shock!The code machine is actually an alien tentacle monster!

Professor Chu carefully read the replies of every person who introduced himself in that post.

Among them, an id called "Tangtang" first attracted his attention.

This man spoke very earnestly.It tells about the difficulties and bottlenecks I encountered in different stages of creating novels, expresses my love for writing, and my determination to write for a lifetime.

The content is not the key, the key is the layout.

Everyone speaks in the forum, and the replies are generally very short.Sometimes instead of paragraphs, even punctuation is omitted.

But this candy is different.It can be seen that she has done the typesetting seriously.

Segmentation, blank lines, and key points. Although the whole teacher apprentice post has a lot of words, it looks very clear and effortless.

You can see the key points at a glance, which makes people feel very comfortable.

Chu Shou immediately felt the girl's thoughtfulness and care, and was very fond of her.

However, what attracted him even more was the reply from a person named "Yatzhu".

This is also a little transparent.According to her own statement, she is a college student who has just graduated for one year, and she is using her spare time to code while going to work.

At first, codewords were just a hobby.Because she has liked reading novels since she was a child.After going to work, novels became her spiritual support.Whenever she is overwhelmed by the pressure of reality, reading novels can make her temporarily forget reality and relax a little.

Later she began to try to write novels by herself.Although my grades are not good and I have never made any money, writing itself is still a joy.

After seeing Bi Shui's chicken soup that was rewarded after so much hard work, she also wanted to work hard.Because the current job is very hopeless, and it is completely squeezing the young labor force.She doesn't want to live this kind of life that can be seen at a glance, so she really wants to work hard on the code words to see where she can go.

Her current job is nine to nine, plus commuting time, she can only get home around ten o'clock every day.But she insisted on daily updates, updating more than [-] words every day.Every book has been written seriously, and no article has been cheated.She will also carefully analyze the works of great gods, hoping to learn some writing skills from Jinbangwen.

My brain is also moving, and my strength is also spent.

But the grades still can't get up.

On the contrary, the body starts to feel overwhelmed first.Now she can only go to bed at two or three o'clock every day, and she has to get up at seven o'clock in the morning to catch the bus, and her body is almost unable to hold on.

So she was very confused, not knowing whether it was right for her to do so.

Will this really pay off?

Professor Chu looked at the data of her article.It's really miserable.

This girl has already written three books, but the collections are all in the one or two hundred range, which does not reach the v-line.

These three books add up to almost 100 million words, but they didn't even earn a penny.

Professor Chu: "..."

This is the real power generation for love!

He was very curious about how this girl did it—no, no, it wasn't a hurtful question like "How did you manage to be so unrestrained", but "How did you persist with such cold data?" ?

Professor Chu felt that if it was him, he would definitely not be able to do it.

Therefore, he still has some admiration for this girl named Yuzhu.

To be honest, he was still a little worried.

Judging from the biological data of the Blue Stars given to him by the light brain, if ordinary people lack sleep for a long time, it will cause great damage to the body.

He decisively added this girl's QQ

Come up and say hello.Yuzhu was very moved, and couldn't believe that Samsung actually chose her in the crowd.

Professor Chu went directly to her article and found many problems.

First of all, the copywriting is very confusing.I can't see what the core stalk of this article is, and there is nothing attractive about it.

It is also appalling.The plot is very scattered and the pace is very slow, making it difficult to stick to it.

But there is a bright spot in Yuzhu's articles, that is, she writes some very interesting and eye-catching plots from time to time.

It's a pity that these plots are scattered in hundreds of thousands of words, and many people have given up on the text if they can't stick to the flashy plot.

Professor Chu tactfully told Yuzhu about the problems he discovered.He was afraid of hurting people's self-esteem, so he exaggerated the plots that made him feel interesting.

"Really, my eyes lit up when I saw this! It's very interesting! I like this setting very much!" Professor Chu's words are not flattering, he really thinks those plots are very interesting, "If you put this It must be more interesting when the setting is expanded!"

Unexpectedly, it immediately received strong feedback from Yuzhu.

"Ah, actually, I really like this side too! But I was in a hurry to write the following plot, so I didn't describe it well... It was a waste of this setting, hey..."

Yuzhu shared with him her thoughts in the process of writing, and Chu Shou soon discovered that this girl is actually quite spiritual.

There are many whimsical and fresh things in her head, but she just doesn't know how to present them.

It's like holding high-quality ingredients in your hands, but you don't know how to cook, you can only fry them with your eyes closed.When served in front of customers, customers can no longer recognize the original appearance of the ingredients.

All she lacks is skill.

Technique is the easiest thing to teach and the easiest thing to learn.

