An Athlete Held up by an Entertainment Career

The scriptwriter was still yawning, but he became refreshed when he heard Xu Qiao's words.

He looked at Jiang Wen questioningly, and after seeing Jiang Wen nodding, he knocked on his forehead and said, "Director Jiang, although this is not a big production, I have read the original work several times, and I absolutely respect it." The original book is not blindly modified—"

"It's just too much respect for the original work." Jiang Wen interrupted him.

The huge studio fell into silence again.

The screenwriter was stunned for a moment, suddenly realized, and showed a smile of "I understand": "I understand what you mean, Director Jiang. You think the plot is too plain now, and you need to add some explosive and topical scolding." ?”

As for what is hot and topical, many plots that destroy the three views and vulgarity flashed through the screenwriter's mind.

Jiang Wen's face darkened: "What are you thinking, I want you to add drama to Xu Qiao."

Add drama?Holding the thermos cup, Xu Qiao took a sip to moisten her throat.

No matter what Jiang Wen thinks, adding drama is not a bad thing for him.It's just that he doesn't have many roles, and the filming of the crew is gradually coming to an end. What is Jiang Wen's consideration for adding him to the scene at this time?

Jiang Wen turned over a few pages of the script and pushed in Xu Qiao's direction.

Xu Qiao saw that a lot of notes were made on the script, and the corners were filled with writing, and many places were crossed out and rewritten. The messy handwriting revealed the traces of Jiang Wen's repeated thinking.

Even if it's just a small web drama, Jiang Wen didn't shoot it for the purpose of making money, but to try his best to shoot the best within the funds allowed.

Jiang Wen glanced at Xu Qiao, and then fell on the screenwriter: "Jin'er is too stereotyped, I need you to enrich this character a bit. Complete his past, complete this character's 'bad' motives."

After a pause, Jiang Wen continued: "There is no hatred for no reason in the world, and there is no badness for no reason. We never thought about it before, nor did it mention in the original book, why Jin'er is so bad, and why he fell in love with Chunyu all of a sudden. Yuan."

The screenwriter opened his mouth and whispered, "We couldn't perfect everyone's motivation."

"Yes, there is no way, I just want you to perfect Jin'er's motives." Jiang Wen clasped his hands together, "I want you to perfect the script, and completely present this person's past, this person's distorted psychology and thoughts in front of the audience , create a character that makes the audience hate, love and pity."

Jiang Wen finally concluded: "Enhance the charm of the characters, understand?"

The set was quiet for a while, and the screenwriter looked a little embarrassed as he digested his words.

Changing the script like this is of course risky.

The book "Let's talk" is an old saying in the early days of the original author. Compared with the maturity and depth of the author's current works, this book is obviously far inferior.

Especially in the handling of characters, this feeling is more obvious.

What I wrote is a Su Shuang sweet article, what, you ask me the villain's motivation and mental journey?I don't care about that, readers are done looking at it, and labeled characters are sometimes more exciting.

Black is black, white is white, and I don't care about the gray areas of humanity or what makes a character.

I don't want to delve into his past, his difficulties, his unknown pity and sadness.

What I want is whether this character can attract readers' disgust and scolding, whether it can better highlight the charm and ability of the protagonist, and whether it can make the protagonist's image more majestic...

In the original book, Jin'er is a young girl raised by Zuihuan Pavilion, with a distorted mind, debauched in front of others, and vicious in back.Especially after meeting the hero and heroine, it got worse and was hated by others.However, it is not mentioned in the original book how Jin'er came to Zuihuan Pavilion and why it became like this.

It can be said that the role of Jin'er is a tool used to promote the development of the plot, a brainless character with the label of "villain".

Doing a lot of evil, creating obstacles for the hero and heroine, and then being trampled under the feet of the hero and heroine, becoming a stepping stone on their career and love path-this is the fate of a tool man.

Being bad is completely unreasonable, and falling in love with the male lead is completely unreasonable.

He is hateful, humble, and a pitiful creature on the path of the hero and heroine's relationship and career.

Poor sarcasm.

At this time, Jiang Wen wanted to enrich this character, give him a reasonable motivation for the character, and increase his role in the scene. To some extent, it was a magical modification of the original plot.Whether the audience will accept it or not is unknown.

A large part of the audience of the web drama comes from the readers of the original book, and it is unknown whether the villain Jiner, who has changed too much, will be abused and resisted by fans of the original book.

Coupled with the many unnecessary expenditures caused by this.

It can be said that the risk is very high.

Jiang Wen looked at Xu Qiao with downcast eyes. This was a risky decision.But Xu Qiao gave him a feeling that perhaps the revised script of "Chat General" will glow with a different vitality.

The screenwriter frowned, and glanced at Xu Qiao who was sitting quietly beside him from time to time.Of course he understood that it was Xu Qiao's outstanding acting skills that made Jiang smell this idea.

"Now, let's discuss how to change it." Jiang Wen stared at Xu Qiao, "Xu Qiao, you should say that you know this character the most. Why do you think he fell in love with Chunyu Yuan at first sight?"

In the original book, it is only mentioned that Jin'er fell in love with Chunyu Yuan at the first sight, whether it was because of Chunyu Yuan's handsomeness, youthful spirit, or something else, the original book did not say.

Now Jiang Wen wants to have a more touching and reasonable reason.

Xu Qiao's slender fingers stroked the thermos cup held in his palm. He looked down and saw the goji berries floating up and down in the thermos cup, and saw his blurred face in the reflection, and his thoughts went back to a long, long time ago.

At that time, in the book "I Became a Boss in Women's Clothes in a Brothel", he also wore a red dress with fluttering sleeves and danced on the specially made golden lotus leaves on the water.His fluttering long sleeves and veil were reflected on the water surface, and countless greedy eyes focused on him.

