Bungo common problem
Chapter 84
It's heavy, but it doesn't look like a big change. Instead, it's the protagonist's gradually changing mentality in such a daily life.
When he thought he had integrated into this foreign land, he missed his hometown even more in many ordinary and small things.
At first, I just thought about it in my heart, and then I began to miss it more and more, and even became a lingering obsession day after day.
It is no exaggeration to say that after reading this unfinished "Foreign Land" from the beginning to the end, it has an indescribable appeal than the previous ones.
That kind of feeling cannot be easily expressed in words, but it can be felt from the bottom of my heart, as if I have become a wanderer who has left his hometown, wandering in a distant place.
And who can be sure that he will never leave his hometown for the rest of his life?
Fukuzawa Yukichi thought.
Young, old, seeking, seeking.People will always have various reasons, either voluntarily or forced to leave the place where they grow.
It is a veritable [foreign land].
Although the manuscript in hand stopped abruptly here, as long as one reads it, it is easy to follow the mood of the protagonist and guess the next few points.
If some plots that are not arranged allow the protagonist to get rid of his obsession, then this kind of loneliness called [Foreign Land] will definitely always be deeply rooted in the protagonist's heart, absorbing nourishment and strengthening himself until death.
Why did the other party write such a book?The most important thing is that Fukuzawa Yukichi feels that this book cannot be regarded as an ordinary novel.
It's like the other party's previous novels have always been metaphors. Although that matter is over now, as the first work that doesn't need to bother with metaphors, he feels that this one needs more attention.
The first book of "Freedom", not necessarily, at least it is what the author most wants to write.
What I want to write the most is often the most direct to my heart.
and so……
Fukuzawa Yukichi subconsciously glanced at Edogawa Ranpo, and got a heavy nod from the other party with a sigh.
So that's the case, he probably understood the exact meaning of what Ranpo said about wanting to help the other party's [heart].
But it is one thing to be clear in the heart, and another to do it, not to mention that many things are tacit and cannot be said.
Therefore, Fukuzawa Yukichi chose to continue the previous topic and learn more about it.
"After reading the novel, what is the deviation?"
"Mr. Fukuzawa should have noticed it? The protagonist in "Foreign Land" misses his original hometown more and more, and it is remembered and mentioned in his heart more and more times. This is a good thing for him. It's a good phenomenon, because the more you miss him, the less you can live well in the place where he is now."
Qianli pursed her lips with a solemn expression.
"I originally wanted to write about how the protagonist who came to a foreign land lived happily in this place, but as I said just now, let alone being happy if this continues, it would be good if he didn't run back."
And the most important thing is that the protagonist cannot return to his hometown, so under such circumstances, the ending of the protagonist is definitely not good.
It is good to be able to live a life of regret with marriage and children, but I am afraid that the protagonist will become ill after a few years of depression.
Thinking of this, Qianli was extremely depressed.
What I want is warmth and healing!Wouldn't it be nice for the protagonist to feel the true love in the world and then settle down in my hometown?
So what is going on with this protagonist?Really rebellious?Don't want a well-arranged life?
"The original idea was 'how can the protagonist live happily in a foreign land', but now it looks like the content..."
Fukuzawa Yukichi pondered, feeling that the bend was really big, but it could also explain a big problem.
He raised his eyes and stared at Qianli, there was quite real distress in those golden eyes, she was genuinely puzzled by the choice of the protagonist in the book.
But Fukuzawa Yukichi felt that he had glimpsed something different, from the serious but unconscious distress of the other party, from this unfinished novel.
Luanbu will tell him many things, and he never knows a lot.If he really wanted to say a reason, he felt that it should be the other party's own reason.
To write a novel is to describe people.Whether people's joys and sorrows, or people's beauty and despair, will be shown in a book.
It is difficult for people to write about things that have not been experienced, and it is difficult to impress others with imagination if they have not experienced emotions. Even if "A Foreign Land" is not finished, only the first half of the content is enough to move people's hearts.
So here comes the biggest problem.
