After hacking into Dashen's computer
Chapter 34 Reader Feedback
The promotional title of the topic is really eye-catching. The forum just opened this afternoon is already very lively in the comment area. There are not many people who complain about the title, those who confess their love to the author they like, but there are not many people discussing the content of Solitaire.
The comment area is divided into three columns, one is all comments, one is popular comments, and there is a long comment area.
All comments are arranged in chronological order, popular comments are arranged according to the number of likes, and comments with more than 500 words will appear in the long comment area.
It is worth mentioning that the comments in the comment area are all comments, but if you click on each author's individual forum content, there is also a comment section, where you can leave a separate evaluation of this author.
If there is a voting window at the end from the beginning to the end, you can choose three favorite authors to vote in the voting window.
And next to the author's introduction on the main page, there are two obvious numbers, one is the number of comments, and the other is the number of votes.It reflects the awareness of both cooperation and competition in Solitaire.
In fact, Dianduwenxue.com originally wanted to put a tipping function on it, but the authors think that if this is the case, firstly, it will be too ugly to eat, and secondly, the data of tipping is likely to be too different, so there are too few people. It's easy to be embarrassed, and after multiple considerations, the reward was finally canceled, and only the number of comments and votes was released.
After He Chu saw the comments and voting form, he immediately went to the reader group to promote it.Then log in to your own reader account, comment and vote for Tan Wenliang.
There is a limit to the number of votes, a reader number can only vote once, and only three people can vote at a time, and all authors must read it once before they can vote.
You can post as many comments as you want, but you can’t always repeat comments. If it’s a comment with only a few words that is meaningless, or an advertisement that has nothing to do with the topic, it will be cleared by the administrator .
Endpoint Literature.com is the largest online literature website in the country, with tens of millions of readers. There are as many as 10,000+ die-hard fans of these great gods alone, not to mention other passer-by readers. Therefore, with the growth of time, the number of readers in the comment area There are more and more comments, and the scrolling speed is getting faster and faster.
He Chu and the two had read the specific content at the author conference, but then Qianteng and Chongyang had an accident, and the finished product was also changed.So the two watched it again with great interest.
Wu Wang Bubai deserves to write fantasy novels for his own job. The opening chapter is very grand and magnificent, coupled with ingenious settings and sophisticated descriptions, a mysterious world is slowly revealed to the readers.Aside from mentioning those nasty names, Wuwang Bubai's opening chapter is still very serious.
Then I switched to the seaweed and egg soup part. There is no problem with the connection of the plot, but the style of writing has changed a lot. The most obvious thing is that the dialogue has increased in vain. The dialogue between the six-armed loli Kanpela and the mysterious witch seems warm and harmonious, carefully. Reading it gives people a sense of weirdness. The mysterious witch guides Kanpela to find the God of Creation, which is so kind that it makes people feel uneasy.The glove thing is just passing through, hidden in the dialogue, and the casual reader doesn't even notice it.
When I saw Qian Teng's part, under the guidance of the two masters, the modified version was much better than the original version. There were no flaws in the writing and rhythm, but the plot was a little flat and had no special features.The setting of knights and dragons is really too common.
However, in the part of Hot Wheels immediately after, the battle between the girl and the dragon is eye-catching. It makes people feel that even if the plot is a bit vulgar, if you focus on the writing and tension, you will not be called a great god.Immediately after Laoyou betrayed the water, the form was suddenly reversed, which raised the reader's mood.
After arriving at the part of Kazama Zui, the giant dragon shot to get rid of Lao You, and the readers couldn't help but shout out a happy word. After the battle, the atmosphere began to ease, and Kazama Zui's unique personal style also came to the fore. Julong recalled the past with a kind of leisurely The sense of vicissitudes, in the description of the dragon, Kan Peila has a more specific impression of the image of the Creator God for the first time.
At this point in the story, the readers are already fascinated, and subconsciously switched to the next page. Under Leng Wenquan's deliberate effort, the writing style is similar to that of Kazamazui, and many readers don't even realize that they have changed. .
After Kanpela boarded the carriage, there was a small decryption. The clues seemed to be fragmented, but they were actually connected with each other. The moment the star map was found in the carriage, the readers were overwhelmed.At the same time, gloves appear in the story again, and Kanpela's changes also hint at something.
