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Chapter 16 Draft: No Survival
It was just after twelve o'clock when Ren Mingqing finished writing.He stood up and walked around, stretching his blood-poor left leg, and then very modestly asked Zhuang Mo to have a look.Zhuang Mo said some words of encouragement to him, but did not give him any advice.A writer is highly excited during creation, and now that the work is completed, his burning vitality is extinguished at a speed visible to the naked eye.His body was still not fully recovered, and he stayed up for two consecutive nights, racking his brains, and he yawned three times in one minute.Zhuang Mo half-pushed and half-pushed him outside the bar, stuffed him into a taxi, drove him home, and finally got him under the covers.
The next day, Ren Mingqing was still lying on the bed and couldn't get up. Zhuang Mo set an alarm clock for him, hoping that he wouldn't finish writing it so hard, but forget to hand in the manuscript because he stayed in bed.
As soon as he walked into the company, Zhuang Mo heard Brother Liehuo calling Xu Wei: "Mr. Xu, we haven't published that manuscript yet... Ah, why? Haha... Isn't that short story not yet confiscated, and the typesetting is still delayed Drawing...illustrations? Oh, yes, yes, the illustrations are not finished yet, we have provided eleven illustrations, and the artist is revising the manuscript! Ah? Is it a color picture? Of course it is a color picture, all of which are coated with coated paper... ..." Brother Liehuo, an honest and trustworthy person, lied so embarrassingly that people wanted to kill himself with a knife. In the end, he persuaded Xu Wei by crying about how hard it was to run a magazine, and Xu Wei agreed to read the layout before leaving the factory.
From the moment Zhuang Mo entered the door, he felt that there was a faint gaze behind him, and he turned his head to meet Ye Shun's gaze.Ye Shun didn't expect Zhuang Mo to be so magnanimous, he raised his eyebrows, and a knowing smile rose from the corner of his mouth.Now he is no longer afraid of Zhuang Mo, because he thinks he has caught Zhuang Mo's handle, but Zhuang Mo just feels baffled.
Brother Liehuo and the others will notify the manuscript review meeting at [-]:[-], and ask everyone to post the manuscript to the group first, so that everyone can review it.However, except for the two documents he himself submitted, no one responded to him, and everyone looked pale.Bai Shangshang did not submit the manuscript; Koda did not submit the manuscript; Ren Mingqing still did not submit the manuscript.Brother Lie Huo sensed the seriousness of the situation from everyone's faces, and clapped his hands to encourage everyone: "Get up and get up! Don't give up until the last second!"
Ye Shun smiled wryly and shook his head, is this something that can be solved by inspiration?
And Tian Tian has already become a fairy in front of the computer.He didn't go home at all last night, stayed up all night with Koda, then fell asleep at the desk, and woke up at the desk again.Even if brother Lihuo didn't say anything, he would force the manuscript out completely.This has become a gamble, he has invested too much, and if he fails, he will die.The same goes for Koda.He stayed up all night, and all day, and it didn't seem to matter if he stayed up all night, anyway, it would be over tomorrow, and all the hardships he had suffered would eventually turn into a red-hot Grandpa Mao.
Tian Tian, who was almost crazy, and Da Keda, who was almost crazy, finally finished a manuscript with beginning and end. The two quickly exchanged [-] emoticons on QQ, and re-recognized their relationship.At this time, there was still a quarter of an hour before ten o'clock, Bai Shangshang came late and passed the manuscript to Ye Shun.Ye Shun hastily glanced at it and understood Bai Shangshang's little trick. He sighed and uploaded the document to the group, but he didn't have any hope for the draft.
In this way, only Zhuang Mo was left.
Tian Tian asked: "Your ashes really didn't come."
Zhuang Mo raised his hand and looked at the time: "Wait a little longer."
Sure enough, in the last 5 minutes, the ashes washed a mouthful of salty QQ.
"Take it away." Zhuang Mo stood up, holding the notebook and planning to enter the meeting room.
Tian Tian was being used as a servant girl by him again, and he was so angry that he was so angry that when he saw the screen, he immediately danced with laughter: "Haha! Evil people will be punished by evil people! He really won't do it!"
Zhuang Mo frowned: "This is impossible." It was obviously finished.
"If you don't believe me, you can see for yourself." Tian Tian stepped aside.
Zhuang Mo saw the ashes and left a message: I'm sorry, I can't deliver the manuscript on time
A mouthful of salt: why?Not finished yet?
Washing ashes: Well, be it
A mouthful of salt: is it?