Professor Chu immediately gave her instructions.Where the rhythm is procrastinated, where the description is not in place, he points out to Yu Zhu one by one.

Yuzhu listened very carefully.After listening to it, he said excitedly that he knew that he had a problem, but he couldn't see where the problem was.After being ordered by the master, it was like enlightenment, and suddenly became enlightened.

She realized it!She knows how to change it!

Professor Chu: "Very good, let's go!"

He turned around and went about his own business.

The next morning, when Professor Chu went online again, he received a revised copy and text from Yuzhu.

I have to say that Yuzhu is indeed very savvy.Just one click.

Although there are still flaws in the revised article, it is much better than before.

Yuzhu deleted the plot drastically and was very cruel.The original text had more than 3 characters in the first ten chapters. After Professor Chu pointed out that there were too many invalid plots, she deleted all those plots that promoted the plot, reflected the character design, or were unattractive.

That was the painstaking effort she typed out word by word.

Professor Chu knew that her hand speed was only [-] per hour at the level of an ordinary blue star.In addition to the time for conception, she wrote the [-] words for more than a month.

But now it's deleted.

Enough!

Very good, a man who does great things!

In the abridged version, there are only three chapters left in the original ten chapters.

But these three chapters are already much better than before.

Yuzhu directly mentioned the first flash plot to the front.What originally appeared in Chapter 8 can now be seen in Chapter 1.

Readers are attracted by this plot, at least they will continue to click into Chapter 2.Instead of clicking and crossing before reading Chapter 1 as before.

The content of the other two chapters is also very good.Fast paced and straight to the point.It gives people a feeling that the aroma is transmitted to the table before the dishes are served.

Really great!

Chu Shou couldn't help sighing again, this girl is really smart, and she can understand everything, but she just suffered from no one to guide her, so she kept making detours.

And - she is also really hardworking!

Professor Chu noticed that it was four o'clock in the morning when she sent the document.

They chatted until past ten o'clock last night, and Chu Shou went offline.In other words, in the five or six hours after that, Yuzhu has been writing essays!

This is really... a treasure.

You must teach them well, but you can't spoil such a good seedling.

Chu Shou suddenly felt a heavy burden on his shoulders.He hurried to Bishui to find some dry goods posts and writing skills posts to read.Start to make up for other people's writing experience and integrate it with your own experience.

at the same time.

Tangtang squatted in that three-star acceptance post all night, witnessing the small transparent army that came to apprentice one after another.

As a result, the three-star senior didn't reply until the morning, saying that he had found an apprentice.

Tangtang suddenly felt like a deflated balloon, feeling empty all over.

It turns out that someone has already been picked up by Da Da... I don't know which lucky one it is?

Tang Tang was very disappointed.

From childhood to adulthood, she was the darling of her parents and teachers.There is nothing she wants, even if she can't get it for a while, as long as she acts like a baby and loses her temper, her parents will always find a way to get it for her.

But everything has changed since I came to Jinjiang to write essays.

First up is the rookie.

She is used to the glory of No.1, when has she ever been second?Naturally, she felt that there was something wrong with No.1, but no matter how much she presented facts, no one believed her.

What made her even more uncomfortable was that "Gale" was firmly holding her down on the clip.

In fact, she gradually understood that "The Gale" does have merits.Although it is not her favorite subject, there are indeed some people who like it.

That's it.

But why does the post she hangs up always fail to sink?Why do people with good deeds turn over the posts over and over again, whipping her corpse repeatedly and publicly punishing her? !

This, in fact... She can also understand.

After all, if it didn't happen to her, she would definitely like to see this kind of plot.

Repeatedly slapped in the face, how cool!

And now.

Three Star Living Bodhisattva accepts apprentices, and she sent such a long series of replies with so much heart, but Da Da still didn't choose her.

She didn't know who her wife chose in the end, so she didn't know where to go when she was jealous.

why?

Why did all her former protagonist auras seem to disappear when she arrived in Jinjiang?No longer the best, no longer the luckiest.

Is this the so-called social beating?

The more Tangtang thought about it, the more sad she became.

However, the innate reluctance to admit defeat stood up again at this time.

She tidied up her emotions and posted another post on Bishui.

[I lost the selection in the next door's Samsung recruiting post, and I am very disappointed.But don't lose heart.Since you can't become an apprentice of Samsung, then try to make yourself a Samsung! 】

After thinking about it, she added:

[If it succeeds, I will come back and accept an apprentice in this building! 】

This is a record post.She decided to record her efforts and achievements every day in the future.

She must let the whole Bishui see, even if she is no longer No.1, not the center of the world——

She is no worse than others!