Our male god is broken

Linghu gathered himself together and read on intently.

Li Yu's script is not very refined, but rough.Linghu thought to himself, this is only a draft, and it must be polished later.

Even though Linghu himself is a layman, he feels that it is not easy to write a script like this for the first time.What's more, it is still written with a brush, the speed is quite amazing.

It took Linghu some time to finish reading the script that Li Yu gave him, about ten episodes in length.

At first Linghu still had some clues, but the more he looked, the more confused he became.It's not that Li Yu is not clear about writing things and characters, it is precisely this point, Li Yu has written a lot about everything and everyone.

After he read it, the most direct question was: who is the heroine?

He could tell that the male lead was the emperor, but he was not sure about the female lead.At the beginning, he thought that Yun's singer would be the heroine.The main line of this story is to tell how this humble singer went up step by step after entering the palace, and finally transformed into the final big winner.

Who knew that after entering the palace, the singer of the Yun family, apart from carefully serving the emperor, she was attached to the noble concubine, so she couldn't see any bright spots.This character is a bit plain, not as legendary as he imagined at the beginning.

In other words, the story of the entire harem is flat.It's almost ten episodes, and no one has defeated anyone, except for the queen who has not been favored all the time, everyone gets along very harmoniously.

Is this the story of how an emperor opened a harem?

Linghu thought for himself.Perhaps he was not used to this way of reading, and his head was so dizzy that he didn't savor the story carefully.Either Li Yuzhi wrote too much and missed the point.So it's confusing.

When he finished reading, Li Yu had already written a lot, stopped writing, rubbed his wrist, and asked, "What do you think?"

Linghu could hear Li Yu's voice filled with anticipation, and he immediately said, "Very good! I think it's very realistic!"

No matter what, first give affirmation.

Linghuji walked over, grabbed Li Yu's wrist, rubbed it for him, and said, "Write like this, be careful to write tenosynovitis. Why don't you use a computer later? Or find someone to type it, and you can dictate."

Li Yu said, "I still want to write the first draft."

He dragged the topic back to prevent Linghu himself from going too far, and asked, "How realistically?"

Linghuji said: "Many details are very realistic at first glance. It can be seen that you have done research."

Li Yu said, "I don't need any evidence."

Linghu did not delve into this topic, and said: "The overall atmosphere is very good. The emperor is like an emperor, and the concubine is like a concubine. I like Concubine Yun Shu very much. It would be great if I could write more about her."

This flattery touched Li Yu's heart. He smiled and said, "That's my concubine mother, of course it's fine. You have good eyesight."

Linghuji said euphemistically: "You can add more drama to her. It will look better if there are twists and turns and ups and downs."

Li Yu thought for a while and said, "She is like this in my memory."

Linghu already understood that Li Yu was only trying to restore the "memory", so all the stories, conflicts, contradictions, twists and turns, climaxes, the most important things to the script, were not too important to Li Yu.

Li Yu was just writing down all the people and things he knew.

Regarding the question of "time travel", Linghu Ji had already answered Li Yu before, he was half and half.Out of love for Li Yu, he chose to half believe.So he doesn't jump out and say, no, I don't half believe it.

He would not treat Li Yu like this.He couldn't say to Li Yu, "This is a script, it's just a script, it's fiction, it's imagination. You can write as much as you want."

Li Yu asked him, "How do you feel after watching it?"

Linghuji kissed his forehead: "You are writing a script for the first time, and it is amazing to write it like this. Really, this is definitely what I said from the bottom of my heart. But this script is still just a prototype. If you want to make a drama , you still have a long way to go.”

Li Yu said, "I know..."

He actually heard what Linghu himself meant, but he also knew that there were still many things that needed to be revised in this script.

"Besides Concubine Yun Shu, who else do you like here?" Li Yu asked again.

He was looking forward to Linghu saying that he liked his father.

Linghu thought for a while, and said, "You just wrote about Xiao Congjian who appeared on stage."

As soon as he spoke, Li Yu's expression changed.Linghu thought hard and said, "Wait...have you mentioned this person to me before? Is it your enemy?"

Li Yu said, "That's right! It's...it's him! I'm against you!" He stammered a bit angrily.

Linghu laughed: "I think it's quite interesting for you to write about him."

Li Yu felt that this was impossible and unreasonable!

"He's so arrogant here, can't you see it?"

Linghuji said: "Maybe other people's attitude towards the emperor is too... how to put it, a bit rigid. The sudden appearance of such a person really shines. No wonder he later became the emperor's favorite."

Li Yu had nothing to say!He really had to revise and revise.

He said angrily: "I have to find an ugly and fat actor to play Xiao Congjian."

