Ling Sirui's parents in class two of the third year are a bit strange

As for why Ling Xu's grades are so high...

Some time after the college entrance examination scores were issued, the full-score composition for the college entrance examination began to spread among major media, and social attention once again focused on the analysis of the high-scoring composition, why this composition can get a perfect score, and what is so good about it.

Among them, the one that received attention was a composition that was specially commented by Director Liu, a special-grade Chinese teacher and teacher of review and grading of the composition part.

The name of this composition is: "Father's love is like a mountain, and the mountain stands upright"

"First of all, in terms of the topic, the topic is tightly grasped. This is a scoring point. Many students who write well in the composition do not notice that it is indicated on the composition topic: choose two out of three, as the topic... …write a composition.”

Hao Ke was helping Ling Sirui organize his things at the side where Ling Sirui lived. Ling Sirui opened the forum and was reading posts related to the college entrance examination. The air conditioner was turned on in the room, but Ling Sirui didn't feel cool.

"What is this? It's so annoying to watch!" Ling Sirui muttered, "Didn't you just copy the title as required, is it worth writing so much nonsense for praise?"

Hao Ke poked his head curiously: "What are you looking at?"

Ling Sirui pushed the computer over and pointed it to Hao Ke: "I'm looking at this year's full-score composition, to see how I'm not as good as others!"

Ling Sirui was very worried about this, because his Chinese score was much lower than Ling Xu's. After thinking about it, he didn't believe that Ling Xu's basic score could be so much higher than his. After all, Ling Xu's ability to understand and express All very worrying.

After much deliberation, the only difference is in the composition.

"Father as a mountain".

Ling Sirui also chose this topic.

Balancing various factors, Ling Sirui feels that he has a better say on the topic of "fatherly love". It is precisely because he knows what kind of fatherly love is bad and what kind of psychological shadow it will bring to children, so he can understand fatherly love more deeply. The importance of a reliable father plays a decisive role in a child's future.

Ling Sirui started on this, and took Ling Xu as a negative example, and wrote an essay titled "Father's love is like a mountain, the wise man is happy", in which the wise man refers to Ling Sirui himself.

After finishing this composition, Ling Sirui felt that he was simply a contemporary literary giant, with equal emphasis on writing style and thoughtfulness, it would be inappropriate for this composition not to score more than 50 points.

However, when the Chinese score came down, Ling Sirui was surprised. Hao Ke helped him review the score and found that the composition might only get about 20 points.

Damn it, what bastard marking teacher did it!

Ling Sirui was indignant, and searched for news about various marking teams on the Internet, and finally saw such a perfect score composition with comments.

"The beginning of the chapter starts with the mountain, and tells the life of the father and son in the mountain. The words are simple, concise and powerful. The section where the father builds a hut for his son with stones is even more touching. It shows the father and son in the original state. Affection."

"Father is the protector and guardian of the son."

Director Liu's comments filled the blank space on the edge of the composition paper, almost overflowing.

"Isn't it just a broken house? How can I write so many emotions? Is it the examinee writing the composition or the marking teacher writing the composition?" Ling Sirui said angrily.

Hao Ke looked at the content of the essay, and what Ling Sirui said made sense. The beginning of the essay was a dry narrative, the vocabulary was only at the level of a primary school student, and the perspective was confusing. It was hard to tell whether it was the father's perspective or the son's perspective.

"Maybe there is something special in the back." Hao Ke said.

The two continued to look down. The examinee wrote that the child had grown up and was going to school. The father found a manual job in the city and rented a broken house for the child to go to school. The child looked very happy, and the father was also very pleased. .

Director Liu's handwriting was trembling with excitement, and his tone was also very excited:

"Moving fatherly love! Although I am poor, I still hope that my children can live a better life, and learning is an opportunity to change their destiny. Children cannot miss this opportunity. Father would rather give up his homestead in the country than Walking out of the mountains, I would rather do hard work than send my children to school.”

"The author didn't deliberately exaggerate, but the restrained narrative produced a stronger impact..."

"What kind of restrained narrative, it's clearly a running account of primary school students' writing, I can also write this!" Ling Sirui said angrily, "And this plot is also very common, I have experienced it too!"

