Pit to be filled [Quick Transmigration]
Chapter 3
His task is to appear as a passer-by at the point where the plot is disconnected, and then promote the development of things so that the story has an ending.
So, let's use an analogy [The male lead puts a sword on the male lead's neck, and the female lead is crying and shouting next to him. ] At this time, the author got stuck.At the bottom of the pit, there are screams of unjust souls, after writing this paragraph, I will go to the pit again.
There are obviously many possibilities for this so-called follow-up.
Kill, don't kill.
Or simply the male protagonist and his partner died together?Or the male protagonist directly blackened and killed the female protagonist and the male supporting role and walked together.
There is always a difference between this ending and the ending.
"The most basic principle is that there is an ending." J Beast recovered from the blow of Ye Jing's interception of his lines, trying to be unpredictable.
"Then you mean, I go to that world and kill all the characters with names and surnames, so that's all right?"
Lowering his head, the lens reflected light, and a rather bloody smile rose from the corner of his mouth.
(O_O) scared silly
"I'm just kidding." He took the petrified little guy into his arms and stroked him. "I don't seem to be such a cruel person? I was the class representative of the ideological and moral class back then."
QAQ was not comforted at all.
"Besides, I'm going to be able to kill them too. You know the abilities of those Two-dimensional people."
This is the truth.
The little guy didn't keep his secrets anymore, and immediately explained everything he could say clearly.
In principle, the bloody brutality just now will definitely be proposed by Harmony, it is indeed possible, and complete annihilation is indeed an ending that any text can achieve.
But if he really does this (assuming he can do it), I am afraid that apart from barely passing the level, he will not be able to get any additional rewards.
After the world is completed, except for the things that can be taken away, the promotion rewards on the abilities fed back by the J beast in the world will be completely gone.
The factors of truly high-quality completion of the final task are as follows.
Conform to or exceed the author's thought, meet or exceed the reader's expectations, follow logic, and perfect the world.
Among them, readers expect that it will be very difficult to score because of the difficulty of adjusting one's opinion.However, Ye Jing's idea of total annihilation is definitely not supported by anyone.And it doesn't conform to the logic of the world's operation.
Unless the article is abused to the limit from the beginning, and the author has a tendency to destroy it all, in that case, Ye Jing doesn't need to do it.On the contrary, if Ye Jing avoided the ending of total destruction set by the author, he might get a lot of points from readers' willingness.
"By the way, about abilities, when your abilities arrive in those worlds, they will be simulated in such a state, the hunter's mind, Naruto's chakra, HP's magic, the tutor's death energy, etc."
"I can't use any of these specific skills, as you said."
In HP, he is a person who has magic power but cannot use magic. In Hunter World, he is a person who has opened his mind but can't even do the basic four skills.The situation is quite weird and needs special concealment.
"However, if you find special treasures of heaven and earth in that world, they can increase your abilities. For example, if you go to the world of martial arts, you will get a Great Returning Pill that increases your inner strength so much, or someone will give you how much you lose. Years of internal strength, your powers have also increased~ although the effect is slightly worse."
That's good news.
Ye Jing nodded to continue.
"The other thing is to cut into time and identity. You are wearing a flesh body, but after passing through, the world will give you an automatic mimicry. Your appearance will be that of an unknown passerby in which world and the protagonist. Scene. You can customize the time travel, it doesn’t matter how many years in advance, but until the author stops changing, you can’t appear in the main plot and can’t modify the plot.”
"However, I can maintain a certain connection with the supporting characters, and then appear as friends at critical moments to promote the development of the plot without appearing abrupt."
"Yes."
Seeing that it was time to say everything, J Beast looked at Ye Jing eagerly, impressing the other party with his cuteness: can he start working immediately.
Ye Jing nodded without pretentiousness, indicating that he could leave at any time.To be honest, although he has been bullying this "god", but as an ordinary person, he can have such a chance, and he is naturally... can't wait.
"Which world."
"Full-time hunter." J Beast obediently handed over the outline of the story. "When you travel to the past, you can have comprehensive data input, or you can read it here."
