[Tomb Notes BG] Nether Moon
Chapter 27 Prelude to the Snake Marsh Ghost Creature
Wu Xie no longer knew what words to use to describe his current mood more accurately.Since Wu Sansheng woke up, he received two weird video tapes. To find out, he avoided Wu Sansheng and went to the nursing home in Golmud, where he found Chen Wenjin's notes, met a forbidden woman, and met Zhang Qiling and another person, who should not have appeared here, followed them into the car of Aning's team and arrived at their camp, only to find out that they were going to look for Tamu Tuo mentioned in Chen Wenjin's notes.
All this happened so abruptly, Wu Xie didn't understand anything, and Zhang Qiling refused to say anything. In order to understand the mystery in Kaixin, Wu Xie decided to set off with Ah Ning and his party.
When it was almost 12 o'clock, everyone was almost ready, but they had no intention of leaving. Wu Xiezheng was wondering what these people were waiting for, when Zhang Qiling, who had been resting against the car, suddenly stood up and looked into the distance. go.
Wu Xie also looked in that direction, and saw a jeep driving towards the camp at high speed. After the vehicle stopped, the door opened, and a figure all in black appeared in front of everyone under Wu Xie's staring gaze. , By the way, he raised his hand to say hello to Aning: "Sister Ning, I'm sorry for being late!" Turning around and seeing Wu Xie, she was surprised at first, and then said with a hearty smile: "Yo, you're here too!"
Wu Xie burst into anger from nowhere. He was not easy to get angry in front of his little brother before, but he was not afraid in front of this acquaintance: "Oh, what a ghost! You are here, what the hell is this?" what happened?"
Xuanyue smiled at Wu Xie and said, "Comrade innocent, swearing at girls will ruin your image as a frail, handsome and good young man!" Then she walked straight to Zhang Qiling, the smile on her face became gentle, She said: "I'm sorry, Qi Ling, have you been waiting for a long time?" The indifferent expression on Zhang Qiling's face became softer, and he shook his head slightly: "It's okay, it's good if you can come."
Xuanyue turned her head and saw Wu Xie looking at him in shock again, she couldn't help laughing, patted him on the shoulder, and said, "Let's go, I'll tell you something slowly on the way."
Walking all the way in the Gobi, Wu Xie was thinking and chatting with the Caucasian man all the way, stopping several times to replenish supplies on the way, he wanted to take this opportunity to ask Xuanyue and Zhang Qiling what happened after they entered the Bronze Gate that day.Reluctantly, Zhang Qiling kept his eyes closed in the car, while Xuanyue had a very happy chat with the young man in black glasses who came out of the nursing home with Zhang Qiling, without giving Wu Xie a chance to ask questions.
When it was time to camp, Xuanyue finally stopped chatting endlessly, but it seemed that because Zhang Qiling was deliberately unwilling to contact other people, Xuanyue and Zhang Qiling stayed away from the crowd, watching the sky together silently , although they didn't say anything, both of them enjoyed the quiet atmosphere.
That night, just as Xuanyue lay down and fell asleep, she felt someone approaching, and then Zhang Qiling sat up next to her. Xuanyue opened her eyes and saw the grandson of the old Tibetan lady who was leading the way. Tashi.
Tashi and Zhang Qiling walked away after saying a few words, Zhang Qiling stood up and was about to leave, Xuanyue quickly sat up and called, "Qiling, where are you going?" Zhang Qiling smiled slightly and said, "It's a bit You need to go to bed first, I will be back soon." Then he walked in another direction, which was the direction where Dingzhu Dolma was.
Xuanyue watched Zhang Qiling leave, took a deep breath, and slowly closed her eyes. For a moment, she seemed to be able to hear the sound of the wind blowing in a very distant place, until she heard the voice of Dingzhu Zhuoma, She just opened her eyes and looked there.
After a while, Wu Xie also came with Tashi, and then Xuanyue listened carefully to their conversation, and it turned out that Chen Wenjin had already left a message.However, there was a sentence that made Xuanyue puzzled, "It is among you", what exactly is this it?
After Dingzhu Zhuoma left, only Wu Xie and Zhang Qiling were left. Zhang Qiling was about to leave, but Wu Xie stopped him, and the two started arguing.
Wu Xie just wanted to know the answers to those doubts, but Zhang Qiling was unwilling to tell him, and Xuanyue could understand that Wu Xie was also inexplicably involved in this series of things that had nothing to do with him. He just wanted to find the answers to the mysteries That's all, but Zhang Qiling didn't want Wu Xie to continue to participate in his affairs.
What Zhang Qiling said next made Xuanyue's heart tingle, and every word was deeply embedded in her heart, especially the sentence "I am a person without past and future", which made her feel the pain for the first time. Zhang Qiling was confused.
