College Entrance Exam English Full Score Composition

ely.Helefttheclassroomwithoutsayingoneword.AsMarkwaswalkingaway, Mattsaidinanangryvoice, "Youareselfish. Youarejustthinkingaboutyourself. Iwashingfunonmybirthday.Whycan'tyouunderstandit"

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While he was saying it, Mallory, one of his classmates and friend, stood up and started to say, "How can you say such thing to Mark Youdon't know whathappened! Last night, he called youmany times, buted idn't get any answer from you. He worried about what was going wrong with you. Hetookhis car and drove all night looking for you. He looked at the hospital, the jail, and bars…” Matt started to apologize to Mallory and to himself, saying, “Why did he do it He could work on the project by himself, and…” At that time Mallory spoke angrily, “Shutup! He had prepared a surprise birthday party for you , and we waited for you or for a call all night long."

Tears fell from his eyes. Matt didn't know what to say or what to do. Before he said anything, Mallory had left the classroom. He sat down and stayed there for along time. He looked around the classroom. It was cold and plain without this friends. It was empty, just like his living room now.

polar night track

Steve, at welve-year-oldboy, was about to be lost forever, by the U.S. education system. Remarkably, he could read, yet, inspite of his reading skills, Steve was failing. erthan at welcome year old, yet, Steve went unnoticed... until Miss White.

Miss White was assmiling, young, beautiful redhead, and Steve was in love! For the first time in his young life, he couldn't take his eyes off his teacher; yet, still he failed. And when he was punished for failing to turn in his homework, he felt just miserable! Still, hedid not study.

In the middle of the first semester of school, the entire seventh grade was tested for basic skills. Steve hurried through his tests, and continued to dream of other things, as the day wore on. sofhisalcoholichome.Noonecheckedonhimtoseeifhewassafe.Nooneknewhewasgone,becausenoonewassober(sober)enoughtocare.Oddly,Stevenevermisseddayofschool.

Oneday, Miss White's impatient voice broke into his daydreams. "Steve!!" Startled, turned to look at others.

"Pay attention!"

Steve locked his gaze on Miss White with adolescent adoration (adolescent love), ass she began to go over the test results for the seventh grade.

"You all did pretty well," shetoldtheclass, "exceptforoneboy, anditbreaksmyhearttotellyouthis, but..." Shehesitated, pinningStevetohisseatwithasharpstare, hereyessearchinghisface.

"...The smartest boy in theseve