Precision Correction Guide

Chapter 12 This chapter is about

"..." Duan Yu glanced at Shan Qihuai, who had completely forgotten Xie Qiao's coquettish operation just now, and wrote the word "worship" on his face.

Director Huang's voice trembled, and he humbly asked, "How should I change it?"

Love scenes don’t all have this routine, just kiss and hug, and serve the audience well, who would consider that aspect?

So next, the director and screenwriter who took a step back were arranged clearly by Xie Qiao.

To sum it up in one sentence: act with fake moves.

For example, the original scene of holding hands and leaving was changed to Wei Wenxuan wanting to take Niannian away. When he was about to hold her hand, he suddenly realized that something was taken back and said "Let's go" to let people follow.

The original hug scene was changed to Wei Wenxuan's subconscious movement, and he put his hand back as soon as he raised it.

Fortunately, Duan Yu can act, and he fully interprets the feeling of longing but restraint. The director and screenwriter watched in front of the monitor, and had to admit that this change made more tension.

But only the kiss scene, the director and screenwriter refused to change it no matter what.

"Ours is a love scene after all, and the hero and heroine don't even have an intimate act, so is that still plausible?"

"It is inconsistent with the previous logic."

"Then change the previous scene back." Director Huang acted like this was a good idea, and gritted his teeth in anger, but if he changed it back, wouldn't his talk just now be in vain?

"Director Huang, I have an idea." Duan Yu said.

"How about changing it to wanting to kiss but not kissing?" Duan Yu turned his head and noticed that Xie Qiao was looking at him appreciatively, with an expression of "you are very sensible", and looked away speechlessly, "This scene will appear frequently in the future In Wei Wenxuan's memories, it's just that the ordinary kiss scene fell into a cliché, it's better to let them stick to the boundaries, and when they recall it later, the beautiful and youthful emotions will be more profound."

Director Huang hesitated now.

What are literary and artistic creations afraid of?It fell into the cliché, and everything was expected by the audience.

What whets the audience's appetite the most?The beauty is strong and miserable, and the mind is hard to calm down, that is really unforgettable.

Director Huang discussed the details with the screenwriter, and generally followed Duan Yu's instructions.

After work, Duan Yu ignored him, and Xie Qiao, who was satisfied with his eyes, quickly packed his things and went back to the hotel to rest.

But without waiting for him to tidy up his things, or for Xie Qiao to talk nonsense, Shan Qihuai stopped him first.

"Hey, Duan Yu, Duan Yu!" Shan Qihuai grabbed the corner of the wall, waved at him secretly, and called him in a breathy voice, "Come here."

"What's up?"

"You, call my idol, let's go have dinner together."

"You two just go." He said and wanted to leave.

"Hey hey, if I dare to tell him, will I still call you!"

Duan Yu frowned: "I'll at most invite you, but you two should go to dinner."

"No, no, no, I'll have dinner with him, it won't be too embarrassing!"

"Don't you think it's more awkward to have dinner with your ex?"

Shan Qihuai didn't know what was coming to her mind, she suddenly put away her flailing gesture, and muttered softly while picking her fingers: "Then, then I see that you get along well."

She looked up, seeing that Duan Yu was still expressionless, she simply broke the jar and said, "I don't care, anyway, you have to call someone for me, or I will mess up."

"You want to have dinner with Xie Qiao, and you still need someone to accompany you?" Duan Yu looked at her quietly.

"That's right!"

"it is good."

Duan Yu agreed quickly, turned around and went to find someone. Before Shan Qihuai could smile, she saw him walking in the opposite direction from where Xie Qiao was, and went to the coordinating teacher.

Shan Qihuai was at a loss: "?" What's wrong with suddenly feeling something wrong?

After 2 minutes, she got the answer in their crew group.

[Coordinator-Li Ying]: Get off work early today, don't leave if you have time, let's have dinner with Mr. Xie tonight.

As soon as the message was sent out, it received an enthusiastic response.

Ah ah

This Duan Yu!

She had dinner with Xie Qiao, and she brought Duan Yu to avoid the crowd, why did she bring so many people from the crew as light bulbs?