[Hunter] Dream Butterfly
"..." This name gives people a bad feeling.
"This article is a bit old, and I'm a little anxious. And this article pit is before the final ending, and the task is also very simple, which is very suitable for trying."
Ye Jingjing opened the outline and looked at it, and sighed immediately after reading a few lines. As expected, Mary Su traveled through the text.
Bite the bullet and read the outline, nodded lightly, the little guy was not lying about the difficulty, it was very simple.
"Time, the 287th hunter exam was a year ago."
One year of preparation period, about one year of plot.Two years over there, two days here, just a weekend.
"Yeah? Don't you need to take a closer look?"
"It's the same in the past. I think about it for one day here, and it's enough for me to think about it for a year in Hunter World. And you are right, the task of this article is not difficult."
"Then, have a good trip." The little guy's two round arms rubbed each other, and a ball of light was rubbed out.
Gently pushed into Ye Jing's body, like a ignited flame, the light spread all over the body in an instant, and all the eyes could see was a piece of white light.
The difference from the situation of being implanted with the ability just now is that he was hit by the light ball at this moment, but he didn't feel it at all.
There is not even the legendary dizziness, belly button being pulled and other abnormalities.
Just after the dazzling white light disappeared, the surroundings were already another world.
The moment he opened his eyes, before he had time to take a quick look at his surroundings, the more detailed information of this world was completely stuffed into his mind.
As someone who reads a lot of literature, it's not like he hasn't read this kind of novel.Although looking at it from various angles now, it will contain the word embarrassing.But I really didn't think there was a problem with such a question.
In addition to the original text, the materials sent by the system also have many supplementary details.
An ordinary girl met the god of time travel because she sacrificed her life to save others, and traveled to the world of hunters.
Became a traverser who grew up to be a disaster for the country and the people and has super abilities, and started a life of cheating.
As the daughter of a rich man, she has been dreaming since she was born. She has a mysterious three-star hunter as her teacher, and she met Jin Fulishi in her childhood.He also took care of Xiaojie, promoted the birth of the brigade, and had a lot of business dealings with the beating enemy Hakka, which led to Il fans giving Hisoka apples and cards to him, and by the way, he also saved Kurapika's life and participated in greed The making of the island.
I already have the strength of a three-star hunter, but I have never taken the license test. I will meet everyone for the 287th hunter exam.
I have to say that from the current point of view, there are really too many slots in this article, but from the point of view of the past, the quality of this article is actually not bad.
At that time, the time-traveling novels focused on being cool, that is, to see that the protagonist has no shortcomings and is omnipotent.And all regrets have been revised, and by the way, readers have a strong sense of participation and substitution.
The whole article is written very smoothly, there are almost no logical errors in the plot, and the time and age are carefully considered.Some problems are still FJ's fault. (Aruga, who grew up on Meteor Street, who told me that FJ hadn't finished drawing the ants chapter at that time.)
[Hunter] Dream Butterfly
Pitfalls: In the final confession, the author didn't know to let the heroine choose one of the three beauties, or say "I love you all" to the three beauties.So dragging and dragging is a pit.
The author's end expectation: create a suitable opportunity for them to be together.
Readers fulfill their expectations: be together, be together, confess soon, and get married soon. / I hate why the heroine can hug left and right!Long live one-on-one. /I really want to see all three beauties abandon this Mary Su.
"Oh~" The author expects nothing special, although she has one-to-one ideas, but she is more inclined to NP.
Rather, the reader expects something interesting.
The first wave and the second wave are considered normal opinions, and the third wave should be the later readers.
If it is said that the former Marysu can make people feel substituting, it is normal to have completely opposite comments after watching it a few years later.
This first trial task is quite simple. In the final analysis, isn't it just a relationship issue?
The author who wrote about Mary Suwen is not only very serious about eliminating regrets in the plot, but also works hard on the beautiful love issue.It was originally a question for the heroine to open her mouth, but she was dragged into a pit by the author with obsessive-compulsive disorder.