In the part of the treasure, the mysterious witch appeared again, which was different from the previous guidance. This time, the witch family actually persuaded Kanpela to move on. The difference between before and after has to make people feel alert. Frost stands up.At the same time, Treasure has a lot of descriptions of Kanpela's psychological activities, which makes the whole story more confusing.
The opposite shadow shows the evil of human nature. Looking down on the entire continent from a high altitude, the dirty and despicable human nature one after another makes people fall into reflection. The first goblin Kabite also appeared again, and he found that he was full of lies. Be honest.
Because there is no Double Ninth Festival, Duiying finally got rid of the deliberately set trap and wrote directly to the gate of the temple.Bai Yuncanggou cooperated with him tacitly, and directly exposed the metaphor of the opposite shadow, including the meaning of the six arms and the function of the glove.
Gloves have been with Kanpela for a long time and have acquired those wonderful qualities.Gabitchi got the "sincerity" glove, so she became honest, and the witch got the "goodness", so she came here to give Kan Peila a kind reminder.
Bai Yuncanggou carried out a lot of sensationalism to mobilize the reader's emotions to the peak, and switched to the gray one.
The gate of the temple was opened, and the result was the same but different from what Kanpela originally thought. Kanpela lost the gift of God and became a witch like other mortals. When a six-armed girl was born again, another reincarnation here we go.
After reading, you can vote. At this time, the difference between the author and the reader is reflected.
According to the reader's way of thinking, He Chu voted for Wuwang Bubai and Hot Wheels who impressed him the most besides the cold hot springs.According to the author's point of view, Tan Wenliang voted for the best performance, seaweed and egg soup, treasure, and Duoying.In fact, Tan Wenliang felt that his writing was pretty good. If He Chu wasn't around, he might have voted for himself, but now, it seems that he is self-absorbed and embarrassed.
When I read the comments, Tan Wenliang and He Chu were also different. He Chu mainly squatted in the section of Leng Wenquan. He was happier than Leng Wenliang himself when he saw someone praising Leng Wenda for his good writing. In addition, I also look at the interesting hot comments to see if there are any readers fighting.
And Tan Wenliang is mainly in the long comment area, looking for feedback from readers.
Box Ash Fan No. 1: Who chose to let Box Ash end!It's really frightening to think about it carefully, I'm not feeling well right now.
Kazama Drunk Fan No. 1: What a sense of disobedience!What a sense of disobedience!Have you gone offline with a sense of violation?
Treasure Fan No. 1: Treasure, you lied to readers again! ! !I really thought that witch phantom was someone in disguise!Still guessing who the villain is!
Passerby Reader No. 1: Who is the author? It's very interesting.The picture is very strong, and the writing is also very tense. I will go and have a look.
Baiyuncanggou fan number 1: I actually cried when I saw a ghost, and I cried after reading an adventure novel!
My King's Undefeated Fan No. 1: Oh my god, my king's brain hole is simply beyond the sky.I feel sorry for the author behind, and I'm afraid I won't be able to connect with my king's brain hole at all. The great master is worthy of being a great master, and this can all be rounded up.
Passerby Reader No. 2: How does this great master write a script like a script, it's all dialogue.
Cold Hot Spring Fan No. 1: I feel like IQ has been crushed again...
Fan No. 1: Why is the sexy royal sister wearing strange clothes, why the goblin boy has a big change in personality, why the carriage can go to the sky, who is responsible for the serial girl's broken arm incident, is it the distortion of human nature or morality behind it all? downfall?Stay tuned to the Stuttgart channel at [-] o'clock tonight, "Kampella's Adventure Journey" Let us follow the camera into the inner world of the pervert...
Passerby Reader No. 3: Master Laver has heard about it, and feels that writing about fantasy is better than writing about the workplace.
Hot Wheels Fan No. 1: The wheel level is as good as ever.
Qian Teng Fan No. 1: I, Qian Teng, am so big that I can rank alongside so many great gods!Surprise, big big, you are finally going to be popular!
My King's Undefeated Fan No. 2: Hehehe, according to my king's urination, I can guarantee that there is something wrong with this name.
Passerby reader No. 4: Who is this Qian Teng?Is it also a great god?Why haven't you heard of it?
