God please don't procrastinate

Sun Youxian hesitated for a while, then ran upstairs to get the laptop, along with a notepad.

Open Biluo Wenxue.com with three clicks and two clicks, log in to the account with Shumen Shulu, and enter the background.

Sun Youxian turned the computer screen to Zhong Jingyu, then spread out the notepad, pointed to the first pseudonym on the notebook, and said, "This is the first pseudonym I wrote in my pen. I applied for it when I was in high school. I saw you at that time. My "Star Domain" was very excited, and I posted an article imitating the style and theme of "Star Domain", but I became an eunuch after I couldn't get it signed. After that, this account was used by me to collect my own articles."

As he said that, he called up his favorites, compared the pen names on the notepad, and briefly explained each pen name and the articles posted under the pen name to Zhong Jingyu.

Zhong Jingyu flipped through his notepad while listening to him, and the male god who was always able to face the collapse of a mountain could not stop his mouth from twitching after flipping through Sun Youxian's notepad—he wrote it back and forth There are about four pages of account information. Roughly speaking, there are at least thirty or forty pseudonyms.

What I know is that he has repeatedly failed and failed on the road of changing his vest to apply for a contract. What I don’t know is that he is raising an account to do the work of stealing|texting.

Signing the contract-how difficult is it for Sun Youxian?

"Youxian." Interrupting Sun Youxian's eloquent introduction, Zhong Jingyu pointed to his notepad, "Find me the article you wrote that you are most satisfied with or has the most readers."

Sun Youxian responded, and clicked on his final article from last year, urban fantasy theme, 60 words, single-digit collection, double-digit comment, it is the most satisfying article he has written so far, but Because I couldn't sign the contract and didn't have enthusiastic readers, the originally planned million-word article was finally completed ahead of schedule at 60.

Another article... It should be regarded as the most read article, with a total word count of 30. During the update period, it was saved in three digits, but after it was finished, it fell back to double digits. Readers left more enthusiastic comments. This is the theme... Campus small Refreshing, with two male protagonists, a daily article with no obvious story line, and——

To use Gun Gun Gu Liang’s words to evaluate: Xiao Xianxian, you have a bright future in writing. There is no heroine, but two male protagonists. Write it directly as a big *!

At that time, Sun Youxian gave Gun Gun Guliang a middle finger without hesitation, but now Sun Youxian feels that women's intuition is sometimes terrifyingly accurate.

However, this is of no use. Even if there are three-digit readers, this ambiguous campus article still failed to sign the contract.

Zhong Jingyu memorized the names of the two articles at a glance. After "confiscating" Sun Youxian's small notebook, he nestled on the sofa with Sun Youxian's laptop and began to read the articles.

The two articles add up to nearly a million words. No matter how fast Zhong Jingyu looked, he only read half of each in one day.But these are enough for him to understand why Sun Youxian has been unable to sign the contract.but……

"Youxian, tell me, you made corrections to the writing problems before, did you write anything in the corrected way?" Zhong Jingyu, holding a laptop, ran to the bathroom door to find Sun Youxian.The latter was taking a bath in the bathroom, while Jin Bao lined up to be washed and watched by the way.

"Yes!" Sun Youxian squeezed out a word viciously through his teeth, and desperately hugged Zhaocai who wanted to escape and put him in the bathtub. Jinbao seemed to have seen the intention of his little friend, "guard" Next to it, I stretched out my paw and pressed Zhaocai's head—how comfortable it is to wash Xiangxiang, the second master takes a bath very well, don't be afraid, little friend.

Zhaocai raised his paw and slapped Jinbao across the face: Stupid dog!I'm just... just adapting, so I'm not afraid, hin!

Seeing that Zhaocai was not struggling so hard, Sun Youxian managed to answer Zhong Jingyu's words: "Look for an article called "Reborn a Winner", but it's just a trap. Many paragraphs are also routine, but I really can’t write this kind of pattern, and I still can’t sign it and give it up.”

Zhong Jingyu nodded, and sat back on the sofa with his laptop in his hand.Soon I found this pit in Sun Youxian's long favorites.

This article is roughly the story of the hero when he was reborn in college, taking advantage of knowing the development of future generations, seizing every business opportunity and becoming a rich man. The hearts of women of all colors.

Just like what Sun Youxian said, this is a very routine article, the plot development is all expected, and the character creation is very stereotyped. As for the writing style... If Sun Youxian hadn't told Zhong Jingyu, he might not know the story at all. You will know that this article is written by him-this article is completely different from his other two articles. Of course, the other two articles are heaven, this one is earth, and it is still muddy earth.

Most importantly, in Zhong Jingyu's eyes, this article has a fatal point, similarity.Many plot developments and character images make people feel that similar ones can be found elsewhere. Such a text, if it is lightly called routine, is called imitation, if it is serious, it will be suspected of borrowing and plagiarizing.

He exhaled, forcing himself to watch "Reborn a Winner" a little more, and finally felt that he might as well go back and watch the ambiguous campus boy Xiao Qingqing.

