Seventh-rate Writer [Interstellar]

The number of words required for the stage script is not many. According to the amount of information in his text, tens of thousands of words are enough for a 10-minute stage play.Li Lesheng also just found out that the orientation party is not just for one night, but lasts for several nights, giving students of each department sufficient time to perform, and even students who did not go to the scene can watch the live broadcast on the campus network or recording.

Li Lesheng revised and corrected it, and finished writing [-] words.After finishing writing, he looked at the essay he had written, and felt that he was not satisfied. He corrected it and handed it over to the head teacher's mailbox.

In this story of revenge, the Viscount found Coney Island after going out to sea, hid in the island to observe, saw Mrs. Gilly, the dance teacher in the former troupe, and her daughter Meg, and also found the whereabouts of the Phantom.With never-before-seen patience and perseverance, he set up traps to catch the Phantom, but he heard the quarrel between Mrs. Gilly and Meg, and knew that the Phantom actually wanted to invite Christine to the troupe's first performance.

The Viscount was furious, knowing that something must have happened between the Phantom and his wife.He had previously falsely claimed to his family that he was going out to sea for business, but he didn’t go back when he heard the news. He waited quietly in Coney Island. He waited for Christine and Gustav to come, and he also waited for their meeting with the Phantom. Lurking up, I heard the duet of Phantom and Christine, and listened to their singing with affection to describe how they were so passionate and lingering that night.

He was furious, but thought of Gustav.Counting the time, Gustav must be the product of Christine's derailment, but Gustav respects his nominal father so much, and this child is not as disgusting as his father, and he is still a little man now , the Viscount decided to tell Gustav everything.

No no, this is not just his kindness, it is also a part of revenge.The Viscount's family was in decline, and the main reason for his poor management was the death of his elder brother, Earl Philip.His older brother Philip, who had been pampering him, was killed by the phantom before his much-loved brother could learn the family business.The Viscount often missed his brother and mentioned it to Gustav many times, but he didn't say the cause of death.

Gustav also received authentic aristocratic education and the most traditional gentleman education.In the ingrained concept, no matter what, he cannot accept that his mother is unclean, cheated before marriage and concealed everything and married a nobleman, and his father was a paranoid and crazy murderer who killed his uncle. , and he himself could not accept that he was the product of the combination of the two, and would rather nothing had happened, and he was still the Viscount's son.

In the original play, Gustav was touched by what his mother said before his death that he is your father, you have to accept him, and after the tragedy of his mother’s death, he accepted the Phantom. The three of Stave stand together in a "harmonious" picture. Gustav hugs the Phantom for a long time and sings "Love will never end". The Viscount even has only sadness but no anger. Is this reasonable!Which man can bear it?

So here, what Li Lesheng wrote was to let the Viscount tell Gustav the truth before he was brainwashed, and Gustav, who knew everything, naturally refused to accept all this.He confessed to the viscount that he would never leave the viscount, and said that he could not do anything to his parents due to blood relationship, and asked the viscount to take him to leave Coney Island immediately.

But how could the viscount be so cheap to that pair of dogs and men?In fact, the Viscount himself, even though he hated them so much, was unable to impose substantive punishment due to moral education.All he could think of was to bring Gustav to Christine and Phantom, saying that we already knew everything, and Gustav's facial expression had already shown his attitude.

So the ending is like this, Christine was tortured by guilt and conscience, stopped singing, and hid in the monastery, but the phantom disappeared, no one knew if he was dead, and the Viscount took Gustav to live again.

That's right, the story is over, isn't it actually very flat?Li Lesheng should have written better. If this was his original story, then he would have written that Christine committed suicide and the Viscount killed the Phantom.But this is a fan after all, and Li Lesheng can't be so cruel to the two classic characters of Christine and Phantom. In his memory, Phantom is still a classic tragic character who finally gave up everything to help others, and Christine is A good girl full of courage to pursue love, so I can only do this kind of fan treatment for the sequel written by Weber himself.

He handed it in to the teacher's mailbox that day, and the teacher had already replied to him the next day.

"It's anticlimactic, not cruel enough."

It's just eight words, but it says everything.

In fact, this directly explains the fatal flaw of most of Li Lesheng's writing.But the problem is that writing essays is not a science question, and even if you know where the shortcomings are, it is difficult to correct them.This is probably like a person with dark cooking potential saying that he understands every step of the recipe and decides to follow every step exactly, but in the end he still makes dark cooking.

