Exclusive Rights to an Online Voice Actor
Chapter 55
The door of the study room was closed, but not locked, because Qi Yu was free to turn it when she tried to turn the handle.
There was no sound inside.
"...Shen Yan?" His inquiry was as cautious and patient as the two light knocks on the door panel.
"...Hmm." What I got was a lighter answer than the question itself.
Qi Jin hurriedly and cautiously opened the door, the lights in the room went out at some point, only the cold white light of the computer screen printed on the wall.Even though this was the only light source left, Shen Yan still buried his head in his hands as if he was afraid of light, and sat bent over as motionless as a stone, but his chair was actually facing away from the screen.
Qi Min seemed to realize something, rushed to him in a hurry, held his shoulder and asked in a low voice, "Are you okay?"
"It's okay." As the distance drew closer, he could hear the slight hoarseness in Shen Yan's voice. It should be that he hadn't fully recovered from the choking just now, but at least they could have a normal conversation. Can't take it back. Sorry, give me a little more time."
Is that really the case?Qi Xi frowned.
In fact, I also guessed that Shen Yan might have entered the role too deeply, and it would take a while to calm down.But now he himself can say it, proving that he is conscious and is adjusting himself.Qi Yu breathed a sigh of relief.
"Take your time. I set up the recording for you during the game. It's being recorded. You can listen to it later."
Although I feel very sorry for the last two contestants, but now, apart from being by Shen Yan's side, he has no extra thoughts on other things.
"Come on, give me your hand."
Qi Min first moved the earphones aside for Shen Yan, then lightly touched the hands covering her head, and tried to break them apart.Shen Yan's shoulders trembled slightly, his spine gradually straightened, he raised his head, and obediently followed his movements to put down his hands.Qi Min didn't urge her, she waited patiently until his face was completely separated from his palm, and then slowly took his hand.
Shen Yan's hands were a little wet.
Of course Qi Jin knew what it was, she didn't ask, and she didn't wipe it for him, she just silently leaned over to cover his head with her hands, walked back, and firmly pressed the person in front of her into her arms.
Shen Yan quietly did not respond at first, and leaned against his chest weakly. After a long while, his hands slowly touched Qi Jin's waist, and hugged him soundlessly.
Qi Jin couldn't help laughing, and patted him on the back lightly like coaxing a child, comforting him with her hands and mouth.
"You are a good match, and everyone is touched."
"Really..." Shen Yan muttered to himself, seemingly not seeing the audience's enthusiastic response on the public screen at all.
Qi Min was stunned, and couldn't help laughing: "Why, didn't you turn around and stop looking at the screen after you finished the composition?"
Unexpectedly, Shen Yan's answer surprised him: "I didn't look at the screen from the beginning, the whole process was with my back to the computer, and I just listened to the host's instructions step by step."
"You said you didn't look at the screen from the beginning?" Qi Wei asked again in disbelief.
"Um……"
"What about the lines?" The lines of the characters in the preliminary round were temporarily announced by the official, and they were only posted on the announcement.
"I watched the lines when they first came out, and then the contestants who appeared before me kept repeating them. After listening to them many times, I naturally memorized them." Shen Yan took a breath in his arms and moved his hands from the He loosened his waist, straightened up, frowned and rubbed his face, as if he had calmed down.
Qi Jin looked down at his face.Fortunately, not particularly pale, just looking tired.
"You... still can't do the dubbing while looking at the audience below?" It's no wonder, when there are more than 1 strangers watching, most people will be stiff, let alone Shen Yan.If you don't personally experience the huge psychological pressure, you won't be able to feel it at all.
"Just finish it." Shen Yan whispered, still not looking at the screen.
Hearing this sentence, Qi Jin suddenly wanted to say something, but didn't know how to say it, so he could only stare at Shen Yan silently, until the movement on the screen drew his attention back.
At this time, the last player seemed to have left the field, and the official staff was counting the final total score and ranking.
Next, it should be Pu Yuzhi's turn to comment on the performances of the contestants one by one——Qi Jin thought of this, and suddenly patted Shen Yan on the shoulder lightly, and then, without waiting for the other party's reaction, took the lead in pulling out the earphone plug, and changed it. It is the external playback mode.
The bright and melodious voice of Yujie from the Yangchun song sounded again.
"Dear listeners, contestants, tonight's "Zhu Tian Ling" dubbing competition, the second edition of the preliminary round Xiaoshan Old Man, has finally entered the final stage after more than an hour of exciting competition! I believe everyone has been looking forward to this moment for a long time——Yes , Next, we invite the representative of the judges, Teacher Pu Yuzhi Pu, to comment on the competition just now! Welcome!"
There were cheers on the public screen, and Pu Yuzhi's name was swiped one after another to help.
Pu Yuzhi's red vest boarded the Mai Xu, cleared his throat first, and said "Hello, classmates" habitually, which made the audience giggle.
Unlike the official Longbow, who is gentle and polite, she didn't say any polite words, she got straight to the point, and she had the demeanor of a professor who opened the lecture notes in class and started talking: "I know that many people have objections to the scores I typed out. Ask me why I give some people low marks and others high marks. Don’t worry, let’s start with the character itself—please host to repost the character setting of ‘Old Man Xiaoshan’.”
Hearing this, Yang Chunqu changed the content of the announcement and added the character settings that were officially announced before.
"Okay, as you can see, the character 'Xiaoshan Old Man' is an old man in his 70s and [-]s, and he is the master of the sect. He treats his apprentices as if they are his own children." This is the official saying. " Pu Yuzhi read a passage accordingly.She is a lecturer specializing in broadcasting and hosting. She usually speaks very sonorously and forcefully, which makes people involuntarily lift up their spirits to listen. The content depends on the content, and only when you are fully prepared can you start. Whether you have put your heart into this aspect, people in the industry can tell when they hear it."
Qi Yu was a little ashamed to hear this.
When Shen Yan proposed to read the original "Zhu Tian Ling", he still felt that Shen Yan was too serious, and that as long as there were official character settings, it would be more than enough.