Fukuzawa Yukichi thought.
The conflict between the author's own reason and her own emotions caused her such distress, and even... she herself did not find her own contradictions.
Reason makes her want the "protagonist" to blend into a foreign land, but she can't stop missing her emotionally.
Things became more complicated. He didn't get along with the other party for a long time, and he didn't know much, and the other party was not an ordinary person, so he needed to be more careful when facing him.
Literary giants and national treasure-level writers may look mature, but those who can hold such a title must be unusually sensitive in their hearts.
What if something happens because you made a bad choice?If there is no literary giant in the world, he himself is the sinner of the whole Japan!
In a few seconds, Fukuzawa Yukichi thought a lot.But thanks to his daily paralyzed face, even Edogawa Ranpo couldn't tell much from his expression.
If I didn't have this ability, I would have been exposed on the spot when I was fooling around :)
"Have more fetters?"
Fukuzawa Yukichi pondered over the language, and spoke in a deep voice. He seemed to be speaking to the protagonist, and also seemed to be speaking to Chisato himself. The calm voice sounded reliable.
"If the current fetters are not enough for the protagonist to live here, then do you want to try to have more fetters, new goals or sustenance."
"More... fetters?"
For a moment, he subconsciously glanced at the manuscript on the table and fell into deep thought.
It seems... It's not impossible.
Arrange more friends and neighbors for the protagonist, or find a girlfriend for the protagonist. After the excitement, you probably won’t have time to think about your hometown, right?It's like social animals don't think too much when they work, and the protagonist is probably idle!
That's right, I have to find work for the protagonist!
After thinking about it, Qianli felt that it really made sense, and he instantly became happy.
"Thank you Mr. Fukuzawa, I understand!"
Master, I understand.jpg
As expected of Fukuzawa Yukichi, I really love it!
Until Fukuzawa Yukichi took Edogawa to leave in disorder, Chisato cleaned up casually, and returned to the room, immersed in finding trouble for the protagonist.But the two people who left were not in the mood of Qianli at all.
"So, President——"
Edogawa Ranpo still had the candy from Chisato's house in his mouth, puffed his cheeks and dragged out his voice.
"You can feel it too, it's dangerous, it's still the kind of unconscious danger."
"Ah."
Fukuzawa Yukichi nodded slightly, quite understanding what Ranpo was talking about.
What is invisible on the surface is exposed in the article.It is not a lie that the article contains the author's mood, and even the style of writing can explain a lot of problems in many cases, just like it is difficult for a person who has always been soft-hearted to write tit-for-tat words.
Rather than saying that the "protagonist" in the novel is wandering in a foreign land, it is better to say that she herself is wandering in a foreign land.And the one that resisted her "reason" was the "emotion" that she didn't realize.
Walking downstairs, stepping into the bright sunlight, Fukuzawa Yukichi looked up at the scorching summer sun hanging in the air, and spit out four words.
"Focus."
He himself is not suitable, but Ranpo and Xie Ye should be fine, let them try to get along more later.
Qianli, who had no idea that he was judged as "dangerous in mental state" and needed to be focused on, got stuck again after this time.
"I think I can't do it anymore, walking around."
In the Armed Detective Agency, Qianli sat on the sofa dejectedly, the whole person was sluggish, even the hair on the top of his head was drooping limply, and he opened his mouth in pain.
"My son's rebellion hurts my heart. This protagonist is hopeless, really."
"So you wrote three versions of the ending?"
Edogawa raised his eyebrows in disorder, looking at the manuscripts marked [Ending 1] and [Ending 2] [Ending 3] on the table, flipping through them casually.
After flipping through, he fell silent again.
Although he was prepared to see the ending of heartbreak, and roughly thought about what would happen, these three endings are really... as expected.
One is worse than the other...
Qian Li, who was completely ignorant of Ranpo's psychology, was still talking.
"Well, because I think it's very controversial, I want to show you and Mr. Fukuzawa what you think."
With that, she asked.
"Does Mr. Fukuzawa have time? If not, I..."