Hao Ke rubbed his chin, why did he feel that the plot looked familiar.

And this dry writing, the narrative of the journal, inexplicably reminded him of someone.

In the middle of the composition, I wrote that my father often worked overtime all night, and the child stayed at home alone. Fortunately, there was an enthusiastic head teacher to help take care of the child, and took the child to eat and live in his own home.

Director Liu seemed to be about to cry when he saw this, and his comments became more and more excited:

"...Simple feelings between people are so rare in today's fast-paced society. Most of the current class teachers are concerned about the grades of their own classes, and gradually forget their duties as teachers. Evangelism is the first priority, let students feel the good quality of being willing to help others, feel the kindness of the society is the most important thing, if you are poor, you will be alone, and if you are rich, you will benefit the world..."

"This examinee has not forgotten that his theme is father's love as a mountain, so the content of the head teacher is just a brief mention. However, the head teacher, as a supplement to father's love, reflects each other with the image of the father in the article, making people feel what Mencius said. This is an ideal society where the old is the old and the old is the old, the young is the young and the young is the young. Here, the head teacher is the "surrogate father". When the father is absent, he plays the role of the father. a reflection..."

Seeing this, Hao Ke couldn't help but want to say: "You are too good at talking!"

Ling Sirui was not as aggrieved as he was at the beginning, he looked at the screen in surprise: "Is it really so powerful? I never thought of it. Can this be connected? Could it be that this candidate has thought so much? I don't know." I didn't even think of it..."

Hao Ke glanced at Ling Sirui, the child's immature cheeks were full of innocent doubts, but he didn't know that the Chinese teacher's mouth was a deceitful ghost, as long as he wanted to give someone a high score, he could say ten thousand words. kind of reason.

At the end of the composition, the examinee came to take the college entrance examination. When he saw this topic, he couldn't help but think of all the past. It turned out that he had never walked out of the mountain, and he was always in the mountain.

Seeing this ending, Hao Ke understood a little bit why the marking teacher gave high marks. This examinee has a strong ability to deduct questions, and writes with mountains in the beginning, middle, and end. He is very witty and did not write directly why father loves. Rushan only presents the father's love and intersperses it with the mountain. The rest is up to the marking teacher's own imagination. Even if the examinee is a primary school student with a very limited vocabulary, the score of this composition will not be low.

It is this journal-like description, this strange life experience that always reminds Hao Ke of someone...

But Ling Xu should not be so witty, this composition is clearly written from the child's point of view, didn't Ling Xu say that he wrote it from his own point of view?

At the end, Director Liu wrote another long commentary, in which he even recalled his life in the village when he was a child. Compared with the happy childhood of the children in the city now, how hard his childhood was, the composition of this candidate reminded him of This is a rare writing style, which is hard to see among candidates under the current exam-oriented education, so Director Liu gave this composition full marks.

Hao Ke thought to himself, if you really admire this kind of writing style, you shouldn't use such a large space of lyricism and over-interpretation to annotate this composition. Isn't this a discrepancy between words and deeds... Sure enough, there is no truth in the Chinese teacher's mouth.

In the final analysis, this composition is indeed good, but the reason why it got full marks is probably because it hit Director Liu's psychology. It can be seen that Director Liu still misses his life in the country in the past, and his Loved ones who gave silently.

"Dong dong."

There were two knocks on the door.

Hao Ke and Ling Sirui looked up and saw Ling Xu standing in front of the door.

"Have you finished packing?" Ling Xu asked, "Let Ling Sirui clean up the rest, don't spoil him. It's almost time, let's go out for dinner."

"No, don't bother us, Teacher Hao and I are studying!" Ling Sirui hugged Hao Ke's arm and glared at Ling Xu angrily, "I'm a person who wants to go to university, unlike you, you just want to Scores, I'm here for knowledge!"

"Oh? Then please slowly beg...Hao Ke, come here." Ling Xu put one hand in his pocket and leaned his back against the door frame. He changed into a dark green suit with a smoky gray shirt inside, making his shoulders broad and his legs long. , very attractive.