After Zhang Qiling finished talking with Wu Xie, he walked back and saw that Xuanyue was not asleep but was in a daze, so she asked, "Why didn't you sleep?" Xuanyue looked up at Zhang Qiling, and said slowly: "What you just said to Wu Xie , I heard it all..." Zhang Qiling froze for a moment, then fell silent for a moment.
Xuanyue stood up, took Zhang Qiling's hand, looked into his eyes seriously and said: "Qiling, the past is indeed the kind of existence that is hard to get back once lost, but time has been passing, and we can't tolerate it anymore. The past is reluctant to part. However, you do not have a future, your future still has me, no matter how difficult this road is, I will definitely accompany you to go on, even if everyone forgets you, I will still remember, The Zhang Qiling in my heart..."
Looking at those bright eyes, Zhang Qiling's calm heart once again stirred up waves. Why can she always move her heartstrings and move her face?He showed a faint smile, like a breeze, but people couldn't look away. He gently stroked Fu Xuanyue's hair and said, "Well, that's our future..."
The next day, the group set off again, and the legendary snake marsh ghosts were one step closer to everyone.
The author has something to say: First of all, I kowtow to apologize. I don’t remember how long I haven’t updated the article...Secondly, I kowtow to apologize. Yes, one day, I'll let it end...
☆、About this article
It’s been a long time since I came back to update the article, and I managed to hold back an article. Hei Yu admits that there are indeed a lot of broken places in this article. Hei Yu is also trying his best to think about how to correct the previous disharmony. Although we are not good at writing my brother’s BG, But that doesn't mean I don't care about this article.
Regarding Marysu, I sincerely want to ask, where is this article considered Marysu?The first time I wrote fanfiction was on □□.com about exorcist teenagers. Before and after that, I paid attention to Baidu’s true meaning of Marysu, and tried my best to avoid taking Su’s route. If I have to say it, this article It is true that there are Su's tendencies, but it is not too much.The heroine is neither beautiful, nor is she born in a wealthy family, nor does she have any extraordinary skills other than exorcism, and her personality is not very pleasing. She is neither a saint nor a devil. I feel sorry for my little brother when I found out that she is the same kind of person. I have experienced a lot with her before I developed a certain relationship, but it hasn't been tested yet. I don't know if I really like women. Lord, only after experiencing amnesia can I confirm my feelings. I don't think there should be any problems here. Why can't I wait for the later plot to come out before complaining or swearing?
What is Mary Sue?The following is an excerpt from Baidu Encyclopedia:
MarySue fictionalizes a protagonist in the fanfiction that does not exist in the real plot. This protagonist is often very good and powerful, entangled with the popular characters in the real plot, ambiguous constantly, and peach blossoms bloom.
In the hands of mature writers, Marysu will appear as an intellectual character, smart but not conceited, beautiful but not extravagant; but in the hands of immature writers, it is only reflected in the number (in terms of IQ) that is different from ordinary people in appearance .
Typical features
1. Mary Sue generally has a background of a wealthy country.
2. MarySue must have an outstanding appearance.College or campus texts are generally school flowers and school grass.
3. MarySue is either very kind in her heart, or very dark in her heart.
4. MarySue must interact with all the main characters.
5. Mary Sue must have a relationship with the opposite sex (in Tanmei, she will also have a relationship with the same sex, except for Tom Sue).
6. MarySue must have an absolutely crucial influence in the story.
7. Mary Sue must be very lucky.
8. Mary Sue is generally a beautiful girl who learns all-round sports.
9. The color of MarySue's eyes is generally different from that of ordinary people, red, purple, silver or two-color, discoloration and so on.
10. MarySue may have a noble blood, such as goblin, vampire, wizard, god, flower fairy and so on.Most modern texts have a puzzling multi-royal lineage.
11. MarySue is beyond common sense in her personal imaginary world, and thinks that she is extremely perfect.
Well, if someone still thinks this article is a standard Mary Suwen after reading these, I have to doubt some people's logical judgment efforts.
I have read a lot of fanfiction similar to this article, but I never feel that there is anything wrong with it. The heroine does not have to be overpowering, as long as she is beautiful and pleasant; It is good to have certain grades; the heroine does not need to be very popular, as long as she has close friends.These are Sue tendencies, but at least they won't be as disgusting as the real Mary Sue, but will appear more real.
Maybe some people don't like the setting of the heroine or the part where the characters are broken. It doesn't matter. Every author must be prepared to accept criticism. You can point out where there are problems, or have any suggestions. I I will read it carefully and modify it, but please don't say something unpleasant just because you don't like it, just click the upper right corner to close if you don't like it, why bother to say a few unnecessary words?If I were an author with a bad temper, maybe I would start scolding directly. Presumably no one likes to quarrel over such meaningless issues regardless of image?
