My rival fell in love with me at first sight [Unlimited]

At 2020:6 pm on June 22, 2, this escape article, which took half a year to conceive and write, can finally come to an end.It was a painful process to write such an article that was beyond my ability, and I was very tired.

The original idea was actually a good one.I like to watch suspenseful and thrilling things, movies, novels, and criminal investigation short dramas...all of them are my hobbies. I can think of a similar thing by myself, and I feel very fulfilled when I think about it.

It's not like that when you start to write.In the compact development of the plot, it is a test for me to set up the attacker and the victim, explain the emotional changes of the victim and the opponent clearly, and make it natural and reasonable without embarrassment. Write eye-catching!I know that a certain part of me couldn't control it, and I still feel very regretful when I look back.

This story also has no outline, and with a basic idea and general emotional direction, I hurriedly started writing.

I’m ashamed to say that when I finished writing the first part of the warm-up game, I didn’t even know what to write in dungeon [-]. When I finished writing the dungeon and returned to high school, I struggled for a long time before I came up with the outline of dungeon [-] Changqing’s funeral. , copy three who is the murderer was accomplished overnight, full of inspiration, I was very happy to write, copy four was exhausting, I felt like I couldn’t write any more every day, I found a little feeling in the witch game, I was very happy to write, Duplicate [-]... At that time, the manuscripts were about to be exhausted, and I was rushing every day. After finishing this chapter, I had no clue about the next chapter. Thinking of the task of [-] that day, I wanted to hug the computer and cry, because the inspiration was exhausted, it was very difficult to code [-] a day-why should I push myself to this point!

Alas, it turns out that the feedback on the inspired part is also good, and the effect of the rushed part is not good, so I advise all authors to have an outline!

Let's talk about the plot.There is nothing to say about the first two dungeons. The third dungeon who is the murderer wanted to design more content. If the rules of the game were changed a little, there would be twenty chapters in the back, slowly playing the elimination method, and adding a few more chapters. A reversal is no problem, think about it or forget it, I'm too lazy... woo woo.

I didn't want to write the fourth dungeon at the beginning. It was entirely to bring out the ten final bosses in the final chapter. In this dungeon, Granny Lu and Ding Hou are both newcomers. I wrote a lot of ink to describe this girl, but I was too tired after writing copy five, so I smeared her neck hastily, which made this character not very plump.

The original plan for the ten bosses at the end was to have a copy of Xiong Tu, but later I felt that Xiong Tu was nothing more than a brainless macho, and couldn't write anything new, so I simply added a cannon fodder to it, so there was a gang formation The role of the tamarin.

Let's talk about Weiwei, this girl is really miserable.I have been writing until Chapter 90, and she has been positioned by me as Gong Shou's confidante and loyal friend... But when it was about to end, I had a whim, after Yan Lao died, Gong Shou added a girl to find the door, this The configuration is so embarrassing and superfluous, so I turned her into a big boss at the end of the level... How capricious.

When turning her around, there are also some considerations about Weiwei's identity and initial weapon.I want to turn the initial weapon into an identity swap card, swap her identity with the red kite (the policeman is actually a red kite), and then give her the setting of hiding her superior force. Chapter four is fine.Of course, I gave up again...my brain would blow off any more, Khan.

Oh, by the way, there is another point in the plot.Do you remember that Lin Huan finally chose dumb Lin Huan in the witch game?When writing this piece, I secretly wanted Lin Huan to choose the wrong person.This mistaken Xiao Yiyou would accompany Lin Huan until the tenth gate, and Lin Huan who found out that something was wrong shot him down, and then Lin Huan could justifiably make a dungeon.But if I write like this, Xiao Yiyou will be absent for a long time. Dear readers, if they find out that this Xiao is actually a fake, will they throw me Yueshi madly in anger?The more I think about it, the more afraid I get, so forget it.

Regarding this article, there are two oolongs that make me dumbfounded.

First of all, this text is intended to be archived in its entirety. I am quite busy with work, so I can conceive the story well and have plenty of time for writing and revising.When I was revising an article, I sorted out the first few manuscripts and put them in the Jinjiang manuscript box. For some reason, I chose a certain day in March to publish them, thinking that I would take my time in the future.Then I forgot!It will be sent automatically in March!I do not know yet!The editor found me and said: Your subject matter is not good, have you reported it?I was stupid enough to reply that I can change it before I post it... I went up and checked, and it has been posted three chapters, I feel chilly!I only have [-] manuscripts...Xiaomengxin has never posted when I have so few manuscripts!I'm extremely hopeless!But I have already posted it, so I have to make mistakes and continue to make mistakes. The more obsessive-compulsive disorder expresses nervousness, fear, and at a loss!Fortunately, it is finally finished today, and I want to brag about myself, in the past three months, I haven't had a single day without an update!This reputation is outstanding!So friends who are reading, we keep our word and we are absolutely trustworthy!