But Pu Yuzhi's words made him feel that what he had done was far from enough, because the description of the characters in the original book is more comprehensive and three-dimensional, and it cannot be replaced by a few simple character introductions.Especially after listening to Shen Yan's Xiaoshan old man, this cognition is even stronger.
I must find time to study the original work carefully, and do my best to cope with the following competitions.
Pu Yuzhi's following words lessened his sense of guilt: "However, considering that most people are amateur dubbing enthusiasts, and it is not easy to finish reading a 50-word novel. Then, let's take a step back and say , you should read the official character settings carefully, right?"
Qi Min nodded, he had actually read this seriously.
"If you just look at the character design of this character, you can also roughly analyze the key points to be expressed: one is the sense of age. I know that most of the players are young guys. It is difficult to match the grandfather, which is relatively restrictive; the second is the sense of age. Identity, this person is not an old man casually passing by on the street, nor is it an ordinary farmer, woodcutter, fisherman, etc., but a master, and he must have the momentum and temperament of a master." Pu Yuzhi said Analyze them one by one without haste, "Then the third and the most important characteristic - loving disciples like children. Please keep the above three points in mind when you listen to my comments later."
At this time, there were a few rattling sounds from the other end of the network cable, similar to the sound of flipping paper. It should be that Pu Yuzhi was looking at something.It is estimated that she, like Shen Yan, recorded the performance of the contestants while listening.
"Then let's start with player number 1. Player number 1..."
She commented one by one according to the number. The style of her comments was similar to Qi Yu's expectation. She was not as gentle as a longbow, but her tongue was sharp and sharp, and every word was bloody, but it was relatively beneficial.If an audience question appeared on the public screen during her speech, she would stop and slowly explain why she made such an evaluation until everyone was convinced.
——Worthy of being a famous teacher.
At this time, Qi Jin slightly lowered his head to look at Shen Yan.
Shen Yan was still sitting quietly, and he was familiar with that concentrated demeanor. He knew that Shen Yan was listening carefully, but he still didn't turn back to face the screen.
"The following is contestant No. 19." When Pu Yuzhi announced the number of the bombshell, those aggrieved fans finally waited for the moment of explosion, and complained on the public screen about the judges' pressure, which caused their idol Second place again.
Pu Yuzhi did not make any response to this, but began to evaluate his overall performance sternly.
"First of all, I must say that this player's sense of age is slightly better than that of everyone in front of him. The grandfather's voice is very accurate. It can be seen that he has put in a certain amount of effort to practice, which is good."
Littleton, here comes a classic twist.
"However, the sense of age is only one of the criteria used to measure whether the voice line is suitable. In addition, the characteristics of the character must also be considered. The character of this character is calm and atmospheric, respectable and amiable. The voice of No. 19 Get up... It's not so much a leader who lives in the mountains and has nothing to do with the world, but a martial arts leader who often gives orders. The momentum is enough, but there is a feeling of floating, more than extroverted, restrained insufficient."
So she gave 3.5 points, which means that she is generally satisfied, but her temperament performance is different.
"In terms of pronunciation, this contestant's skills are better than many of the previous ones. He should have practiced well at ordinary times. He can pronounce words very clearly and standard Mandarin, and some lines will find pauses by himself. It can be seen that he is thinking about rhythm when dubbing. I believe everyone can hear these good things." Pu Yuzhi's approach has always been praiseworthy, and he will not miss it, even when he speaks viciously. "But unfortunately, the 'basic score' and 'Contagion' was disappointing."
As soon as these words came out, the public screen immediately exploded.
Fans rallied and attacked him one after another, defending Uncle Pao.
Audience 1: Our Uncle Pao's voice acting is wonderful, I think it's very contagious!Why give 1.0 points!Why do you say "sorry"!It hurts, okay?Aren't teachers mainly focused on encouraging students?
Audience 2: I don't understand. While saying that most people are amateur voiceovers, you can be considerate, and at the same time use this professional air to evaluate players. Do you dare to be more double-sided? ? (︶︿︶) = convex
Audience 3: Strongly request another person to comment! !Whoever gave a bad review, but asked the one with the lowest score to come up with a review. Isn't this clearly bullying us Uncle Pao? ?
……
Pu Yuzhi was silent for about three seconds, and suddenly said: "Many people don't like to listen to critical opinions, which is normal. I also feel uncomfortable when I eat bitter things. This is a person's instinct. In In the special circumstances of the competition, there are more opportunities to be criticized than usual, from the judges, from the audience, and from the opponents."
The scene calmed down a bit, and she continued to speak very calmly.
"Criticism, you have to listen to it—but you don't have to listen to all kinds of criticisms. Criticism can be divided into benign and vicious. Some people listen to both benign and vicious ones, and take them all to heart, and shrink back after being hit a bit , that’s called low self-esteem; some people don’t listen to both, and continue to go their own way. This kind of sound is called self-confidence, and it’s called conceited. My personal opinion is to distinguish rationally, accept benign criticism, and ignore vicious criticism—this , I think it’s self-encouragement.”
The last sentence is the point.
"I can say without humility that my criticisms are all benign. As for those who are too inferior and conceited, it is probably useless to argue whether these are benign criticisms. They can choose not to listen. On the contrary, sensible people welcome to leave Down."
With a loud slap, the vicious words on the public screen were indeed much cleaner.
If it weren't for the fact that it was not her own account in front of her, and as a CV, it was not appropriate to express public opinions, Qi Yu really had the urge to line up on the public screen and shout "Teacher Pu V5".
"Then I will continue to talk about the 19th." Pu Yuzhi continued the topic just now calmly, "Qin Tuo, who had been wandering for a long time in the first scene, came back, and there was not much emotional change between the few sentences of the master. The emotions of surprise and love are not prominent, giving people a feeling that the apprentice actually goes home every day, and there is nothing special about it. Probably because of the need to control the sense of age, the voice is suppressed, and the tone is not taken into account-this is a lot It’s a common fault of the voice-changing system.”
