Bungo common problem

Oda Sakunosuke said it right, the hero is late, the prodigal son turns back, people never tire of watching it, and Venus with the broken arm is regarded as a masterpiece.

"But I'm afraid that after I write it, the meaning in it is not what I think now."

After all, she still has a sense of the world, and she can't even bring in her private goods when she writes the book.

Qianli could only speak unhappily.

"I don't want him to be liked, I hate him."

Hate mimic, hate Gide, hate that they will come here in the future to destroy Odasaku.

"Does Qianli hate the protagonist this time?"

The child on the opposite side was depressed, but it was rare that Oda Sakunosuke had the feeling of wanting to smile.

In a rare scene, Qianli, who has always been mature and sensible, is so suitable for his age, as if he was suffocated like a child.

Still myself and myself.

"If that's the case, why do you want to create such a protagonist?"

Oda asked.

"Why don't you want someone else to be the protagonist?"

"because……"

Because she wants to try to carry private goods from different angles...

Qianli opened his mouth, but couldn't speak, so he could only lie down on the table depressedly, and uttered a very perfunctory sentence in a muffled voice.

"Because the protagonist has decided on him by default, I don't want to."

This time, Oda Sakunosuke really laughed out loud.

"Chisato's distress is precisely because even if she hates it, she can't control her desire to treat the protagonist fairly, right?"

Chisato looked sideways at the other party from the crook of his arm, Oda Sakunosuke was facing the light behind his back, the bright windows were like white wings, and even the voice that floated to his ears was extremely gentle.

He says--

"There's no need to worry, because this is exactly where you are gentle, Qianli. You might as well write it out according to your heart."

There was a sense of peace in his blue eyes.

"Maybe the result will be unexpectedly smooth?"

Under the enlightenment of Oda Sakunosuke, Chisato regained her energy and started the creation of the new book. Due to the reason of world awareness, the content is not the same as what she originally wanted to express, but fortunately she only wanted that meaning.

The creation this time can be called difficult compared to other works, and there are more revisions. It was not until years later that she finished the book with difficulty.

As soon as he finished typing the last word, Qianli couldn't wait to put down his typing hand. He slumped on the chair and let out a long sigh.

"This is the hardest book I've ever written."

Fortunately, after I got rich, I pulled the network cable and installed a computer, otherwise I would write everything by hand, and my hands would be useless.

She can be considered to know why the great writers of the past were slow to publish books, and put aside the time to think, the speed of handwriting underdeveloped technology is really too fast.

Long live technology!

"I see it is true."

A familiar voice came from next to his ear, Qianli tilted his head, and a familiar white hair was sitting carelessly on his window, seeing him turning his head, he greeted him quite naturally.

"Hi~"

Qianli was silent for a few seconds before speaking quietly.

"Mr. Wujo, although it's March now, it's not hot outside, and it's quite windy today..."

So can I close the window?I said, why is it so cold all of a sudden, the relationship is your fault!

"It's Xiaoqianli, your physique is too poor."

Even so, Gojo Satoru jumped into the house neatly, and closed the windows fairly quickly to keep out the cold wind from outside.

"Obviously I have told Mr. Gojo that you can go through the main entrance, why do you always like to enter through the window?"

Qianli looked at this young man who walked through the window again, and was extremely puzzled.

"Could it be that Mr. Gojo, you like to walk through windows?"

"After all, windows are more convenient."

Gojo Satoru stretched his arms lazily and returned to Qianli.

"Although I don't mind dealing with little devils, those outside your house are too energetic."

Even now, I can still hear the noise of you coming and going in the living room. March is the time for the students' spring break, and there are those little devils around, but they can't calm down.

"It's okay, after all, children are always energetic, and Xingjie is very sensible on weekdays."

Qianli straightened up and asked casually.

"So why did Mr. Wujo come here suddenly? Could it be that he is on a business trip again?"

"Basically, after all, the students are on vacation, so I, as a teacher, will also be free."

Gojo Satoru came to Qianli's side, and turned his gaze to her computer.