Passerby Reader No. 5: How come someone who has never heard of it is shady!
Kazama Drunk Fan No. 2: Oh my god, Drunkard, don't you write Xian Xia!
Seaweed and Egg Soup Fan No. 1: This is the first time I see Laver writing an article on this topic. Does the master of Laver want to transform?It's good to have a transformation, the subject of the workplace is a bit cold now.
Qianteng Fan No. 2: I just said that with a great writing style, how could it be possible that no one appreciates it for so long!Great writing!
Hot Wheels Fan No. 2: You don't need to guess to know that the wheel must be responsible for the combat part.
Cold Hot Spring Fan No. 2: Have you noticed, the big cold part is simply the core paragraph!Basically, the main plot before and after can be found in the paragraphs of Leng Da, which correspond to the details of the context, this logic, this thinking!Tut tut!
Qian Teng fan No. 3: You know the inside story, Qian Teng's great scriptures are so well written, are you blind!
Passerby Reader No. 6: If nothing else, just focus on the quality of the fans, this author is not much better.
My King's Undefeated Fan No. 3: Did my king perform super-level this time? This description method of guiding the line of sight is simply super powerful!
Box Gray Fan No. 2: The God of Creation looks a little curious, and he doesn't do things like a good god.
Passerby Reader No. 7: This author named Hot Wheels fights well, and has already become a fan.
Seaweed and Egg Soup Fan No. 2: It’s a good brainstorming article, but it was written by Laver as a drama that reflects social reality and has a profound meaning. Others don’t know it, but I am convinced anyway.
Passerby Reader No. 8: Go back and confirm, the cold hot spring is about the city?Isn't it about suspense reasoning? !
Kazama Drunk Fan No. 3: This description is simple, and the sense of long history is overwhelming!A drunkard is worthy of being a drunkard!
Cold Spring Fan No. 3: The brain has been hollowed out.
Passerby Reader No. 9: I feel a little terrified. After watching the part about the God of Treasures, I wonder if I am going crazy too...
Baiyun Canggou Fan No. 2: Why is Baiyun Canggou so good at water in Solitaire...
Passerby reader No. 10: Duiying's popularity doesn't seem to be very high... So what is the criteria for this selection?
Passerby Reader No. 11: The ending scared the baby to tears!
The comment area is divided into three columns, one is all comments, one is popular comments, and there is a long comment area.
All comments are arranged in chronological order, popular comments are arranged according to the number of likes, and comments with more than 500 words will appear in the long comment area.
It is worth mentioning that the comments in the comment area are all comments, but if you click on each author's individual forum content, there is also a comment section, where you can leave a separate evaluation of this author.
If there is a voting window at the end from the beginning to the end, you can choose three favorite authors to vote in the voting window.
And next to the author's introduction on the main page, there are two obvious numbers, one is the number of comments, and the other is the number of votes.It reflects the awareness of both cooperation and competition in Solitaire.
In fact, Dianduwenxue.com originally wanted to put a tipping function on it, but the authors think that if this is the case, firstly, it will be too ugly to eat, and secondly, the data of tipping is likely to be too different, so there are too few people. It's easy to be embarrassed, and after multiple considerations, the reward was finally canceled, and only the number of comments and votes was released.
After He Chu saw the comments and voting form, he immediately went to the reader group to promote it.Then log in to your own reader account, comment and vote for Tan Wenliang.
There is a limit to the number of votes, a reader number can only vote once, and only three people can vote at a time, and all authors must read it once before they can vote.
You can post as many comments as you want, but you can’t always repeat comments. If it’s a comment with only a few words that is meaningless, or an advertisement that has nothing to do with the topic, it will be cleared by the administrator .
Endpoint Literature.com is the largest online literature website in the country, with tens of millions of readers. There are as many as 10,000+ die-hard fans of these great gods alone, not to mention other passer-by readers. Therefore, with the growth of time, the number of readers in the comment area There are more and more comments, and the scrolling speed is getting faster and faster.
He Chu and the two had read the specific content at the author conference, but then Qianteng and Chongyang had an accident, and the finished product was also changed.So the two watched it again with great interest.
