Before the consciousness was completely lost, Duan Qingni looked back on this magical experience of traveling through books, and all the pictures kept turning like a revolving lantern.
It's ridiculous to say.
Before Duan Qingni passed through the book, she was just an ordinary receiving editor.
That day when he was sorting out the waste manuscripts in the company, he accidentally discovered the novel "Jian Xian" - just because he opened Chapter 1, the cannon fodder who was stabbed to death had the same name as him.
Based on the unique mentality of a veteran editor, he felt that the unfinished plot of this book could still be saved. If he corrected it and collected it, it might still be a hit.
As a result, when Duan Qingni took the scrap manuscript and happily went downstairs to contact the author—two employees quarreled on the stairs, one of them pushed the other down and hit him on the head impartially.
When Duan Qingni opened her eyes again, the world has undergone earth-shaking changes.
——As for the name "Yusu", there is no doubt that it is a countdown engraved in his life.
As the most hidden villain in the full text, Yu Su itself is an extremely unreasonable existence.
Dating back to decades before the story, there was an inhumane executioner named Shi Wuling in Jianghu.This person is cold-blooded and cruel, and enjoys killing all day long, killing innocent people day and night; it is said that he is over a hundred years old, and his appearance is not old.
In order to further pursue the way of eternal life, Shi Wuling extended his demonic claws to the various sects, intending to steal the forbidden techniques of hundreds of schools-but unexpectedly, the Changling faction had been prepared, and took advantage of the loophole to take away his lair in one fell swoop, and united with a group of masters to kill Shi Wuling. Leng was beaten out of his wits and died on the spot.
Many years later, the devil is no longer in the arena, and there are still legends about him in the arena.Although Shi Wuling is dead, there is still a disaster under his knees, and he has been looking for a way to revive him these years.
And this unending disaster is Shi Wuling's adopted son...Yu Su.
In this way, the enmity between the two sides is quite clear.Among the masters who crusaded against Shi Wuling back then, the former head of Changling and his younger brother Mu Xuan ranked first, and Mu Xuan became a god because of this battle.
So the beginning of the story begins with Yusu's revenge.He pierced through Duan Qingni with a sword, and nailed the body to the door for public display; Changling once held a snow feast every five years, and he walked all over the entire mountain alone, and all the senior elders were seriously injured and lost.When the story develops to the later stage, he kills and kills, destroys the world, and no grass grows in the land he passes.
but……
From the beginning to the end, there is a very obvious logical problem, which Duan Qingni noticed when he was reading the novel.
When the author created this villain, he did not endow him with any emotions that humans should have.
There are very few words about Yu Su, and his relationship with Shi Wuling is briefly mentioned.He never told the origin of Yusu's adoption, never explained the depth of their relationship, there was no foreshadowing, Yusu had no inner activities, and his appearance was aimless plundering and killing without emotion.
His past is blank, out of touch with the entire novel world, like a walking humanoid weapon, promoting the plot entirely by force value.
So much so that at the end of the writing, the author couldn't come back, and could only arrange for him to be defeated by the aura of the protagonist's attack.It ended in a dismal ending.
"But Yusu is so strong and has almost no weaknesses." When Duan Qingni was stabbed, he was thinking, "If the plot in the book really develops, the ending may be wiped out..."
At this time, there was a loud "ding" explosion, and several white lights suddenly flashed in front of my eyes.
[You are right, Yu Su has no weaknesses.The direction of this book has been crooked. 】
"Who?!" Duan Qingni was startled, "Who is talking?"
He was obviously stabbed by Yu Su, so he should die.Is it still lucky to return to the real world?
[Hello, I am 404.It is the time travel worker who manages this book. 】
A cold voice, mixed with a weak electric current, sounded from the ear.
Duan Qingni opened her eyes in astonishment: "...what?"
——Are you 404?Then I still have 520!
Duan Qingni just wanted to move, but unexpectedly found that she had no body and could not make any movements.