"And it looks like I'm here just in time."

"Indeed, it's just in time."

Chisato agreed with him very much. After she saved the content of the article and turned to the first page, she stood up and pushed Gojo Satoru onto her chair.

"Look, how does it feel!"

Gojo Wu raised his eyebrows and looked at Qianli.

"Take private goods?"

"of course."

Qianli nodded and added.

"Don't think too much, this one is far away, you can't see it."

"Can't see it? What if I can see it?"

Gojo Satoru's eyes returned to the computer screen, and the word "ghost" on the top had a similar meaning to the previous articles.

She seems to like this kind of name related to ghosts and gods very much, and three of the four articles in total are like this.

Gojo Satoru thought this way, attached the mouse to his right hand, and started his extremely fast "quantum reading".

The story of "Ghost" is simple and complicated. Its background is also an overhead ancient time. It tells the story of an invincible general who became a traitor who everyone shouted because of the betrayal of his companions on the battlefield. The ghost of the battlefield survives alone in the huge battlefield, and finally gradually degenerates and turns into a story of evil spirits.

In the early stage of the story, he is loyal to the country, cherishes his companions, and is a general praised by everyone.

After being betrayed, he degenerates a little bit, and once even pointed the knife in his hand, which was meant to protect, at the people who were once protected.

At the end of the story, he thought of death in the endless hesitation, numbness and exhaustion.But his glory prevented him from committing suicide, so...he looked at a village with dead eyes, and walked slowly with a knife still stained with blood.

—he was going to die on the battlefield.

The story ends here abruptly, but it is not difficult to guess what happened to the general afterwards.

Wanting to die, walking into the village with a knife in hand, coupled with the other party's already dead heart, no matter how you think about it, it will not be an ordinary guest.

Gojo Satoru let go of the hand holding the mouse, leaned back on the chair, and expressed his thoughts.

"Although I want to say that dragon slayers will eventually become evil dragons, the battlefield is not even described as an 'evil dragon'."

There is no good or evil on the battlefield between countries. For a country, being weak is the original sin.

"Originally I wanted to use a modern background."

At the mention of this, Qianli couldn't help but sigh.

"But... don't let me use the modern background."

The world consciousness has warned me, what else can I do?It can only be changed to ancient times, the protagonist is changed from a team to a person, and even the ending of the story has become like this.

She really suspected that she didn't seem to bring in any private goods, but in order not to let people praise the protagonist, she made the protagonist do a lot of murderous things in the later stage.

She didn't believe that such a protagonist could make people feel sympathetic!

"But the context of the story is the same, isn't it? From a general praised by everyone to a devil."

Gojo Wu's voice sounded casual, but he compared it with Xia Youjie in his heart.

The conjurer that everyone expected, has now become a curser who kills people like hell and even his own parents. Isn't it the same as the protagonist of the secretary facing the people he once guarded with swords and swords?

Even in the end, the protagonist has a will to die, could it be that Jie him...

Thinking of Xia Youjie, Gojo Wu's thoughts became complicated. He turned his head to look at Qianli, and his eyes, which can be said to be magnificent under the sunglasses, looked at Qianli.

Then, he asked a question.

"Speaking of which, what do you think of the idea of ​​'eliminating all ordinary people and building a world where only magicians exist'?"

Qianli:? ? ?

What the hell?What destroys all ordinary people? ? ?

She looked at Gojo Satoru in disbelief, her face was full of inexplicability, and there were only a few words clearly written in her golden eyes.

Look, fool!

"not me……"

Gojo Satoru raised a hand and sold Xia Youjie without hesitation.

"It's my friend who has the idea."

"Oh……"

Qianli nodded slowly, without even asking why.

"Here I suggest that your friend stop thinking about these unrealistic things. You can ask him who will take the jobs of ordinary people if ordinary people die."

Speaking of this, Qianli's voice was full of disgust.