I also admit that my writing style is immature, but since people can grow, their writing level is also the same. Good article, we all encourage each other, some things are unnecessary to say, it will make people feel chilling, won't it?
In the end, Heiyu would like to say that as a BG fan writer, I will do my best to make myself better. I hope that friends who read the article can also encourage them together. Your support is my biggest motivation!
The author has something to say:
All this happened so abruptly, Wu Xie didn't understand anything, and Zhang Qiling refused to say anything. In order to understand the mystery in Kaixin, Wu Xie decided to set off with Ah Ning and his party.
When it was almost 12 o'clock, everyone was almost ready, but they had no intention of leaving. Wu Xiezheng was wondering what these people were waiting for, when Zhang Qiling, who had been resting against the car, suddenly stood up and looked into the distance. go.
Wu Xie also looked in that direction, and saw a jeep driving towards the camp at high speed. After the vehicle stopped, the door opened, and a figure all in black appeared in front of everyone under Wu Xie's staring gaze. , By the way, he raised his hand to say hello to Aning: "Sister Ning, I'm sorry for being late!" Turning around and seeing Wu Xie, she was surprised at first, and then said with a hearty smile: "Yo, you're here too!"
Wu Xie burst into anger from nowhere. He was not easy to get angry in front of his little brother before, but he was not afraid in front of this acquaintance: "Oh, what a ghost! You are here, what the hell is this?" what happened?"
Xuanyue smiled at Wu Xie and said, "Comrade innocent, swearing at girls will ruin your image as a frail, handsome and good young man!" Then she walked straight to Zhang Qiling, the smile on her face became gentle, She said: "I'm sorry, Qi Ling, have you been waiting for a long time?" The indifferent expression on Zhang Qiling's face became softer, and he shook his head slightly: "It's okay, it's good if you can come."
Xuanyue turned her head and saw Wu Xie looking at him in shock again, she couldn't help laughing, patted him on the shoulder, and said, "Let's go, I'll tell you something slowly on the way."
Walking all the way in the Gobi, Wu Xie was thinking and chatting with the Caucasian man all the way, stopping several times to replenish supplies on the way, he wanted to take this opportunity to ask Xuanyue and Zhang Qiling what happened after they entered the Bronze Gate that day.Reluctantly, Zhang Qiling kept his eyes closed in the car, while Xuanyue had a very happy chat with the young man in black glasses who came out of the nursing home with Zhang Qiling, without giving Wu Xie a chance to ask questions.
When it was time to camp, Xuanyue finally stopped chatting endlessly, but it seemed that because Zhang Qiling was deliberately unwilling to contact other people, Xuanyue and Zhang Qiling stayed away from the crowd, watching the sky together silently , although they didn't say anything, both of them enjoyed the quiet atmosphere.
That night, just as Xuanyue lay down and fell asleep, she felt someone approaching, and then Zhang Qiling sat up next to her. Xuanyue opened her eyes and saw the grandson of the old Tibetan lady who was leading the way. Tashi.
Tashi and Zhang Qiling walked away after saying a few words, Zhang Qiling stood up and was about to leave, Xuanyue quickly sat up and called, "Qiling, where are you going?" Zhang Qiling smiled slightly and said, "It's a bit You need to go to bed first, I will be back soon." Then he walked in another direction, which was the direction where Dingzhu Dolma was.
Xuanyue watched Zhang Qiling leave, took a deep breath, and slowly closed her eyes. For a moment, she seemed to be able to hear the sound of the wind blowing in a very distant place, until she heard the voice of Dingzhu Zhuoma, She just opened her eyes and looked there.
After a while, Wu Xie also came with Tashi, and then Xuanyue listened carefully to their conversation, and it turned out that Chen Wenjin had already left a message.However, there was a sentence that made Xuanyue puzzled, "It is among you", what exactly is this it?
After Dingzhu Zhuoma left, only Wu Xie and Zhang Qiling were left. Zhang Qiling was about to leave, but Wu Xie stopped him, and the two started arguing.
Wu Xie just wanted to know the answers to those doubts, but Zhang Qiling was unwilling to tell him, and Xuanyue could understand that Wu Xie was also inexplicably involved in this series of things that had nothing to do with him. He just wanted to find the answers to the mysteries That's all, but Zhang Qiling didn't want Wu Xie to continue to participate in his affairs.
What Zhang Qiling said next made Xuanyue's heart tingle, and every word was deeply embedded in her heart, especially the sentence "I am a person without past and future", which made her feel the pain for the first time. Zhang Qiling was confused.
After Zhang Qiling finished talking with Wu Xie, he walked back and saw that Xuanyue was not asleep but was in a daze, so she asked, "Why didn't you sleep?" Xuanyue looked up at Zhang Qiling, and said slowly: "What you just said to Wu Xie , I heard it all..." Zhang Qiling froze for a moment, then fell silent for a moment.