But now that he has crossed over, to solve this kind of emotional problem, naturally there is no need to entangle the author's "obsessive-compulsive disorder", as long as a reasonable push is enough.
Judging from the plot trend of this world, all he has to do is to appear beside the heroine in a reasonable way, and once he becomes a bosom brother, the problem will be solved, and the wonderful ending is not in his task.
However, being a bosom brother to facilitate a reunion of four people is only the most basic and lazy choice.
Put the story missions aside for a moment and think about it later.He got up and began to observe the surrounding situation where he was.
A typical ordinary small hotel, the decoration style is simple and standard.His current identity is Ye Jing, and his role in the original novel is Ye Jing.
【Diemeng was so excited that he looked at the lively crowd around him and looked up at the fourth tallest tower in the world—the Sky Arena: "Qi Ya, our goal is the 200th floor!"] His role is here—" crowd".
It's really... a very casual setting.
But there are advantages to being casual.
The so-called mimicry is not so harsh.
At least the face that appeared in the mirror was casually taken over from his own.
However, this set of completely unfamiliar clothes and the ID card around him prove that his identity has completely changed now.Being put on a seamless camouflage by this world.
However, there are also disadvantages. The setting is too casual. This body obviously meets all the conditions. It has no ties, no identity, and... no money.
"Next time I have to discuss it with the little guy. It's not okay to be poor and for nothing." With the few steel coins left in his pocket, he didn't have to exchange the price of the nun in his mind, so he knew that the first task now was definitely not to think about it. The route of the task, contact with the plot characters, exercise the ability and so on.
but to make money.
Being starved to death caused the mission to fail and then deducted three years of luck, he will definitely become the most embarrassing traverser in the history of Jinjiang.
The clothes on his body have been changed, but it doesn't matter, even if he wears the original body clothes, the RMB in his pocket will not be used in Hunter World.
However, a careful inspection found a good thing for emergency.
The pendant around his neck is still there.
A solid gold stairwell.
After the price of gold began to drop sharply, ordinary people basically bought a few gold ornaments in their homes, even if it was not for investment.In addition, he took the college entrance examination last year, in order to get a good start, so he had this on his neck.
Now it is urgent.
In Hunter World, it's hard to say anything else, gold is definitely in circulation.
Immediately walked out of the small hotel, followed the memory of the basic information, and ran to a pawn shop.
He belonged to the surrounding "crowd" in the scene six years ago, and now he is still around the Sky Arena.According to this random character design, Ye Jing can now be regarded as a half-headed snake here.It's weird and unfamiliar with everyone, but there are still many places.
There are betting and gambling on the sky arena, and there are naturally countless pawnshops below.
"The workmanship is good, I can give you [-] ring nuns. If you choose to sell, [-] ring nuns."
Treasures costing tens of millions or hundreds of millions really belong to a small number of people. The appearance of such small gold ornaments of tens of thousands of yuan is in line with the normal pawn scale of ordinary people.The clerk didn't bring out something that was too "cheap" at all, so he half-closed his eyes and ignored the answer.
Ye Jing's eyes lit up instantly. According to the price of gold he bought at that time, this 3g gold jewelry should be converted to about [-] nuns.But now that it can be sold for [-] yuan, it seems that there is still some room for turning around.
It is not a gold jewelry with special commemorative significance.Ye Jing decisively chose to sell, and bargained for a price of [-] ring nuns.
Both parties are quite satisfied with each other.
Very well, although [-] ring nuns is not a huge sum of money, it is much better to buy a few steel coins, at least he can continue to live in a small hotel, instead of sleeping on the street to save money.
But [-] precepts are not much more.
He has to stay in Hunter World for at least two years. It is impossible not to make money, and to do tasks, he has to get in touch with the plot characters skillfully. According to the net worth of that Miss Mary Sue, to get in touch with her, he can't compare with Lei Oli is still poor.
In the past, an ordinary college student majoring in foreign languages would have been fooled if he wanted to make money in another world, so he might as well go upstairs to gamble.But now...