As soon as the dance was over, the beauty on the lotus leaf was half exposed, dripping with sweat. Before he could show his usual ambiguous smile, a man hurried up to him, with his lips tightly pressed, took off his robe and put it on him.

"I promise you a month, don't dance anymore." The deep voice seemed to echo faintly in my ears.

Xu Qiao wanted to think about it further, but the depths of her memory were blank, and her head felt like being pricked by a needle, the pain was unbearable, and she couldn't recall.

He couldn't remember the man's appearance, not even his name.

I can't remember what it was like to feel throbbing.

Xu Qiao heard her ethereal voice: "There are so many people who want to take off my clothes, but you are the only one who puts them on me..."

Two "pops" woke Xu Qiao up. When he looked up, he saw Jiang Wen clapping and giving him a thumbs up.

"That's a good reason." Jiang Wen couldn't help nodding, and wrote down this sentence in the script, "Jin'er stayed in the brothel since he was a child, so many people coveted his body and wanted to take off his clothes. Only Chunyu Yuan, The first time I saw him, I put a piece of clothing on him."

The screenwriter at the side also said: "Jin'er has a delicate mind, such a small gesture moved him and made him fall in love with Chunyu Yuan. This reason is fine."

Jiang Wen nodded to Xu Qiao: "Looking back at the scene where you and Si Cheng just met, let's add another scene, the scene where he puts on your clothes."

Xu Qiao smiled perfunctorily, gathered the down jacket she was wearing, and suddenly felt a chill all over her body.

At the end of each book travel, he will forget the appearance of everyone in the world in the previous book, and the memories he used to get along with become blurred just like those faces.Except for those skills and knowledge that he has learned in the book for many years, after completing the will of the world, as a quest reward.

This is the protection of the will of the world to some extent.A normal person, who retains the memories and emotions of one world after another, will only fall into madness.

It's just one dream after another.He didn't even know if the person in the dream was real or not.

Xu Qiao rubbed her swollen and sore temples, and continued to discuss with Jiang Wen together with the screenwriter.

This discussion went into the second half of the night.

After revising the script, the crew returned to the filming in full swing.

After making up the necessary shots, Xu Qiao's role has officially come to an end, and after the last climax, she can get a box and wrap it up.

The last scene is very important, Jiang Wen sent people to make preparations early.

At this time, because Jin'er admired Chunyu Yuan, he failed to frame Guan Nianyan in every possible way. The huge hatred and the original distortion in his heart made him even more insane. He not only chased and killed the troubled heroine, but also killed many innocent people in the process. people.

Chunyu Yuan has not yet learned Jin'er's identity, and while trying his best to find out the martial arts man in black who pesters them in every possible way, his disgust towards Jin'er, who is always posted in Zuihuan Pavilion, is growing day by day.

On this day, during the fight with the man in black, Chunyu Yuan picked up the man in black's face scarf with his sword. Before he could clearly see the appearance under the face scarf, the man in black slipped away.

That quick glance made Chunyu Yuan feel familiar.He had a guess, but he couldn't believe it: the frail, boneless, flirtatious and gorgeous young lady in Zuihuan Pavilion, who was sought after by everyone, was that ruthless man in black?

In the evening, Chunyu Yuan came to Zuihuan Pavilion for proof, and spent a lot of money to book Jin'er for a night.

In Jin'er's room, the two looked at each other speechlessly.

All the lighting props are in place, and several camera positions are facing the two of them.After the recording was made, the filming began.

Xu Qiao was still wearing a thin red dress, fastened by a silk belt around her waist.He looked at Si Cheng who was sitting at the table without saying a word, pursed his lips and smiled, walked over and put his slender fingers on his shoulder: "A Yuan..."

There was a tingling sound.

Si Cheng frowned and brushed his hand away.

Xu Qiao didn't mind his indifference either, as if he was used to it.He raised his hand and poured him a glass of wine, and said with a smile on his face, "This is the first time you have come back to my room."

Si Cheng watched Xu Qiao expressionlessly, and said coldly, "Where are you this afternoon?"

"Afternoon?" Xu Qiao lowered her crow-feather eyelashes, smiled lightly, put down the flagon, and complained in a hoarse and blurred voice, "Of course it was on the bed, that person didn't know how to show mercy to others, Holding Jin'er's hands and tossing vigorously, Jin'er can only see the red silk on the top of her head shaking, shaking—"

"Enough!" Si Cheng couldn't hear the foul language, and pushed Xu Qiao away.

Pushed to the ground by him, Xu Qiao frowned slightly in pain.Although he was in pain, there was still a smile on his upturned face, and there was an indelible sadness hidden in the smile.

Seeing this, Si Cheng's heart skipped a beat for some reason, feeling guilty and blaming himself, subconsciously going to help him.The moment he stretched out his hand, he knew that he would be scolded again.

In the script, Chunyu Yuan just looked indifferently at Jin'er who fell to the ground.

Before Jiang Wen could start cursing, Si Cheng helped Xu Qiao up, with his hands hanging by his sides, and looked over pitifully: "Director, I'm sorry."

The apology was quick.Jiang Wen snorted and waved his hand to signal to start again.

After this scene, Chunyu Yuan has confirmed Jin'er's identity, and Jin'er knows that there is no possibility for him to be with him, and he is determined to die.

Jiang Wen attached great importance to the last finale scene, and was not in a hurry to shoot. After watching the weather forecast for a few days, he finally waited for a blizzard.He called the crew back overnight and set up the scene in the snow.

The glaring red silk flutters its teeth and claws, enveloping the whole world like a grand.Jin'er will dance a final dance for Chunyu Yuan in the snow, and die by drinking poisonous wine.