Cleaning up the ashes: I wrote a version, but I feel that the novel is not over yet, and I still have more plots to write
A salty mouthful: No matter whether you are satisfied or not, please send it over for me to review
Washing ashes: I'm sorry...
A mouthful of salt: why?
Ashes: Once the manuscript has passed the review, the ownership of the manuscript will belong to the magazine, right?
A mouthful of salt: yes
Washing the ashes: Then I can't rebuild as I like
Zhuang Mo didn't quite understand why Ren Mingqing suddenly changed his mind. In his opinion, yesterday's story was definitely over.But he can understand Ren Mingqing's mood.Once the story is sold on the market, the close connection between the author and the story is severed, and it no longer belongs to him.And even if he doesn't take any money, he still wants the story to appear in this world in its most complete form.He must have loved the story.The second half that no one else had seen must have made him shudder with excitement.
Zhuang Mo decided to believe in Mingqing's inspiration.
When the dust collector called "I'm sorry" again, Zhuang Mo said, "It's okay, I'll give you two more days, I hope you won't let me down."
Zhuang Mo was named by Brother Liehuo at the next manuscript review meeting, because he was the only one among the four who couldn't accept a single manuscript.Zhuang Mo acted like a dead pig is not afraid of boiling water, but Brother Lie Huo is a talker.He didn't criticize Zhuang Mo, nor was he angry about it. He just ignited 12 points of enthusiasm to cheer for this newcomer.Zhuang Mo's heart was stagnant at first, and there was no wave in the ancient well. Under his chatter, he also frowned: "My author will deliver the manuscript in two days."
"Authors all procrastinate. They just want to procrastinate and never write until the deadline, so we must follow behind them to urge and urge. Don't be afraid of losing face, don't be ashamed, sloppy, sloppy, soft and hard, Threats and temptations, I will wait for your results in two days."
Facing Brother Liehuo's hopeful eyes, Zhuang Mo felt that he had joined a pyramid scheme.
After Brother Liehuo appeased Zhuang Mo, everyone's manuscript was almost read.The two manuscripts received by Lie Huo were of high quality and appropriate subject matter, and they were unanimously approved.Next came Bai Shangshang's manuscript, Ye Shun cleared his throat in embarrassment, and was about to speak, but Lie Huo encouraged Tian Tian and Zhuang Mo to speak first.
This time, Bai Shangshang wrote a story about a 28-year-old girl retiring from her marriage. It tells how a young literary and artistic woman is dissatisfied with her current life and abandons everything to seek a poetic dwelling.
Tian Tian was asked to be the first to speak, so he bit the bullet and made it up: "Bai Shangshang is a great god...the writing is beautiful, the emotions are delicate, and the plot...the plot is very touching."
"Where is it touching?" Brother Liehuo was at a loss.
Tian Tian's head is as big as a bucket: "It's the heroine's yearning for Tibet... She abandons her family and husband and wants to go to Tibet. It reminds people of the movie that kowtows long heads... very holy!"
Brother Riehuo nodded: "Well, so it's like this... When I watched it, I couldn't understand the heroine's mood. I couldn't put all her thoughts into it."
"Actually, I can't understand it either!" Tian Tian said without hesitation after receiving a little encouragement, "I don't understand it at all!" After he finished speaking, he met Ye Shun's eyes , I was so scared that I added a sentence, "But the writing is still very good..."
"What about you, Zhuang Mo? What do you say?"
"It's well written." The emotion is delicate, and the perspective is close to life. It is suitable for women over 25 years old, and it shows feminist thinking about modern life.Zhuang Mo stared at the manuscript paper, breaking the inherent prejudice against Bai Shangshang.When he flipped through the stack of "New Painting" magazines, he felt that Bai Shangshang had no brains, only skills, and he didn't have the slightest passion when writing, just following the gourd.But this article made him feel that the author was not hopeless.She has something to say, and with the right guidance and support, she can transform into a successful female writer.
Brother Riehuo was a little disappointed with his answer, just like a student whose teacher looked at the first question and got it wrong.However, he didn't want to hurt the self-esteem of the newcomers, and he tried his best to conclude the coffin: "Let's not talk about whether the article is good or not, we four old men can't understand the thoughts of other young girls. This is not a light novel for young people. It is not youthful. , there is no very sweet love, and there is no complete story. This article cannot be used.”
"I'm sorry, I'll ask her to rewrite the article." Ye Shun apologized.
"Two days is no problem for her. Go and keep an eye on her, maybe she has been under a lot of mental stress recently?" Brother Liehuo asked.
"clear."
"Then it's..." Brother Liehuo found out the script of Koda.