"Can one or two conjurers take on multiple jobs and be able to shine in various fields? Not to mention other things, medical treatment, agriculture, manufacturing...etc. If there is nothing to eat, he might bring a conjurer to grow Land? If you run out of paper, can you make paper yourself? Or are you going to sit and eat? But I heard that there are very few conjurers in Japan, and it’s probably okay to eat until you die.”

With so few of you, how long will it take to kill all ordinary people?If nuclear bombs are used, do you want to have a picnic in radiation in the future?Or do you want to be a wild man running free in the wilderness?

"Of course, if you conjurers can handle it all, then just pretend I didn't say anything."

God knows, there are so many Two-dimensional villains who want to do similar things, but how many of them succeeded?Properly set up the villain who was defeated by the protagonist halfway or at the end, or the character who was washed clean afterwards.

Qianliyu patted Gojo Satoru on the shoulder earnestly.

"Listen to my advice, this idea has no future."

"I think so."

Gojo Satoru felt that what Qianli said made perfect sense.

Let the conjurer farm the land?I'm afraid it wasn't a group of conjurers who insisted on their own identities that could go crazy.

"How do you think you need to innovate?"

Seemingly just chatting casually, Gojo Satoru rested his elbows on the table and propped his chin with his right hand, looking helpless.

"It's also difficult for me to be caught in the middle. The upper level of the conjurer is too decayed, and there are not enough new seedlings. There are only three or four people in a grade."

"innovation?"

Qianli was a little surprised that the other party said such a topic, she looked at the other party's lazy look strangely, and couldn't help asking.

"are you serious?"

"how?"

He withdrew his hand and straightened his body.

"I'm serious, otherwise I wouldn't be a teacher."

After finishing speaking, he returned to his unreliable appearance in less than three seconds.

Qianli fell silent.

"how to say……"

She frowned in confusion, and began to analyze Gojo Satoru's thoughts.

"If you are planning to gradually replace high-level executives from cultivating newcomers, then you just need to be prepared to wait, maybe ten years, maybe hundreds of years, and you will gradually achieve your goal."

Generally, countries use this kind of policy more frequently. For example, if you look at history, there are also times when several generations of people boil frogs in warm water to make people accept a policy.

The disadvantage is that it is slow, but the advantage is that it is gentle enough.

Gojo Satoru listened, his gaze gradually deepened.

"So you're fast?"

"Anyone can think of it so fast?"

Qianli pouted, and replied calmly.

"Although I'm just a novel writer and I'm not good at this, but the most recent example is in this city, so it's easy to give an example."

"this city?"

Gojo Satoru recalled the famous things in this city, and gradually set his goal on a certain organization.

"Port... Mafia?"

"Yes."

Qianli pulled out another chair and sat on it, giving an example to this little friend who knew his secret.

"When the former leader of the port mafia was still in power, of course I mean the period when he was sick, he no longer recovered his original wisdom and became a moody old man who wanted to live."

"At that time, the situation in Yokohama was turbulent, and it didn't stop until the current leader of the port mafia, Mori Ogai, came to power."

"Mori Ogai was originally the old leader's doctor. Although it was said that the old leader passed the position to him before his death, he actually killed the old leader himself."

"Since then, although the power of the port mafia has not been as good as before, Mori Ogai has indeed played a significant role in the stability of Yokohama."

"The situation in Yokohama became three major mafias, and then broke because of a war."

Hearing this, Wujo Satoru couldn't know what Qianli was talking about.

"Dragon Head War."

"Yes, it's the Dragon Head War."

Qianli leaned on the back of the chair, her voice was so calm that there was no emotion at all, as if what she was talking about was just a passage in a book, not what she had really experienced.

"After that, you also know that the sky-high price inheritance, all the mafia scrambled, and the port mafia stood out and became the only leading mafia in Yokohama."

There was neither sadness nor joy in her eyes, only indifference from the perspective of God.

"For the black forces, the security of a single family is definitely better than the continuous conflicts of a hundred flowers blooming. You see, Mori Ogai has accomplished his goal very well and stood at the top of the night in Yokohama."