At this time, he was in a vast void of darkness, and there was a narrow white light in front of him, from which the voice came from.
"As you can see, the plot of "Jianxian" was chaotic, and the entire staff collapsed from beginning to end. Continuing with the current trend will inevitably lead to irreversible results." 404 said, "So I chose the best A suitable character, by changing his fate line to fill in the loopholes and correct the plot."
Duan Qingni has not yet understood the meaning of his words. 404 said again: "The most suitable role is you, Mr. Duan Qingni."
"What...who?"
Duan Qingni was taken aback for a moment, then realized and asked, "Why?"
404: "No reason, because you are Duan Qingni."
"Joke! I'm a living person, you put me into a book?" Duan Qingni said angrily, "I'm called Duan Qingni today, but I'll be called 404 tomorrow... Why don't you turn me into you?"
"I don't have time to talk to you. Once there is a mistake or omission in the plot, the world of the whole book will collapse immediately." 404 said coldly, "At that time, we will all be locked up here until we die."
Duan Qingni was startled, and was about to say something.
There was another flash of white light in front of my eyes, and a dial the size of a bottle cap emerged from the darkness, engraved with a circle of numbers from 0 to 12, with a pointer in the middle pointing to the 0 position.
【Look, this is your destiny axis.After that, every time the plot takes a correct step, the pointer will move forward one space.As long as you follow the outline I gave you throughout the whole process and make no mistakes in the middle, you will be sent back to the real world when it comes to a happy ending. 】
Duan Qingni said: "Then what if something goes wrong?"
404 said: "If you make a wrong step, you will die,"
Duan Qingni couldn't help shivering.Thinking of the moment when Yu Su stabbed him, he was really caught off guard.
"Now, I give you two choices."
404's voice gradually lowered: "First, you die here, all related memories are cleared, and a new reincarnation starts from scratch."
"Don't!" Duan Qingni said, "I managed to escape, so why not go back?!"
404 ignored it, and said directly: "Second, stay alive and continue to follow this plot line."
"Second! Of course second!" Is this even a question?Any fool knows how to choose.
"Are you sure?" 404 asked again, "If you make a mistake this time, there will be no chance to do it again."
Duan Qingni: "I'm sure!"
"That being the case, the foreshadowing of this plot is enough. The axis of fate will guide you to attack Yusu... until the happy ending, you and Yusu will connect their fates and walk the same line."
"????"
Duan Qingni was stunned suddenly.
What is this man talking about?
Raiders of Yusu? ...fate connected?
"Literally." 404 paused word by word, explaining clearly, "This, is a pure love novel—you, you, you, don't understand?"
Halfway through the conversation, Duan Qingni's scalp had already started to tingle.
He exhausted all his strength, almost speaking from his chest: "Change one! Change one...I want to choose number one!"
"There's nothing to change, let's go." 404 said mercilessly.
Duan Qingni only felt a strong force behind him that was pulling his whole body and soul outwards. He was terrified, so he could only hiss and shout: "No... Hey! Tell me, what is the happy ending? Where do you want to go?!"
[Within three years, you must have at least one cub]
The white light in the darkness disappeared, and the voice of 404 gradually faded away.Before Duan Qingni understood the meaning of his words, his eyes suddenly went dark, and he fell into a coma again.
Duan Qingni seemed to have foreseen the ending in advance.
He worshiped a robot and became a relative.They didn't say a word, even the bridal chamber was frame by frame, and the whole process was silent.
Nine months later, a litter of little robots was born.The little robots were also expressionless, and the room was full of dumb people, only Duan Qingni could speak.
He ran away while weeping.Halfway through the run, he realized that he was pregnant again. Yu Su grabbed him back with his backhand and pointed a dagger at his belly: "Continue to give birth, don't stop."
"Get out, I don't want to have children!!"
——In the middle of this nightmare, Duan Qingni flicked and finally woke up from the chaos.
Then he squinted his eyes, and the light came in from the window.His vision gradually became clear, he moved twice and found himself lying on a bed.The bed board was so hard that it hurt his bones.