Wu Wang Bubai deserves to write fantasy novels for his own job. The opening chapter is very grand and magnificent, coupled with ingenious settings and sophisticated descriptions, a mysterious world is slowly revealed to the readers.Aside from mentioning those nasty names, Wuwang Bubai's opening chapter is still very serious.
Then I switched to the seaweed and egg soup part. There is no problem with the connection of the plot, but the style of writing has changed a lot. The most obvious thing is that the dialogue has increased in vain. The dialogue between the six-armed loli Kanpela and the mysterious witch seems warm and harmonious, carefully. Reading it gives people a sense of weirdness. The mysterious witch guides Kanpela to find the God of Creation, which is so kind that it makes people feel uneasy.The glove thing is just passing through, hidden in the dialogue, and the casual reader doesn't even notice it.
When I saw Qian Teng's part, under the guidance of the two masters, the modified version was much better than the original version. There were no flaws in the writing and rhythm, but the plot was a little flat and had no special features.The setting of knights and dragons is really too common.
However, in the part of Hot Wheels immediately after, the battle between the girl and the dragon is eye-catching. It makes people feel that even if the plot is a bit vulgar, if you focus on the writing and tension, you will not be called a great god.Immediately after Laoyou betrayed the water, the form was suddenly reversed, which raised the reader's mood.
After arriving at the part of Kazama Zui, the giant dragon shot to get rid of Lao You, and the readers couldn't help but shout out a happy word. After the battle, the atmosphere began to ease, and Kazama Zui's unique personal style also came to the fore. Julong recalled the past with a kind of leisurely The sense of vicissitudes, in the description of the dragon, Kan Peila has a more specific impression of the image of the Creator God for the first time.
At this point in the story, the readers are already fascinated, and subconsciously switched to the next page. Under Leng Wenquan's deliberate effort, the writing style is similar to that of Kazamazui, and many readers don't even realize that they have changed. .
After Kanpela boarded the carriage, there was a small decryption. The clues seemed to be fragmented, but they were actually connected with each other. The moment the star map was found in the carriage, the readers were overwhelmed.At the same time, gloves appear in the story again, and Kanpela's changes also hint at something.
In the part of the treasure, the mysterious witch appeared again, which was different from the previous guidance. This time, the witch family actually persuaded Kanpela to move on. The difference between before and after has to make people feel alert. Frost stands up.At the same time, Treasure has a lot of descriptions of Kanpela's psychological activities, which makes the whole story more confusing.
The opposite shadow shows the evil of human nature. Looking down on the entire continent from a high altitude, the dirty and despicable human nature one after another makes people fall into reflection. The first goblin Kabite also appeared again, and he found that he was full of lies. Be honest.
Because there is no Double Ninth Festival, Duiying finally got rid of the deliberately set trap and wrote directly to the gate of the temple.Bai Yuncanggou cooperated with him tacitly, and directly exposed the metaphor of the opposite shadow, including the meaning of the six arms and the function of the glove.
Gloves have been with Kanpela for a long time and have acquired those wonderful qualities.Gabitchi got the "sincerity" glove, so she became honest, and the witch got the "goodness", so she came here to give Kan Peila a kind reminder.
Bai Yuncanggou carried out a lot of sensationalism to mobilize the reader's emotions to the peak, and switched to the gray one.
The gate of the temple was opened, and the result was the same but different from what Kanpela originally thought. Kanpela lost the gift of God and became a witch like other mortals. When a six-armed girl was born again, another reincarnation here we go.
After reading, you can vote. At this time, the difference between the author and the reader is reflected.
According to the reader's way of thinking, He Chu voted for Wuwang Bubai and Hot Wheels who impressed him the most besides the cold hot springs.According to the author's point of view, Tan Wenliang voted for the best performance, seaweed and egg soup, treasure, and Duoying.In fact, Tan Wenliang felt that his writing was pretty good. If He Chu wasn't around, he might have voted for himself, but now, it seems that he is self-absorbed and embarrassed.
When I read the comments, Tan Wenliang and He Chu were also different. He Chu mainly squatted in the section of Leng Wenquan. He was happier than Leng Wenliang himself when he saw someone praising Leng Wenda for his good writing. In addition, I also look at the interesting hot comments to see if there are any readers fighting.
And Tan Wenliang is mainly in the long comment area, looking for feedback from readers.