Xuanyue stood up, took Zhang Qiling's hand, looked into his eyes seriously and said: "Qiling, the past is indeed the kind of existence that is hard to get back once lost, but time has been passing, and we can't tolerate it anymore. The past is reluctant to part. However, you do not have a future, your future still has me, no matter how difficult this road is, I will definitely accompany you to go on, even if everyone forgets you, I will still remember, The Zhang Qiling in my heart..."
Looking at those bright eyes, Zhang Qiling's calm heart once again stirred up waves. Why can she always move her heartstrings and move her face?He showed a faint smile, like a breeze, but people couldn't look away. He gently stroked Fu Xuanyue's hair and said, "Well, that's our future..."
The next day, the group set off again, and the legendary snake marsh ghosts were one step closer to everyone.
The author has something to say: First of all, I kowtow to apologize. I don’t remember how long I haven’t updated the article...Secondly, I kowtow to apologize. Yes, one day, I'll let it end...
☆、About this article
It’s been a long time since I came back to update the article, and I managed to hold back an article. Hei Yu admits that there are indeed a lot of broken places in this article. Hei Yu is also trying his best to think about how to correct the previous disharmony. Although we are not good at writing my brother’s BG, But that doesn't mean I don't care about this article.
Regarding Marysu, I sincerely want to ask, where is this article considered Marysu?The first time I wrote fanfiction was on □□.com about exorcist teenagers. Before and after that, I paid attention to Baidu’s true meaning of Marysu, and tried my best to avoid taking Su’s route. If I have to say it, this article It is true that there are Su's tendencies, but it is not too much.The heroine is neither beautiful, nor is she born in a wealthy family, nor does she have any extraordinary skills other than exorcism, and her personality is not very pleasing. She is neither a saint nor a devil. I feel sorry for my little brother when I found out that she is the same kind of person. I have experienced a lot with her before I developed a certain relationship, but it hasn't been tested yet. I don't know if I really like women. Lord, only after experiencing amnesia can I confirm my feelings. I don't think there should be any problems here. Why can't I wait for the later plot to come out before complaining or swearing?
What is Mary Sue?The following is an excerpt from Baidu Encyclopedia:
MarySue fictionalizes a protagonist in the fanfiction that does not exist in the real plot. This protagonist is often very good and powerful, entangled with the popular characters in the real plot, ambiguous constantly, and peach blossoms bloom.
In the hands of mature writers, Marysu will appear as an intellectual character, smart but not conceited, beautiful but not extravagant; but in the hands of immature writers, it is only reflected in the number (in terms of IQ) that is different from ordinary people in appearance .
Typical features
1. Mary Sue generally has a background of a wealthy country.
2. MarySue must have an outstanding appearance.College or campus texts are generally school flowers and school grass.
3. MarySue is either very kind in her heart, or very dark in her heart.
4. MarySue must interact with all the main characters.
5. Mary Sue must have a relationship with the opposite sex (in Tanmei, she will also have a relationship with the same sex, except for Tom Sue).
6. MarySue must have an absolutely crucial influence in the story.
7. Mary Sue must be very lucky.
8. Mary Sue is generally a beautiful girl who learns all-round sports.
9. The color of MarySue's eyes is generally different from that of ordinary people, red, purple, silver or two-color, discoloration and so on.
10. MarySue may have a noble blood, such as goblin, vampire, wizard, god, flower fairy and so on.Most modern texts have a puzzling multi-royal lineage.
11. MarySue is beyond common sense in her personal imaginary world, and thinks that she is extremely perfect.
Well, if someone still thinks this article is a standard Mary Suwen after reading these, I have to doubt some people's logical judgment efforts.
I have read a lot of fanfiction similar to this article, but I never feel that there is anything wrong with it. The heroine does not have to be overpowering, as long as she is beautiful and pleasant; It is good to have certain grades; the heroine does not need to be very popular, as long as she has close friends.These are Sue tendencies, but at least they won't be as disgusting as the real Mary Sue, but will appear more real.
Maybe some people don't like the setting of the heroine or the part where the characters are broken. It doesn't matter. Every author must be prepared to accept criticism. You can point out where there are problems, or have any suggestions. I I will read it carefully and modify it, but please don't say something unpleasant just because you don't like it, just click the upper right corner to close if you don't like it, why bother to say a few unnecessary words?If I were an author with a bad temper, maybe I would start scolding directly. Presumably no one likes to quarrel over such meaningless issues regardless of image?
I also admit that my writing style is immature, but since people can grow, their writing level is also the same. Good article, we all encourage each other, some things are unnecessary to say, it will make people feel chilling, won't it?
In the end, Heiyu would like to say that as a BG fan writer, I will do my best to make myself better. I hope that friends who read the article can also encourage them together. Your support is my biggest motivation!
The author has something to say:
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