Abandoned text penalty system

How does it feel to walk into a lost novel?What is the experience of binding a mentally handicapped system that twitches from time to time?

Among the hardships, probably no one can understand better than Fang Zimo who inexplicably became the protagonist in the book.

As the 'protagonist' who has not found a single golden finger so far, he is wearing a bruise and a towel in his hand, looking helplessly at the handsome sleeping face who is carelessly settled on the small bed beside him.

That's right, Fang Zimo has transmigrated into a book, and also transmigrated into a cheated comprehension essay, becoming the protagonist Gong in it, and the man next to him with the same scars is his "protagonist Gong" in the novel. His younger brother, the "protagonist Shou" who will dominate the comprehension world together in the future.

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Even though it was the last day of vacation, I was living an idle life as usual, who would have known that this kind of thing would happen to me—suddenly lost consciousness and crossed into someone else's world.

With some complicated emotions accumulated in his heart, and feeling the tingling pain from the scar on his face, Fang Zimo finally believed that this was not a dream.

"Burning Moon Martial Lord".

Everything that started all of this started with this pit text.

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"It turned out to be a hole?"

The last day of the holiday, in the evening.

Hesitatingly looking at the details of the novel and the last update time of the article, and flipping through the comments of the Keng Wenzhi Blade, Fang Zimo was shocked by the abrupt end of the first part of the novel he was chasing.

The work unit finally had a holiday, after resting and relaxing, and getting together with friends, I suddenly remembered the mobile phone software that had been forgotten for a long time.

I received an update prompt after I opened it lightly. The infrequently used software exists in a corner of the phone screen. It has not been opened for a long time, and it feels like it is covered in dust.

After upgrading the software and recharging the coins, I thought I’d been fattening up for so long, and I could always read enough at once. Who would know that the first article was opened, and the article would be a trap?

Speaking of which, this is still a novel collected last year, and it seems to be... the first book of a new writer?

As an experienced reader of online novels, Fang Zimo is quite insightful in reading all kinds of online novels. People who "read group books" have a very profound and thorough understanding of the various routines and plots in the books. Predict what's next.

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The first time I caught up with the pit text, I didn't care about the novels that were still hot and updated on the list. Fang Zimo frowned slightly. Even if he knew it was a pit, he clicked on it again and jumped down obliged.

After all, it was rare for him to pursue this novel from Chapter 1, and the book "Burning Moon Martial Lord" is very special to him.

At the beginning, Fang Zimo also started from stallion to harem style, xx harem, xx lunatics, and has been seeing the future of another world, sci-fi mechs, reborn xx, xx God of War, Gongdou Zhaidou, princes, emperors, and president of school grass xx Wife... Anyway, no matter if it's the dominance of the world or the dominance of beauty, the popular masterpiece or the little-known little transparent, I have watched all kinds of genres.

Even...*wen.

In fact, as a qualified straight man, there were mistakes in clicking on the *text before, but it was more because he was really short of books for a while.I read too many long-distance upgrade streams, which was a bit boring, so I tried to look for other types of articles without changing the main style.

The emotional quarrel between two men is nothing more than a pastime to pass the time for Fang Zimo, who has nothing to say. Anyway, this type of thing will not have much sense of substitution, until he found "Burning" in the classified search. "Moon Martial Lord", this is a clean stream from China - an upgraded monster-fighting novel under the name of '*'.

The writing style is not very good, and the routines are not very new, but somehow Fang Zimo has a wonderful sense of substitution.

To get to the bottom of it, the biggest reason is probably that the protagonist Gong in "Burning Moon Martial Lord" has the same name as him, and is also called Fang Zimo.

At the beginning, when I clicked on it, I saw this setting and this name. For Fang Zimo, it could be described as a dull thunder in the sky, but after reading it slowly, I found that this strange setting with the same name made him feel particularly strong.

In addition, maybe because the author is a Virgo, the other party seems to... also come from the upgrade stream?In this novel, there are not many plots about the emotional description of attacking and suffering, and more are the usual routines of upgrading and fighting monsters.

Across the screen, according to the text, looking at myself on the other side with all kinds of all-powerful situations... Although it is a bit strange, it seems... Unexpectedly, I can't stop.

Even if the output of novels is huge and there are one after another, the probability of being able to coincide with my own name is extremely slim, not to mention that the names coincide with various protagonists who have a good impression and halo.

Even though it's a novel, it still occupies the main character.

So, read a chapter and comment on a chapter, and give all kinds of pertinent opinions... Fang Zimo became the most loyal book fan of this newcomer writer, and also left various marks on the originally empty comment area, witnessing the development of the novel The gradual increase in favorites and comments...

As for later, why didn't you watch it anymore?

Probably because the update was too slow, I was busy with work, and with the purpose of fattening up, I found a novel that was more palatable, so I put it aside and forgot about it...

Tapping his fingers, flipping the pages, watching the progress of the familiar story, it seems that he hasn't been away from the novel for a long time.

