Bai Yueguang is over-compensated [Transmigration Book]

Chi Zhouqing couldn't say it out loud, it was clearly a matter of the reader's own level, and had nothing to do with the writer!

He looked so lonely, he didn't even understand what they wrote.

Facing Xia Yubai's eyes with implied expectation, Chi Zhouqing couldn't bear to break his expectation.He touched his nose: "Since it's a speech, why don't you explain it again?"

"Okay." Xia Yubai nodded. Afraid of affecting the other two homeworkers in the living room, the two opened the door together and went out.

He didn't even take the manuscript back, so he took a step back and gave a speech without the script.

Chi Zhouqing pretended to be listening to the lecture very seriously, um, he spoke clearly, full of emotion, confident in his posture, and the content... he couldn't understand the content, but he should be very tall anyway.

Xia Yubai spoke for 5 minutes, and he listened for 5 minutes in a daze.

Xia Yubai looked over: "Do you think there is any problem?"

Chi Zhouqing naturally couldn't comment on the content. He considered it carefully: "I didn't notice it when I read it just now, but I felt something was wrong when you said it. Did you find that the sentence you wrote was too long? "

Xia Yubai was puzzled: "Too long?"

"I don't know much about English speeches, but I've done Chinese speeches," Chi Zhou said inwardly, not knowing whether leaders' speeches can be classified as Chinese speeches. Words. Both are speeches, so there should be something in common, right?"

Xia Yubai was lost in thought.

"I don't know if I'm right. But you really have too many long sentences. One sentence occupies two or three lines, and there are a lot of complicated elements. I don't know the sentence after hearing it Who is the subject and what is he going to do. And many of the words you use are not common words.”

Chi Zhouqing recalled his vocabulary.In order to prevent the situation that he could not understand the topic repeatedly, he bravely memorized the entire high school English vocabulary, which included most of the commonly used vocabulary, so it is not to blame for his small vocabulary this time.

"How should I put it? Your speech is too... gorgeous, and it feels like you're deliberately 'showing off your skills'." Seeing that Xia Yubai was expressionless, Chi Zhou immediately added, fearing that it would hurt the child's self-confidence, "I Opinions raised casually may not be correct, and you have the right to refer to them.”

"You're right," Xia Yubai smiled lightly. Although the smile quickly subsided, the happiness on his face still showed, "I went in the wrong direction. The speech should be based on 'talkability' , 'infectious', I failed to meet these requirements. It may be an excellent composition, but it will never be a qualified speech."

Ah, yes!Chi Zhouqing suddenly realized: No wonder he felt that Xia Yubai's manuscript was well written, but it was a bit off.If this article is included in the exam, the marking teacher will of course like the "elegant literature and art" tone full of advanced words and long difficult sentences, which is completely unfriendly to the people, but the speech takes the easy-to-understand route!

Speech is an art whose quality is better than words. Profound themes and unique insights are far more important than beautiful sentences and elegant expressions.

"Thank you." Xia Yubai smiled again, and hurried back to revise the manuscript.

Chi Zhou lightly saw that he was crumpling the manuscript into a ball, making a gesture to throw it into the trash can, and quickly intercepted it: "Hey, Yubai, don't throw it away, save this as a model essay for me, let me learn from it." How do you write long and difficult sentences?"

Xia Yu didn't raise his head: "If you want to read the English composition, I will write it for you on the spot. My writing is ugly and inappropriate." After speaking, he threw the waste manuscript into the trash can.

Is this also called ugly?Chi Zhou lightly thought of Xia Yubai's elegant and elegant English characters, and compared them with his own English characters of different sizes, which flew up and down unwilling to be bound by horizontal lines, and instantly understood that his composition scores were not only deducted from the content, but also from the writing. superior.

Xia Yubai worked on it for a while before finishing the new manuscript.He ran up to him excitedly: "Is it much better this time?"

Chi Zhou read it quickly. After Xia Yubai gave up his Yangchun Baixue writing style, the whole article was quite down-to-earth. At least he could immediately see that the topic of this speech was a regular topic "The role of the Internet in contemporary youth life." character of".

"Do you want to listen to my speech?" Xia Yu's eyes were bright.

On the surface it is a question sentence, but what I actually want to hear is an affirmative answer.

Chi Zhou smiled lightly: "I think so."

Xia Yubai started his second speech. I don't know if it was because he successfully solved the problem of his speech this time. His speech was much more emotional and more powerful.

"Thank you very much for pointing out this problem," Xia Yubai thanked again after the speech, "After changing the manuscript, the feeling of reading the sentence is different."

Chi Zhouqing: "You wrote the manuscript yourself. As a layman, I'm just offering some opinions, so I don't dare to accept it."

Xia Yubai's thanks never stop with words, he expressed his gratitude by asking Chi Zhou to eat watermelon lightly.

Chi Zhouqing, who had no money to eat fruit because of poverty for several months before being paid by the rich second generation Bai Yueguang, almost shed tears.

The two happily shared a small watermelon in the kitchen.Xia Yubai also asked Chi Zhouqing to poach the heart of his small half melon on the grounds that he couldn't eat half a melon.

Chi Zhou thought lightly: Where in this world can a simple fool like Xia Yubai take the initiative to give the advantages to others?How could he even give up the spoonful in the middle of the watermelon?

After the two finished eating, they ran back to the living room.

There are three ways for boys to communicate with each other: playing ball, playing games, and chatting with beautiful sisters.

Zhong Ji and Li Jinghong originally looked at each other and hated each other, but they rushed through a few canyons together, and found out that the two were the boyfriend fans of the same traffic Xiaohua when chatting. After making an appointment to play together this week, their friendship has come true Rapid progress from nothing to something, from something to many.

The more they talked, the more they discovered that the two had similar hobbies, and a feeling of sympathy and sympathy emerged spontaneously. They wished they could marry Jinlan on the spot and become brothers with different surnames.

It's a pity that the process of sworn marriage was interrupted by Chi Zhouqing and the two who pushed the door open.

The two of them were very embarrassed, Li Jinghong respected Chi Zhouqing, Zhong Ji was afraid of Xia Yubai, they never dared to speak loudly when the four of them were studying, and this passionate chat was caught straight.

Chi Zhouqing was also very embarrassed. He only realized when he saw them. He had just eaten alone with Xia Yubai and forgot about his tablemate.

Li Jinghong chatted so much that he even moved his chair to the side of Zhong Ji, and Chi Zhouqing saw the beauty of an adult, so he changed his seat to Xia Yubai's side, and talked to people by the way.

He secretly poked Xia Yubai: "Can't the two of us forget about eating alone?"

Xia Yubai thought for a moment, called his aunt to cut up the melon and sent it over.

The group of four stayed together until after dinner like last time.

Before leaving, Li Jinghong asked Chi Zhouqing if he would come to play with him tomorrow afternoon, and his new brother Zhong Ji would also come.

Chi Zhouqing: No, I just went out to eat a melon, how did Zhong Ji become your new brother?