So even if he is lolicon, he is scheming and tricks countless people, but no one can deny his "contributions", it's just that he doesn't like him for thousands of miles.

The incident of who asked Oda to die was led by Mori Ogai in order to obtain the government's [power license] :)

"I see."

Gojo Satoru was thoughtful, with an indifference similar to Qianli's in his eyes.

"The Bloody Road?"

"If you want to be fast, the road to change is always bloody."

Qianli smiled.

"Of course, I'm just talking. After all, I can only talk about things like change on paper."

Change is not a simple matter, skills, courage, faith... many conditions come together to find a road to success.

For example, Jae, the leader of the IF line, did a good job. He mobilized himself to take the position of Mori Ogai so that Oda Saku could live, and he has been silently and selflessly contributing behind his back since then.

If he hadn't been too timid to contact Odasaku and attack Odasaku, he might have become a winner in life with a living Odasaku.

"It's really troublesome."

Wujo Wuchang breathed a sigh of relief, but felt suddenly enlightened in his heart.

"It's all changed, so it's not troublesome, do you think it's enough to talk about changes?"

Qianli complained casually.

"So what do you think of my novel? Let me ask you a question, do you feel happy when the protagonist dies?"

Gojo Satoru:? ? ?

Happy?Where is the joy?Shouldn't it be regrettable?

"Hurry up, I want an answer."

Thousands of miles kept urging.

"Yes or no?"

Gojo Satoru looked at Qianli who was urging him, and then turned his head to look at the last page on the computer. He thought about what Qianli said about the conjurers going down the mountain to farm together, and nodded sincerely.

"Very good, the protagonist dies."

Anyway, stories are stories, and reality is different.

After hearing Gojo Satoru's answer, Chisato was very satisfied. After the other party left, she printed out the novel and handed it to Oda Sakunosuke who came back from get off work.

"This is... Qianli, have you finished writing?"

The thick stack was in his hands, and the "Ghost" on the top was also clearly visible. The long-awaited novel appeared in front of him after nearly three months, and Sakunosuke Oda's heart was instantly full of anticipation.

"Odasaku, just take a look at it casually, and tell me after you finish reading."

Chisato, who had just been admitted by Gojo Satoru to "damn" the protagonist, felt that he had a little bit of confidence, and he also had confidence that the protagonist of this "Ghost" would be hated by readers in the future.

"After reading it, you must tell me how you feel about the protagonist,"

Regarding Chisato's instructions, Oda Sakunosuke nodded yes.After agreeing, he decisively went back to the room and turned the pages, doing the same thing as when he was watching "To Live".

—Stay up late and read books.

A few days later, when Chisato asked him if he had finished watching, Oda Sakunosuke said honestly that he had finished.

In fact, I have watched it several times secretly_(:з」∠)_

"The words of the novel "Phantom" seem to me a profound tragedy."

Oda Sakunosuke took out the manuscript that he had turned over repeatedly and put it on the coffee table.

"The protagonist went from glory to depravity, and even everything came from the betrayal and persecution of reality. His depravity is not not tough enough, but an inevitable result."

Not to mention the protagonist, how long can another person last in such a situation?

"In the end, it is natural to want to seek the ending of death. Although he has fallen, everything that he once was a general is still firmly imprisoned on him. A meaningless suicide is a disgrace to a soldier."

……

After expressing many thoughts one by one, Oda Sakunosuke watched Chisato carefully and made his own evaluation.

"It's really well written, Qianli."

The description of this book is better than the previous one. The process of the protagonist's gradual degeneration, the gradual change of thinking, and even the heartache and numbness behind the people's swords and swords, and even the final psychology are extremely vividly portrayed.

Chisato listened to Oda Sakunosuke blowing a lot with a blank face, feeling neither sad nor happy.

Although I don't expect Oda Saku to see anything, and it's normal that things that will happen in the future can't be seen, but why do you feel so wrong after listening to the other party?

What's the difference between this and Oda Sakubuki mimic!

Qian Lifu glanced at the manuscript on the coffee table, then at the serious Oda Sakunosuke, and asked a question that he had always cared about.

