God please don't procrastinate

Sun Youxian, who has been on the road of online writing, has never seen the dawn of victory, but he has rich combat experience, various tutorial posts, sharing posts, guidance posts... There are eight if you haven’t read a hundred. Ten, the practice is not very good, but the theoretical reserve is absolutely one set.

According to the theories he knows, most of Zhong Jingyu's writing loses in slowness.

Nowadays, people read online articles for entertainment, for entertainment, and to pass the time. Most people who read articles hope to see things that make them happy without too much energy. The first three chapters of an article, It can be said to be a key node. Whether a reader will follow your article basically makes a decision in these three chapters.

Zhong Jingyu's writing is good, but slow to take off. In the content of "Three Golden Chapters", a lot of space is used to explain the setting and background, as well as the portrayal of characters, etc. If this is a physical novel , it is likely that these will become the part that readers will revisit after reading the novel, but this is a web article, a web article that is being serialized.

In the current web market, there are tens of thousands of similar or similar articles in terms of subject matter, style, content, and style of writing. No reader will feel sorry for abandoning an article that has just started serialization and does not know what kind of article it will develop into. What's more, if readers don't find a reason to continue reading in the "Three Golden Chapters", they may turn off the page decisively to find the next article after silently disgusting the boredom in their hearts.

This way of searching for articles may make people feel impetuous, but the reality is so cruel. Every circle has its own rules. If you want to gain a foothold in the circle, you must understand its rules.

The rule of web articles is to attract readers in the title copy and the first three chapters, otherwise there are basically only four words waiting for the author-the future is uncertain.

This rule is especially applicable to novice writers, and Zhong Jingyu happens to be in this ranks.

Sun Youxian understands this truth, but he doesn't know how to make Zhong Jingyu understand like him, especially since he is only a theoretical theorist, and there is no successful example to show as a sample.

After thinking about it, Sun Youxian decided to use other people's articles to attract others' articles, hoping that Zhong Jingyu could "understand" him: "Young Master Zhong, I recommended your novel that day, did you read it later?"

"Well, I read it, I saw half of it." Zhong Jingyu nodded, thought for a while with his chin on his fingers, and continued, "This is a novel that feels very different to me. Its subject matter is the first time I have read it. What I have come across, the background setting is biased towards the Western world, but the political system in the article is biased towards the Eastern countries. This is the first time I have seen this kind of mix and match, and it is very interesting.”

"Yes, it's quite interesting, but this kind of setting is actually quite common in online articles. You will know after reading too much. I will recommend another book to you later, and let me tell you, that book's The overhead background is interesting..." Sun Youxian didn't know that Zhong Jingyu led him away from the topic, and when he realized what he should have said, he wanted to slap his mouth that he couldn't control .

Pretending to cough twice, to stop the topic, Sun Youxian abruptly went back to the previous novel: "That...Young Master Zhong, when you read that novel, you didn't see anything else ? Than... such as its structural layout?"

"What... do you want to say?" Every time Sun Youxian wanted to say something to him but was too embarrassed to speak, he basically did this. First he talked about him, and finally he talked about him. I have already mastered his routines, and saw through his little tricks at a glance, "Is it related to my novel?"

Zhong Jingyu's directness is definitely one of Sun Youxian's favorite advantages. He himself has a temper that can't hide things, and he can't wait to say anything in his heart. Zhong Jingyu's straightforward character is simply too much. To his liking.

"Young Master Zhong, actually, have you ever wondered why fewer and fewer people read your novels?"

Zhong Jingyu pursed his lower lip, leaned his elbows on the desk, and clasped his hands against his nose. After a moment of silence, he raised his head to look at Sun Youxian, and replied: "This is the first time I have written a novel about martial arts. , I... doubted that I might... not be suitable for writing this subject matter. Martial arts novels focus on fighting, but also chivalrous tenderness, happy rivers and lakes, these are the things I tried for the first time."

The implication is to attribute the reason why no one reads the article to himself.

Sun Youxian shook his head vigorously, resolutely denying his idea: "It's not like Mr. Zhong. You have to know that many writing styles are not as good as yours, the plots are not as clever as yours, and even the updates are not as diligent as your online articles. attracted many readers.

You have few readers, and it has nothing to do with whether you are good at this subject, but...but...you haven't learned the rhythm of online writing. "

Zhong Jingyu frowned, did not speak, and quietly looked at Sun Youxian to signal him to continue.

Sun Youxian saw that he was not disgusted with his own opinions, so he let go of his courage and began to talk endlessly: "If an article wants to retain readers, the pace must not be slow at the beginning of the article! Those readers who can read Internet articles, It can be said that they are all 'impatient' people. They don't have much patience to wait for you to slowly lay out and watch your plot slowly unfold. They want to see the most exciting and enjoyable things in the fastest time. .

Your "Jianghu Xia Xinglu" is really good-looking, but its beginning is a bit slow compared to the online articles. According to the patience of the readers of the online articles, after reading three chapters, they still haven't found it. The part that I think is exciting, basically... everyone will give up the article. "

It's not impossible to write articles that are getting better and better in online articles, but at least, this method is not suitable for a newcomer.