The pace of Fang Zimo's engrossed reading was fast, and it didn't take long for the novel to reach its climax.

Finally, the ultimate boss that has been laid out in previous chapters is about to appear.

Taking a deep breath, Fang Zimo continued to read backwards...

'...A figure slowly appeared in the night, with sword-shaped eyebrows drawn into the temples, two light moles at the end of the eyes, thin lips that were not stained but red, and a three-pointed evil smile.Black hair in black clothes, clothes and hair are unrestrained, against the figure suspended in mid-air, the dark light floats, as if a god has descended into the world...'

The extraordinarily detailed description of the appearance of the characters and the grand way of appearance occupy more than half of this chapter. It is indeed the ultimate boss with many foreshadowings.

Finally, after reading the climax, Fang Zimo, who was well substituted, became a little excited as the progress progressed.

It is also rare for a plain novel about fighting monsters and upgrading to give people mood twists and turns.

But just after Fang Zimo turned a page backwards with great interest, he found that this chapter had reached the end where the author had something to say.

As for the text... just, no, yes, yes?

The routine, every time I go to □□, I will get stuck in the most important place, and then save it for the next chapter, so that people can continue to read.

Ignoring what the author said in the "something to say" section, my fingers kept turning the page backwards.

...Important reminder, it's the last page...

Fang Zimo: ...

Even if you know it's a fake article, it's too immoral and inappropriate to stop here, right?

And go back to the previous page, take another look at what the author has to say, what is the matter with this ruthless tone?

——'No one is watching, so it's a pit. '

The short six words appeared in an unsightly position, which really puzzled him.

Not to mention that no one asked you the reason for cheating, and few people would say it clearly about such a bastard as cheating, right?If I had known that there would be no follow-up after this chapter was completed, why did you still use such a long description of the appearance of the starting point characters?Can't make up the word count?

It's really sinister.

For Fang Zimo, the loyal reader who wrote the first message, he also watched the collection of this novel increase to double digits, triple digits, and four digits step by step, and the comments under each chapter are also getting more and more. more.Obviously, the number of people who watch it is gradually increasing, why does it fail if you don’t watch it for two months?

There are neither too many nor too many people watching, so what do you mean no one watches?

I don't know whether this chicory has bad eyesight or is blind. Anyway, the comment area of ​​the last chapter has already fallen into negative scores and bad reviews.

Probably, perhaps, must be blind.

The idea was a bit vicious, and when it reached the climax, it was called to stop, and the feeling of aggrieved in my heart resonated strongly with the comments under the article.So, Fang Zimo also angrily popped up the small keyboard and joined the camp of the negative score army.

Even if you don’t have too high expectations, even if you don’t read it on time and pay attention, the worst thing is that it’s unfinished.

Usually, he keeps silent and rarely leaves a message. This is the first time Fang Zimo has been so enthusiastic, and it is also the first time he has posted a negative comment.

Although I was not happy when I was cheated, when I tried to write a negative score and post a comment, I felt a sense of uncontrollable joy in my heart.

Since the author doesn't make him feel better, leaving a negative score for revenge is nothing, right?But at the same time he clicked on the 'brick pile' comment item, the software interface suddenly froze.

As expected, it was Jin Shou.

Frowning, he watched the page jump, and jumped to the "novel details" section again, and then didn't know which part of the phone or the software had a problem, inexplicably started from the first page, stuck and started to automatically browse.

I pressed and pressed with my fingertips, but there was no response from the interface.Fang Zimo was thinking about whether to restart the machine or simply replace it, when the literary logo appeared directly in front of his eyes.

It is not an ordinary sign on the bright screen, the symbol of the green scroll scrolls from the screen very strangely, and appears in front of you in a two-dimensional posture in an exceptionally three-dimensional way, just like a transparent screen with a projector in front of you generally.

And... the logo has no thickness, and it is at right angles to the screen that is shining with white light.

Such a picture is really too weird, tainted with a little bit of fantasy, making the scene in front of me seem unreal at all.

For a moment, Fang Zimo's eyes widened. He didn't know what to do. He couldn't even react to the simplest and most direct way of throwing away the phone. He could only stare blankly at Jin who appeared out of nowhere. Be marked by God.

— beep.

The user abandoned the article, causing the article to accumulate a lot of resentment points. It is now detected that the reading progress of the 'abandoned article' is [-]%, and the system binding begins...

"What, what?"

A strange mechanical sound caught Fang Zimo's mind, and he stared in disbelief at the green sign flashing twice, and the sight range was completely occupied by green in the next second.

— beep.

The reader abandons the article, causing the author's sad value to be too high, and the automatic punishment system is activated. The reader needs to complete the system tasks and improve the plot of the article before returning to the original world... The system is [-]% bound.

"Back to... the original world?"

It wasn't a hallucination, the sound of mechanical reminders still rang in my ears alternately, but the scene of the living room in front of me became blurred.The original leisure weekend was interrupted, Fang Zimo held the phone dully, and was swallowed by the dazzling light like this.

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