Tian Tian was the first to speak this time, and Wang Po sold melons and boasted: "This is a real youth to the phantom novel! Passionate, hardworking, and friendly! Positive and positive energy!"
"That's what you say...Ye Shun, what's your opinion?" Brother Li Huo was tired of being a villain, and kicked the ball to Ye Shun.
"The characters are thin and don't have a strong sense of substitution; the story structure is a little simpler, and it might be smarter if you add a twist; the plot is very cheesy and doesn't give people a refreshing feeling. It's not very good in all aspects—and Why is his writing so useless? There are only four or five exclamation points, haven't you checked his punctuation?" Ye Shun asked Tian Tian.
"This is his writing style, he is an internet writer, that's how we talk!" Tian Tian argued.
Ye Shun smiled, as if laughing at the ignorant child: "But this is a physical book."
"Who are the physical books sold to? Isn't it still sold to the children of today? This author has many readers of the younger age group online, which shows that his writing style is loved by them! I can only see it online before. The text is printed on paper, and readers will frantically buy it!"
Brother Riehuo explained: "Most of our readers are middle and high school students, and they may not have a systematic concept of writing; for teenagers, physical books are like textbooks. We must convey the correct words and symbols, and we cannot follow the trend To mislead the trend. If we are only doing it for money, we might as well publish "Night Sailboat", Tan Si's fan base is bigger."
Tian Tian couldn't refute anymore, and finally accused Ye Shun wronged and angrily: "I know, I just rejected Bai Shangshang's manuscript, so now you have to return Ke Ke's manuscript too!"
Ye Shun: "..."
Brother Liehuo hurriedly started the fight: "Speak up if you have something to say, don't be noisy, don't be noisy."
Tian Tian couldn't understand them, so he turned to Zhuang Mo for help: "Say something!" He didn't know why at this time he subconsciously felt that Zhuang Mo would help him, and that Zhuang Mo's words would carry weight.
"The Internet sense is very strong." Zhuang Mo did not disappoint him, but that was all.He respects the perseverance of "New Painting".
In the end, brother Li Huo made a final decision: "Not good enough, let's keep it as a backup draft."
Tian Tian couldn't accept the result: "It took him three days to revise the seven editions! I also stayed with him for two nights!"
"Thanks for your hard work, Xiao Tianer," Brother Liehuo apologized, "But the quality is not up to standard, we have our own standards."
"What's the point of sticking to the standards?! Those articles that meet the standards don't look very good to me! It's because everything follows the standards that no one reads magazines anymore!" Tian Tian said excitedly. Don't hesitate to say, "If you don't follow the trend, you will be thrown away by the trend. We will show readers what they like to watch. Why do you have to set the right standard?"
Ye Shun glanced at Tian Tian.Although Tian Tian's character is naive, Ye Shun felt that what he said was not wrong.
But Brother Liehuo rarely put on a serious expression: "Because we are editors, we are obliged to choose good articles for readers. Otherwise, there would be no need for Jingyu in this world, only Guanwen."
Tian Tian was awed by his righteousness, and the sound of slamming the door when he ran out was louder than expected.
"None of your manuscripts passed." Lie Huo looked at the remaining two people, "The last review meeting will be in two days, come on."
The author has something to say: [Edit knowledge small class]
I don’t want to write about the topic that the editor proposed for me. I just want to write what I want to write. What should I do?
Many authors are very talented, but they write blindly and only care about their own pleasure. They never listen to the editor's advice and opinions.The result is that the authors are poor and the editors even poorer.
The next day, Ren Mingqing was still lying on the bed and couldn't get up. Zhuang Mo set an alarm clock for him, hoping that he wouldn't finish writing it so hard, but forget to hand in the manuscript because he stayed in bed.
As soon as he walked into the company, Zhuang Mo heard Brother Liehuo calling Xu Wei: "Mr. Xu, we haven't published that manuscript yet... Ah, why? Haha... Isn't that short story not yet confiscated, and the typesetting is still delayed Drawing...illustrations? Oh, yes, yes, the illustrations are not finished yet, we have provided eleven illustrations, and the artist is revising the manuscript! Ah? Is it a color picture? Of course it is a color picture, all of which are coated with coated paper... ..." Brother Liehuo, an honest and trustworthy person, lied so embarrassingly that people wanted to kill himself with a knife. In the end, he persuaded Xu Wei by crying about how hard it was to run a magazine, and Xu Wei agreed to read the layout before leaving the factory.
From the moment Zhuang Mo entered the door, he felt that there was a faint gaze behind him, and he turned his head to meet Ye Shun's gaze.Ye Shun didn't expect Zhuang Mo to be so magnanimous, he raised his eyebrows, and a knowing smile rose from the corner of his mouth.Now he is no longer afraid of Zhuang Mo, because he thinks he has caught Zhuang Mo's handle, but Zhuang Mo just feels baffled.