It can be said that the opening of the show was amazing, which is an advantage.
The disadvantage is that the primary and secondary are reversed, excessively pursuing the sense of age and ignoring the more critical tone fluctuations and emotional expressions-Qi Jin didn't pay attention to this at the time, but now he realizes it after listening to Pu Yuzhi's analysis.
"From the second act, this character began to have a misunderstanding, and it was quite a big misunderstanding." Pu Yuzhi turned the page again. It seems that she recorded it in detail and wrote a lot of words, "Honestly speaking, I think the official tone of voice marking is a bit too simple, but simplicity also has a simple reason, the key point is to examine whether the players have carefully read the settings, and whether they have considered the logic of the tone from the standpoint of the character."
"My first impression on the 19th was that this master had a strong preference for his disciples. He doted on Qin Tuo, looked down on Bai Ke, and even used young disciples to teach big disciples. Just imagine, how can a person who loves his disciples very much Do such things that hurt the self-esteem of the other party? Comparing my heart to my heart, as a mother, what I most hope to see is that my children live in harmony and harmony, rather than seeing them fight and break up the relationship. What's more, with From the perspective of a sect leader, such partiality is not allowed, if he treats the younger generation unfairly, how can he be admired by others? How can the sect be maintained?"
"If everyone reads the original novel, they will find that Bai Ke is actually a person with a tendency to feel inferior, and it is even more impossible for a master who understands his personality flaws to intentionally rub salt into the wound. This is a big mistake. This scene It was wrong from the beginning, so it will become more and more wrong in the future.”
She pointed out the fatal injury of the bombardment, which is the interpretation of the old man Xiaoshan's attitude towards Bai Ke.
Whether it is the second act or the third act, his interpretation has seriously violated the characterization of the original work.
"The last part is the main reason why I played 1.0. I personally think that part of the plot is quite important. It is one of the most sensational scenes and the main point to mobilize the audience's emotions. As I said before, the feeling of No. 19 to me is... Qin Tuo is the apprentice he really raised since he was a child, and Bai Ke was just accepted by him halfway, but anyone who has read the original work knows that it is actually the opposite. The word "Master" has both master and father, and the performance on the 19th is only master Yan. Loving father, there is a feeling of misfortune to teach a heinous traitor, and I wish I could beat him to death with my own hands to purify my master."
Pu Yuzhi's voice sank, and his tone was more severe than before: "There is one more important piece of information--Bai Ke was dead at that time. For an old man over sixty years old, the most painful thing is to send someone with white hair A black-haired person, seeing a child raised by his own hands turned into a box of ashes, no matter how many sins he committed during his lifetime, and he was once angry, he will not be indifferent to a child who is dead and cannot be resurrected, let alone like No. 19 Show cold blood."
It is clear why the score is so low.
This time, even the fans of the bombshell became dumb one by one, as if they had completely disappeared from the screen without a trace.
Reviews continue.
When Pu Yuzhi was about to finish evaluating the performance of contestant No. 27, Shen Yan, who had been silent until now, suddenly asked in a very low voice: "How many points did they... give me? Can I advance?"
It sounded a little hesitant.
Qi Yan couldn't help but stare at him with wide eyes: "You actually took off the earphones without even listening to your total score?"
Shen Yan sighed repressedly: "Sorry, I'm a little scared... I'm afraid the result will disappoint you."
If I knew that No.1 in the total score said this about myself, I don’t know how many contestants would faint with anger——Qi Jin was angry and funny, but all kinds of emotions were intertwined, and the winner in the end was a subtle pain, falling behind. In the bottom of my heart, it also landed on his finger caressing Shen Yan's cheek: "You, you should give yourself a little more confidence."
Lowering his head, he kissed Shen Yan's forehead with some pity, pressed his face gently against that face, and decided to say what he had buried for a long time.
"Actually, I still want to tell you—"
At this moment, Pu Yuzhi interrupted Qi Yu: "Next, let me comment on No. 28, who is also the only player I have scored all four points since the start of the competition."
Shen Yan trembled slightly when he heard the words "all four points", and raised his head in confusion.
Qi Yu greeted him with a faint smile.
"Listen," he said, "now, do you know your score?"
"The voice of No. 28 is actually not distinctive, and it belongs to the type that is relatively unrecognizable, but it sounds very calm and upright. This impression has not changed even in the state of the pseudo-grandpa. This is very rare among voice-changing players."
Pu Yuzhi rarely smiled during the review process.
"For dubbing, the key point is the word 'matching'. This is very different from stage performances, and considering that "Zen Tian Ling" is a game, what players see in the eyes of the game is the characters in the game, and the voice fits the characters. On the basis of the image, the dubbing actor must also hide himself to the greatest extent, and let the person who hears the voice enter the play instead of leaving the play-from this point of view, it is actually a good thing that the voice is not obvious."
For any work that matches the picture, the sound must match the picture, otherwise it will be out of place and people can't listen to it.
This is the biggest difference between film, TV and game dubbing and traditional radio drama.
"On the 28th, your voice is relatively simple and gentle. It makes me think that I can imagine an old man who lives in seclusion in the mountains, wandering in clouds and wild cranes, and indifferent to fame and fortune. This is one of the characteristics of the old man in Xiaoshan. There will be no sudden feeling when you take the role. , and you can make the voice sound natural, unlike many young people who pretend to be 70 or [-] years old and have a blunt feeling of pinching their noses and talking, which is very good.”
"What's even more rare is that while you are firmly controlling your voice, you can also pay attention to adjusting your tone according to the change of the character's identity and standpoint when speaking. This is something that many people often forget. For example, in the first act, you start from The transformation from the master to the master and then to an old father who is eagerly looking forward to the child's return is something that I personally think is handled with great care. The punctuation marks in the official lines are only for reference, and some contestants follow them without considering the speaker. The environment and atmosphere you were in at the time, but I feel that you have taken it into consideration."
Then, she gave an example of what it means to integrate lines into the environment.