With so many people, how could she have the nerve to chat with Xie Qiao, how did she get his contact information!

Shan Qihuai was incompetent and furious.

"Duan Yu, you are too good at doing good things to bad people!" She said angrily to Duan Yu who was dragging her back.

Duan Yu was also very helpless: "It wasn't me, it was Xie Qiao and Director Huang who mentioned it."

He originally wanted to go to the coordinator to convey Shan Qihuai's intentions, and find a reason to go back to the hotel to stay, but he didn't expect that as soon as he got there, he saw the director pat Xie Qiao on the shoulder, and decided to have dinner together at night .

It was as if he was sent to the door. They set him on fire with each sentence, so that he couldn't find any excuses, so he had to agree to have dinner together.

Shan Qihuai changed her face in a second: "Brother is really considerate~"

"..."

In order to let Xie Qiao have a good experience, the dinner party was set at a high-end hotel near the crew, and the topics on the table basically revolved around him.

Although the young people were reminded not to touch too much alcohol for filming the next day, but the aroma of the wine is invigorating, and the few of them are not afraid of life. It didn't take long for them to forget the awe of Xie Qiao. Pull him to chat and play games.

Xie Qiao: It's so annoying, I don't have a chance to chat with Duan Yu at all!

Shan Qihuai: Damn, there is no chance to get close to idols!

In the midst of the turmoil, Duan Yu actually realized his original wish of becoming an invisible person.He sat in the corner, just moved his chopsticks to fill his stomach, enjoyed the peace, and changed the alcohol in hand of Shan Qihuai, who was so jealous that he lost his mind, into a drink.

"Old Sun, is your daughter getting married in October?"

"Yeah! It's hard for you to remember. I think the environment is good as promised, and it's quite suitable for a banquet."

"It's fine if you make the appointment. I just went to the toilet and found that there is an open-air garden behind them. The space is open. Young people like this now."

"The outdoor garden is great..."

open air garden.

Duan Yu turned his head to look at Xie Qiao unconsciously, and found that the other party just turned his head to look at him.

Realizing that he shouldn't have made such a move, Duan Yu immediately retracted his gaze, lowered his eyes and took a sip of lemonade.

"Okay, okay, it's getting late, let's stop here today."

Director Huang caressed his stomach and smiled: "You just can't do it when you're old, and you'll feel overwhelmed after eating such a small amount. I'll go back to the bar at night to digest food and wake up."

Someone answered: "Director Huang is okay, do you want to buy some medicine?"

"it's okay no problem."

The coordinating teacher said: "Then I will go with Director Huang, the road is dark and not safe."

Because it was a temporary decision to come out for dinner, there were no managers or assistants around, and most of the people hitched a ride out of the crew.The person with the highest qualifications had to walk back without taking a car, and some people became mentally active.

"I'll be with the director too. It just so happens that I've gained a lot of weight during this time, so it's just exercise."

"Take me one, take me one."

"Let's all go together and treat it like a walk."

Director Huang smiled and refused: "Don't, don't, just let Teacher Li accompany me, you big stars are walking on the road, it will be bad if you are photographed."

"I am 18 lines, and I guarantee that no one will recognize me."

Everyone laughed in good faith.

Indeed, judging by the number of their fans, even small stars are flattering, and the real big star among them is only Xie Qiao.

Xie Qiao stood coolly with his pockets in his pockets, his eyes were deep, and he didn't express any opinions.

Shan Qihuai suddenly woke up in the cold wind.

Xie Qiao has a large number of fans. It is no joke that walking on the street will cause traffic jams. He will definitely not walk back with them.

Now so many people say they want to take a walk with the director... There are only a few people left in the car!

So, Shan Qihuai played the best acting skills in her life, stomped her feet lightly, and said with regret: "I won't be with you guys anymore, these high heels are really hard on my feet, I'm afraid they will break before I get to the hotel. "

marvelous!Going back in the same car with your idol, you will be alone!

"Then Xiao Dan, go back by car, pay more attention, you girls should go back by car, the road is not convenient."

The coordinator Mr. Li did not think it was a big deal to watch the excitement, "I know there is a small road from here to the hotel, and almost no one walks it at night. It's okay for the few of us to walk together and strengthen each other's courage."

