Miao Zhen seriously suspects that the world he is in now is not a normal youth campus novel.

He is no longer the little monk who didn't understand anything.

He took out a few youth campus novels he found and confronted the system.

After the system downloaded the file, it was silent for a while, a little dazed. [That's right, isn't there rape, abortion, bullying and domestic violence?Those few books were evenly distributed, Chu Siyao was just a bit miserable, they took up all of them. 】

What the little monk doesn't understand is why everyone in this world seems to have his own story behind him.And these stories are beyond the scope of the original text. '

Seeing Miao Zhen's seriousness, the system thought something serious had happened. After listening carefully, the system couldn't help laughing and said: [This is a real world, and the world won't end because of the death of the heroine.Everyone you see is real, and since they have their own lives and relationships, they must have their own stories. 】

[Otherwise, in the previous life, the male lead would not have been sent to prison by the logic of the world because of the female lead's confession. 】It paused, and continued: 【The original text only revolves around the heroine's story, mainly describing her whole process from collapse to suicide.Except for the heroine, there are not too many descriptions.If you focus on describing a person without enough foreshadowing, bugs will easily appear. 】

It was afraid that Miao Zhen would not understand, so it made a few character models and placed them on the map.

[First of all, in the original text, the male lead once visited the female lead’s home.The original text described it like this: "It wasn't until seeing the exquisite two-story villa that Su Chengye realized that Chu Siyao's family background was somewhat different from what he thought.The woman who opened the door had a delicate face and a gentle temperament. In the spacious living room, there were a man with a gentle temperament and a lively girl. ']

The system arranges the family of villains, [Don't you think there is something wrong with the arrangement of the original text?Chu Siyao's parents were very easy-going and friendly, and the atmosphere at home was relaxing.Her father runs a company, and her mother is also a high-level intellectual. Why did Chu Siyao never think of asking her family to protect her when she was being bullied?Even if it was because Chu Siyao was weak-tempered or dared not speak out of some scruples, didn't the teachers at the school mention it cryptically?Even if the teacher was afraid of getting into trouble, she was beaten all over in the later stage, and even returned home with torn clothes. Why did her family members act like they were blind and didn't respond? 】

'Maybe the author is only concerned with writing the story of the hero and heroine. In many novels I read, the protagonist's family is the background board. ' Miao Zhen pondered.

【You are right, but this world is a real world, complete and logical.If the author does not explain, the world will complete itself based on the fragments written by the author before. 】The system pinched out three villains and arranged them around Chu Siyao's villain,

[The world will find ways to fix the loopholes by itself, so that the unreasonable parts of the original text become reasonable.It must have discovered something related to Chu Siyao's family from a certain detail or a few sentences in the original text.Then several fragments were combined to form a complete story chain, from which the story of Chu Siyao's family took shape. 】

[To give another example, Qiao Wan's setting in the original text is that she adores Su Chengye and is the monitor of the class who studies well and is liked by others.It can be regarded as a common student setting, and there is nothing outstanding.Most of the time, he isolates Chu Siyao and insults her verbally.This is the character setting given to her by the author, which is equivalent to fixing Qiao Wan's image in this world. 】

The system poked at Qiao Wan's villain, and said seriously: [There was no foreshadowing that Qiao Wan had socialized with people outside the school, and most of the time she spent with a few equally ordinary girlfriends.So I would like to ask, how can such an underage girl with a poisonous mouth have the ability to contact a few vicious gangsters in the original text, and even get drugs to make Chu Siyao stunned and let the gangsters rape/rape her? 】

'She united with sister Sisi? '

[How do I know, the original text didn't say anything, it just said that she asked someone to rape Chu Siyao, one word, and then it was gone. ] The system sighed.

[Don't tell her to find someone to rape/rape Chu Siyao, she can't even find the gangster.In the original text, she had no communication with Sister Sisi, and what she did was beyond the scope of her personality.The author wrote this plot, and the world didn't know how to run the plot properly, so it began to make reasonable speculations based on the author's story and the background of the world. As for how the world can fix Qiao Wan's loopholes, I don't know. 】

Miao Zhen frowned and thought for a moment, feeling enlightened.

Simply put, this plot is OOC.

Otherwise, someone else was the one who found someone to rape/rape the heroine, but the author didn't plan ahead, so he pulled the vicious female villain Qiao Wan out for a walk.

Otherwise, there are other people around Qiao Wan.That person did not appear in the original text, and he gave Qiao Wan some advice behind his back.Let Qiao Wan, who only knows how to make trouble, do such a thing.

The little monk understands, so it seems that Dong Aitong also has problems. '

He recalled: "Basically there is no mention of the student's family background in the article, only the fact that Dong Aitong's parents are policemen has been mentioned many times.Dong Aitong would occasionally help Chu Siyao out of the siege, and it could be seen that she had no malice towards the heroine.But the original text also mentioned that Dong Aitong told the girls in the class to stay away from Chu Siyao in the later period. If she didn't hate Chu Siyao, why did she do this when Chu Siyao was already isolated by the class? '

【What did she know? 】

'It's not mentioned in the original text, but what happened to Chu Siyao.Xiaoseng speculates that she may have guessed some things that cannot be said through her parents who are policemen. '

The system felt that what he said made sense, that he had a good understanding, and that he was a malleable talent.

Miao Zhen pondered for a long time, downloaded the original text and read it several times.The system followed suit, and when it saw half of it, it hesitated and said: [No, look, the boys in the class said they saw her being hugged by an uncle, so what did they say about 81 nights.Why have I read it several times, but haven't seen the author explain this matter? 】

Miao Zhen clicked on the catalog and looked at it. What happened on the night of 81 was in Chapter 3 at the beginning, and the information was uttered from the mouths of several boys in the class.