Before she could finish speaking, Luanbu answered decisively.
"Of course the president does!"
This is the manuscript of thousands of miles. Even if the president is outside, he will rush back to read the manuscript as soon as he hears that he can read it.
After all, the president is the one who has collected the other party's complete set of books!
"Go, it's in the office."
As he said that, Ranpo took all the manuscripts aggressively, rushed into Fukuzawa Yukichi's office like a thousand li wind, and slapped the manuscripts on the desk.
"Manuscript, three endings, take a look."
Ranpo with his back to Qianli showed a sighing expression in front of Fukuzawa Yukichi, winking.
President, do you understand?
Fukuzawa Yukichi: "..."
He looked at Edogawa Ranpo, then at the manuscript on the table that seemed to be emitting holy light, and then looked at the other party again.
I don't understand, but I seem to understand somehow...
"Is Mr. Fukuzawa working?"
Chisato, who was catching up behind, looked at the documents on Fukuzawa Yukichi's desk, and felt that this was not idle at all, so he spoke quite understandingly.
"It's just a little tangled, or I'll come back later."
After a while?How could this be?The manuscript is already in front of me, how could I not read it?
"No, it's nothing, it's just a small thing."
Fukuzawa Yukichi directly put the document aside, picked up the manuscript on the table with a sense of impatience that only he knew, and quickly browsed through it.
Then, the air pressure around him unknowingly became lower and lower while watching, until after watching, Fukuzawa Yukichi frowned, a little suspicious of life.
This ending...why is it all a tragedy?
Just when he was puzzled, he saw that Qianli had three endings after he finished reading, and explained.
"One is perfect, and the two are more regrettable. I personally prefer the perfect one. After all, what I wanted to write at the beginning was that my hometown is my home, but the protagonist doesn't seem to think so."
Consummation?
Fukuzawa Yukichi was taken aback, and stared deeply at Qianri, and found that the other party's expression was very serious.
Could it be that I flipped through too quickly and missed some details?
He lowered his head and read the three endings again, trying to find the satisfactory one.
however……
Which of these three is perfect?Why didn't he see any of them? ? ?
When he thought he had integrated into this foreign land, he missed his hometown even more in many ordinary and small things.
At first, I just thought about it in my heart, and then I began to miss it more and more, and even became a lingering obsession day after day.
It is no exaggeration to say that after reading this unfinished "Foreign Land" from the beginning to the end, it has an indescribable appeal than the previous ones.
That kind of feeling cannot be easily expressed in words, but it can be felt from the bottom of my heart, as if I have become a wanderer who has left his hometown, wandering in a distant place.
And who can be sure that he will never leave his hometown for the rest of his life?
Fukuzawa Yukichi thought.
Young, old, seeking, seeking.People will always have various reasons, either voluntarily or forced to leave the place where they grow.
It is a veritable [foreign land].
Although the manuscript in hand stopped abruptly here, as long as one reads it, it is easy to follow the mood of the protagonist and guess the next few points.
If some plots that are not arranged allow the protagonist to get rid of his obsession, then this kind of loneliness called [Foreign Land] will definitely always be deeply rooted in the protagonist's heart, absorbing nourishment and strengthening himself until death.
Why did the other party write such a book?The most important thing is that Fukuzawa Yukichi feels that this book cannot be regarded as an ordinary novel.
It's like the other party's previous novels have always been metaphors. Although that matter is over now, as the first work that doesn't need to bother with metaphors, he feels that this one needs more attention.
The first book of "Freedom", not necessarily, at least it is what the author most wants to write.
What I want to write the most is often the most direct to my heart.
and so……
Fukuzawa Yukichi subconsciously glanced at Edogawa Ranpo, and got a heavy nod from the other party with a sigh.
So that's the case, he probably understood the exact meaning of what Ranpo said about wanting to help the other party's [heart].
But it is one thing to be clear in the heart, and another to do it, not to mention that many things are tacit and cannot be said.
Therefore, Fukuzawa Yukichi chose to continue the previous topic and learn more about it.
