During the broadcast of "One Day and One Night", Qiao Nian was also discussing Zhang Xi's matter with Yue Jie in Yue Jie's room.

"You came."

When Yue Jie came to open the door, he was still holding the script in his hand.

There were a lot of outlines on the script with pens of different colors. When talking to Qiao Nian, Yue Jie's brows were still frowning subconsciously.Yue Jie also served as the screenwriter of this play, he wrote the script, and of course he changed it himself.

He's clearly been bothered by the script for a while.

"Well, are you worried about Zhang Xi?"

Yue Jie sighed, he turned slightly to make way for Qiao Nian, and then motioned for Qiao Nian to sit down. He poured a glass of water and put it in front of Qiao Nian, "Yes, I'm changing the script, but there's always a feeling that I can't start. a feeling of."

"May I see it?"

Yue Jie handed the script in his hand to Qiao Nian, "It's a bit messy, I just marked some problems on it and made some changes, but I don't feel any better."

Qiao Nian nodded slightly, and he took over the script.

Qiao Nian looked at Yue Jie's modified script, and he quickly saw the problem. Yue Jie's current modification was just a different method, and he didn't fundamentally solve the problem.

This drama is Yue Jie's debut work. Yue Jie has just stepped into this circle. He still has very little experience, and many things can only be understood by experience.

"I'll change it with you." Qiao Nian frowned at Yue Jie.

"Did you see my problem?" Yue Jie was taken aback for a moment, and looked at Qiao Nian with interest.

As early as he and Qiao Nian became WeChat friends, and Qiao Nian was able to point out his problems to the point, he felt that Qiao Nian was a very difficult person.

"It's not a problem, but what we see will be different from different angles." Qiao Nian shook his head.

When Yue Jie wrote the script, it was too simplistic and literary. This kind of abstract and fantasy description will bring difficulty to the actors in performance.

This is very similar to Yue Jie's sentence "He was anxious to the extreme, but he didn't dare to show it, so he could only pretend to be calm".

This is a kind of words written from the perspective of God, which simply expresses the emotions of the task characters.

But for an actor, it is difficult to express this emotion.Whether it is anxious or calm, how to pretend to be calm, where is the speed, and it is enough to show calm.

This is actually not a big problem.

Experienced actors will find ways to add some details to express this emotion, for example, they will choose to clenched their palms, or do things that the character should not do with a deadpan expression.

But some people are so into scripts that they don't know how to add details properly.

The problem with Yue Jie's current script is essentially the same as this problem, but it will be more complicated. His handling of words and description of details does not make it easy for the actors to feel where the degree should be.

Qiao Nian's eyes lowered slightly. He had just watched Zhang Xi's performance. His acting skills were pretty good, but there was a serious problem.

All of Zhang Xi's performances are performed according to the description given in the script. He will perform as the script writes. If there is no description in the script, he will act a little stiff and unnatural.

What Zhang Xi needed was a very detailed script. He didn't understand the meaning of these details, so he felt that there was something wrong with the male lead.

Qiao Nian told Yue Jie the reason.

"So that's the case." Yue Jie frowned slightly.

"Well, so let me change it with you. From my angle, it will be easier to see the problem." And he has been filming scenes for so many years, so he can grasp how to add details.

"It's really troublesome for you." Yue Jie could only say this in the end, he had too little experience, even if he understood the reason, he couldn't make it perfect.

Yue Jie's eyes looking at Qiao Nian became much more complicated, revealing an extremely hard-to-detect sincerity.

If he just regarded Qiao Nian as a promising actor before, and only maintained a working relationship, then it is different now.

Yue Jie began to treat Qiao Nian as a bosom friend.

"By the way, didn't you say that Zhang Xi gave you some game settings?" Qiao Nian looked up at Yue Jie as if he suddenly thought of something.

This is the real purpose of his coming.

Yue Jie's eyes changed slightly, and he pretended to reply naturally, "It's nothing, these settings are no longer needed. The problem with the hero's settings has been solved, and there is no need to use these to highlight the game. And this game The settings are so-so, and it’s not good to add them in.”

Yue Jie's body froze suddenly, because he found that Qiao Nian was looking at him very seriously.

The other party seemed to want to see through his heart.

Because they were looking at each other and they were very close, Yue Jie could clearly see himself in Qiao Nian's eyes.

Good looking eyes.

Time seemed to stand still suddenly, it seemed that because he had lied, Yue Jie felt a little uncomfortable.

"you are lying."

Yue Jie heard Qiao Nian's every word, as if there was some condemnation in his voice.