Supporting his forehead, putting away the computer, Zhong Jingyu pawed at Sun Zhuyouxian's small notebook in boredom, really not knowing whether to cry or laugh.

Sun Youxian is really working hard, and you can see his growth from his writing. Like him, he has persisted for many years and has written more than one million words but has not given up. It is estimated that he will not be able to find Xiaopujie. There are a few.

But... he also has to say that hard work also needs to find the right direction. Sun Youxian's kind...is a typical type of busy work in the wrong direction.

His writing is full of aura, full of youthful vigor and youth, and has always maintained this feature and advantage.

However, his articles are very trivial, severely fragmented, and lack logic and coherence, making it difficult to prioritize and lack rhythm in the entire article.

In "Reborn a Winner", you can clearly see Sun Youxian's restraint on those issues, and he is very restrained in his use of words and sentences, which even makes people feel that he is counting the number of words to fill the plot.

This also caused his writing to lose the most advantageous aura, and there was a strong sense of sudden stop between the sentences, which always made people feel like something was missing or missing. The readability of the article increased with this When the sense of lack becomes more and more serious, it is the time when readers abandon the article.

For web articles, the value of an article often lies in whether readers are willing to continue reading. The serialization mode of web articles is a process of constantly luring|abducting readers, leading readers to dig toward the author step by step. Walk in the pit, when you fail, you will rush to the street.

And Sun Youxian... the writing is like a man, direct and frank, everything is laid out on the bright side, he doesn't know how to hide or cover up, there is no place to make readers look forward to, it means that there is no way to "hook" readers , and it is difficult for editors to favor articles that cannot "hook" readers.

When Sun Youxian took the Xiangcai Jinbao out of the bathroom, he saw Zhong Jingyu lying on the sofa in a daze, holding his notepad and turning it unconsciously.

He walked over and leaned against Zhong Jingyu's calf. Zhong Jingyu came back to his senses, bent his legs to make room for him, and wrapped his legs around him after he sat down.

Sun Youxian put his hand on Zhong Jingyu's leg, patting and pulling twice as if he was trying to attract wealth and treasure: "How is it? Let me explain first, if your point of view is not special and fresh enough, you can't follow it from The one that stands out from the suggestions of my friends.”

Zhong Jingyu sat up, folded his legs, and "clamped" Sun Youxian into his arms. Xiao Benben patted him on the chest, curled the corner of his lips, and said, "Don't talk about suggestions, I invite you."

"What do you mean?"

"That is, I will give you a chance to write whatever you want."

Zhong Jingyu played charades on purpose, and Sun Youxian became more and more anxious as he listened. He grabbed his collar and "threatened": "If you don't talk anymore, the family law will take care of you."

Zhong Jingyu put away his laughing expression, grabbed Sun Youxian's hand that was holding his collar, pulled it down and clasped it in his palm, and said seriously: "Dr. Tu's studio, you know, he has been On the right copywriter.

In addition to the most famous "Are You Tucao Today", his studio also operates several new media platforms.These platforms are all dependent on the Internet, and the core content is good articles. Therefore, a writer who can write good articles is very important to him. "

"A writer who writes good articles?" Sun Youxian pointed to himself, with a look of disbelief on his face, "Are you sure you are talking about me? I am an online article applicant who has been unsuccessful for many years. I How is it possible to write a good article at such a level?"

Zhong Jingyu shook his head and explained to him: "There is a big difference between new media articles and web articles. Internet articles are about telling stories, while new media articles are more interesting.

Although several of your articles have different themes, they all have a problem, that is, there is no story, incoherent, incomplete, not like a story with a beginning and an end, a beginning and an end.

But your text is very spiritual and makes people feel happy to read. This alone is already an advantage in writing new media articles. "

"Really...Really? You're not trying to make me happy, are you?"

Zhong Jingyu was silent for a while, and said honestly: "New media is a relatively new industry, and I don't know much about it. Dr. Tu talked to me a little bit, and asked me if I have any intention to be a freelance writer for his platform Man, after I searched for some information, I found that I was not suitable, so I rejected it.

New media articles can’t be very long, and it’s better to have an eye-catching point of view or title. Second, it needs to pay a lot of attention to the current Internet and be able to write articles that fit the current hot spots in a timely manner.

Just these two points, I can't do it.But I think you can. Your campus essays can attract readers. One is the subject matter. The ambiguity between men and men has attracted some rotten female readers to a certain extent. The other is your daily memes, which are close to life but you have extracted interesting ones. place.

Therefore, as a novel, this article may not be very successful, but if you take it apart and treat it as some jokes or long articles, it is a very interesting new media article. "

"Really...Really...Really? I really have the potential to be a writer?" To be honest, Sun Youxian didn't even believe that there might be a trickster hidden in his body!

Zhong Jingyu nodded affirmatively: "If you don't believe me, we can contact Dr. Tu and let him make the final judgment. By the way, we can also know whether your writing ability can be used."