Hao Ke's gaze was involuntarily drawn away by Ling Xu, but his arm was held by Ling Sirui again, he couldn't help being a little embarrassed, turned around, and said to Ling Sirui, "Do you want to eat together?"

"Today is our dinner for two, do we need a child seat next to it?" Ling Xu raised his eyebrows.

"I don't want to eat with him, Mr. Hao, let's go to the newly opened revolving restaurant by the river tomorrow at noon." Ling Sirui said happily.

"Then today... I'll eat with Ling Xu first?" Hao Ke asked tentatively.

"Well, okay." Ling Sirui let go of Hao Ke, "Then I'll study by myself."

Hao Ke rubbed Ling Sirui's head, got up and left with Ling Xu.

Ling Sirui lay down on the table and read the composition again, with his legs swinging back and forth on the chair.

"Oh, no wonder I didn't do well in the exam. It turns out that other people's essays have so much meaning." Ling Sirui slid the mouse to the bottom of the page.

He saw a familiar name.

"This essay by student Ling Xu, an examinee from City S, is really extraordinary. Ling Xu's thinking is very mature, and he has a deep understanding of fatherly love. It shows that although the family is not rich, but the spirit is very rich, such a father is worthy of admiration of……"

Ling Sirui looked at the name in shock.

S city candidate Ling Xu!

"Huh?" Ling Xu and Hao Ke walked downstairs together, and when Hao Ke talked about the full-score composition they were reading just now, he said calmly, "It should be written by me."

"Huh?" Hao Ke was shocked, "Didn't you write it from the perspective of your father?"

"I wrote it from the perspective of my father," Ling Xu said.

"But in the last paragraph of the composition, it said that he entered the examination room. When he saw this topic, he realized that he had never left the mountain. He had been in the mountain all the time."

"Yes, I am the mountain." Ling Xu said calmly, "Isn't my father's love like a mountain? The mountain must be in the mountain, and the mountains are all together."

"Pfft one by one," Hao Ke sputtered, "But, you said earlier that your father works overtime, and you are very scared to be alone at home?"

"Didn't Ling Sirui say that he was scared? When I was not around, he felt the importance of me as a coward. I think this can highlight my father's love as a mountain." Ling Xu said without humility.

Hao Ke grabbed Ling Xu's sleeve, and he was about to laugh like crazy. After Ling Xu said this, he figured out what was weird about the composition. The candidate who wrote the composition revealed a sense of fatherhood in his words Without the fresh and rebellious feeling of a child, no wonder it can resonate with Director Liu.

"Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha..." Hao Ke burst into tears with laughter, he grabbed Ling Xu and boasted fiercely, "Why are you so smart!"

"It's okay." Ling Xu nodded.

At the same time, in the study.

Ling Sirui shut down the computer with a "slap", and roared angrily into the air: "Liars, they are all liars!"

Ling Xu pretended to be him, wrote a composition that praised himself, and got full marks. Is there anything more outrageous than this?

However, the composition he wrote with true feelings was inexplicably given a low score by the marking teacher, damn it!

The more Ling Sirui thought about it, the more angry he became, and decided to post a post on the forum, condemning the behavior of the marking teacher who graded the papers randomly based on his personal preferences.

[Water] Am I the only one who thinks that the perfect score essay for the college entrance examination that Director Liu judged this year is not very good?

In the text of the post, Ling Sirui recounted the content of his composition and posted it up for everyone to comment on.

1L: After reading the title, I came in and wanted to like it, and after reading the text... Sir, are you from the explosion?

2L: Director Liu’s full-score essay is just average, but you, the poster, are writing this completely white-eyed wolf literature. You must have no children. When you become a father, you will know that raising children is not so easy.

3L: Composition for the college entrance examination advocates positive energy. Your essay is too negative. Tell your dad how to be a good dad. See if the marking teacher will give you a score of 0!

4L: Is the landlord the navy that Director Liu bought? Reverse blacks are the deadliest!

……

All kinds of cynicism and sarcasm were commented below, which made Ling Sirui blush with anger, and he hacked the forum in a rage. Seeing 404NOTFOUND appear on the webpage, Ling Sirui finally showed a happy smile.

Go to the college entrance examination on horseback!Isn't it nice to play computer games at home?