"After reading the novel, what is the deviation?"
"Mr. Fukuzawa should have noticed it? The protagonist in "Foreign Land" misses his original hometown more and more, and it is remembered and mentioned in his heart more and more times. This is a good thing for him. It's a good phenomenon, because the more you miss him, the less you can live well in the place where he is now."
Qianli pursed her lips with a solemn expression.
"I originally wanted to write about how the protagonist who came to a foreign land lived happily in this place, but as I said just now, let alone being happy if this continues, it would be good if he didn't run back."
And the most important thing is that the protagonist cannot return to his hometown, so under such circumstances, the ending of the protagonist is definitely not good.
It is good to be able to live a life of regret with marriage and children, but I am afraid that the protagonist will become ill after a few years of depression.
Thinking of this, Qianli was extremely depressed.
What I want is warmth and healing!Wouldn't it be nice for the protagonist to feel the true love in the world and then settle down in my hometown?
So what is going on with this protagonist?Really rebellious?Don't want a well-arranged life?
"The original idea was 'how can the protagonist live happily in a foreign land', but now it looks like the content..."
Fukuzawa Yukichi pondered, feeling that the bend was really big, but it could also explain a big problem.
He raised his eyes and stared at Qianli, there was quite real distress in those golden eyes, she was genuinely puzzled by the choice of the protagonist in the book.
But Fukuzawa Yukichi felt that he had glimpsed something different, from the serious but unconscious distress of the other party, from this unfinished novel.
Luanbu will tell him many things, and he never knows a lot.If he really wanted to say a reason, he felt that it should be the other party's own reason.
To write a novel is to describe people.Whether people's joys and sorrows, or people's beauty and despair, will be shown in a book.
It is difficult for people to write about things that have not been experienced, and it is difficult to impress others with imagination if they have not experienced emotions. Even if "A Foreign Land" is not finished, only the first half of the content is enough to move people's hearts.
So here comes the biggest problem.
Fukuzawa Yukichi thought.
The conflict between the author's own reason and her own emotions caused her such distress, and even... she herself did not find her own contradictions.
Reason makes her want the "protagonist" to blend into a foreign land, but she can't stop missing her emotionally.
Things became more complicated. He didn't get along with the other party for a long time, and he didn't know much, and the other party was not an ordinary person, so he needed to be more careful when facing him.
Literary giants and national treasure-level writers may look mature, but those who can hold such a title must be unusually sensitive in their hearts.
What if something happens because you made a bad choice?If there is no literary giant in the world, he himself is the sinner of the whole Japan!
In a few seconds, Fukuzawa Yukichi thought a lot.But thanks to his daily paralyzed face, even Edogawa Ranpo couldn't tell much from his expression.
If I didn't have this ability, I would have been exposed on the spot when I was fooling around :)
"Have more fetters?"
Fukuzawa Yukichi pondered over the language, and spoke in a deep voice. He seemed to be speaking to the protagonist, and also seemed to be speaking to Chisato himself. The calm voice sounded reliable.
"If the current fetters are not enough for the protagonist to live here, then do you want to try to have more fetters, new goals or sustenance."
"More... fetters?"
For a moment, he subconsciously glanced at the manuscript on the table and fell into deep thought.
It seems... It's not impossible.
Arrange more friends and neighbors for the protagonist, or find a girlfriend for the protagonist. After the excitement, you probably won’t have time to think about your hometown, right?It's like social animals don't think too much when they work, and the protagonist is probably idle!
That's right, I have to find work for the protagonist!
After thinking about it, Qianli felt that it really made sense, and he instantly became happy.
"Thank you Mr. Fukuzawa, I understand!"
Master, I understand.jpg
As expected of Fukuzawa Yukichi, I really love it!
Until Fukuzawa Yukichi took Edogawa to leave in disorder, Chisato cleaned up casually, and returned to the room, immersed in finding trouble for the protagonist.But the two people who left were not in the mood of Qianli at all.
"So, President——"
Edogawa Ranpo still had the candy from Chisato's house in his mouth, puffed his cheeks and dragged out his voice.