The heroine Chu Siyao didn't make a strong rebuttal, she just said that she didn't, she wasn't.

This matter just left it as it is, and the heroine has another nickname of aid/dating girl.

To be honest, this novel is very good, and it fully shows a person's helplessness and despair in the face of campus bullying.It describes the changes in the mental state of people gradually breaking down and committing suicide by jumping off the building very delicately.

But the problem is that the author only rewrites the experience of the heroine at school, her psychological changes, and the time spent with the heroine.

All the rest were written in passing, or not written at all.

This leads to a lot of plots, lack of description and foreshadowing, and do not match the character settings.

From the perspective of readers, it does not affect the perception of reading.

But if the world is to function normally, it needs to find relevant clues from the text provided by the author.Generate and complete the background stories of the characters, so that the plot arranged by the author can proceed reasonably and smoothly.

"The little monk has a doubt. Since the hidden character templates are all made by the five benefactors, why don't the five benefactors directly tell the little monk who are the hidden characters?" '

[The child was born by you, so you can know everything about him? 】

'A child is a life with a mind, a program has no mind. '

As soon as Miao Zhen finished speaking, the system quietly said: [Then, I am just a bunch of data under the main system.My string of thoughtless little data can make a fool of yourself, go to the post bar, and even open and hack for you behind the back of the main system.Do you want me to bug you right now, so that you can go directly from a monk to a nun? 】

Talking so coquettishly, it looks like it's alive.

Miao Zhen realized that she had insulted the integrity of the system, and sincerely apologized to it.

Miao Zhen studied the original text for a long time, but the system couldn't help it and went to bed first.Miao Zhen wrote the clues on the paper, those hidden characters seemed to be the plot characters that the world made up to fix the loopholes.

Currently known characters include Chu Jiajia and Liu Meifeng.After unlocking these two people, Miao Zhen got two cards.

And Chu Siyao's father must also be a hidden figure.Unlocking him can completely unlock the storyline of Chu Siyao's family.

Qiao Wan and Dong Aitong have names and surnames, and they are not hidden characters.But judging from previous experience, only when Miao Zhen establishes a good relationship with Chu Siyao and triggers the plot that prevents Chu Siyao from jumping off the building, will she have the opportunity to get in touch with Chu Siyao's parents and discover the abnormality.

Dong Aitong's parents are both police officers, and this kind of person who has a special professional setting and has been mentioned many times is probably also a hidden figure.

At present, it seems that if you want to get in touch with Dong Aitong's parents, you need to get in touch with Dong Aitong.

Miao Zhen has some headaches, Dong Aitong spends most of her time reading and studying, and is not as easy to get along with as Qiao Wan.

He opened the system illustrated book, and besides Chu Jiajia and Liu Meifeng, there were five shadows on it, indicating that there were still five hidden characters that had not been unlocked.

According to his estimate, Chu Siyao's father was one, Dong Aitong's parents were at least one, and Sister Sisi appeared frequently in the articles about her contacts with people outside the school.

There should be a hidden person beside Qiao Wan, and Miao Zhen guessed that it was that person, who gave Qiao Wan in the original text a chance to drug and rape Chu Siyao.There is also a hidden figure, Miao Zhen can't guess who he is.

He wrote and drew in his notebook, and the more he thought about it, the more he felt a headache.

The siren of a police car could be heard faintly from the street outside. The police are always on night shift these days.

Miao Zhen was distracted by the voice. He clicked on the pages and decided to pick the simple ones first.

He has a good relationship with Qiao Wan, so he can try to get in touch with her more and find suspicious people.

Chu Siyao also needs to increase contact, try to find a chance to be alone with her father, and try to find out his story with cards.

After thinking about these things, Miao Zhen got up to go to bed, and it was already dawn.

He read the original text all night, and his head was a little dizzy.

Miao Zhenqiang walked to the bed and lay down, opened the system map and looked at it. There was a fever buff and a weakness buff on his little man's head.

This body is already malnourished, and there is no spare medicine at home.

Miao Zhen wrapped herself tightly with the quilt, and was about to bear it.

From the corner of the eye, I saw Su Chengye's little man glowing with blackness, angrily reviewing the murder plan.

Miao Zhen struggled to get the phone and started calling Su Chengye.

Su Chengye ran through the plan in his mind, and was about to go out to slaughter animals, but just as he picked up the knife, he received a call from Miao Zhen.

A weak voice came from the phone, "Teacher, I'm dying."

Su Chengye who was sharpening his knife: "?"

The author has something to say: When I was in junior high school, I read this kind of youth pain literature. It was called No.1. It’s been a long time and I can’t remember it clearly. It’s probably

The heroine was adopted, and she has a crush on the boy who adopted him. That guy can be regarded as the heroine.

Then the plot becomes magical.She was first molested/molested by her adoptive father in the bathroom, then molested/molested by a male teacher at school, and then was seen by her classmates.

What confused me was that her classmates thought she seduced the teacher, and she was fined to run laps on the playground in the rain.

I didn't read it later, because I liked watching Naruto more than novels in junior high school. _(:з」∠)_

别的不说,宁次真帅。感谢在2021-01-3121:53:15~2021-02-0121:51:15期间为我投出霸王票或灌溉营养液的小天使哦~

Thanks to the little angels of the irrigation nutrient solution: 10 bottles of Cha Lin; 73 bottles of Qi;

Thank you very much for your support, I will continue to work hard!

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