back to innocence
Chapter 71
Fei Yizhen originally just wanted to write a school love story very well, a heroine who is not good at anything but obsessed with singing, and an outstanding hero who is the only one who sees the beauty of the heroine among thousands of people .
The heroine should be serious and kind, and then feel the friendship, affection and love in the process of growing up, and become more and more brave in the end, stand out in a singing competition or something, and finally become famous overnight - and this should also be the heroine has always been wishes.
Pleasant, sweet, positive, and with a little fantasy that is impossible in reality.
This will be a very smooth and well-regulated novella youth love story.
But when he heard Ye Zhen's words, he hesitated.
Is overnight fame equal to happiness?Is the character of the heroine really suitable for overnight fame?And setting the goal to become a singer, is it really suitable for the heroine's low self-esteem, persistent and serious personality?
Fei Yi couldn't help but substitute Ye Zhen.
——She said: I want to be a primary school music teacher and teach many, many children to sing.Even if there are stupid kids like me, I don't think they are slow learners, and I will teach them seriously.
She will be a teacher who is a bit dull and weak, so she can't control the children, but is loved by many people because of her seriousness and gentleness.
Fei Yizhen put a cross on the original dream of "becoming a singer" and wrote "becoming a music teacher" next to it.
But it’s not good to remove the selling point of the singing competition. Fei Yizhen is used to writing commercial novels. Although it’s not to the point where all the stories are written just for money, he will instinctively think about how to make a story smoother and more It is good-looking and more in line with the tastes of the public, so unless he writes a story with a very strange setting, he will still consider the selling point of ordinary works.
He sat on the swing in the small garden at home, biting his pen and thinking about the plot.
——If you can't place the cause of the competition directly on the heroine, then find another opportunity.After thinking about it for a while, Fei Yi figured out a main line.
After the heroine entered school, she met an "old enemy" in the class.This is a girl who is as proud as a white swan and always likes to raise her neck high.She is beautiful and also likes to sing. She looks down on the introverted heroine and always mocks and bullies her.
But one day when the heroine was warned by girls in other classes to stay away from her seniors, the girl suddenly rushed out and scolded those girls away with sharp words.
She still looks down on the heroine, always pointing fingers at her, mocking and belittling her.But the two of them slowly approached after many occasional superimpositions.
The girl saw the heroine's earnestness and hard work, and was touched by her persistence and strength, and gradually stopped ridiculing her; and the heroine saw the girl's pride and kindness, and she would not feel wronged by her venomous words and wanted to cry up.
The heroine gradually knows the girl's wish - she wants to become a professional singer, and she has been working hard towards this goal, and she has signed up for a singing competition.The girl also knew the heroine's wish, laughed at her for being worthless, and persuaded her to work towards a higher goal with herself, but the heroine just shook her head.
Finally, in the school's top ten singer competition, the girl and the heroine made an agreement that both of them should try their best to decide the winner.
Girls are slightly better in the competition, but the heroine is inherently deficient after all.However, when everyone gave the girl thunderous applause, the girl sat on the ground holding her throat.
The spit out blood startled everyone, the heroine hurried up, and the proud girl burst into tears for the first time in front of people.
——Stage II throat cancer requires surgery, and the success rate is average.
The girl has been singing while enduring the abnormality of her vocal cords. She thought it was just ordinary over-practice, so while enduring the discomfort, she worked hard to maintain her throat, hoping not to miss the game she had been waiting for for a long time.
Reality shattered her fantasy.
On the hospital bed, the girl handed her competition certificate to the heroine.
She didn't say anything, just smiled and looked at the heroine with tears in her eyes.
Fei Yizhen sat on the swing, with a notebook spread out on his knees, looking up at the sky.
His eyes were also slightly sore.
He knocked himself on the head twice, and laughed at himself. It was obviously a campus novel, but he insisted on writing such a plot, and he felt sad after writing it. It was really hopeless.
Then he heard someone say, "What are you doing?"
Fei Yizhen turned his head, but saw Liang Qing was standing at the side, holding the swing rope on his side with one hand.
Fei Yi is really strange: "Aren't you working for your mother?"
Liang Qing looked around and made sure that the bushes blocked most of the sight, and the only unobstructed direction would not be peeping sight, so he suddenly lowered his head and gave Fei Yizhen a quick kiss on the corner of his mouth.