"You can feel it too, it's dangerous, it's still the kind of unconscious danger."
"Ah."
Fukuzawa Yukichi nodded slightly, quite understanding what Ranpo was talking about.
What is invisible on the surface is exposed in the article.It is not a lie that the article contains the author's mood, and even the style of writing can explain a lot of problems in many cases, just like it is difficult for a person who has always been soft-hearted to write tit-for-tat words.
Rather than saying that the "protagonist" in the novel is wandering in a foreign land, it is better to say that she herself is wandering in a foreign land.And the one that resisted her "reason" was the "emotion" that she didn't realize.
Walking downstairs, stepping into the bright sunlight, Fukuzawa Yukichi looked up at the scorching summer sun hanging in the air, and spit out four words.
"Focus."
He himself is not suitable, but Ranpo and Xie Ye should be fine, let them try to get along more later.
Qianli, who had no idea that he was judged as "dangerous in mental state" and needed to be focused on, got stuck again after this time.
"I think I can't do it anymore, walking around."
In the Armed Detective Agency, Qianli sat on the sofa dejectedly, the whole person was sluggish, even the hair on the top of his head was drooping limply, and he opened his mouth in pain.
"My son's rebellion hurts my heart. This protagonist is hopeless, really."
"So you wrote three versions of the ending?"
Edogawa raised his eyebrows in disorder, looking at the manuscripts marked [Ending 1] and [Ending 2] [Ending 3] on the table, flipping through them casually.
After flipping through, he fell silent again.
Although he was prepared to see the ending of heartbreak, and roughly thought about what would happen, these three endings are really... as expected.
One is worse than the other...
Qian Li, who was completely ignorant of Ranpo's psychology, was still talking.
"Well, because I think it's very controversial, I want to show you and Mr. Fukuzawa what you think."
With that, she asked.
"Does Mr. Fukuzawa have time? If not, I..."
Before she could finish speaking, Luanbu answered decisively.
"Of course the president does!"
This is the manuscript of thousands of miles. Even if the president is outside, he will rush back to read the manuscript as soon as he hears that he can read it.
After all, the president is the one who has collected the other party's complete set of books!
"Go, it's in the office."
As he said that, Ranpo took all the manuscripts aggressively, rushed into Fukuzawa Yukichi's office like a thousand li wind, and slapped the manuscripts on the desk.
"Manuscript, three endings, take a look."
Ranpo with his back to Qianli showed a sighing expression in front of Fukuzawa Yukichi, winking.
President, do you understand?
Fukuzawa Yukichi: "..."
He looked at Edogawa Ranpo, then at the manuscript on the table that seemed to be emitting holy light, and then looked at the other party again.
I don't understand, but I seem to understand somehow...
"Is Mr. Fukuzawa working?"
Chisato, who was catching up behind, looked at the documents on Fukuzawa Yukichi's desk, and felt that this was not idle at all, so he spoke quite understandingly.
"It's just a little tangled, or I'll come back later."
After a while?How could this be?The manuscript is already in front of me, how could I not read it?
"No, it's nothing, it's just a small thing."
Fukuzawa Yukichi directly put the document aside, picked up the manuscript on the table with a sense of impatience that only he knew, and quickly browsed through it.
Then, the air pressure around him unknowingly became lower and lower while watching, until after watching, Fukuzawa Yukichi frowned, a little suspicious of life.
This ending...why is it all a tragedy?
Just when he was puzzled, he saw that Qianli had three endings after he finished reading, and explained.
"One is perfect, and the two are more regrettable. I personally prefer the perfect one. After all, what I wanted to write at the beginning was that my hometown is my home, but the protagonist doesn't seem to think so."
Consummation?
Fukuzawa Yukichi was taken aback, and stared deeply at Qianri, and found that the other party's expression was very serious.
Could it be that I flipped through too quickly and missed some details?
He lowered his head and read the three endings again, trying to find the satisfactory one.
however……
Which of these three is perfect?Why didn't he see any of them? ? ?
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