"Everyone close your eyes and think about it. In the middle of the night, the old man Xiaoshan suddenly found someone outside the door. If we further relate the background of the original work, it was a period of turmoil in the world. The imperial court sent people everywhere to arrest people in the world. The first reaction of the doorman is that it is normal to be vigilant. But at this moment, he suddenly found that his little apprentice had returned safely. With his identity changed, his mood also changed accordingly, especially the last sentence that seemed to be a complaint. I can hear the deep love... This is the ambivalence of nagging old people like us who always look forward to their children's return, and can't help being angry when they really come back, which is very accurate."
"In this scene, whether it is the pause of the sentence, the priority of the lines, or the small gasp added by myself, people can experience a kind of emotional flow of the character during the listening process."
When Qi Jin heard this, the corners of his mouth could not help but slightly rise.
Yes, he used to have this feeling when playing with Shen Yan—as if he was in the middle of the scene, and he could see the other party's movement and expression clearly, and he could make a reasonable reaction based on this sense of the picture.
"Next, let's talk about your sense of dialogue. I didn't mention this point just now, because there are not many contestants who can embody the sense of dialogue. The so-called sense of dialogue means noticing who you are talking to during the dubbing process, Considering the tone according to the object, it makes people feel that there is such a person even if there is no one who is opposite." Since Shen Yan showed some things that he hadn't talked about before, Pu Yuzhi certainly didn't mind pointing it out to everyone. "During the process of speaking, I felt that your Xiaoshan old man was thinking about the mood of the opponent while speaking, and from your tone, I could guess what kind of character the opponent might be."
"The most obvious one should be the dialogue with Bai Ke in the second act. Many people don't seem to know that Bai Ke has low self-esteem and suspicion, especially when he is compared with his peers. So when I heard your handling, there is a kind of immediate As soon as he lit up, he thought to himself, 'Oh, so someone will pay attention to understanding Bai Ke's feelings'."
"The standout part is the pause after the sentence 'Your Junior Brother'. Several contestants in front of me also paused at that place, but many of them just slowed down their speech and didn't pay attention to lowering their pitch. Please lower your voice At the time, I felt that I could even see Bai Ke standing opposite, and heard the master mention the scene of the change in the face of the younger brother. Your tone change sounds like because you saw his face is not good, you feel guilty, and you use a more tactful The way to finish the sentence. And it is correct to deal with Qin Tuo first and then suppress it. Generally speaking, you should first reproach the junior apprentice with a few words, so that the senior apprentice can feel a little more comfortable after hearing it, and then mention that the junior apprentice is worth learning. This way, it will be easier for him to accept. As for the feeling of a loving father who is worried about the child who is about to go down the mountain...I don’t need to say it, I believe everyone can hear it.”
Pu Yuzhi spoke for a long time, and then started to flip the pages again, which was extremely crisp and pleasant to Qi Jin's ears.
She turned and muttered to herself: "For contestant No. 28, it is actually difficult to follow the example of others to evaluate only the voice, or only evaluate the pronunciation, basic score, appeal, etc., because they have already complemented each other. No. I prefer to comment together, so it’s done scene by scene.”
As she said, the third act followed.
"The third act on the 28th is the most impressive thing I've heard in today's game. As for why I say this, I think everyone knows, otherwise the turnout rate on the spot would not have exceeded 90.00%."
Pu Yuzhi spoke out his thoughts truthfully.She has been silently watching the audience's reaction, but she hasn't spoken it out until now.
"A character must have emotion in order to be alive. However, it is not enough to show this emotion. Whether it can reach the point where the audience can resonate determines the success or failure of the character. I have explained the 'basic points' and 'infection' before. Some students don't quite understand the difference between "power" and "basic score". In fact, the "basic score" is to evaluate whether the contestants can express their emotions. Of course, this kind of emotional expression may be correct or wrong. "Infection" means On the basis of expressing emotions, did it pull the listener in, and did it shock people?"
"The reason why you need correct feelings is because it is in line with psychological logic. Things that are not logical cannot withstand scrutiny and will never impress everyone. But 'correctness' alone is not enough to impress others, and 'truth' is also required." She Slowly said, "Many people think that the voice is the most important thing in the dubbing process. This is true, but the blank space is also very important. Before you start speaking on the 28th, there is a long blank space. At the beginning I also I thought it was a pause between scenes, but the pause was too long, and I suddenly realized that it was expressing the painful feeling of the character who could not speak for a long time. When you speak the first sentence with difficulty, I confirm this even more.”
"As for how you hold your tone, I have already mentioned a lot before, so I don't need to explain them one by one. For all contestants, the lines are the same, and the prompts are the same. It depends on how everyone seeks changes in it. Join To make the lines plump and not pale with one’s own characteristics, these are all aided by non-line things, such as onomatopoeia, laughter, crying, etc.”
"In the end, the wry smile slowly turned into choking, which was not mentioned in the script at all, and the lines that were originally not so prominent, because after adding these, they suddenly became very real. I have been a teacher for so many years , basically the fake crying and the real crying can be heard... I think you should be really choked up in the latter paragraph. You know, it is amazing that the dubbing actor can enter the role in such a short dubbing time You can imagine that you have thought about the role you want to play, experienced the state of mind of the character at that time, and understood his state of mind. There is no way to do these things without putting your heart and soul into it—you did it.”
"Shen Yan," Qi Yan whispered in his ear and repeated, "Shen Yan, you have heard it all. You did it...really, not only did it but also did it very well."
Shen Yan's eyelids moved, and she lowered her head, her hands were tightly clutching the corners of Qi Jin's clothes.
Qi Jin put her hands on his broad back and gently helped him up: "Come on, stand up."
In a dimly lit room, the light projected on the screen is especially precious. However, from Shen Yan’s perspective, he can only see the black shadow cast by himself—so Qi Zhi wanted him to turn back, no longer facing away from the light source, and use His own eyes took a good look at what the audience said of him.
