The great god of time travel system

The novel that Ran Zeqian asked him to read was just a novel with a relatively common apocalyptic theme, and the plot had just started with only 20 words, which is really insignificant for the United World Network, which has millions or even tens of millions of words. word count.It only took Wu Yan one morning and one hour in the afternoon to finish reading the whole book, and Wu Yan naturally used his lunch time during the period.

"Finish? What do you think?" As an intern editor, Ran Zeqian was still responsible and discovered Wu Yan's situation at the first time.

"Impressions?" Wu Yan thought about the plot of the whole story, thought for a moment and replied, "The writing is a bit immature and many places are not connected properly. After more than 20 words, I didn't find the center at all. I just think he spent a lot of writing on Decorating an environment in the end of the world, but I can't feel what he wants to say at all, and his portrayal of the characters is not deep..." The whole article has been read more than 20 times, and Wu Yan can't even do anything about the hero's character. Give an evaluation, just like passerby A, without any characteristics.

Ran Zeqian raised his eyebrows slightly, looked at Wu Yan thoughtfully and asked, "Then if it was you, would you choose to sign him?"

Wu Yan tilted his head and thought for a while before replying, "I will sign."

"Why?" Ran Zeqian was slightly surprised by his answer, but the arc of the corner of his mouth deepened.

"The immature writing style can be tempered. Although I can't grasp the characters, the environment description is quite deep. The plot has no center, which makes people a little impetuous. But even so, I still have the desire to continue watching, so I will sign." Wu Yan tried his best to express his meaning with words as much as possible.

"Then you will be in charge of him." Ran Zeqian said.

Wu Yan looked at Ran Zeqian in surprise, to make sure if he was hallucinating?But after seeing Ran Zeqian's earnest and affirmative expression, Wu Yan had to doubt again, could it be that what he said was true?Let yourself, a rookie on the first day of work, start leading people?Wu Yan has a feeling that he is misleading his children?

Ran Zeqian, who seemed to be able to read minds, smiled charmingly, then put his arm around Wu Yan's shoulder and patted him on the head, saying, "Of course I will help."

Cut, I knew it was impossible to hand it over to him completely, why was it so ambiguous as I said earlier, I was so happy for nothing.Wu Yan couldn't help slandering in his heart.But Wu Yan also knew that the second half of the sentence he didn't say should be that when he can't handle it or is not competent, he will take over completely.

Ran Zeqian is obviously a fierce and ruthless person. He just said to Wu Yan to start, the next moment he started to tell Wu Yan that if he hooks up with someone, heck, how to sign the contract with the other party.And it seems that the method is quite straightforward and simple, but Wu Yan has to admit that it works.

Under Ran Zeqian's guidance, Wu Yan first sent him a short message saying that he hoped to sign him. At the same time, he showed his company certificate and left his joint number, hoping that he could contact him.The role of the joint account is a common account on the Internet all over the world. It has the role of a mobile phone number in the real world and naturally serves as a bridge for people to communicate with.

Fortunately, the person Wu Yan wanted to sign with happened to be online, and he replied to Wu Yan within two clicks.Then Wu Yan went straight to Huanglong and said that he wanted to sign him. At the same time, he explained to him the company's benefits and the distribution of vip after that. At the same time, he showed the price that other large entertainment companies could offer. The last straightforward sentence, 'Although our company has just been established and is not as famous as other companies, our scale is not small, Ran's Group, you know?Let me tell you, that's the boss behind us.And our treatment is the best, don't miss it when you pass by, you will regret it if you miss it. ' and the like.There are various sentences running through the period, anyway, the general idea is that it is better to be a chicken head than to be a phoenix tail to those companies. You must know that from ancient times to the present, the achievements of dragons have been quite...quite... quite important.Our boss is the Ran family of the world's top [-], even if you spend money, are you afraid that you will not be famous?It's only a matter of time, balabala...

Exhausted all the rumors that could be fooled, and Wu Yan had never heard of these.

The result was taken for granted. In less than half an hour, under the combination of Ran Zeqian's dictation and Wu Yan's handwriting, a newcomer author was tricked into entering and became Wu Yan's first author.Sprinkle flowers~~~ Anyway, Wu Yan has started leading people.

"Since you have started to lead people, you have to be responsible for the author in your hand." Ran Zeqian said to Wu Yan in a serious tone suddenly.

Wu Yan suddenly had an ominous premonition. Sure enough, Ran Zeqian's tone was serious for a second, and he smiled brightly at Wu Yan in the next second, "So I hope you can analyze his novels, and it is best to point out his specific shortcomings and ways to correct them. .If you can, you can write another post-reading review and comments, ok?"