Looking at his seemingly unchanged hands, he turned around and walked into the Internet cafe, searching for information about plants.
So, let's use an analogy [The male lead puts a sword on the male lead's neck, and the female lead is crying and shouting next to him. ] At this time, the author got stuck.At the bottom of the pit, there are screams of unjust souls, after writing this paragraph, I will go to the pit again.
There are obviously many possibilities for this so-called follow-up.
Kill, don't kill.
Or simply the male protagonist and his partner died together?Or the male protagonist directly blackened and killed the female protagonist and the male supporting role and walked together.
There is always a difference between this ending and the ending.
"The most basic principle is that there is an ending." J Beast recovered from the blow of Ye Jing's interception of his lines, trying to be unpredictable.
"Then you mean, I go to that world and kill all the characters with names and surnames, so that's all right?"
Lowering his head, the lens reflected light, and a rather bloody smile rose from the corner of his mouth.
(O_O) scared silly
"I'm just kidding." He took the petrified little guy into his arms and stroked him. "I don't seem to be such a cruel person? I was the class representative of the ideological and moral class back then."
QAQ was not comforted at all.
"Besides, I'm going to be able to kill them too. You know the abilities of those Two-dimensional people."
This is the truth.
The little guy didn't keep his secrets anymore, and immediately explained everything he could say clearly.
In principle, the bloody brutality just now will definitely be proposed by Harmony, it is indeed possible, and complete annihilation is indeed an ending that any text can achieve.
But if he really does this (assuming he can do it), I am afraid that apart from barely passing the level, he will not be able to get any additional rewards.
After the world is completed, except for the things that can be taken away, the promotion rewards on the abilities fed back by the J beast in the world will be completely gone.
The factors of truly high-quality completion of the final task are as follows.
Conform to or exceed the author's thought, meet or exceed the reader's expectations, follow logic, and perfect the world.
Among them, readers expect that it will be very difficult to score because of the difficulty of adjusting one's opinion.However, Ye Jing's idea of total annihilation is definitely not supported by anyone.And it doesn't conform to the logic of the world's operation.
Unless the article is abused to the limit from the beginning, and the author has a tendency to destroy it all, in that case, Ye Jing doesn't need to do it.On the contrary, if Ye Jing avoided the ending of total destruction set by the author, he might get a lot of points from readers' willingness.
"By the way, about abilities, when your abilities arrive in those worlds, they will be simulated in such a state, the hunter's mind, Naruto's chakra, HP's magic, the tutor's death energy, etc."
"I can't use any of these specific skills, as you said."
In HP, he is a person who has magic power but cannot use magic. In Hunter World, he is a person who has opened his mind but can't even do the basic four skills.The situation is quite weird and needs special concealment.
"However, if you find special treasures of heaven and earth in that world, they can increase your abilities. For example, if you go to the world of martial arts, you will get a Great Returning Pill that increases your inner strength so much, or someone will give you how much you lose. Years of internal strength, your powers have also increased~ although the effect is slightly worse."
That's good news.
Ye Jing nodded to continue.
"The other thing is to cut into time and identity. You are wearing a flesh body, but after passing through, the world will give you an automatic mimicry. Your appearance will be that of an unknown passerby in which world and the protagonist. Scene. You can customize the time travel, it doesn’t matter how many years in advance, but until the author stops changing, you can’t appear in the main plot and can’t modify the plot.”
"However, I can maintain a certain connection with the supporting characters, and then appear as friends at critical moments to promote the development of the plot without appearing abrupt."
"Yes."
Seeing that it was time to say everything, J Beast looked at Ye Jing eagerly, impressing the other party with his cuteness: can he start working immediately.
Ye Jing nodded without pretentiousness, indicating that he could leave at any time.To be honest, although he has been bullying this "god", but as an ordinary person, he can have such a chance, and he is naturally... can't wait.
"Which world."
"Full-time hunter." J Beast obediently handed over the outline of the story. "When you travel to the past, you can have comprehensive data input, or you can read it here."
[Hunter] Dream Butterfly
"..." This name gives people a bad feeling.