Then he said, "I'll come back and get the papers."
When he walked past the fence, he happened to see Fei Yizhen in a daze, so he couldn't help running over to talk to him.Although only one sentence can be said.
Fei Yizhen said, "Come on!"
Liang Qing responded and ran away.
Fei Yizhen then continued to conceive the plot, conceived of the heroine struggling to recite the lyrics of the girls' competition songs with her clumsy memory, the encouragement of her classmates and teachers, and the operation being the burning candles and candles in the classroom on the eve of the final. The voice of praying for the girl, and the heroine's self-confession after winning the championship.
In the end, the heroine was disqualified from the championship because of an impostor, but she and her classmates were very happy because the girl's operation was successful.
The girl was surrounded by classmates on the hospital bed. At this time, both the heroine and the girl received a letter from the teacher. The record company that originally held the singing competition sent them a message. They watched the video of the two people's competition. Although the two girls committed an illegal act of exchanging identities, because of the girls' hard work and love for singing, the other party expressed their willingness to give them a chance for an interview.
The heroine weighed her abilities and finally rejected the invitation, while the girl who climbed up from the hospital bed finished her rehabilitation, went to the interview bravely, and finally became a singer.
Many years later, the heroine taught the children to sing in the kindergarten classroom, and then the song of her teenage friend was played on the TV. The heroine laughed happily when she listened to the children's words.
A boy imitated his father's tone, and said like an adult: "You idiots, the teacher sings much better than her, okay!?"
The heroine smiled and hugged her and someone's pair of baby bumps and laughed.
——You see, there is no conclusion on who will win and who will lose.
——Our game will continue.
After completing the complete line setting, Fei Yizhen was finally satisfied. He showed a smile, opened his handbag, and began to write the text.
On the other hand, Liang Qing returned to the company with his planning draft, and gave it to the girl in the department who was very gentle to him at least on the surface.
The venomous girl who was in charge of leading him was still picky. After knowing that he had made a plan, she couldn't help but start sneering again: "Do you know what it means to want to run before you learn to walk? It's just like you!"
Liang Qing supported his chin with one hand, and fought back: "Eldest sister, I didn't offend you, did I!? I can't bear the attitude of you wanting to fall in love with me and kill me."
The gentle girl had no choice but to come out immediately to be the peacemaker. Both sides comforted a few words, and finally stopped the quarrel between the two.
Then she opened Liang Qing's proposal.
In fact, she also had the same idea as her friend, and felt that Liang Qing wanted to make a proposal within a few days of his internship, which was really whimsical.However, everyone's personality is different. Although she can't dissuade others from thinking, she doesn't want to offend Liang Qing either.
It's just that when she opened the plan book and read it with a tentative mood, she was slowly attracted by the plan.
To be honest, Liang Qing's plan can be said to be quite crude and simple, but for Liang Qing, a child who has been in this industry for the first time for less than a month, it is strange that it is not simple.
And the more superficial it is, the easier it is for an insider like her to see the bright spots inside.
What is the plan book looking at?Not words, not structure, not talent, just good ideas.None of the others will be icing on the cake.
In Liang Qing's proposal, there is a very good idea.
The gentle girl kept her demeanor as calm and normal as possible, and asked, "Did you show your mother this proposal?"
Liang Qing replied: "No. She is very busy recently."
The gentle girl immediately said: "It's okay, just ask. I found that you don't seem to understand the structure and basic content of a proposal. I'll lend you a professional book later... Liang Qing, what do you think?" vote for this project?"
Liang Qing smiled, and said casually: "How is it possible? I also have self-knowledge. I just want to use this project as a topic and try to do it myself. Are there many questions?"
The gentle girl showed hesitation for a moment, and then said: "It's your first time, it's normal if you don't do well. But I found that you don't seem to understand the basic structure of the proposal, and I have to work now , How about I take a look at it for you when I have time, mark the problematic places, and then you can take a look at it."
Liang Qing raised his head, looked at the gentle girl for a while, and made her feel a little uneasy, and then said: "Okay. Then I will trouble you, Sister Li."
The gentle girl immediately smiled at him, looking very gentle.
She said: "You are very serious. Don't worry, I will take a good look at it."