Tilting his head again, Duan Qingni didn't relax yet, and his breathing froze again in an instant.
I saw a room full of strange faces, surrounded by them, forming an impenetrable human wall.
Apart from the crowd, there was only one familiar Yu Su.At this time, he was holding his dagger, pointing down, pointing at Duan Qingni's abdomen, gesticulating something up and down.
The distance between the two is very close.
Eyes to eyes, like they can't see anything.
Duan Qingni flinched back, but Yu Su remained unmoved, staring at the dagger intently.
Until a strand of his hair fell down and brushed on the tip of Duan Qingni's nose, he flicked it from time to time.
Duan Qingni couldn't bear it anymore.He blinked and said, "Ah—"
Yu Su stopped holding the knife and turned to look at him.
Duan Qingni: "Ah Choo!!!"
What a big sneeze.
He just finished playing, and he was comfortable.But I saw all the people in the room retreating, and the swords were unsheathed with several clangs, all of them were vigilant and defensive.
"Take it easy, this kid is the head of the Changling Sect." Someone behind reminded, "Don't fall for his crooked tricks!"
Yu Su didn't retreat, and turned the dagger inward, facing Duan Qingni's belly.
"You, what are you doing?"
For a moment, Duan Qingni thought of the nightmare just now.
He didn't know what to say or what to do.
For a big man, it's fine if he can't do 1, and he has to give birth to other men.
It's really... a great shame.
"I am not born!"
After thinking about it again and again, Duan Qingni finally, finally branched out.He subconsciously clutched his stomach and glared at Yu Su: "I told you, I won't give birth to you!"
The author has something to say: Yusu xiu, the third tone
This article has changed 4 covers since it was received in advance.
现在我又想换了,好像换衣服穿一样(捂脸)感谢在2021-02-0223:33:58~2021-02-0323:52:08期间为我投出霸王票或灌溉营养液的小天使哦~
Thanks to the little angel of irrigation nutrient solution: 1 bottle of Yuan;
Thank you very much for your support, I will continue to work hard!
It's ridiculous to say.
Before Duan Qingni passed through the book, she was just an ordinary receiving editor.
That day when he was sorting out the waste manuscripts in the company, he accidentally discovered the novel "Jian Xian" - just because he opened Chapter 1, the cannon fodder who was stabbed to death had the same name as him.
Based on the unique mentality of a veteran editor, he felt that the unfinished plot of this book could still be saved. If he corrected it and collected it, it might still be a hit.
As a result, when Duan Qingni took the scrap manuscript and happily went downstairs to contact the author—two employees quarreled on the stairs, one of them pushed the other down and hit him on the head impartially.
When Duan Qingni opened her eyes again, the world has undergone earth-shaking changes.
——As for the name "Yusu", there is no doubt that it is a countdown engraved in his life.
As the most hidden villain in the full text, Yu Su itself is an extremely unreasonable existence.
Dating back to decades before the story, there was an inhumane executioner named Shi Wuling in Jianghu.This person is cold-blooded and cruel, and enjoys killing all day long, killing innocent people day and night; it is said that he is over a hundred years old, and his appearance is not old.
In order to further pursue the way of eternal life, Shi Wuling extended his demonic claws to the various sects, intending to steal the forbidden techniques of hundreds of schools-but unexpectedly, the Changling faction had been prepared, and took advantage of the loophole to take away his lair in one fell swoop, and united with a group of masters to kill Shi Wuling. Leng was beaten out of his wits and died on the spot.
Many years later, the devil is no longer in the arena, and there are still legends about him in the arena.Although Shi Wuling is dead, there is still a disaster under his knees, and he has been looking for a way to revive him these years.
And this unending disaster is Shi Wuling's adopted son...Yu Su.
In this way, the enmity between the two sides is quite clear.Among the masters who crusaded against Shi Wuling back then, the former head of Changling and his younger brother Mu Xuan ranked first, and Mu Xuan became a god because of this battle.