'Touch', Wu Yan only felt that his head was hit by a boulder in an instant, and the machine crashed!It turns out that not only can't escape the impression after reading it, but he also wants to write another review by the way?By the way, how do you know what kind of profound experience and rigorous comments he, a guy who failed in high school composition, can write! ! !Let him write to be truly irresponsible! ! !

"Well, I believe in you, NoProblem!" After finishing speaking, Ran Zeqian patted Wu Yan's shoulder with complete trust, as if entrusting him for all eternity.

Wu Yan felt as if he wanted to cry, especially at this time when the system was making trouble.

[Ding, system task [-] is started, task content: Great God's comment.Task reminder: Objective, true and comprehensive evaluation of each article is a necessary skill and professional ethics for a master.Task Reward: Obtain a Charm Card.Failure penalty: All attributes minus one. 】

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Wu Yan felt as if he was being forced to do something, especially when he was facing a blank document, he felt as if he wanted to smash the computer.Writing is nothing, you can write whatever you want, if you have the ability to write comments, what is it comprehensive, I like to eat Master Kong instant noodles.After reading it, what is it? You can still use your open mind. Wu Yan can think from the chicken or the egg to the idea that people are born by human beings, and demons are born by demons. If you have the ability to write a review, you also need to be truthful and objective. I don’t even know what truth and objectivity are.

Ran Zeqian completely ignored Wu Yan's resentful eyes, and continued with the work at hand, and finally said, "Don't worry, write slowly, just give it to me before get off work."

Rely on it, don't say before leaving get off work, I may not be able to break it out next year, if you are really not in a hurry, I will definitely remember to burn it for you after you die.

Hey, no matter how much you slander, the reality is still cruel, Wu Yan still has to write, because the system suddenly imposed a time limit on the basis of the original task, so Wu Yan must complete it before leaving get off work, otherwise ...three levels of clicks to prepare...

After thinking about it in front of the computer for half an hour, Wu Yan racked his brains and wished he could create n self like Sun Wukong, so that he would have a few more heads, and everyone would think about it together, and then sum it up, it would probably be comprehensive.What is true, Wu Yan said that he wrote it completely according to his own inner thoughts, objective and so on, in fact, it is the guest's point of view, in the novel, it can refer to the reader's point of view, so Wu Yan is very careless to write all the thoughts he can think of. Write down everything.

Well, just do it! ! !

Start the pen, write... after-reading... with after-reading comments...

In fact, objectively speaking, Wu Yan's own writing style is quite good, but the reason why the composition can't get high marks is that Wu Yan's ability to digress is even more outstanding. He has now written about the importance of the environment to human beings, and how to do it. Great environmental work.

After finishing the work at hand, Ran Zeqian casually looked at the progress of Wu Yan's writing review, and the corners of his mouth twitched. Although the novel was written about the end of the world, it had nothing to do with environmental protection, right?And don't spit. This kind of thing has nothing to do with that novel's half a dime, right?right?right? ? ?

"By the way, Wu Yan, do you write novels?" Ran Zeqian said after reading a passage of his reflections next to Wu Yan. He suddenly wanted to know whether his novels were also accompanied by comments like his comments. There are great associations and innovations.

Wu Yan's typing speed froze immediately. After thinking for three seconds, he nodded and admitted, because he had filled in this item when he handed in his resume. In fact, he regretted that he filled it out now, because he already had the seed It feels like a den of thieves.

"Send it over and let me have a look!" Ran Zeqian smiled brightly, and the corners of his slightly narrowed eyes formed a seductive arc, even charming.

Wu Yan thought of his masterpiece that was so cold to the Antarctic Circle, it was the masterpiece of Jin Yong, the writing style is absolutely fine, but...but...

Ran Zeqian looked at the webpage sent by Wu Yan in surprise, "Legend of the Condor Heroes"?never heard of that?The martial arts type?The subject matter is okay, listen to the hot subject matter.Click... What is that series of 2, 2, 1, 1, 0, 0, 0, 0...?Look at the number of words that have been completed, um, less than 20, this is the only article in the author's column.

This number is really... Ran Zeqian couldn't help turning his head to look at Wu Yan's serious typing profile. The soft facial features are not very delicate, but it makes people feel more comfortable the more he looks at them. The slightly frownless brow looks like he is in distress. Looking at something, under the delicate nose is the white teeth biting the attractive red lips, just by his side, you can clearly feel the breath of books exuding from his body, which makes people calm down .

People with such a temperament can't help but make Ran Zeqian, who has always been very demanding, look forward to the writing written by a person with such a temperament, although his figures are extremely not gorgeous. "Legend of the Condor Heroes", let's take a look, maybe you should bring yourself some surprises.