"This article is a bit old, and I'm a little anxious. And this article pit is before the final ending, and the task is also very simple, which is very suitable for trying."
Ye Jingjing opened the outline and looked at it, and sighed immediately after reading a few lines. As expected, Mary Su traveled through the text.
Bite the bullet and read the outline, nodded lightly, the little guy was not lying about the difficulty, it was very simple.
"Time, the 287th hunter exam was a year ago."
One year of preparation period, about one year of plot.Two years over there, two days here, just a weekend.
"Yeah? Don't you need to take a closer look?"
"It's the same in the past. I think about it for one day here, and it's enough for me to think about it for a year in Hunter World. And you are right, the task of this article is not difficult."
"Then, have a good trip." The little guy's two round arms rubbed each other, and a ball of light was rubbed out.
Gently pushed into Ye Jing's body, like a ignited flame, the light spread all over the body in an instant, and all the eyes could see was a piece of white light.
The difference from the situation of being implanted with the ability just now is that he was hit by the light ball at this moment, but he didn't feel it at all.
There is not even the legendary dizziness, belly button being pulled and other abnormalities.
Just after the dazzling white light disappeared, the surroundings were already another world.
The moment he opened his eyes, before he had time to take a quick look at his surroundings, the more detailed information of this world was completely stuffed into his mind.
As someone who reads a lot of literature, it's not like he hasn't read this kind of novel.Although looking at it from various angles now, it will contain the word embarrassing.But I really didn't think there was a problem with such a question.
In addition to the original text, the materials sent by the system also have many supplementary details.
An ordinary girl met the god of time travel because she sacrificed her life to save others, and traveled to the world of hunters.
Became a traverser who grew up to be a disaster for the country and the people and has super abilities, and started a life of cheating.
As the daughter of a rich man, she has been dreaming since she was born. She has a mysterious three-star hunter as her teacher, and she met Jin Fulishi in her childhood.He also took care of Xiaojie, promoted the birth of the brigade, and had a lot of business dealings with the beating enemy Hakka, which led to Il fans giving Hisoka apples and cards to him, and by the way, he also saved Kurapika's life and participated in greed The making of the island.
I already have the strength of a three-star hunter, but I have never taken the license test. I will meet everyone for the 287th hunter exam.
I have to say that from the current point of view, there are really too many slots in this article, but from the point of view of the past, the quality of this article is actually not bad.
At that time, the time-traveling novels focused on being cool, that is, to see that the protagonist has no shortcomings and is omnipotent.And all regrets have been revised, and by the way, readers have a strong sense of participation and substitution.
The whole article is written very smoothly, there are almost no logical errors in the plot, and the time and age are carefully considered.Some problems are still FJ's fault. (Aruga, who grew up on Meteor Street, who told me that FJ hadn't finished drawing the ants chapter at that time.)
[Hunter] Dream Butterfly
Pitfalls: In the final confession, the author didn't know to let the heroine choose one of the three beauties, or say "I love you all" to the three beauties.So dragging and dragging is a pit.
The author's end expectation: create a suitable opportunity for them to be together.
Readers fulfill their expectations: be together, be together, confess soon, and get married soon. / I hate why the heroine can hug left and right!Long live one-on-one. /I really want to see all three beauties abandon this Mary Su.
"Oh~" The author expects nothing special, although she has one-to-one ideas, but she is more inclined to NP.
Rather, the reader expects something interesting.
The first wave and the second wave are considered normal opinions, and the third wave should be the later readers.
If it is said that the former Marysu can make people feel substituting, it is normal to have completely opposite comments after watching it a few years later.
This first trial task is quite simple. In the final analysis, isn't it just a relationship issue?
The author who wrote about Mary Suwen is not only very serious about eliminating regrets in the plot, but also works hard on the beautiful love issue.It was originally a question for the heroine to open her mouth, but she was dragged into a pit by the author with obsessive-compulsive disorder.
But now that he has crossed over, to solve this kind of emotional problem, naturally there is no need to entangle the author's "obsessive-compulsive disorder", as long as a reasonable push is enough.