He suddenly felt more guilty, but soon, Yue Jie found that Qiao Nian looked away, and his uneasiness disappeared.

Qiao Nian continued to lower his head to revise the script, "You are not good at lying."

Yue Jie finally came back to his senses, he slightly pursed his lower lip.

He is indeed lying, Zhang Xi gave him an excellent game setting, but——

"Is it because I don't have any role in these games, and because of the number of episodes, these newly added games will replace some games in the original plot, and my role will become less." Qiao Young added .

"how do you know?"

Yue Jie was stunned for a moment, and the next second, he saw Qiao Nian take out a piece of paper he had clipped in the script and wave it around.

"You wrote it on it."

Yue Jie felt annoyed for a while, he tried to explain, but found that Qiao Nian frowned at him, "Can you show me those settings?"

Yue Jie was taken aback.

He didn't expect that Qiao Nian would be willing to watch those settings even though he knew that his role in the role would be reduced.

Soon, Yue Jie became even more startled.

Because he found that after Qiao Nian took over these game settings, he looked at them intently for a long time, and then nodded, "It's really good, it will be very exciting to add them in, let's add them in."

Qiao Nian actually agreed!

And even bent his eyebrows at him!

Yue Jie looked at Qiao Nian in front of him.

This was the first time he looked at the other party so seriously, he especially wanted to know why the other party was so stupid, but Yue Jie quickly withdrew his gaze hastily.

Qiao Nian was so good-looking, his mind might go blank after looking at it any further.

"Why?" Yue Jie asked.

"No reason, these additions will indeed make the work better and more exciting."

Yue Jie's lips pursed even harder, and the reason was too simple.

It was so simple that he felt a little uncomfortable.

Yue Jie looked at Qiao Nian in front of him again, and there was some distress in his eyes.

How could anyone be so stupid.

Qiao Nian didn't feel anything. After passing through his previous life, he didn't care about the role anymore.It doesn't matter if there are many roles or not, the character design is what impresses the audience the most, those deleted roles will not have any influence on his characters.

And hunger marketing, deleting some may also be a good thing.

"It's very late, I'll take this script back and change it first, and I'll give it to you tomorrow morning." Qiao Nian sorted out the things in front of him, "Why don't I add these games for you, too? It’s already a complete story, it just needs to be transitioned to make them more natural.”

"...Okay." Some distressed and complicated flashed in Yue Jie's eyes.

Qiao Nian nodded, but before he left, he said again, "There is one more thing, I think Zhang Xi still has some problems, simply changing the script and perfecting the details is not enough, some things have to be felt by himself. I I think tomorrow I can shoot the scenes that were originally scheduled to be filmed today, is that okay?"

"it is good."

"When I shoot tomorrow, I may not follow the script. I will change the lines and settings. Can you not stop? Even if Zhang Xi reacts." Qiao Nian thought for a while and continued to add .

"can."

Qiao Nian asked hesitantly as he pushed the door, "I helped you today, can you help me in a few days?"

Yue Jie was stunned for a moment, then nodded, "...OK."

What Yue Jie himself didn't realize was that he added some anticipation and pampering when he said this sentence.

Qiao Nian walked out after bending his eyebrows at Yue Jie again.

He closed the door and left Yue Jie's room.

What he didn't notice was that some sarcasm and darkness flashed in Zhang Xi's eyes who had been standing in the corner.

Zhang Xi walked back to his room with a sullen face.

Heh, come to the director's room at night, and stay so late, just think about it a little, and you can guess what they did.

***

Qiao Nian didn't go back to his room directly. He went downstairs and walked out of the hotel. He wanted to meet the hostess and ask if she really wanted to enter the entertainment industry.

Although this is the case in the plot, you still have to be cautious and don't do bad things with good intentions.

The help he mentioned to Yue Jie just now refers to the matter of the heroine.

The author has something to say: add updates, it may not be updated at 9 o’clock tomorrow morning, but it’s just possible, if I don’t accidentally fall asleep, I will update on time, at the latest at 21:[-]~

.感谢在2020-08-1309:00:00~2020-08-1321:00:12期间为我投出霸王票或灌溉营养液的小天使哦~

Thanks to the little angel who threw the grenade: 1 Qingqing bamboo leaf;

Thanks to the little angels who threw the landmines: Qingqing Zhuye, Xu Zhizhou, the one who was forced to study on the (N)th day;

Thanks to the little angels who irrigate the nutrient solution: 10 bottles of looking up at the starry sky; 3 bottles of mutton kebabs; 1 bottle of Lin Momo and Leiyulianhua;

Thank you very much for your support, I will continue to work hard!

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