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Chapter 90 Afterword

Simplified (without deletion) physical book has been signed @Huian Publishing House, the specific progress wb notice, no accidents, pre-sale next year (I don't know how many months).

The radio drama has signed a contract with the Manbo platform (I don't know when it will be released).

In the follow-up, I will write vip episodes first, and then I will continue to write free episodes (there is a hole in the column, you can see it when you click in), and some small daily routines or jokes should be dropped from time to time in the future.

The next book is "Impermanence Is Not Going to Work Today", black and white impermanence fall in love and kill each other, if you are interested, you can order it in advance.

See the postscript, if it is too long, it can be blocked.

The author has something to say: [postscript to the text]

After procrastinating for more than a year, I should write some thoughts and summaries to be worthy of myself.

To be honest, if I want to rate this article, I should only be able to give it around 60-70 (out of 100). In my mind, it is just enough to pass the standard, and I have no plans to raise the score. I am satisfied with it The place has satisfied me. To be precise, this article is written for the characters of Ta Tuan.

From my point of view, the protagonist and supporting roles have all grown according to the correct setting, and there is no deviation from the expected place. More features can be added, and there is no contradiction that needs to be deleted.However, the cuteness of people is different from person to person, just like some commenters said that they prefer the early stage of romance, thinking that he is fishing and controlling the field; but in fact, at this stage, he always wears a perfect mask to play the role that everyone loves. He has no freedom, and he dare not show his shortcomings. It is not until Xiao Zhu gives him the answer he wants in the later stage that he can truly become himself in love.

In the setting, the strength of Tanqing is manifested in business ability, academic performance, and capturing people's hearts. He can be regarded as a very versatile talent.It's a pity that this kind of perfection doesn't attract me, or that Su's dots are all over the normal personality, which makes me feel boring. The nature of love should be strong on the outside, empty on the inside, and even a little repressed and closed. Is all tenderness a disguise or comes from the heart , I am afraid that even he himself does not know.He can achieve the level that others can't reach without any effort, but he has no interest in developing more ambitions; there are many people who like him, but he can't arouse enthusiasm for men and women.

So once he is really tempted, everything in the world really doesn't matter in his eyes, it's almost like a spiritual obsession, this is where he is most obsessed with love.

I wrote on wb before: "In the world of love, many things are black and white. He should be the kind of person who thinks he has a score of 100 if he doesn't get a score of 0. What he needs is not someone telling him 'You Even seventy or eighty points is fine', but 'That's right, so what if you have 0 points, I still prefer you anyway.'" Xiao Zhu is completely in line with the logic of normal people, his world is colorful, compared to 100 Fen may prefer 66 points, because the number is auspicious and he is happy.Just because he hates being restrained, he will not correct Tanqing's mistakes. Tanqing can have any score by his side, from positive infinity to negative infinity, and he can confess as he wants, and seduce as he wants.

Xiao Zhu grew up surrounded by love, and the heart of love urgently needs to be filled with his love alone.In my eyes they are what they should be now.

Let's talk about dissatisfaction.First of all, the subject matter, I didn't bring out the charm that this subject matter should have, I don't follow stars and I'm not interested in the entertainment industry, so I'm lacking in many aspects.Before starting the article (August-October last year), I investigated readers' preferences and cuteness for entertainment articles and idol articles for a long time. After the investigation, I found that I couldn't get the fun and refreshment of the public taste at all.

After the protagonist is hacked, I can understand the Jedi counterattack, slapping the face, cheating, etc., but I can’t write it out. It seems that I don’t find it interesting in my heart. Even if I write it out, it’s just a formality, and I can’t do other excellent ones The articles in the entertainment circle give people a refreshing feeling, not to mention that I don’t need to write again what others have written; I can understand the drama of the two protagonists coming out of the closet and shocking everyone, but when it comes to my own protagonist, I don’t know. I can’t help but think from their standpoint, and feel that in the context of reality, more fans and reporters will spy on their private lives when they come out, and their feelings will become a topic of discussion—this makes me feel very sorry for them uneasy.

So I basically gave up writing cool things from the very beginning, and could only focus on a few characters.At the beginning of last year, I couldn’t start. I checked all kinds of information, Baidu Encyclopedia, Zhihu related issues, popularity reports, "Zhiri" magazine idol specials, and reference lists of dry goods summaries and sales volumes sent by many enthusiastic readers.But these can only give me a general understanding, and it is still difficult for me to continue to generate inspiration for life in the entertainment industry.

In addition, I had a lot of self-restraints at the time. I was afraid that readers would scold me after watching the thunder (as an author, I would be very aggrieved if I couldn’t scold me back), and I was also afraid that some characters would not be liked, so I cringed a little during the writing and setting stage. .As for the outline, Moji hasn’t written anything for a long time. My friends around me persuaded me to just open it directly. Dissatisfied from the beginning, dissatisfied everywhere.