Liang Qing nodded and said meaningfully: "Well, I believe in Sister Li."
The heroine should be serious and kind, and then feel the friendship, affection and love in the process of growing up, and become more and more brave in the end, stand out in a singing competition or something, and finally become famous overnight - and this should also be the heroine has always been wishes.
Pleasant, sweet, positive, and with a little fantasy that is impossible in reality.
This will be a very smooth and well-regulated novella youth love story.
But when he heard Ye Zhen's words, he hesitated.
Is overnight fame equal to happiness?Is the character of the heroine really suitable for overnight fame?And setting the goal to become a singer, is it really suitable for the heroine's low self-esteem, persistent and serious personality?
Fei Yi couldn't help but substitute Ye Zhen.
——She said: I want to be a primary school music teacher and teach many, many children to sing.Even if there are stupid kids like me, I don't think they are slow learners, and I will teach them seriously.
She will be a teacher who is a bit dull and weak, so she can't control the children, but is loved by many people because of her seriousness and gentleness.
Fei Yizhen put a cross on the original dream of "becoming a singer" and wrote "becoming a music teacher" next to it.
But it’s not good to remove the selling point of the singing competition. Fei Yizhen is used to writing commercial novels. Although it’s not to the point where all the stories are written just for money, he will instinctively think about how to make a story smoother and more It is good-looking and more in line with the tastes of the public, so unless he writes a story with a very strange setting, he will still consider the selling point of ordinary works.
He sat on the swing in the small garden at home, biting his pen and thinking about the plot.
——If you can't place the cause of the competition directly on the heroine, then find another opportunity.After thinking about it for a while, Fei Yi figured out a main line.
After the heroine entered school, she met an "old enemy" in the class.This is a girl who is as proud as a white swan and always likes to raise her neck high.She is beautiful and also likes to sing. She looks down on the introverted heroine and always mocks and bullies her.
But one day when the heroine was warned by girls in other classes to stay away from her seniors, the girl suddenly rushed out and scolded those girls away with sharp words.
She still looks down on the heroine, always pointing fingers at her, mocking and belittling her.But the two of them slowly approached after many occasional superimpositions.
The girl saw the heroine's earnestness and hard work, and was touched by her persistence and strength, and gradually stopped ridiculing her; and the heroine saw the girl's pride and kindness, and she would not feel wronged by her venomous words and wanted to cry up.
The heroine gradually knows the girl's wish - she wants to become a professional singer, and she has been working hard towards this goal, and she has signed up for a singing competition.The girl also knew the heroine's wish, laughed at her for being worthless, and persuaded her to work towards a higher goal with herself, but the heroine just shook her head.
Finally, in the school's top ten singer competition, the girl and the heroine made an agreement that both of them should try their best to decide the winner.
Girls are slightly better in the competition, but the heroine is inherently deficient after all.However, when everyone gave the girl thunderous applause, the girl sat on the ground holding her throat.
The spit out blood startled everyone, the heroine hurried up, and the proud girl burst into tears for the first time in front of people.
——Stage II throat cancer requires surgery, and the success rate is average.
The girl has been singing while enduring the abnormality of her vocal cords. She thought it was just ordinary over-practice, so while enduring the discomfort, she worked hard to maintain her throat, hoping not to miss the game she had been waiting for for a long time.
Reality shattered her fantasy.
On the hospital bed, the girl handed her competition certificate to the heroine.
She didn't say anything, just smiled and looked at the heroine with tears in her eyes.
Fei Yizhen sat on the swing, with a notebook spread out on his knees, looking up at the sky.
His eyes were also slightly sore.
He knocked himself on the head twice, and laughed at himself. It was obviously a campus novel, but he insisted on writing such a plot, and he felt sad after writing it. It was really hopeless.
Then he heard someone say, "What are you doing?"
Fei Yizhen turned his head, but saw Liang Qing was standing at the side, holding the swing rope on his side with one hand.
Fei Yi is really strange: "Aren't you working for your mother?"
Liang Qing looked around and made sure that the bushes blocked most of the sight, and the only unobstructed direction would not be peeping sight, so he suddenly lowered his head and gave Fei Yizhen a quick kiss on the corner of his mouth.
Then he said, "I'll come back and get the papers."