But before that, Pu Yuzhi, who Qi Wei thought had finished his comments, said something surprising again: "Next, I will specifically explain why I deducted one point from contestant No. 28."
There was no sound inside.
"...Shen Yan?" His inquiry was as cautious and patient as the two light knocks on the door panel.
"...Hmm." What I got was a lighter answer than the question itself.
Qi Jin hurriedly and cautiously opened the door, the lights in the room went out at some point, only the cold white light of the computer screen printed on the wall.Even though this was the only light source left, Shen Yan still buried his head in his hands as if he was afraid of light, and sat bent over as motionless as a stone, but his chair was actually facing away from the screen.
Qi Min seemed to realize something, rushed to him in a hurry, held his shoulder and asked in a low voice, "Are you okay?"
"It's okay." As the distance drew closer, he could hear the slight hoarseness in Shen Yan's voice. It should be that he hadn't fully recovered from the choking just now, but at least they could have a normal conversation. Can't take it back. Sorry, give me a little more time."
Is that really the case?Qi Xi frowned.
In fact, I also guessed that Shen Yan might have entered the role too deeply, and it would take a while to calm down.But now he himself can say it, proving that he is conscious and is adjusting himself.Qi Yu breathed a sigh of relief.
"Take your time. I set up the recording for you during the game. It's being recorded. You can listen to it later."
Although I feel very sorry for the last two contestants, but now, apart from being by Shen Yan's side, he has no extra thoughts on other things.
"Come on, give me your hand."
Qi Min first moved the earphones aside for Shen Yan, then lightly touched the hands covering her head, and tried to break them apart.Shen Yan's shoulders trembled slightly, his spine gradually straightened, he raised his head, and obediently followed his movements to put down his hands.Qi Min didn't urge her, she waited patiently until his face was completely separated from his palm, and then slowly took his hand.
Shen Yan's hands were a little wet.
Of course Qi Jin knew what it was, she didn't ask, and she didn't wipe it for him, she just silently leaned over to cover his head with her hands, walked back, and firmly pressed the person in front of her into her arms.
Shen Yan quietly did not respond at first, and leaned against his chest weakly. After a long while, his hands slowly touched Qi Jin's waist, and hugged him soundlessly.
Qi Jin couldn't help laughing, and patted him on the back lightly like coaxing a child, comforting him with her hands and mouth.
"You are a good match, and everyone is touched."
"Really..." Shen Yan muttered to himself, seemingly not seeing the audience's enthusiastic response on the public screen at all.
Qi Min was stunned, and couldn't help laughing: "Why, didn't you turn around and stop looking at the screen after you finished the composition?"
Unexpectedly, Shen Yan's answer surprised him: "I didn't look at the screen from the beginning, the whole process was with my back to the computer, and I just listened to the host's instructions step by step."
"You said you didn't look at the screen from the beginning?" Qi Wei asked again in disbelief.
"Um……"
"What about the lines?" The lines of the characters in the preliminary round were temporarily announced by the official, and they were only posted on the announcement.
"I watched the lines when they first came out, and then the contestants who appeared before me kept repeating them. After listening to them many times, I naturally memorized them." Shen Yan took a breath in his arms and moved his hands from the He loosened his waist, straightened up, frowned and rubbed his face, as if he had calmed down.
Qi Jin looked down at his face.Fortunately, not particularly pale, just looking tired.
"You... still can't do the dubbing while looking at the audience below?" It's no wonder, when there are more than 1 strangers watching, most people will be stiff, let alone Shen Yan.If you don't personally experience the huge psychological pressure, you won't be able to feel it at all.
"Just finish it." Shen Yan whispered, still not looking at the screen.
Hearing this sentence, Qi Jin suddenly wanted to say something, but didn't know how to say it, so he could only stare at Shen Yan silently, until the movement on the screen drew his attention back.
At this time, the last player seemed to have left the field, and the official staff was counting the final total score and ranking.
Next, it should be Pu Yuzhi's turn to comment on the performances of the contestants one by one——Qi Jin thought of this, and suddenly patted Shen Yan on the shoulder lightly, and then, without waiting for the other party's reaction, took the lead in pulling out the earphone plug, and changed it. It is the external playback mode.
The bright and melodious voice of Yujie from the Yangchun song sounded again.
"Dear listeners, contestants, tonight's "Zhu Tian Ling" dubbing competition, the second edition of the preliminary round Xiaoshan Old Man, has finally entered the final stage after more than an hour of exciting competition! I believe everyone has been looking forward to this moment for a long time——Yes , Next, we invite the representative of the judges, Teacher Pu Yuzhi Pu, to comment on the competition just now! Welcome!"
There were cheers on the public screen, and Pu Yuzhi's name was swiped one after another to help.
Pu Yuzhi's red vest boarded the Mai Xu, cleared his throat first, and said "Hello, classmates" habitually, which made the audience giggle.
Unlike the official Longbow, who is gentle and polite, she didn't say any polite words, she got straight to the point, and she had the demeanor of a professor who opened the lecture notes in class and started talking: "I know that many people have objections to the scores I typed out. Ask me why I give some people low marks and others high marks. Don’t worry, let’s start with the character itself—please host to repost the character setting of ‘Old Man Xiaoshan’.”
Hearing this, Yang Chunqu changed the content of the announcement and added the character settings that were officially announced before.
"Okay, as you can see, the character 'Xiaoshan Old Man' is an old man in his 70s and [-]s, and he is the master of the sect. He treats his apprentices as if they are his own children." This is the official saying. " Pu Yuzhi read a passage accordingly.She is a lecturer specializing in broadcasting and hosting. She usually speaks very sonorously and forcefully, which makes people involuntarily lift up their spirits to listen. The content depends on the content, and only when you are fully prepared can you start. Whether you have put your heart into this aspect, people in the industry can tell when they hear it."
Qi Yu was a little ashamed to hear this.
When Shen Yan proposed to read the original "Zhu Tian Ling", he still felt that Shen Yan was too serious, and that as long as there were official character settings, it would be more than enough.
