Huaigui

The first draft was completed on the night of March 3th, and it was very cold when the temperature dropped. At the end of writing, I forgot what the first line of the poem was, so I temporarily copied and pasted it from the Weibo memo.Maybe I've been hurt too much before (no, it's really peaceful at the end.

This article was first discussed with others around May last year. The outline was finalized in July, and it was continuously and steadily output from November to the end of March. It is indeed the longest article I have ever written.Maybe because the outline is relatively complete, I only got stuck in Pingcheng once from the beginning to the end.

I am quite satisfied, but it hurt me too many times during the serialization process (.

Some places may not be written clearly enough, I also have my own problems, and I will try my best to overcome them in the future.But I have a story that I want to complete, so I can only consider it word for word as much as possible, but I saw many girls who said they understood it, and the comments touched me very much, so I have a clear conscience.

I love Helan Mingyue and Gao Jing very much, and I have written many small essays about them on Weibo before, including the essay set in this article.I think it is right to do homework seriously, but many things may not be used after preparation, or may be used but not expressed well due to insufficient writing skills.These I want to leave to the readers to discuss together><, although the results are not satisfactory, as long as there are one or two people who can chat with me, I will be very happy.

Helan Mingyue's character has a very cowardly side, including his soft heart and kindness are also manifestations of cowardice. He felt that he could control Gao Jing's emotions later on, and he could truly pass this hurdle and become strong.Because Mengdian is a Disney princess with a flawless personality, if it is not written as the main attack, everyone will feel that he is more supple, but some psychological activities cannot be reflected. After weighing it, he chose to write from his perspective.

Then Xiao Jing is a psychopath... Compared with the domineering and arrogant image at the beginning, I prefer the mature and stable image in the final chapter, but the plot needs him to grow up.I seriously thought about why the two of them have different evaluations. It may be because He Lan started the script from scratch at the beginning, so everyone will think his growth is very logical; Xiaojing is a parabola. When he reaches the bottom of the valley , he himself can't accept it and is still struggling. At this time, many people say that he will sell miserably, or something, I can't understand... Could it be that he can't get a chance even if he makes a mistake... He is also working hard To realize what is wrong with me, and then confess to He Lanmingyue again and again.We know that He Lan will forgive him and will not leave him, based on the fact that we have seen the label "HE", so if there is no such label, will he be worried at any time like Gao Jing, even if he is treated gently? BE overnight?

Just, I really don't like people treating this article and my work with this and that label.

It’s not because I’m writing a masterpiece, but because I haven’t settled it from the beginning, for example, what are the indicators and percentages of “crematorium”, “torture attack” and “torture suffering”? I start from the story to figure out how emotional The development is more reasonable, and there is indeed a deviation from the reader's perspective of reading the text. Try to adjust it in the future, and there is still room for improvement.jpg

Although it is not satisfactory, it is still typed out word by word.I didn't complain about anyone from the beginning to the end, and now that I've finished writing, I still want to say, I really really don't want to tell everyone who paid more in this relationship, who was right and who was wrong.

Thank you for every piece of encouragement and cheer during the serialization process. I can't name all the familiar ids, but I really love you very much.

Maybe I have been writing on a single computer for too long, and I will take a little bit of encouragement seriously, and I will take a little bit of criticism seriously and start to quickly reflect on whether I am not doing well enough...

My mental state is actually very bad, and I usually avoid talking about this matter, but during the serialization of this article, I was really sad once and felt that life was meaningless.Maybe there will be a lot of bad comments in the future. I can only read more words of encouragement, and save the screenshots of everyone’s encouragement and likes. When I am unhappy, I will feel better QAQ

The outline of the two editions of this article is nearly [-] words, and the information has been checked in the entire folder (but the practical part is very small, so this article is not rigorous at all). I dare not say how serious I am writing, but I tried my best to complete it. .

A little more love, please love me a little more >