo Xiang.
Then who am I?I thought that the little dragon girl could be turned into a little turtle girl, you wouldn't say I'm Guo Shou, would you?
He sighed, stood up and said, you are Zhuo Ran.
what!Obviously what he was talking about was "The Legend of Condor Heroes" suddenly brought back to reality!Sure enough, he is still a very boring uncle, hum!I continued to watch my tv and took my tissue to shed my tears and ignored him.
Until one day later, I got something from the fat uncle who was drunk. At that time, I realized that there is no Lu Wushuang, no Cheng Ying, no Guo Fu, and no Gongsun Lv in the stories of weird people. Calyx, naturally there is no Guo Xiang.
Some are just him and her.
love each other.
>>>>>>
In the tenth year of my acquaintance with Weird, I encountered one of the life setbacks that almost everyone will encounter-failing an exam.It's just that I'm relatively weak, and the exam I failed was the college entrance examination.It’s not that I didn’t pass the cultural courses, but that I didn’t even pass the professional courses in the two art schools I liked.
I didn't dare to go home, I didn't want to see my father's disappointed look, so I hid in a small abandoned warehouse where I often went and cried.
I didn't expect that the weirdo would be the first to find me.
His flashlight flashed on my face twice, sat down next to me with a sneer, and said, it turned out that he didn't jump off a building, and there was some help.
... There are no tall buildings nearby for me to jump.
I can dance anywhere I want to.
After saying this, we were silent for a while, and I asked him reluctantly, so you didn't come to arrest me and go home.
He said everyone has moments when they just want to be alone and I know you are in that moment.
I said in my heart that you know that you are still here.
But the only good thing is that although he didn't leave, he didn't keep lecturing me like a grumpy grandma.We sat silently in the dark, like two planets that would never meet, traveling on their own orbits.
I don't know how long I've been sitting like this, but I suddenly had a doubt in my heart, so I asked him, uncle, do you always just want to be alone?
He didn't answer me immediately, as if he thought about it for a moment, he said, not before.
Well... when did it start?
He was silent for another moment, when I finally realized that the person I loved would never come back.
So uncle, you were dumped by your girlfriend!
The weirdo laughed at himself, yes.I was dumped.
Alas, if you lose a love, you will die and live for so many years. Can you be a little promising, but fortunately, you can still be saved if you didn't jump off the building.
I raised my chin proudly, thinking I had come back perfectly.
Yeah?The weirdo sighed, I also want to be rescued, tell me how to recover?
Suddenly asking me this way... I racked my brains to think about it, filtered all the few romance novels I had read in my mind, and finally suggested to him, you find someone else to fall in love with.
It's not as easy as you said.He dismissed me in a tone that a child understands something, and then he said something that sounded unbelievable to himself, even if he created an identical person, it wouldn’t be her, and I don’t want to Forget or something.
I interrupted him, since you can't let go, then you can go to her again, you have been waiting for her for ten years, as long as her heart is not made of stone, she will definitely fall in love with you!
Heart, move?
After the weirdo repeated it, he fell silent again.
If I had known the ending would be like this...
I'd rather her heart was made of stone.
I'd rather she... never fell for me.
Of course, I hate myself the most.
If I had stayed at that time, everything today might have been different.
We will live for a long time, and we will live more wonderfully than in the story.
...Zhuo Ran, the weirdo suddenly called my name, do you really like art?
Of course.
Then don't give up lightly for any reason or setback, because you never know which compromise will make you regret it for the rest of your life.
I nodded, assuring him, and myself, that I would never give up.
He gave me the flashlight, smiled, and said, it's late, go back, don't worry your father, I want to be alone for a while.
I really want to hit his forehead with a flashlight, what does it mean? This tree hole is me
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