But Pu Yuzhi's words made him feel that what he had done was far from enough, because the description of the characters in the original book is more comprehensive and three-dimensional, and it cannot be replaced by a few simple character introductions.Especially after listening to Shen Yan's Xiaoshan old man, this cognition is even stronger.
I must find time to study the original work carefully, and do my best to cope with the following competitions.
Pu Yuzhi's following words lessened his sense of guilt: "However, considering that most people are amateur dubbing enthusiasts, and it is not easy to finish reading a 50-word novel. Then, let's take a step back and say , you should read the official character settings carefully, right?"
Qi Min nodded, he had actually read this seriously.
"If you just look at the character design of this character, you can also roughly analyze the key points to be expressed: one is the sense of age. I know that most of the players are young guys. It is difficult to match the grandfather, which is relatively restrictive; the second is the sense of age. Identity, this person is not an old man casually passing by on the street, nor is it an ordinary farmer, woodcutter, fisherman, etc., but a master, and he must have the momentum and temperament of a master." Pu Yuzhi said Analyze them one by one without haste, "Then the third and the most important characteristic - loving disciples like children. Please keep the above three points in mind when you listen to my comments later."
At this time, there were a few rattling sounds from the other end of the network cable, similar to the sound of flipping paper. It should be that Pu Yuzhi was looking at something.It is estimated that she, like Shen Yan, recorded the performance of the contestants while listening.
"Then let's start with player number 1. Player number 1..."
She commented one by one according to the number. The style of her comments was similar to Qi Yu's expectation. She was not as gentle as a longbow, but her tongue was sharp and sharp, and every word was bloody, but it was relatively beneficial.If an audience question appeared on the public screen during her speech, she would stop and slowly explain why she made such an evaluation until everyone was convinced.
——Worthy of being a famous teacher.
At this time, Qi Jin slightly lowered his head to look at Shen Yan.
Shen Yan was still sitting quietly, and he was familiar with that concentrated demeanor. He knew that Shen Yan was listening carefully, but he still didn't turn back to face the screen.
"The following is contestant No. 19." When Pu Yuzhi announced the number of the bombshell, those aggrieved fans finally waited for the moment of explosion, and complained on the public screen about the judges' pressure, which caused their idol Second place again.
Pu Yuzhi did not make any response to this, but began to evaluate his overall performance sternly.
"First of all, I must say that this player's sense of age is slightly better than that of everyone in front of him. The grandfather's voice is very accurate. It can be seen that he has put in a certain amount of effort to practice, which is good."
Littleton, here comes a classic twist.
"However, the sense of age is only one of the criteria used to measure whether the voice line is suitable. In addition, the characteristics of the character must also be considered. The character of this character is calm and atmospheric, respectable and amiable. The voice of No. 19 Get up... It's not so much a leader who lives in the mountains and has nothing to do with the world, but a martial arts leader who often gives orders. The momentum is enough, but there is a feeling of floating, more than extroverted, restrained insufficient."
So she gave 3.5 points, which means that she is generally satisfied, but her temperament performance is different.
"In terms of pronunciation, this contestant's skills are better than many of the previous ones. He should have practiced well at ordinary times. He can pronounce words very clearly and standard Mandarin, and some lines will find pauses by himself. It can be seen that he is thinking about rhythm when dubbing. I believe everyone can hear these good things." Pu Yuzhi's approach has always been praiseworthy, and he will not miss it, even when he speaks viciously. "But unfortunately, the 'basic score' and 'Contagion' was disappointing."
As soon as these words came out, the public screen immediately exploded.
Fans rallied and attacked him one after another, defending Uncle Pao.
Audience 1: Our Uncle Pao's voice acting is wonderful, I think it's very contagious!Why give 1.0 points!Why do you say "sorry"!It hurts, okay?Aren't teachers mainly focused on encouraging students?
Audience 2: I don't understand. While saying that most people are amateur voiceovers, you can be considerate, and at the same time use this professional air to evaluate players. Do you dare to be more double-sided? ? (︶︿︶) = convex
Audience 3: Strongly request another person to comment! !Whoever gave a bad review, but asked the one with the lowest score to come up with a review. Isn't this clearly bullying us Uncle Pao? ?
……
Pu Yuzhi was silent for about three seconds, and suddenly said: "Many people don't like to listen to critical opinions, which is normal. I also feel uncomfortable when I eat bitter things. This is a person's instinct. In In the special circumstances of the competition, there are more opportunities to be criticized than usual, from the judges, from the audience, and from the opponents."
The scene calmed down a bit, and she continued to speak very calmly.
"Criticism, you have to listen to it—but you don't have to listen to all kinds of criticisms. Criticism can be divided into benign and vicious. Some people listen to both benign and vicious ones, and take them all to heart, and shrink back after being hit a bit , that’s called low self-esteem; some people don’t listen to both, and continue to go their own way. This kind of sound is called self-confidence, and it’s called conceited. My personal opinion is to distinguish rationally, accept benign criticism, and ignore vicious criticism—this , I think it’s self-encouragement.”
The last sentence is the point.
"I can say without humility that my criticisms are all benign. As for those who are too inferior and conceited, it is probably useless to argue whether these are benign criticisms. They can choose not to listen. On the contrary, sensible people welcome to leave Down."
With a loud slap, the vicious words on the public screen were indeed much cleaner.
If it weren't for the fact that it was not her own account in front of her, and as a CV, it was not appropriate to express public opinions, Qi Yu really had the urge to line up on the public screen and shout "Teacher Pu V5".
"Then I will continue to talk about the 19th." Pu Yuzhi continued the topic just now calmly, "Qin Tuo, who had been wandering for a long time in the first scene, came back, and there was not much emotional change between the few sentences of the master. The emotions of surprise and love are not prominent, giving people a feeling that the apprentice actually goes home every day, and there is nothing special about it. Probably because of the need to control the sense of age, the voice is suppressed, and the tone is not taken into account-this is a lot It’s a common fault of the voice-changing system.”
It can be said that the opening of the show was amazing, which is an advantage.
