Deficit

Lu You followed Tu Qianmo to the room, and Tu Qianmo had already put the script away.Lu You grabbed the little rabbit in his heart and stood beside him pretending to be calm. Tu Qianmo finally reached out and played Lu You's script, "You know, what is a script?"

"A script is a literary genre that focuses on the lines of characters and focuses on reflecting contradictions and conflicts. Its basic characteristics are: condensed reflection of real life, concentrated expression of contradictions and conflicts, and the use of lines of characters to promote dramatic actions." Lu You hurriedly recited Go over the basic concept of the script.

Tu Qianmo smiled, "It doesn't need to be so complicated, let me tell you, the script is actually a story."

Lu You was stunned.

Tu Qianmo smiled, "Sid Field said that a movie script is a story told by pictures. I said that a musical script is a story told by music."

Lu You somewhat understood, "Oh."

Tu Qianmo picked up Lu You's notebook, "I looked through it today, but I didn't read it all carefully. Lu You, have you ever thought about why your third senior brother asked you to make this notebook?"

Lu You replied, "I want me to know "Rhinoceros Horn" better. Also, in this way, it forces me to learn more about the form of stage play."

Tu Qianmo nodded, "Seeing the notebook you made, whether it is the format or the content, I know that you have put in a lot of effort."

Lu You really didn't expect that he could still hear Tu Qianmo say such a sentence in his lifetime, but Tu Qianmo immediately followed up, "However, everything in this world is the same. If you don't work hard, you can't do it well, and if you work hard, you can't do it well." It may be as perfect as possible. There is no problem in the big aspects, but there is one point that you don’t understand thoroughly. That’s what I said, musicals use music as the medium to tell a story.”

Lu You listened carefully.

"The most important significance of a script is to tell a good story. "Rhino Horn" is a good story, so, in this regard, you have gained a big advantage." Tu Qianmo said.

About this, Lu You knew.

Tu Qianmo also understands that he understands, "There is an old saying, 'Ten years grinds a play', no matter how far away it is, it is the script of "Half Mountain, Half Buddha", which your third senior brother and Li Mosang collaborated on, and his screenwriter Hai Liang has worn it out." Eight years. Therefore, finding a good story is the starting point for the director to create a script, but on the premise of having a good story, how to reproduce it in a new form of presentation requires more than just the script itself gone."

Lu You was a little confused.

Tu Qianmo said, "To put it simply, why do I have to ask you to adapt this book?"

Lu You understood a little bit in a trance, but he couldn't grasp it.Tu Qianmo said, "Because you know more about your own characteristics." Tu Qianmo said, "In the hunting scene, you mentioned using dance to show it, which is very good. But, as the protagonist, you are good at What kind of dance, and on the premise that you are good at it, how well this dance can present the whole story and its stage impact is a very important question. You have to put all this into the script Come and think about it. I made an appointment with Xuling for you, she is an excellent screenwriter, but she cannot possibly know you better than yourself." Tu Qianmo finally explained clearly.

Lu You bowed his head and said, "It's Lu You's fault. Lu You didn't think carefully. I should write what I'm good at."

Tu Qianmo didn't comment, and continued to turn back, "Here, Shen Yanfei is arguing with a businessman who steals rhino horns for profit. It's a very brilliant aria. I can see that you have a desire to sing. I don't know how far your vocal range is. How wide, but, here, I don't want you to show your treble control prematurely."

Lu You didn't understand.

Tu Qianmo said, "Once upon a time, there was an artist who could sing from G2 to C6, and was good at imitating the singing voices of many celebrities. When he appeared on the stage, he surprised everyone, but in the end, he only got a good imitation skill. Moreover, the audience will have a psychological barrier to a singer with strong imitation ability. Even if he has his own song in the end, everyone still feels that he does not have his own style. I hope you will go all the way, have surprises every step of the way, Your treble is a highlight, not a feature. Because, I believe, what was presented before this scene is enough to prove your singing skills. Do you understand?"

Lu You was dumbfounded. He really didn't expect that Tu Qianmo could still plan for him in such a long-term. Although, these days, his attitude towards himself has improved a lot, and it can be seen that he treats himself so well. It's true that he put his mind to it, but Tu Qianmo is clearly not such a clear and reasonable person.Shouldn't this person's style be: don't understand, fight, don't understand yet, fight again, understand, understand?In order not to be beaten perfunctory, did I understand, hit hard!At the end of the fight, he lost his mood, and only said a few kind words like a charity.

Tu Qianmo knew what Lu You was thinking just by looking at Lu You's eyes, "I don't have time to polish you slowly, now that everything is on the right track, you can choose to follow the path I paved for you, or if you insist on going your own way, I will beat you back to my shop." Good way."

Sure enough, this man is still so domineering.

