After Bai Yueguang died, I soared

Chapter 89 The Final Chapter

With a longing for the whole world, I was timid at the beginning, but became more and more enthusiastic; when the tiny ice edges met by chance, it seemed to invite my partners to watch these giants, and my whole body became cold several degrees after a while; Passing by without saying hello...

Feng Wanli likes him, and Yujiyou likes him too.

In order not to let the naughty Feng take advantage, Yu Jiyou had no choice but to kiss Yang Xihe himself.

Lovers' kisses are always sticky, and the vague spirituality of all things shyly shy away from them.

The surroundings are so clear and empty that it can be seen at a glance, but a unique secret space is born, and the air is secretly warming up.

After the kiss, Cheng Jun had already left Rihua behind.

"It's come to an end." Yang Xihe rubbed the back of Yu Jiyou's hand like stroking a feather.

They went around many bends along the way, but generally headed in one direction, and finally groped to the edge of the world, and there was no more sunrise ahead.

"Then change it to looking at the moon." Yu Jiyou said without thinking.

"Go back to Dongzhen when you've had enough fun, school is about to start." Lu Zhixun's voice came out of nowhere.

Yu Jiyou froze, and Cheng Jun froze in mid-air.

Thinking of Yu Jiyou's unfinished studies, Yang Xihe's mouth twitched.

There are also thousands of tender feelings.

Finish

The author has something to say: I am sorry that it is finally over, and I am grateful to the readers who are still supporting me.

The following is the final testimonial, which is very long and can be skipped:

This is the most difficult novel I have ever written. Not only is it difficult to write, but I also encountered various setbacks along the way.

At the beginning, I struggled with the background of the times in this article. I originally wanted to let go of fantasy, but I thought about whether it was cultivating immortals or coming to ancient times.This was a wrong decision. It wasn’t until I wrote this article that I realized that I hadn’t read many ancient dramas, let alone cultivation texts.

This caused my speed to be very slow, and the writing became slower and slower. Calvin was particularly serious. I am not a person with too much perseverance. When I sit in front of the computer for a few hours and cannot write a hundred words, I can only give up. I'm writing a novel.I thought about getting rid of it, but eunuchs are not a good decision, so I picked it up several times, even forced myself, and grinded out this article in extreme pain.

After writing, I became more and more uncomfortable, because I felt that I was in a mess, and I couldn't control my cultivation at all.To what extent, I am an author who likes to read comments, regardless of whether it is good or bad, but I wish I could finish writing this article alone, so that no one will read it.

Although looking back at "Marriage Prompt" and "God Unfolded" now, I feel that it has become a dark history, but I can guarantee that it was the best thing I could write at that time. "White Moonlight" is not, I feel sorry for it... poorly written.But how should I put it, I still want to give myself and the readers an explanation, grit my teeth and follow the outline to the end.

When I announced that it was about to end, most readers found it very abrupt.Actually not, my outline is like this, the protagonist can't go down step by step, and can't be upgraded to the highest level, Yu Jiyou will encounter a worldwide crisis when he first arrives in Baodan, and then travel across mountains and rivers to find Yang Xihe. ——Because of the strength of the writing, I wrote without tension, but it should not be hasty or jump over in a general way.

One of the biggest difficulties in writing that you may not expect is the sense of time.I eat three meals a day, work during the day and sleep at night, but the gods don’t need to sleep, so when I wrote about the academy, I was really confused. I don’t know how other authors deal with it, but I really don’t know how to arrange it When they are in class, they don't know what everyone will do in the evening during the experience.This is the small aspect, and the big aspect is that some people have retreated for tens or hundreds of years. Based on my life experience, I cannot handle such a broad time scale.I didn’t grasp the basic worldview, and I’ve been trying to make up for it in terms of settings. It’s obvious...it’s a failure QAQ

The second pain point is that the outline has been changed. The main line has not changed, but the details have been changed many times.You may have noticed that this article has a label of sweet article, but its outline is not sweet XD not only because I am not good at emotional dramas, but also because I have a brain twitch again and feel that "the background of the big era is dark and the protagonists are warming each other very well sweet" reason.In the original outline, Yang Xihe did not "survive", and Yujiyou finally accepted this reality and had sex with Mingyi.Of course, I don’t think the same body counts as two people. Different people have different opinions _(:з」∠)_ But out of various concerns and considering readers’ perceptions, I am not writing this way now.Later, I finally made up my mind to grit my teeth and finished it. I went to a training class in the middle, and when I came back, the setting and reality collided. I was too scared to write, and I changed part of the outline bitterly.

There are also some details, such as the choice of words and sentences in the ancient style of writing-as a result, everyone regards "White Moonlight" as a modern writing, which is quite frustrating.Another example is laying the foreshadowing. I really don’t care about my head. Now you may think that there are no bugs (?), because I have fixed a lot of them quietly.Another example is the transition of the plot, the description of the emotional drama... Ah, there are too many, I can't finish it.

In short, after I finished writing this article, I almost lost my confidence in writing.It's okay, thank you for your support.

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