Box Ash Fan No. 1: Who chose to let Box Ash end!It's really frightening to think about it carefully, I'm not feeling well right now.
Kazama Drunk Fan No. 1: What a sense of disobedience!What a sense of disobedience!Have you gone offline with a sense of violation?
Treasure Fan No. 1: Treasure, you lied to readers again! ! !I really thought that witch phantom was someone in disguise!Still guessing who the villain is!
Passerby Reader No. 1: Who is the author? It's very interesting.The picture is very strong, and the writing is also very tense. I will go and have a look.
Baiyuncanggou fan number 1: I actually cried when I saw a ghost, and I cried after reading an adventure novel!
My King's Undefeated Fan No. 1: Oh my god, my king's brain hole is simply beyond the sky.I feel sorry for the author behind, and I'm afraid I won't be able to connect with my king's brain hole at all. The great master is worthy of being a great master, and this can all be rounded up.
Passerby Reader No. 2: How does this great master write a script like a script, it's all dialogue.
Cold Hot Spring Fan No. 1: I feel like IQ has been crushed again...
Fan No. 1: Why is the sexy royal sister wearing strange clothes, why the goblin boy has a big change in personality, why the carriage can go to the sky, who is responsible for the serial girl's broken arm incident, is it the distortion of human nature or morality behind it all? downfall?Stay tuned to the Stuttgart channel at [-] o'clock tonight, "Kampella's Adventure Journey" Let us follow the camera into the inner world of the pervert...
Passerby Reader No. 3: Master Laver has heard about it, and feels that writing about fantasy is better than writing about the workplace.
Hot Wheels Fan No. 1: The wheel level is as good as ever.
Qian Teng Fan No. 1: I, Qian Teng, am so big that I can rank alongside so many great gods!Surprise, big big, you are finally going to be popular!
My King's Undefeated Fan No. 2: Hehehe, according to my king's urination, I can guarantee that there is something wrong with this name.
Passerby reader No. 4: Who is this Qian Teng?Is it also a great god?Why haven't you heard of it?
Passerby Reader No. 5: How come someone who has never heard of it is shady!
Kazama Drunk Fan No. 2: Oh my god, Drunkard, don't you write Xian Xia!
Seaweed and Egg Soup Fan No. 1: This is the first time I see Laver writing an article on this topic. Does the master of Laver want to transform?It's good to have a transformation, the subject of the workplace is a bit cold now.
Qianteng Fan No. 2: I just said that with a great writing style, how could it be possible that no one appreciates it for so long!Great writing!
Hot Wheels Fan No. 2: You don't need to guess to know that the wheel must be responsible for the combat part.
Cold Hot Spring Fan No. 2: Have you noticed, the big cold part is simply the core paragraph!Basically, the main plot before and after can be found in the paragraphs of Leng Da, which correspond to the details of the context, this logic, this thinking!Tut tut!
Qian Teng fan No. 3: You know the inside story, Qian Teng's great scriptures are so well written, are you blind!
Passerby Reader No. 6: If nothing else, just focus on the quality of the fans, this author is not much better.
My King's Undefeated Fan No. 3: Did my king perform super-level this time? This description method of guiding the line of sight is simply super powerful!
Box Gray Fan No. 2: The God of Creation looks a little curious, and he doesn't do things like a good god.
Passerby Reader No. 7: This author named Hot Wheels fights well, and has already become a fan.
Seaweed and Egg Soup Fan No. 2: It’s a good brainstorming article, but it was written by Laver as a drama that reflects social reality and has a profound meaning. Others don’t know it, but I am convinced anyway.
Passerby Reader No. 8: Go back and confirm, the cold hot spring is about the city?Isn't it about suspense reasoning? !
Kazama Drunk Fan No. 3: This description is simple, and the sense of long history is overwhelming!A drunkard is worthy of being a drunkard!
Cold Spring Fan No. 3: The brain has been hollowed out.
Passerby Reader No. 9: I feel a little terrified. After watching the part about the God of Treasures, I wonder if I am going crazy too...
Baiyun Canggou Fan No. 2: Why is Baiyun Canggou so good at water in Solitaire...
Passerby reader No. 10: Duiying's popularity doesn't seem to be very high... So what is the criteria for this selection?
Passerby Reader No. 11: The ending scared the baby to tears!
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