Obviously, my idea was right. The data of the first tens of thousands of words at that time intuitively reflected that readers were not interested in it. V used to rely on collections to get the first place on the list, but actually waited for V to return to its original shape.I often looked back at the previous article and found that even I couldn’t stand it, so I felt very sorry for the readers who followed up. Everyone is really tolerant, but the quality of my writing is not worthy of your support.

Fortunately, I only wrote 10,000+ words at that time, and it was too late to delete and rewrite them all, so I escaped for two months.But, the most serious problem still remains - I don't like the entertainment industry and idol dramas, I only like the five members of the tower group, except for character interactions and some emotional dramas, I am completely blank about the real plot.

In those two months, I spent more time adjusting my status, but unfortunately failed.Later, the second edition that was rewritten didn't work either, so I discarded and rewrote the current beginning, and it was revised intermittently a while ago. In short, there were many dissatisfaction.

These five people were actually conceived by me before signing the contract. At that time, I conceived an article with Fan Gerong as the protagonist, and set him as a singer. Then I had a flash of inspiration and added him as a former idol; In a blink of an eye, I felt that the idol groups that were not in harmony and did not have a united soul were very interesting, so the personalities of the several people were determined immediately, and there was no entanglement at all.Usually when I go out to class, I occasionally write some of their jokes on my mobile phone when I get inspired halfway, and there are hundreds of them before I know it.

So for me, they are very familiar children. I am looking forward to their birth, but because of this expectation, I am becoming more and more serious. I doubt myself very much. .But on the other hand, thanks to the feelings I have accumulated this year, the experience I have gained will still be of great help to the future.

For example, I understand that inspiration should not be relied on too much, especially for subjects that I am not good at.The last book "Immortal Burning" was the first time I wrote a real novel. Before that, I struggled to write 10,000+ words, but the process of writing it was relatively smooth, and Kawen also overcame it, which led me to Think you've made some progress.

In fact, it’s just campus funny themes + origins from life + underage boys have a sunny and innocent mind. I am good at several characteristics. In fact, my own writing ability has not improved much.

In this book, the male group in the entertainment circle + the resurgence of old love is a must-have label around the protagonist, but it is not my taste.What's more terrible is the love affair. I used to think of him as a simple, black-bellied, wicked, and fun-loving gong. One day, for some reason, I thought this was too common, so I changed it to "green tea gong" on a whim.Xiaozhu's character design hasn't changed much, because I like this kind of explosive and arrogant boy the most, and I can write it with ease.

Unexpectedly, just to make this "green tea attack" character stand still, I asked for a lot of trouble.After all, it is too obvious that tea is equal to a marionette (I felt this way when I wrote the first edition of the scrap manuscript, and I did not understand the psychology behind the words and deeds of love at all), and the real tea should make people think that he is so gentle and angelic (refer to The Douban film review of the Japanese drama "Chocolate Broken Love" gave me some inspiration), and this scale is too difficult to grasp, and there are actually many places that are not accurate enough, but I really don't have the energy to figure it out and revise it.

The best supporting role is Fu Rong. I have plans to write a personal episode for him, so let's talk about it when the time comes.

In addition to the character of the characters, the plot structure also made me realize a very big flaw. Leaving aside other things for the time being, the writing method of writing memories and killing in a single volume, even I have been complaining about it myself.But there is no way. When I have deep feelings for the characters, it is difficult for me to choose. I feel that any details are necessary. It is not impossible to write them interspersed. It’s just that I don’t have confidence in myself. I know that the writing must be messy. It's better to open a volume alone.

The most important experience is that there must be a complete detailed outline when writing an essay in the future, even if the outline is not enough.

Also, you must write what you are interested in, so as to ensure that the inspiration and state are normal.

Many times, I am very extreme. Last year, I felt so guilty that I couldn’t control my emotions because I wrote so badly. I wrote while crying; although I didn’t write much this year, I became guilt-free (… well I’m shameless, I’m sorry!), even the quality of the data and the exposure rate are also bearish, and I’ve been blacklisted and banned from the list. I’m flustered and regretful, but I’m still a little lucky to be able to dove again (…… )

Both of these mentalities are unhealthy. I hope that I can write immersively from the next book, just care about the quality of the content and the punctuality of the daily update, and let other things... be put aside.

A while ago, I was thinking about what is the most important thing in writing for me.After thinking about it, I came to the conclusion that there is only "don't let yourself regret it".

I know that even if a work or a few characters are liked by readers, it is only temporary. After a few days or weeks, not many people will actually remember them.Only I, the creator, can never forget them no matter how long it has passed. If I didn’t write them well during the writing process, then I believe that I will definitely have a grudge when I think about them someday in the future.

So don't let yourself regret it.Even if I feel a little ashamed when I read what I wrote, if I pick it up again one day, what I see is not only the story, but I should also be able to recall what kind of mood I was at that time.If mine is something that I don't even approve of, then looking back at it later is tantamount to seeing some lies.

Ah, there are so many bbs and some are missing. I mainly write them for my future self to read, so let's take it as a flag.

Thank you for your willingness to follow up, thank you for liking Acemon and Qingzhen.

See you in the episode!

-2020.9.30

- Hitomi.

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