The disadvantage is that the primary and secondary are reversed, excessively pursuing the sense of age and ignoring the more critical tone fluctuations and emotional expressions-Qi Jin didn't pay attention to this at the time, but now he realizes it after listening to Pu Yuzhi's analysis.
"From the second act, this character began to have a misunderstanding, and it was quite a big misunderstanding." Pu Yuzhi turned the page again. It seems that she recorded it in detail and wrote a lot of words, "Honestly speaking, I think the official tone of voice marking is a bit too simple, but simplicity also has a simple reason, the key point is to examine whether the players have carefully read the settings, and whether they have considered the logic of the tone from the standpoint of the character."
"My first impression on the 19th was that this master had a strong preference for his disciples. He doted on Qin Tuo, looked down on Bai Ke, and even used young disciples to teach big disciples. Just imagine, how can a person who loves his disciples very much Do such things that hurt the self-esteem of the other party? Comparing my heart to my heart, as a mother, what I most hope to see is that my children live in harmony and harmony, rather than seeing them fight and break up the relationship. What's more, with From the perspective of a sect leader, such partiality is not allowed, if he treats the younger generation unfairly, how can he be admired by others? How can the sect be maintained?"
"If everyone reads the original novel, they will find that Bai Ke is actually a person with a tendency to feel inferior, and it is even more impossible for a master who understands his personality flaws to intentionally rub salt into the wound. This is a big mistake. This scene It was wrong from the beginning, so it will become more and more wrong in the future.”
She pointed out the fatal injury of the bombardment, which is the interpretation of the old man Xiaoshan's attitude towards Bai Ke.
Whether it is the second act or the third act, his interpretation has seriously violated the characterization of the original work.
"The last part is the main reason why I played 1.0. I personally think that part of the plot is quite important. It is one of the most sensational scenes and the main point to mobilize the audience's emotions. As I said before, the feeling of No. 19 to me is... Qin Tuo is the apprentice he really raised since he was a child, and Bai Ke was just accepted by him halfway, but anyone who has read the original work knows that it is actually the opposite. The word "Master" has both master and father, and the performance on the 19th is only master Yan. Loving father, there is a feeling of misfortune to teach a heinous traitor, and I wish I could beat him to death with my own hands to purify my master."
Pu Yuzhi's voice sank, and his tone was more severe than before: "There is one more important piece of information--Bai Ke was dead at that time. For an old man over sixty years old, the most painful thing is to send someone with white hair A black-haired person, seeing a child raised by his own hands turned into a box of ashes, no matter how many sins he committed during his lifetime, and he was once angry, he will not be indifferent to a child who is dead and cannot be resurrected, let alone like No. 19 Show cold blood."
It is clear why the score is so low.
This time, even the fans of the bombshell became dumb one by one, as if they had completely disappeared from the screen without a trace.
Reviews continue.
When Pu Yuzhi was about to finish evaluating the performance of contestant No. 27, Shen Yan, who had been silent until now, suddenly asked in a very low voice: "How many points did they... give me? Can I advance?"
It sounded a little hesitant.
Qi Yan couldn't help but stare at him with wide eyes: "You actually took off the earphones without even listening to your total score?"
Shen Yan sighed repressedly: "Sorry, I'm a little scared... I'm afraid the result will disappoint you."
If I knew that No.1 in the total score said this about myself, I don’t know how many contestants would faint with anger——Qi Jin was angry and funny, but all kinds of emotions were intertwined, and the winner in the end was a subtle pain, falling behind. In the bottom of my heart, it also landed on his finger caressing Shen Yan's cheek: "You, you should give yourself a little more confidence."
Lowering his head, he kissed Shen Yan's forehead with some pity, pressed his face gently against that face, and decided to say what he had buried for a long time.
"Actually, I still want to tell you—"
At this moment, Pu Yuzhi interrupted Qi Yu: "Next, let me comment on No. 28, who is also the only player I have scored all four points since the start of the competition."
Shen Yan trembled slightly when he heard the words "all four points", and raised his head in confusion.
Qi Yu greeted him with a faint smile.
"Listen," he said, "now, do you know your score?"
"The voice of No. 28 is actually not distinctive, and it belongs to the type that is relatively unrecognizable, but it sounds very calm and upright. This impression has not changed even in the state of the pseudo-grandpa. This is very rare among voice-changing players."
Pu Yuzhi rarely smiled during the review process.
"For dubbing, the key point is the word 'matching'. This is very different from stage performances, and considering that "Zen Tian Ling" is a game, what players see in the eyes of the game is the characters in the game, and the voice fits the characters. On the basis of the image, the dubbing actor must also hide himself to the greatest extent, and let the person who hears the voice enter the play instead of leaving the play-from this point of view, it is actually a good thing that the voice is not obvious."
For any work that matches the picture, the sound must match the picture, otherwise it will be out of place and people can't listen to it.
This is the biggest difference between film, TV and game dubbing and traditional radio drama.
"On the 28th, your voice is relatively simple and gentle. It makes me think that I can imagine an old man who lives in seclusion in the mountains, wandering in clouds and wild cranes, and indifferent to fame and fortune. This is one of the characteristics of the old man in Xiaoshan. There will be no sudden feeling when you take the role. , and you can make the voice sound natural, unlike many young people who pretend to be 70 or [-] years old and have a blunt feeling of pinching their noses and talking, which is very good.”
"What's even more rare is that while you are firmly controlling your voice, you can also pay attention to adjusting your tone according to the change of the character's identity and standpoint when speaking. This is something that many people often forget. For example, in the first act, you start from The transformation from the master to the master and then to an old father who is eagerly looking forward to the child's return is something that I personally think is handled with great care. The punctuation marks in the official lines are only for reference, and some contestants follow them without considering the speaker. The environment and atmosphere you were in at the time, but I feel that you have taken it into consideration."
Then, she gave an example of what it means to integrate lines into the environment.