But even so, Li Lesheng still wrote down these eight words, and set them as the screensaver of the computer in the small black room.These eight characters actually have many hidden meanings, including the setting of climaxes and twists and turns, the arrangement of plots and so on.He stared at these eight words for a moment, then suddenly smiled, um, very good, just in time to practice in "Dragon Knights Are Like Dogs".

Li Lesheng rubbed his eyes.Obviously not real eyes staring at the screen, but after writing a script in one go, Li Lesheng is still very tired, even looking at the computer is annoying.He plans to go out to have fun, by the way, he can visit the departments in the next zero book!

He curled up on the sofa and played a small game for a while, Dynasty Edition 2048, his favorite game before, but this game is too addictive, as long as he opens the game page, he will play endlessly until his fingers twitch The pain is beyond words.Before his accidental death in his previous life, the author of the green chicken station also developed the harem version 2048 and the green chicken author level 2048. I don’t know if there is a small suffocation level added.

When Ling Shuzhi came back, Li Lesheng struggled unknowingly.Because there is no such game in Interstellar, he compiled it from memory, and he has only played it for a few days, and he is still enthusiastic.The relationship between Ling Shuzhi and Li Lesheng has improved a lot in the past few days. When he saw this, he came up to look at it. Seeing that it was such a mentally handicapped game, he turned his head in disinterest, but still sat beside Li Lesheng, not talking, sitting The special plate is positive.

And Li Lesheng died here in the "Republic of China" again, and only read one of the zero books.He understood that he was waiting to be fed, but if he didn't give it, Ling Shuzhi wouldn't ask for it.So good!After playing a few more games of "Disappear in a Second", he opened his mouth and asked, "Zero Shuzhi, can you take me to see your academy?"

"Okay. Why are you going to our academy? It's dangerous for you."

The zero book is extremely serious.He is very aware of this roommate's small body, which can be swallowed up in a second in every combat department, like a snack eaten by him.He belongs to the Mecha Combat Department. This department is the same as other combat departments such as the Mecha Academy. They are the reserve force of the military. It can be said to be a reduced version of the military academy. There are always signals of hunger and thirst for fighting and seeing blood.

"I'm going to accumulate materials. You know I'm from the Faculty of Letters. I'm very curious about your college. It would be great if I have the opportunity to write the materials into novels."

Ling Shuzhi suddenly paused, and said thoughtfully:

"That's right, you are from the Department of Literature...you all write according to your own thoughts, and you can write whatever you want?"

Why does it feel like I was shot ＿(:3」∠)＿

Li Lesheng was very serious, opened his eyes and said nonsense:

"How could it be? Literature serves the masses. Of course, writing can't be done on your own will. Of course, readers' opinions must be consulted."

"Oh, then your writing must be very good, can I read your writing?"

...Let this foodie in Zero Book read a text about foodies destroying the world, is the food all heavy?But don't, he's not that brave.

"Haha, you won't be interested in the articles I write. What I write are pure literature like poetry and prose, thinking about the philosophy of life."

"Forget it. Let's go, I'll take you to see it."

If you really want to leave, you should make an appointment first?However, Li Lesheng was still happy, full of expectations, and quickly followed Ling Shuzhi out of the house.

It was already night at this time.Li Lesheng originally wanted to listen to them and watch their training, but the reason why he was brought out by Zero Book must be because they also have a project at night.

Sure enough, Ling Shuzhi took Li Lesheng directly to the training ground of the Mecha Combat Department, but at the moment it was brightly lit, and a group of men, women, or students of other genders with obvious muscle groups were still training, and Li Lesheng also found a familiar person, It was Tang De.

The students are probably in class at this time.I saw Tang De sternly correcting the students' movements, beating and beating, which was much harsher than during military training, making a group of students look bad.

Even Ling Shuzhi shrank his head, apparently he did not expect that the most terrifying teacher Tang De would be on the field at this time, grabbed Li Lesheng, and turned around to leave.

"and many more!"

In fact, Tang De, who had spotted Li Lesheng as soon as he came over, hurriedly scolded the two of them, frowning, walked towards them unswervingly, first glanced at Ling Shuzhi and held Li Lesheng's hand.With a shake of Zero Book, he let go of his hand naturally.