The second oolong ha.Alas, those who have read the first three chapters I threw out know that the character design of this article has changed a lot.Lin Huan is not some little chief fighting coach, he is an all-round special soldier of the National White Tiger Special Forces, and Xiao Yiyou is a villain known all over the world (actually he is the undercover Liu of the National Suzaku Pioneer Squad), the kind who has committed many crimes.Special soldiers and bandits, what a sense!It's a pity that this can't be written... I was wrong, I didn't know that I couldn't write about special forces!Mengxin, who writes with his head covered and doesn't even read the forum, deserves to be edited and talked!Embarrassed.So then I made a big change to what I am now.There is a detail, Lin Huan will salute the army in front of the grave of the deceased comrades in arms. Wouldn't it be more appropriate if he was a special soldier?I am reluctant to change this detail...

Compared with the previous one, the results of this one have not improved much. I thought and thought and summed up a few shortcomings.

First, the language is not smooth enough.There is a cumbersome feeling in the choice of words and sentences. It is extremely unfriendly to the subject of heavy plots such as escape and killing, which will cause dyslexia.Be sure to pay attention in the future.

Second, attack and accept human settings.When I was writing the previous article, my friends said that my early attack was too weak and my performance was poor, and I took it very seriously.I like strong shou, compared to the lack of shaping of attack, I wanted to get rid of this, so I created a strong attack, which is stronger than shou's attack.Haha, the result seems to have been a bit overdone. The main point of view is that the subject is not as good as attacking in terms of force and mind, which will make the early readers unhappy.Everyone who read it knows that our Lin Huan is very strong!In short, this is my fault, and I must pay attention to it in the next book!

Third, the story is not interesting enough, which is fatal and not attractive enough.

Talk about future plans.The next thing I want to write is about men’s groups. I’ve always liked watching men’s group variety shows, such as Ou Lian, Qing You, Yi Tuan, and Creation Camp... I’m throwing nosebleeds while watching... Uh, ahem, I’m going to write one anyway Men's team draft essay, just thinking about it gives me motivation!

I still plan to save the full text of this article. I will rest for a month to recharge my batteries. I will read professional books on writing articles, pick up gold medal articles, study great divine articles, and take notes. I will devote myself to the best state Go to the next article, not for achievements, just come up with some high-quality products that I like and agree with, I hope I can live up to my heart.

After the writing style matures, I want to switch to criminal investigation themes that will test my writing skills. These are all things to come.

Finally, I would like to thank my fellow readers. Although I don’t often read comments (because I’m afraid), every time I come up and see your warm replies, I’m very moved. You are the motivation for me to update. It is the greatest affirmation of my hard work!

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Love you guys!Refill~!

(PS: In order to bring the next book in advance, this article will be included in V when it arrives online, friends who have not finished reading it, hurry up!)

At home on the evening of June 2020, 6

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The new article of the men's group asks for collection "On the counterattack of the vase group favorite (entertainment circle)"

Ruan Yanqiu, a former TY entertainment trainee, excelled in singing and dancing, and his professional ability was proficient. He was terminated by Xuezang and transferred to a small company.

Ruan Yanqiu said: Apart from acting, I really know nothing!

So the boss tailored a set of perfect vase sweethearts for him...

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Ruan Yanqiu, who didn't have money and dared not terminate the contract, looked at death like home: Isn't it just playing a cute vase?I can!

However, his acting skills are too bad. After several performances, the vase completely collapsed, and fans from all over the world climbed the wall one after another:

"Ahhhhhhhh! My family's singing skills are so good!"

"Aww! My nose bleeds from the sexy dance of my Jiujiu!"

Male fan: "Lying in the nest, I can watch my silver-haired beauty's stage focus a hundred times!"

Ruan Yanqiu's popularity soared all the way, approaching Jian Lan, the leader in position C.

In the last interview before the group night, a reporter challenged: "Does Yan Qiu think there is hope for a C debut?"

Ruan Yanqiu answered truthfully: "Maybe."

The reporter immediately turned to Jian Lan: "What do you think of Yan Qiu's challenge to your position C?"

The boss Jian Lan reached out to wrap Ruan Yanqiu's shoulders from one side, and smiled charmingly at the camera: "Don't make trouble, your own people don't care."

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Sunshine on the surface, upright and decadent inside, the middle two sit firmly in the C position, the evil and charming boss, the attack VS the talent, the hard work, the appearance is even better, but the acting skills are not so good.