"Odasaku, do you think the protagonist should die?"

Say damn it, or my heart is so complicated!Even if I followed my heart and wrote objectively, heroes and so on are real heroes, but you are different!

Oda Sakuya's mimicry is just like a ghost story!

Oda Sakunosuke answered without hesitation.

"The death of the protagonist is inevitable."

Qianli was not at ease, and asked again and again.

"So you also think the protagonist deserves to die, right?"

As long as Oda Sakunosuke also doesn't like the protagonist, it's fine.After all, the protagonist who doesn't even like angels means that other readers won't like it either, so she doesn't have to worry about someone praising the protagonist.

Oda Sakunosuke still gave the same answer.

"Death is best for him."

After all, the protagonist has no hope at all. Just like the title of the book, he is just a ghost dragging the walking dead, a ghost wandering in the battlefield.

For the protagonist, death on the "battlefield" is the best destination, even if the "war" was caused by him alone.

"That's good, that's good, so I can rest assured."

Qianli nodded with great satisfaction, feeling that the book was not written in vain.

Since I also find it annoying, when the mimic comes over, I don’t say anything and react immediately, but it’s good to be vigilant and realize that they have lost their humanity because of the expected [Glorious Death] and can do anything.

"Thousands of miles..."

Just when she was happy, Oda Sakunosuke's question came to her ear again.

"Is it unfair that you are behind...?"

"Of course."

Chiri nodded of course.

"Several places, otherwise, how can people feel that the protagonist deserves to die?"

After inquiring about what the international mercenaries do, she deliberately picked a few ruthless ones, and then switched to the ancient background to find similar things and put them on the protagonist.

Oda Sakunosuke: "..."

Oda Sakunosuke silently recalled the content of "Ghost", his eyes fell into deep thought.

The plot is really reasonable and people can't fault it, the so-called slander...why didn't I notice it?

Could it be that my comprehension is not enough and I didn't see it?It's like the feelings that my colleagues said before... that kind?

In the end, Oda Sakunosuke thought it was his own problem and didn't reveal his doubts.And on the same day, Chisato gave the manuscript to Asakawa Hayato, not forgetting to instruct him.

"Look at it first, if you also hate the protagonist after watching it, then that's it."

Asakawa already knew everything and blew wildly, and when he went back, he immediately forgot to eat and sleep, finished the manuscript in one night, and couldn't wait to call early the next morning to start blowing again.

"Teacher! It's really great!"

While talking, Asakawa Hayato walked up and down the room excitedly.

"Classic! It's another classic! The whole story flows smoothly, and the psychological portrayal of the characters is wonderful. The general's depravity makes people sigh with regret, and the abrupt end of the final ending is the finishing touch!..."

He blew a lot of balabala, but Qianli's heart was just filtered as usual. She listened to such a long speech on the other side, and only paid attention to one sentence in her heart.

"Regret? Asakawa-kun, do you feel sorry?"

She grabbed the word with extreme vigilance.

"Oh? What, what's the matter, teacher?"

Asakawa thought that he accidentally stepped on some thunder, and his legs stopped walking, and he subconsciously stood up straight.

"Yes, is there something wrong? Teacher, to the protagonist..."

"Of course I think he deserves to die."

Qianli asked carefully.

"So I want to ask, Asakawa-kun, do you think the protagonist deserves to die?"

Asakawa Hayato:! ! !

Did the teacher think so?Isn't it a reminder of the horror of people's hearts to regret the fallen heroes? !

Asakawa Hayato, who has long been a fanatic and only fan of Qianli, nodded without hesitation, with a sonorous and powerful voice.

"I think so too, the protagonist deserves to die!"

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Qianli, who had no idea that the editor had directly changed his opinion, finally felt relieved and no longer worried.

Showing it to three people, all three said the protagonist deserves to die. It seems that what I wrote this time is really good, so I don’t need to worry about other readers thinking that the protagonist Mei Qiang speaks for the protagonist!