"Everyone close your eyes and think about it. In the middle of the night, the old man Xiaoshan suddenly found someone outside the door. If we further relate the background of the original work, it was a period of turmoil in the world. The imperial court sent people everywhere to arrest people in the world. The first reaction of the doorman is that it is normal to be vigilant. But at this moment, he suddenly found that his little apprentice had returned safely. With his identity changed, his mood also changed accordingly, especially the last sentence that seemed to be a complaint. I can hear the deep love... This is the ambivalence of nagging old people like us who always look forward to their children's return, and can't help being angry when they really come back, which is very accurate."
"In this scene, whether it is the pause of the sentence, the priority of the lines, or the small gasp added by myself, people can experience a kind of emotional flow of the character during the listening process."
When Qi Jin heard this, the corners of his mouth could not help but slightly rise.
Yes, he used to have this feeling when playing with Shen Yan—as if he was in the middle of the scene, and he could see the other party's movement and expression clearly, and he could make a reasonable reaction based on this sense of the picture.
"Next, let's talk about your sense of dialogue. I didn't mention this point just now, because there are not many contestants who can embody the sense of dialogue. The so-called sense of dialogue means noticing who you are talking to during the dubbing process, Considering the tone according to the object, it makes people feel that there is such a person even if there is no one who is opposite." Since Shen Yan showed some things that he hadn't talked about before, Pu Yuzhi certainly didn't mind pointing it out to everyone. "During the process of speaking, I felt that your Xiaoshan old man was thinking about the mood of the opponent while speaking, and from your tone, I could guess what kind of character the opponent might be."
"The most obvious one should be the dialogue with Bai Ke in the second act. Many people don't seem to know that Bai Ke has low self-esteem and suspicion, especially when he is compared with his peers. So when I heard your handling, there is a kind of immediate As soon as he lit up, he thought to himself, 'Oh, so someone will pay attention to understanding Bai Ke's feelings'."
"The standout part is the pause after the sentence 'Your Junior Brother'. Several contestants in front of me also paused at that place, but many of them just slowed down their speech and didn't pay attention to lowering their pitch. Please lower your voice At the time, I felt that I could even see Bai Ke standing opposite, and heard the master mention the scene of the change in the face of the younger brother. Your tone change sounds like because you saw his face is not good, you feel guilty, and you use a more tactful The way to finish the sentence. And it is correct to deal with Qin Tuo first and then suppress it. Generally speaking, you should first reproach the junior apprentice with a few words, so that the senior apprentice can feel a little more comfortable after hearing it, and then mention that the junior apprentice is worth learning. This way, it will be easier for him to accept. As for the feeling of a loving father who is worried about the child who is about to go down the mountain...I don’t need to say it, I believe everyone can hear it.”
Pu Yuzhi spoke for a long time, and then started to flip the pages again, which was extremely crisp and pleasant to Qi Jin's ears.
She turned and muttered to herself: "For contestant No. 28, it is actually difficult to follow the example of others to evaluate only the voice, or only evaluate the pronunciation, basic score, appeal, etc., because they have already complemented each other. No. I prefer to comment together, so it’s done scene by scene.”
As she said, the third act followed.
"The third act on the 28th is the most impressive thing I've heard in today's game. As for why I say this, I think everyone knows, otherwise the turnout rate on the spot would not have exceeded 90.00%."
Pu Yuzhi spoke out his thoughts truthfully.She has been silently watching the audience's reaction, but she hasn't spoken it out until now.
"A character must have emotion in order to be alive. However, it is not enough to show this emotion. Whether it can reach the point where the audience can resonate determines the success or failure of the character. I have explained the 'basic points' and 'infection' before. Some students don't quite understand the difference between "power" and "basic score". In fact, the "basic score" is to evaluate whether the contestants can express their emotions. Of course, this kind of emotional expression may be correct or wrong. "Infection" means On the basis of expressing emotions, did it pull the listener in, and did it shock people?"
"The reason why you need correct feelings is because it is in line with psychological logic. Things that are not logical cannot withstand scrutiny and will never impress everyone. But 'correctness' alone is not enough to impress others, and 'truth' is also required." She Slowly said, "Many people think that the voice is the most important thing in the dubbing process. This is true, but the blank space is also very important. Before you start speaking on the 28th, there is a long blank space. At the beginning I also I thought it was a pause between scenes, but the pause was too long, and I suddenly realized that it was expressing the painful feeling of the character who could not speak for a long time. When you speak the first sentence with difficulty, I confirm this even more.”
"As for how you hold your tone, I have already mentioned a lot before, so I don't need to explain them one by one. For all contestants, the lines are the same, and the prompts are the same. It depends on how everyone seeks changes in it. Join To make the lines plump and not pale with one’s own characteristics, these are all aided by non-line things, such as onomatopoeia, laughter, crying, etc.”
"In the end, the wry smile slowly turned into choking, which was not mentioned in the script at all, and the lines that were originally not so prominent, because after adding these, they suddenly became very real. I have been a teacher for so many years , basically the fake crying and the real crying can be heard... I think you should be really choked up in the latter paragraph. You know, it is amazing that the dubbing actor can enter the role in such a short dubbing time You can imagine that you have thought about the role you want to play, experienced the state of mind of the character at that time, and understood his state of mind. There is no way to do these things without putting your heart and soul into it—you did it.”
"Shen Yan," Qi Yan whispered in his ear and repeated, "Shen Yan, you have heard it all. You did it...really, not only did it but also did it very well."
Shen Yan's eyelids moved, and she lowered her head, her hands were tightly clutching the corners of Qi Jin's clothes.
Qi Jin put her hands on his broad back and gently helped him up: "Come on, stand up."
In a dimly lit room, the light projected on the screen is especially precious. However, from Shen Yan’s perspective, he can only see the black shadow cast by himself—so Qi Zhi wanted him to turn back, no longer facing away from the light source, and use His own eyes took a good look at what the audience said of him.
But before that, Pu Yuzhi, who Qi Wei thought had finished his comments, said something surprising again: "Next, I will specifically explain why I deducted one point from contestant No. 28."
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