Linghu laughed at him: "Don't. I saw everything you wrote in the first draft. This man is obviously a handsome young man, and even the princess is full of praise for him. You promised to restore 100% of the memory?"

Li Yu was speechless.However, the selection of actors is not a problem that needs to be considered now.Now he has to finish writing the script.

Linghu himself gave him some suggestions.He said: "You said that you have finished writing one-third? But I read it, and it is about ten episodes. Thirty episodes are a bit short in this environment, and you have to write more. But now you It's too hard to write like this. You must be equipped with a smarter and more capable secretary."

He paused, and continued to coax Li Yu: "Look, you said it yourself. In the past, there were at least two people serving your pen and ink in the study. Now we still find two more people to serve. This can speed up the speed. It depends on you." At the current speed, the script cannot be finalized without spending two or three years, and you basically don’t do anything in these two or three years.”

He spoke so softly and considerately that Li Yu nodded involuntarily.

Linghu said again: "What's more, this is your first time writing a script. No matter how perfect the plot is, there must still be some deficiencies in skills. There is no way to do it. Only those who write a lot have skills. You If you write a lot in the future, you will definitely have skills. But for the first time, you still have to find someone to perfect it for you and polish it for you.”

This also sounded reasonable, Li Yu asked, "Who are you looking for?"

Linghuji said: "Look for a professional screenwriter. Of course, the signature will definitely be your chief screenwriter. Nowadays, a lot of screenwriting work is team work. Even professional screenwriters need help. This is too much work. You should be clear about it?"

Li Yu agreed, and he was basically satisfied with Linghu's own reaction.

Not long after, Li Yu contacted He Fan and officially notified He Fan of the incident—he would write the screenplay and direct his first TV series.

He Fan was stunned for a moment.It is reasonable to say that it is not uncommon for actors to be excellent and direct. Many actors have been directors, some have succeeded and some have failed, but indeed many people have tried.

"You...what disgusting expression? I can't write and direct myself?" Li Yu asked.

He Fan hurriedly comforted him: "Honey, it's not that I dislike it...but, isn't this too sudden?"

Li Yu said, "What's unexpected? Just do what you want."

As he spoke, he dumped the script to He Fan.

This is already the first version of the printed script.Linghu sent a little secretary over to sort out and print out the written script for Li Yu.

He Fan took it, roughly flipped through it, and saw that it was a court script.

He said with emotion: "I didn't expect that you would write such a script. But it's okay... I'll take a look first..."

He flipped through it again, and asked, "By the way, you have to write and direct yourself, so you have to star in it yourself, right? Only then will the management be interested."

Li Yu was stunned for a moment, and said, "I... have to act." But he hadn't thought about the starring role before.

He Fan said: "I think the emperor is the protagonist? You just play the emperor, right?"

They were in the coffee shop when Li Yu almost splashed the water.

"Hey!" he said aloud.

He Fan was taken aback: "What's wrong?"

Li Yu said, "I can't play this!"

He dared not play the role.How dare he play his father!He respected his father from the bottom of his heart.What's more, this has to be played against Concubine Yun Shu...with all the concubines in the harem...

He Fan felt baffled: "Why? Isn't this the protagonist?"

Li Yu faltered and said, "Anyway, I can't act! This role... has too many roles! If I have to star and direct at the same time, I will definitely be too busy. This is my first time directing, and I will definitely need a lot of time to direct!"

In desperation, he thought of a plausible reason.

After hearing this, He Fan thought about it, and said, "Okay. But you must play a role that has more roles and is more eye-catching."

He put away the script: "I'll take it back and look at it carefully."

Li Yu asked him to arrange a screenwriter to help him revise and polish it.The original company has contracted screenwriters.Although Li Yu and He Fan have left the company, they can still cooperate.He Fan said: "That's for sure. It's your first time writing a script, and you definitely need professionals to revise it."

It took He Fan a day to finish reading the script, and then had another talk with Li Yuchang.He Fan's opinion is actually similar to Linghu's own - the atmosphere and details are good, but the story conflict is not enough.The small orgasm and the big orgasm are not obvious, and the ups and downs are not enough.The portrayal of female characters is not three-dimensional enough.

Compared with Linghu's gentleness, He Fan's words are much more direct.Li Yu was very unhappy when he heard it, and said, "According to what you say, my script is useless?"

He Fan said: "Of course you can't say that. How can it be useless? The character design is quite interesting. How about this? Let me show it to Zhao Xiaowen and ask her to help revise it. She is expensive, but it is worth it .”

Zhao Xiaowen is the screenwriter of their company. She has participated in several dramas with good ratings and received a lot of money.