While listening to Sun Youxian's words, Zhong Jingyu was thinking about what he wrote in the first three chapters.

As a newcomer in the Internet literature circle, any suggestion is a learning experience for him, and he is also keen to learn new things in this way.He once lost two years because of his confusion. Now, he not only wants to fill the gap of these two years, but also find a new direction for his life.

After pondering Sun Youxian's words for a while, Zhong Jingyu vaguely understood what his problem was, and immediately clicked on the page of "Jianghu Heroes", and then opened the novel Sun Youxian recommended to him, focusing on the first three chapters of the two articles. for comparison.

At a glance, the difference is indeed felt.

Popular novels give people a sense of urgency as soon as they come up. After the protagonist travels to a different world, he is immediately drawn into the battlefield, and his life and death are in danger.

Zhong Jingyu recalled how he felt when he read the article, and he was indeed very eager to see the next progress because he was worried about the life of the protagonist.

Looking back at his own novel, the opening chapter said that Lan Siming was going to go to Xie Biqing's appointment. During the period, he explained Lan Siming's sect, Xuanyuanmen, and why he had such an appointment with Xie Biqing.

The beginning is quite satisfactory, and there is nothing particularly attractive. Readers who are more patient may read two more chapters.

Then think about half of the popular novels he read. After the tense beginning, the article did not maintain an urgent rhythm. After the protagonist confirmed that his life was safe, the author slowly expanded the text and introduced the different world the protagonist traveled to. Let readers understand the background and setting, and at this time, readers have entered the atmosphere of the story, and will not give up the text easily, but will follow the author's thinking and get deeper and deeper into the story.

Zhong Jingyu clicked back to the page of his novel, looked at the long list of contents, and suddenly laughed at himself.

The sea of ​​learning is boundless, and the book bag has no bottom.The ancients never deceived me.

Although web articles are also novels, they are very different from the novels that Zhong Jingyu knows. With only his enthusiasm and confidence in himself, he hastily broke into this world, and there will be an article that is so cold that it will be dregs. The text is simply too normal.

"I see, thank you, Youxian." Zhong Jingyu closed all the webpages, then returned his attention to the fruit pie in front of him, picked up a fork and took a big bite into his mouth.

The food was still delicious, and his mood was more relaxed than before. The haze that had shrouded his head for many days seemed to dissipate at once, allowing him to regain the strength to persevere.

And the person who turned the clouds to see the sun for him...

Zhong Jingyu swallowed what was in his mouth, and suddenly tilted his head and smiled at Sun Youxian.

And Sun Youxian, who suddenly "pick up" the system to drop a bonus - a male god's smile, clutched his little heart and said that the male god's smile is too lethal, and he will not be able to hold it: "Zhong... Young Master Zhong, you...you look so pretty when you smile."

"Then...you, do you like it?"

luv't!Must like!Even if the male god blows his beard and stares at him, he still likes it very much.

"Happy... hi... hi..." Sun Youxian, who had been "happy" for a long time but couldn't say the word "happy", wanted to slap himself twice, why did this broken mouth fall off the chain at a critical moment!

"Youxian, actually, I have something to tell you."

ah?The male god has something to say to him, what will he say?Do you still want a piece of fruit pie or do you want to write a long review of his novel yourself?Or...could it be...a confession...something?

Sun Youxian, who was daydreaming, suddenly became nervous, looking at Zhong Jingyu with eyes full of fascination: "Zhong... Zhong Shao, what do you want to say...?"

Zhong Jingyu put down the fork in his hand and straightened his sideways head, but he didn't put away his charming smile.

He leaned slightly to bring himself closer to Sun Youxian, then looked at the other party's affectionate eyes, and said softly: "Please give me your opinion on my essay, no matter what time, no matter what the situation, as long as you think there is a problem , tell me all."

Sun Youxian, who was careful and raised his throat, was stunned for a moment when he heard these words, then he felt slightly disappointed, and then he became happy again—the male god asked him to give his opinion, it was because he trusted him, and the male god In this way, it means that he has regained his vitality and will continue to code.

Isn't this the result he thought of?

Hmm... Although there was a moment just now when the atmosphere was just right enough to make him feel that Zhong Jingyu might say something, or that his own uncontrollable mouth might accidentally say something, but now it's very good isn't it?

Sun Youxian, who nodded vigorously with a smile, gave Zhong Jingyu a cheering gesture, and left the study with an empty porcelain plate.

Behind him, Zhong Jingyu, with a smile on his face, recalled his little expression of disappointment just now, and his heart was filled with the little pride after the successful prank.

He could see it, of course he could see Sun Youxian's expectations, he even knew very well that if he had just said what the other party expected, he would have received a satisfactory answer.

But he didn't want to.At least not now.

Whether you say he is machismo or pedantic and stubborn, it is not a good time for him until his new career has stabilized. He wants to show a better version of himself in front of his sweetheart , instead of letting the other party worry about themselves.

Well, that's right, as a new generation of Internet male god, Zhong Jingyu's stylish and handsome appearance is such a staid and dessert-loving heart.

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