"Where's Duan Yu? Are you coming with us or going back by car?"

Duan Yu already had the answer in his heart, Xie Qiao couldn't walk in the dark at night, so he said without hesitation: "Walk back."

In this way, the assignment was made, and everyone agreed not to ask Xie Qiao, and tacitly agreed that he would not wander the streets with them.

Unexpectedly, when everyone was about to go on the road, he suddenly said, "I'm also walking back, I haven't exercised for a long time."

Everyone: "!"

Shan Qihuai: "???"

Duan Yu: "..."

Watching Shan Qihuai leave with a face full of unwillingness, Duan Yu fell to the end of the line and kept up with the main force.

The road pointed out by the coordinating teacher really needs everyone to be courageous in order to go on.

The path stretches across the middle of the field, without a single street lamp on both sides, and the road ahead can only be seen clearly by the light from the windows of a few houses in the distance.

Listening to the noisy chatter ahead, Duan Yu counted his steps boredly, remembering the scenes to be filmed tomorrow.

Suddenly, something cold touched the side of his hand.

The ice was so bitter that Duan Yu subconsciously withdrew his hand in fright.

With a little bit of light, Duan Yu saw Xie Qiao walking beside him, looking straight ahead, serious, as if the little move just now was not done by him.

Duan Yu pursed her lips, and took a few quick steps to distance herself from him.

Xie Qiao trotted two steps to catch up, leaned over and complained in a low voice: "What are you running, it's not like you don't know that I can't see."

Xie Qiao suffers from night blindness, and can't see anything in a darker environment, let alone such a pitch-black path, it is difficult for normal people to see the road, just like a blind person.

Duan Yu asked back: "Then how did you see me?"

Xie Qiao snorted lightly, triumphantly as if hiding a big secret, "Anyway, you have to be my crutch."

There is no problem with crutches, but being unable to see is also a disability, as long as Xie Qiao is safe and sound.

Xie Qiao was humming a song in a good mood, and rushed to this small town, but the dissatisfaction and resentment that he hadn't spoken to Duan Yu all day dissipated. Hearing the laughter of the old men in front, his mind drifted.

The moon is dark and the wind is high, perfect for sneaky things.

He reverted to his old ways, and went to grab Duan Yu's hand again.

A crisp "pop" sound.

"What are you doing?" Duan Yu asked coldly.

The ice hand hurt from being beaten, Xie Qiao recalled the warm touch just now, and felt wronged.

Duan Yu's hand was really soft, and it really hurt when he hit someone.

"What's wrong with walking with a cane?"

Xie Qiao was able to catch up with Duan Yu thanks to his good ears, able to distinguish his steady footsteps from the noise, and able to follow the rhythm and walk side by side with him.

"Then do you know that crutches can not only be used to walk, but also be used to beat people?" Duan Yu said.

Xie Qiao: "..."

Xie Qiao couldn't believe it: "Do you want to domestically abuse me!"

Duan Yu: "If you break up, it's not considered domestic violence."

Xie Qiao automatically ignored this sentence, leaned over and put his arms around his waist, resting his chin on his shoulder, the coolness in his palm passed to Duan Yu through his clothes.

"Okay, don't make trouble, I will definitely spend more time with you in the future." Xie Qiao said in a loving tone.

Duan Yu's eyelids twitched uncontrollably, and he ruthlessly pulled him off his body. Since this guy is now a disabled person, he didn't kick him.

Their small actions were due to the darkness of the moon and the high wind, so no one could see them. It just so happened that the chatting in front of them stopped at this moment. Duan Yu was afraid that they would notice him and didn't speak immediately. By the time he spoke, the cold atmosphere was gone.

"Xie Qiao, you are sexual harassment."

"Duan Yu, you think you are upright. When they talked about the open-air garden during the meal, you also thought of it, didn't you?"

"No." Duan Yu decisively denied it.

"Liar, you are sexually harassing me in your head."

Duan Yu: "..."

He did.

Ruyue Hotel is a very familiar place for the two of them.

The place that witnessed their breakup also carries the memory of their first kiss.

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