So the beginning of the story begins with Yusu's revenge.He pierced through Duan Qingni with a sword, and nailed the body to the door for public display; Changling once held a snow feast every five years, and he walked all over the entire mountain alone, and all the senior elders were seriously injured and lost.When the story develops to the later stage, he kills and kills, destroys the world, and no grass grows in the land he passes.
but……
From the beginning to the end, there is a very obvious logical problem, which Duan Qingni noticed when he was reading the novel.
When the author created this villain, he did not endow him with any emotions that humans should have.
There are very few words about Yu Su, and his relationship with Shi Wuling is briefly mentioned.He never told the origin of Yusu's adoption, never explained the depth of their relationship, there was no foreshadowing, Yusu had no inner activities, and his appearance was aimless plundering and killing without emotion.
His past is blank, out of touch with the entire novel world, like a walking humanoid weapon, promoting the plot entirely by force value.
So much so that at the end of the writing, the author couldn't come back, and could only arrange for him to be defeated by the aura of the protagonist's attack.It ended in a dismal ending.
"But Yusu is so strong and has almost no weaknesses." When Duan Qingni was stabbed, he was thinking, "If the plot in the book really develops, the ending may be wiped out..."
At this time, there was a loud "ding" explosion, and several white lights suddenly flashed in front of my eyes.
[You are right, Yu Su has no weaknesses.The direction of this book has been crooked. 】
"Who?!" Duan Qingni was startled, "Who is talking?"
He was obviously stabbed by Yu Su, so he should die.Is it still lucky to return to the real world?
[Hello, I am 404.It is the time travel worker who manages this book. 】
A cold voice, mixed with a weak electric current, sounded from the ear.
Duan Qingni opened her eyes in astonishment: "...what?"
——Are you 404?Then I still have 520!
Duan Qingni just wanted to move, but unexpectedly found that she had no body and could not make any movements.
At this time, he was in a vast void of darkness, and there was a narrow white light in front of him, from which the voice came from.
"As you can see, the plot of "Jianxian" was chaotic, and the entire staff collapsed from beginning to end. Continuing with the current trend will inevitably lead to irreversible results." 404 said, "So I chose the best A suitable character, by changing his fate line to fill in the loopholes and correct the plot."
Duan Qingni has not yet understood the meaning of his words. 404 said again: "The most suitable role is you, Mr. Duan Qingni."
"What...who?"
Duan Qingni was taken aback for a moment, then realized and asked, "Why?"
404: "No reason, because you are Duan Qingni."
"Joke! I'm a living person, you put me into a book?" Duan Qingni said angrily, "I'm called Duan Qingni today, but I'll be called 404 tomorrow... Why don't you turn me into you?"
"I don't have time to talk to you. Once there is a mistake or omission in the plot, the world of the whole book will collapse immediately." 404 said coldly, "At that time, we will all be locked up here until we die."
Duan Qingni was startled, and was about to say something.
There was another flash of white light in front of my eyes, and a dial the size of a bottle cap emerged from the darkness, engraved with a circle of numbers from 0 to 12, with a pointer in the middle pointing to the 0 position.
【Look, this is your destiny axis.After that, every time the plot takes a correct step, the pointer will move forward one space.As long as you follow the outline I gave you throughout the whole process and make no mistakes in the middle, you will be sent back to the real world when it comes to a happy ending. 】
Duan Qingni said: "Then what if something goes wrong?"
404 said: "If you make a wrong step, you will die,"
Duan Qingni couldn't help shivering.Thinking of the moment when Yu Su stabbed him, he was really caught off guard.
"Now, I give you two choices."
404's voice gradually lowered: "First, you die here, all related memories are cleared, and a new reincarnation starts from scratch."
"Don't!" Duan Qingni said, "I managed to escape, so why not go back?!"
404 ignored it, and said directly: "Second, stay alive and continue to follow this plot line."
"Second! Of course second!" Is this even a question?Any fool knows how to choose.