Tu Qianmo glanced at him, "I will give you a chance when you can grasp your future, but not now. Continue to read the book."

"Yes." Lu You bowed his head in response.

Tu Qianmo continued, "The movie version of the scene where Shen Yanfei died under the shotgun was relatively pale. When I say pale, I don't mean that the movie itself is weak, but that he is consistent with the tone of the whole movie. The audience has a relatively large space. However, if you still deal with stage plays like this, it will be really pale. Movies have the language of movies, but stage plays also have their own characteristics. You can try to let Shen Yanfei’s death appear on the stage Of course, this is just my personal opinion, and I just want you to pay more attention to the difference between the two forms of artistic expression.”

"Yes, Lu You remembered." What Tu Qianmo said made sense, and Lu You just listened to it.He knows that this teacher has his own ideas and opinions. Compared with the guidance of his brothers based on the performance itself, the teacher pays more attention to his personal growth and future, whether it is art or simple. personal development.Tu Qianmo talked with Lu You about the details of the script. It is still difficult for the master and apprentice to exchange opinions on an equal footing, but Lu You will first keep what Tu Qianmo said in mind. He doesn't necessarily think that what Tu Qianmo said is completely correct, just like the ending at the end, he thought, if the stage play is performed well, it can also pursue the timelessness and meaning of the movie, but what Tu Qianmo said made him pay attention to two things. If there is a difference between the two, Lu You still agrees.What he requires of himself now is to keep learning. After all, at this age, learning is not too much.

Tu Qianmo is very satisfied with Lu You's performance these days. Counting the days, he has been here for almost two weeks. Frankly speaking, Lu You is quite cute when he is not causing trouble.What's more, Tu Qianmo also gradually discovered that as long as he didn't intentionally make things difficult, Lu You wouldn't be able to cause any trouble if he was careful.In this family, Liu Jie's attitude towards Junior Brother Lu has changed from pity at the beginning to appreciation gradually, and Aunt Wu loves him even more. Tu Qianmo herself seems to be satisfied with Lu You. Woke up.This kid is smart and knows everything. Even if he disagrees with what you said, he just writes it down silently and doesn't fight you to death.Even, Lu You has another great benefit.He didn't agree with what you told him on the first day, but after a few days he suddenly figured it out, and he would come over and explain to you in person the psychological process of his transformation. Bai taught him, and also greatly satisfied his vanity.It can be said that he is more and more satisfied with Lu You. To what extent is he satisfied? He personally took Lu You to the basement to check and accept the stage actors he selected.

"Rest early today, and go out with me tomorrow." When Lu You finished the last stretching exercise, Tu Qianmo casually ordered.

"Where are you going?" Probably because Tiantu Qianmo indulged him too much these days, Lu You dared to ask one more question.

"Kadi." Tu Qianmo gave two words.

Lu You was stupid, Liu Jie looked at him and smiled.

"Yes, teacher." What are you going to Kadi for?

Early the next morning, Lu You finished everything he needed to do, chose a smoky gray coat that Tu Qianmo personally picked out, and went out with the teacher.

Tu Qianmo glanced at Lu You, even if this color was not dull, it would not be too frivolous, but for some reason, Lu You actually wore a demonic look.Especially, too slender waist.

According to etiquette, Lu You should have driven the car, but unfortunately he couldn't.Tu Qianmo said casually, "You must learn, otherwise it will be inconvenient to go anywhere in the future."

"Yes." Lu You secretly thought about this sentence, the teacher was implying that he would be popular?

However, thinking about it now, it is too extravagant.

Tu Qianmo parked the car at the door of Kadi's basement. When entering the door, Lu You saw the potted plant that Kadi's trainees had worked so hard to irrigate, and someone was "watering the flowers" again. Lu You's heart skipped a beat. Following behind Tu Qianmo, Tu Qianmo turned his head and glanced at him with a smile. When he looked away, a courteous person had already come to say hello, "Hello, Director Tu."

"Hello, Mr. Chen." Lu You quickly bowed. Mr. Chen is one of the persons in charge of the basement. Although he has nothing to do with the corporal punishment of the trainees, he is still in power.

Tu Qianmo nodded casually, and continued to walk in. Everyone he met would greet him, and Lu You also bowed to greet him back, as if he had returned to the days when he was punished by Mousse to bow in front of the elevator.

Tu Qianmo walked out of the practice hall, probably because he came too suddenly, the teachers were basically killed, all of them looked solemn, and even the tone of the trainees was a little bit colder.

Lu You saw the picture of a familiar trainee being pressed against the practice wall, the boy bent his back to the wall and clasped his ankles with his hands, and his whole body was almost folded against the wall. Lu You clearly saw that he was being pressed At the limit, the jujitsu teacher continued to force him to lean on with the pointer. Lu You watched that the boy tried his best to lean his waist to his buttocks. After all, they were just practicing dance, and they were not professional jujitsu performers. The coach immediately slapped the boy's leg, "Will you press it? If not, I will help you press it."