Judging from the plot trend of this world, all he has to do is to appear beside the heroine in a reasonable way, and once he becomes a bosom brother, the problem will be solved, and the wonderful ending is not in his task.
However, being a bosom brother to facilitate a reunion of four people is only the most basic and lazy choice.
Put the story missions aside for a moment and think about it later.He got up and began to observe the surrounding situation where he was.
A typical ordinary small hotel, the decoration style is simple and standard.His current identity is Ye Jing, and his role in the original novel is Ye Jing.
【Diemeng was so excited that he looked at the lively crowd around him and looked up at the fourth tallest tower in the world—the Sky Arena: "Qi Ya, our goal is the 200th floor!"] His role is here—" crowd".
It's really... a very casual setting.
But there are advantages to being casual.
The so-called mimicry is not so harsh.
At least the face that appeared in the mirror was casually taken over from his own.
However, this set of completely unfamiliar clothes and the ID card around him prove that his identity has completely changed now.Being put on a seamless camouflage by this world.
However, there are also disadvantages. The setting is too casual. This body obviously meets all the conditions. It has no ties, no identity, and... no money.
"Next time I have to discuss it with the little guy. It's not okay to be poor and for nothing." With the few steel coins left in his pocket, he didn't have to exchange the price of the nun in his mind, so he knew that the first task now was definitely not to think about it. The route of the task, contact with the plot characters, exercise the ability and so on.
but to make money.
Being starved to death caused the mission to fail and then deducted three years of luck, he will definitely become the most embarrassing traverser in the history of Jinjiang.
The clothes on his body have been changed, but it doesn't matter, even if he wears the original body clothes, the RMB in his pocket will not be used in Hunter World.
However, a careful inspection found a good thing for emergency.
The pendant around his neck is still there.
A solid gold stairwell.
After the price of gold began to drop sharply, ordinary people basically bought a few gold ornaments in their homes, even if it was not for investment.In addition, he took the college entrance examination last year, in order to get a good start, so he had this on his neck.
Now it is urgent.
In Hunter World, it's hard to say anything else, gold is definitely in circulation.
Immediately walked out of the small hotel, followed the memory of the basic information, and ran to a pawn shop.
He belonged to the surrounding "crowd" in the scene six years ago, and now he is still around the Sky Arena.According to this random character design, Ye Jing can now be regarded as a half-headed snake here.It's weird and unfamiliar with everyone, but there are still many places.
There are betting and gambling on the sky arena, and there are naturally countless pawnshops below.
"The workmanship is good, I can give you [-] ring nuns. If you choose to sell, [-] ring nuns."
Treasures costing tens of millions or hundreds of millions really belong to a small number of people. The appearance of such small gold ornaments of tens of thousands of yuan is in line with the normal pawn scale of ordinary people.The clerk didn't bring out something that was too "cheap" at all, so he half-closed his eyes and ignored the answer.
Ye Jing's eyes lit up instantly. According to the price of gold he bought at that time, this 3g gold jewelry should be converted to about [-] nuns.But now that it can be sold for [-] yuan, it seems that there is still some room for turning around.
It is not a gold jewelry with special commemorative significance.Ye Jing decisively chose to sell, and bargained for a price of [-] ring nuns.
Both parties are quite satisfied with each other.
Very well, although [-] ring nuns is not a huge sum of money, it is much better to buy a few steel coins, at least he can continue to live in a small hotel, instead of sleeping on the street to save money.
But [-] precepts are not much more.
He has to stay in Hunter World for at least two years. It is impossible not to make money, and to do tasks, he has to get in touch with the plot characters skillfully. According to the net worth of that Miss Mary Sue, to get in touch with her, he can't compare with Lei Oli is still poor.
In the past, an ordinary college student majoring in foreign languages would have been fooled if he wanted to make money in another world, so he might as well go upstairs to gamble.But now...
Looking at his seemingly unchanged hands, he turned around and walked into the Internet cafe, searching for information about plants.
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