When he walked past the fence, he happened to see Fei Yizhen in a daze, so he couldn't help running over to talk to him.Although only one sentence can be said.
Fei Yizhen said, "Come on!"
Liang Qing responded and ran away.
Fei Yizhen then continued to conceive the plot, conceived of the heroine struggling to recite the lyrics of the girls' competition songs with her clumsy memory, the encouragement of her classmates and teachers, and the operation being the burning candles and candles in the classroom on the eve of the final. The voice of praying for the girl, and the heroine's self-confession after winning the championship.
In the end, the heroine was disqualified from the championship because of an impostor, but she and her classmates were very happy because the girl's operation was successful.
The girl was surrounded by classmates on the hospital bed. At this time, both the heroine and the girl received a letter from the teacher. The record company that originally held the singing competition sent them a message. They watched the video of the two people's competition. Although the two girls committed an illegal act of exchanging identities, because of the girls' hard work and love for singing, the other party expressed their willingness to give them a chance for an interview.
The heroine weighed her abilities and finally rejected the invitation, while the girl who climbed up from the hospital bed finished her rehabilitation, went to the interview bravely, and finally became a singer.
Many years later, the heroine taught the children to sing in the kindergarten classroom, and then the song of her teenage friend was played on the TV. The heroine laughed happily when she listened to the children's words.
A boy imitated his father's tone, and said like an adult: "You idiots, the teacher sings much better than her, okay!?"
The heroine smiled and hugged her and someone's pair of baby bumps and laughed.
——You see, there is no conclusion on who will win and who will lose.
——Our game will continue.
After completing the complete line setting, Fei Yizhen was finally satisfied. He showed a smile, opened his handbag, and began to write the text.
On the other hand, Liang Qing returned to the company with his planning draft, and gave it to the girl in the department who was very gentle to him at least on the surface.
The venomous girl who was in charge of leading him was still picky. After knowing that he had made a plan, she couldn't help but start sneering again: "Do you know what it means to want to run before you learn to walk? It's just like you!"
Liang Qing supported his chin with one hand, and fought back: "Eldest sister, I didn't offend you, did I!? I can't bear the attitude of you wanting to fall in love with me and kill me."
The gentle girl had no choice but to come out immediately to be the peacemaker. Both sides comforted a few words, and finally stopped the quarrel between the two.
Then she opened Liang Qing's proposal.
In fact, she also had the same idea as her friend, and felt that Liang Qing wanted to make a proposal within a few days of his internship, which was really whimsical.However, everyone's personality is different. Although she can't dissuade others from thinking, she doesn't want to offend Liang Qing either.
It's just that when she opened the plan book and read it with a tentative mood, she was slowly attracted by the plan.
To be honest, Liang Qing's plan can be said to be quite crude and simple, but for Liang Qing, a child who has been in this industry for the first time for less than a month, it is strange that it is not simple.
And the more superficial it is, the easier it is for an insider like her to see the bright spots inside.
What is the plan book looking at?Not words, not structure, not talent, just good ideas.None of the others will be icing on the cake.
In Liang Qing's proposal, there is a very good idea.
The gentle girl kept her demeanor as calm and normal as possible, and asked, "Did you show your mother this proposal?"
Liang Qing replied: "No. She is very busy recently."
The gentle girl immediately said: "It's okay, just ask. I found that you don't seem to understand the structure and basic content of a proposal. I'll lend you a professional book later... Liang Qing, what do you think?" vote for this project?"
Liang Qing smiled, and said casually: "How is it possible? I also have self-knowledge. I just want to use this project as a topic and try to do it myself. Are there many questions?"
The gentle girl showed hesitation for a moment, and then said: "It's your first time, it's normal if you don't do well. But I found that you don't seem to understand the basic structure of the proposal, and I have to work now , How about I take a look at it for you when I have time, mark the problematic places, and then you can take a look at it."
Liang Qing raised his head, looked at the gentle girl for a while, and made her feel a little uneasy, and then said: "Okay. Then I will trouble you, Sister Li."
The gentle girl immediately smiled at him, looking very gentle.
She said: "You are very serious. Don't worry, I will take a good look at it."
Liang Qing nodded and said meaningfully: "Well, I believe in Sister Li."
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