"Yes! Yes!" The boy basically cried.However, no matter how hard he tried, the limit of the human body was there.The jujitsu teacher didn't hit him, but poked the boy's side with a pointer, "Go! I can't go down today, so you stay and open my feet."

Hearing the words "open instep", Lu You's body couldn't help shaking, Tu Qianmo looked back at Lu You, "What are you afraid of?"

Lu You bowed his head, "No, no."

Tu Qianmo didn't mean to blame Lu You for being perfunctory at all, but pointed at the boy, "Can you go down?"

Lu You shook his head, "I, I am not as good as him."

Tu Qianmo's gaze immediately turned cold, and Lu You suddenly became frightened, "I, I'll go back to practice."

Tu Qianmo walked out without saying a word, and then entered the second practice room, doing the most common reaction training, but the instructions from the teacher's mouth became too fast, and the movements also changed from the normal forward and backward order The leg jumping turned into a fancy formation, but those who couldn't keep up with the reaction consciously squatted down, which is a kind of tossing movement in which one leg is vertically placed on the handlebar and the other leg is squatting halfway, because The body is suspended in the air, and the weight of the whole person falls on the half-squatting leg hanging in the air. Of course, even if you are punished, you dare not walk around, because you have to keep an eye on that form at all times. Even numbers are automatically filled up, but no matter how slow the reaction is, people will lose another chance. This squatting position is very painful, and after two rounds, they will be unable to turn. Therefore, everyone's ears are pricked up, almost looking forward to it. Of course, the teacher's password will only be more tricky. When Tu Qianmo stepped into the door, he even called a very frustrating arch bridge to cross.The so-called arch bridge crossing means that two people next to each other quickly lower their waists to complete the shape of the arch bridge after receiving the command, and then the third person supports the two people and crosses it in a vaulting posture. After landing, he makes the arch bridge by himself. People who do arch bridges continue to jump. First, this kind of exercise is very energy-intensive, and it is almost unbearable after a few sets. Second, there is an order for the trainees who squat next to them to replace the trainees who made mistakes, but arch bridges generally make mistakes. There will always be mistakes, and it is really difficult to judge who should be the first and who should be the second. Therefore, there will always be people who make mistakes, and there will always be people who will follow up.

Tu Qianmo took a second look and exited, and the third room was for the most routine physical training.Apart from the fact that every student has a ping-pong ball on his head, there seems to be no cruelty.But only Lu You knew that this so-called perverted teacher punished two trainees by throwing the ping pong ball head-to-head until the ball broke because they accidentally dropped the ping-pong ball while walking.Tu Qianmo took a look. He was about to go out, but his eyes suddenly fell on a boy. The boy's appearance was not very good, he could only be regarded as pleasing to the eye, but his figure was very good-looking. Tu Qianmo was once very infatuated with him. Based on his professional vision, it can be seen that this boy has maintained this seemingly simplest standing posture for at least five hours. If this is the case, he probably didn't sleep last night.

Tu Qianmo walked over to take a look. There were obvious unwiped candle tears on the shoulder of the boy's sympathetic shirt. It really was Kadi's old trick. Usually when newcomers are bullied by powerful old trainees, it is very common. The name is the so-called Candlestick Exhibition. The old people usually put two candles on the shoulders of the newcomers and ask them to stand in a posture for one night. The next day, they can judge whether the newcomers are lazy by the traces of candle tears on their shoulders.Of course, there are also icicles.Tu Qianmo looked back at Lu You, "How is he standing?"

Lu You was stunned, and the newcomer was also stunned.

Lu You didn't speak.He really didn't know what to say.

Tu Qianmo stretched out his fingers to gather the clothes on the boy's shoulders, and looked back at Lu You, "It's crooked and messy, if you dare to stand like this, you will basically play the big tree in the future drama."

The physique teacher's face turned pale all of a sudden, that boy, to be honest, is already the best in this class.

Tu Qianmo took a few steps forward, stretched out his foot and kicked over a confident man who raised his head and chest, "My stomach is so shy to outer space—" Then he took another step to the left, and gave another one a little The nervous boy kicked, "Your breasts are big enough to hold walnuts." He looked at the physique teacher at this point, "I don't even know when Kadi's physique class will become a training for Zhu Bajie and Liu Luoguo. Special actor."

The physique teacher was so embarrassed that he didn't dare to speak at all, but Tu Qianmo suddenly went around to the front of the line, patted the shoulder of the boy standing on the far left, "Go fetch a bucket of water."

"Yes." The boy ran out immediately. Lu You originally stood at the outermost side of the practice room with lowered brows, but now he raised his eyes, but was stunned. This person was actually Wang Xin.