"Are you sure?" 404 asked again, "If you make a mistake this time, there will be no chance to do it again."
Duan Qingni: "I'm sure!"
"That being the case, the foreshadowing of this plot is enough. The axis of fate will guide you to attack Yusu... until the happy ending, you and Yusu will connect their fates and walk the same line."
"????"
Duan Qingni was stunned suddenly.
What is this man talking about?
Raiders of Yusu? ...fate connected?
"Literally." 404 paused word by word, explaining clearly, "This, is a pure love novel—you, you, you, don't understand?"
Halfway through the conversation, Duan Qingni's scalp had already started to tingle.
He exhausted all his strength, almost speaking from his chest: "Change one! Change one...I want to choose number one!"
"There's nothing to change, let's go." 404 said mercilessly.
Duan Qingni only felt a strong force behind him that was pulling his whole body and soul outwards. He was terrified, so he could only hiss and shout: "No... Hey! Tell me, what is the happy ending? Where do you want to go?!"
[Within three years, you must have at least one cub]
The white light in the darkness disappeared, and the voice of 404 gradually faded away.Before Duan Qingni understood the meaning of his words, his eyes suddenly went dark, and he fell into a coma again.
Duan Qingni seemed to have foreseen the ending in advance.
He worshiped a robot and became a relative.They didn't say a word, even the bridal chamber was frame by frame, and the whole process was silent.
Nine months later, a litter of little robots was born.The little robots were also expressionless, and the room was full of dumb people, only Duan Qingni could speak.
He ran away while weeping.Halfway through the run, he realized that he was pregnant again. Yu Su grabbed him back with his backhand and pointed a dagger at his belly: "Continue to give birth, don't stop."
"Get out, I don't want to have children!!"
——In the middle of this nightmare, Duan Qingni flicked and finally woke up from the chaos.
Then he squinted his eyes, and the light came in from the window.His vision gradually became clear, he moved twice and found himself lying on a bed.The bed board was so hard that it hurt his bones.
Tilting his head again, Duan Qingni didn't relax yet, and his breathing froze again in an instant.
I saw a room full of strange faces, surrounded by them, forming an impenetrable human wall.
Apart from the crowd, there was only one familiar Yu Su.At this time, he was holding his dagger, pointing down, pointing at Duan Qingni's abdomen, gesticulating something up and down.
The distance between the two is very close.
Eyes to eyes, like they can't see anything.
Duan Qingni flinched back, but Yu Su remained unmoved, staring at the dagger intently.
Until a strand of his hair fell down and brushed on the tip of Duan Qingni's nose, he flicked it from time to time.
Duan Qingni couldn't bear it anymore.He blinked and said, "Ah—"
Yu Su stopped holding the knife and turned to look at him.
Duan Qingni: "Ah Choo!!!"
What a big sneeze.
He just finished playing, and he was comfortable.But I saw all the people in the room retreating, and the swords were unsheathed with several clangs, all of them were vigilant and defensive.
"Take it easy, this kid is the head of the Changling Sect." Someone behind reminded, "Don't fall for his crooked tricks!"
Yu Su didn't retreat, and turned the dagger inward, facing Duan Qingni's belly.
"You, what are you doing?"
For a moment, Duan Qingni thought of the nightmare just now.
He didn't know what to say or what to do.
For a big man, it's fine if he can't do 1, and he has to give birth to other men.
It's really... a great shame.
"I am not born!"
After thinking about it again and again, Duan Qingni finally, finally branched out.He subconsciously clutched his stomach and glared at Yu Su: "I told you, I won't give birth to you!"
The author has something to say: Yusu xiu, the third tone
This article has changed 4 covers since it was received in advance.
现在我又想换了,好像换衣服穿一样(捂脸)感谢在2021-02-0223:33:58~2021-02-0323:52:08期间为我投出霸王票或灌溉营养液的小天使哦~
Thanks to the little angel of irrigation nutrient solution: 1 bottle of Yuan;
Thank you very much for your support, I will continue to work hard!
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