back to 20 years old

小说开坑时间是2015年02月12日，经过2个月的时间终于完结了《回到20岁》，说实话真的有些舍不得。

I am a person who often gives up halfway when I do anything. When I started writing novels, I really felt that I would not write for a long time. It can be said that I did not believe that I could persevere.But, but, as you all have seen by now, I insisted on finishing the writing. I didn’t let this place become a big tiankeng, and I coded more than 10 words. I didn’t believe it myself, haha.

Now writing things has become an indispensable part of my daily life. I write novels after school, immerse myself in the novels, think about every link, how to use words, how to talk, how to describe, listening to the musicians swaying on the keyboard, Sometimes it is really interesting to spend half a day in front of the computer in order to write an action or a plot.I never believed that I could write novels before, and that people would read what I wrote, but I wrote it, no matter whether it is good or bad, I tried it, and it was a success for me.

In the past, like most people, I didn’t know what I liked, what I wanted to do, and what I would do. Now that I have found my own interest, it is a very happy thing to have a hobby.You can also try to find your own interests, try to try, I believe you can also find your own happiness, try, it is never too late.

Let me talk about some tidbits when I was writing. Sometimes I thought so at first, but then I felt that it was not appropriate enough, so I deleted the previous ones and started again.

For example, in Chapter "(35) Showing Love", I started to write that the air by the sea is very fresh:

The air here is so fresh, like the fragrance of the soil after the rain, I couldn't help but take two more breaths.This reminds me of my grandma's house in the countryside when I was a child, and when I walked on the wooden bridge with a stream flowing, I would smell the fragrance of this earth.

Later written as:

She took me to the coast farther away. We didn't talk all the way, just quietly admiring the dark blue starry sky. The bright moon on the starry sky was very dazzling, surrounded by twinkling stars.

For example, in chapter "(64) A Strange Dream", I initially wanted to write that the dormitory next door caught fire and affected the dormitory 206, and then stayed at Lily's house:

Carrying the suitcases to the front of the dormitory building, many students were at the entrance of the building, and a fire truck was parked in front of the building.

"Student, ask me, what's the matter?"

"205 is on fire. Look at what's burning. I heard that the next door is on fire."

"205? Next door? Is that next door? 204 or 206?"

"Hey Shenyue!" Zhang Jing waved to me with her long arms stretched out.She squeezed the crowd to my side "Are you back?"

"Well, what's the matter here? It says 205 is on fire?"

"That's right, Cheng Yuan said it was 205's electric curling iron, forgot to pull it out, and ran out to play by himself, only to find out when some classmates found out. The worst thing is that not only burned 205,204, but also burned [-]."

"204? Fortunately, it's not our dormitory."

"But look, the windows of our dormitory are also burnt black. I don't know what's going on inside."

"What should I do? Can I go in now?"

"I don't know! Wait for the school to notify you."

"Why didn't you see Xiaomei?"

"Xiaomei won't be back until tomorrow."

Final draft:

Holding the suitcase and walking to the front of the dormitory building, I saw Zhang Jing stretching out her long arms and waving to me, "Shen Yue, are you back?" "Yes, sister is back." "You still dare to call me sister? Who is that sister?" "You are my sister, okay, old sister, hurry up and help my sister lift the box up." Hehe.Zhang Jing and I carried the box into the dormitory together, but before the box arrived and opened it, Lily called and asked us to go to her house for dinner.On the way, I asked Zhang Jing, "Why didn't I see Xiaomei?" "Xiaomei, she will come back just now."

For example, in chapter "(68) Birthday Reunion", at first I wanted Haoran to send roses, but I felt that sending roses was too vulgar, so I changed it to send anklets.

It was written like this at the beginning: When I got downstairs, I sat on the side of the road and waited for her.After waiting for a while, she came out of the dormitory, holding my suitcase in her hand.

I stood up and looked at her "what are you doing with my box?"

"Go home."

"What home?" I held the box to prevent her from moving.

"Go back to our home, you will live with me in the future."

"Who wants to live with you? Return the box to me."

"Catch up and I'll give it to you."

She wouldn't let me touch the box, and trot along with it.I was fighting with her to pull the box and pull the handle, so I was thinking about how to get the box back, and I rushed to her car.

This time she stopped running. She held the box with one hand and my hand with the other and said, "Female man, hurry up, help me carry the box into the car."

"It doesn't matter." After finishing speaking, he walked back.

She took my hand, put down the suitcase and opened the trunk with one hand, put her arms around my shoulders and stood in front of the trunk and said, "It's okay if you don't move the suitcase, then let's enjoy the flowers."

The moment she opened the trunk, I opened my eyes wide and looked inside, opened my mouth slightly and looked at the box full of white roses in surprise, with an uncontrollable smile on my face.

She took out a necklace from her pocket, tied it around my neck, held my face and said, "Shen Yue, be my girlfriend, let me take care of you from today on, okay?"

Looking at the roses in the trunk in front of me, and looking at her eyes as deep and mysterious as the night sky, my heart beat faster again. Is there any girl who will not be moved when seeing such a scene?

She continued, "Here are 220 roses, 20 years multiplied by 11, the flowers you should have received in the first 20 years, I will give you 11 every year in the future, and I will only give you my heart with the watch."

"Is there still 11 pieces left for this year?" I pretended to be unhappy and said, but I am 21 years old, not 20 years old.

"Isn't your birthday tomorrow? 21 of the 11-year-olds will be delivered tomorrow. Your whole day will be at my disposal tomorrow."

I suddenly remembered what my mother said to me in the morning.I looked at her seriously, "Taking care of me means that in the future, you have to cook, you have to clean up the house, and you have to tidy up the closet."

She laughed and hugged me in her arms, hugged me tightly and said, "From now on, you have the final say at home." Hahaha...

There are still many examples that I will not give examples. I am improving in thinking and growing in progress. I hope my next article will be better.

Now I am brewing the next novel, and I am going to write a les essay about time travel.But now I don't have much time, I'm very busy with homework every day, and I still have part-time work on weekends, so I can only talk about a few months of vacation.I don’t want to study or work, but I want to write novels full-time at home. I want to be a full-time writer. Who will pay me to concentrate on writing novels at home?Ask for support, haha~ Just kidding.

The next novel is roughly like this: a girl named Zhuyu traveled to ancient times because of a car accident, and Shangguan Xue, who lived in ancient times at the same time, was replaced by Zhuyu who traveled after being in a coma for three days due to an accident.With the arrival of Zhuyu, she disturbed the originally peaceful life here, and here she met her true love.In a chance coincidence, Xueer met Princess Yin Ran, the most favored younger sister of the emperor at that time. She is a heroine among women, and even though she has a husband, she is more feminine, and this encounter is a lifetime...

I haven't thought of a name yet, I wonder if you are interested?Well, here we go, rest, rest!

Thank you for your support, see you next time!