Brother Liehuo and the others will notify the manuscript review meeting at [-]:[-], and ask everyone to post the manuscript to the group first, so that everyone can review it.However, except for the two documents he himself submitted, no one responded to him, and everyone looked pale.Bai Shangshang did not submit the manuscript; Koda did not submit the manuscript; Ren Mingqing still did not submit the manuscript.Brother Lie Huo sensed the seriousness of the situation from everyone's faces, and clapped his hands to encourage everyone: "Get up and get up! Don't give up until the last second!"
Ye Shun smiled wryly and shook his head, is this something that can be solved by inspiration?
And Tian Tian has already become a fairy in front of the computer.He didn't go home at all last night, stayed up all night with Koda, then fell asleep at the desk, and woke up at the desk again.Even if brother Lihuo didn't say anything, he would force the manuscript out completely.This has become a gamble, he has invested too much, and if he fails, he will die.The same goes for Koda.He stayed up all night, and all day, and it didn't seem to matter if he stayed up all night, anyway, it would be over tomorrow, and all the hardships he had suffered would eventually turn into a red-hot Grandpa Mao.
Tian Tian, who was almost crazy, and Da Keda, who was almost crazy, finally finished a manuscript with beginning and end. The two quickly exchanged [-] emoticons on QQ, and re-recognized their relationship.At this time, there was still a quarter of an hour before ten o'clock, Bai Shangshang came late and passed the manuscript to Ye Shun.Ye Shun hastily glanced at it and understood Bai Shangshang's little trick. He sighed and uploaded the document to the group, but he didn't have any hope for the draft.
In this way, only Zhuang Mo was left.
Tian Tian asked: "Your ashes really didn't come."
Zhuang Mo raised his hand and looked at the time: "Wait a little longer."
Sure enough, in the last 5 minutes, the ashes washed a mouthful of salty QQ.
"Take it away." Zhuang Mo stood up, holding the notebook and planning to enter the meeting room.
Tian Tian was being used as a servant girl by him again, and he was so angry that he was so angry that when he saw the screen, he immediately danced with laughter: "Haha! Evil people will be punished by evil people! He really won't do it!"
Zhuang Mo frowned: "This is impossible." It was obviously finished.
"If you don't believe me, you can see for yourself." Tian Tian stepped aside.
Zhuang Mo saw the ashes and left a message: I'm sorry, I can't deliver the manuscript on time
A mouthful of salt: why?Not finished yet?
Washing ashes: Well, be it
A mouthful of salt: is it?
Cleaning up the ashes: I wrote a version, but I feel that the novel is not over yet, and I still have more plots to write
A salty mouthful: No matter whether you are satisfied or not, please send it over for me to review
Washing ashes: I'm sorry...
A mouthful of salt: why?
Ashes: Once the manuscript has passed the review, the ownership of the manuscript will belong to the magazine, right?
A mouthful of salt: yes
Washing the ashes: Then I can't rebuild as I like
Zhuang Mo didn't quite understand why Ren Mingqing suddenly changed his mind. In his opinion, yesterday's story was definitely over.But he can understand Ren Mingqing's mood.Once the story is sold on the market, the close connection between the author and the story is severed, and it no longer belongs to him.And even if he doesn't take any money, he still wants the story to appear in this world in its most complete form.He must have loved the story.The second half that no one else had seen must have made him shudder with excitement.
Zhuang Mo decided to believe in Mingqing's inspiration.
When the dust collector called "I'm sorry" again, Zhuang Mo said, "It's okay, I'll give you two more days, I hope you won't let me down."
Zhuang Mo was named by Brother Liehuo at the next manuscript review meeting, because he was the only one among the four who couldn't accept a single manuscript.Zhuang Mo acted like a dead pig is not afraid of boiling water, but Brother Lie Huo is a talker.He didn't criticize Zhuang Mo, nor was he angry about it. He just ignited 12 points of enthusiasm to cheer for this newcomer.Zhuang Mo's heart was stagnant at first, and there was no wave in the ancient well. Under his chatter, he also frowned: "My author will deliver the manuscript in two days."
"Authors all procrastinate. They just want to procrastinate and never write until the deadline, so we must follow behind them to urge and urge. Don't be afraid of losing face, don't be ashamed, sloppy, sloppy, soft and hard, Threats and temptations, I will wait for your results in two days."
Facing Brother Liehuo's hopeful eyes, Zhuang Mo felt that he had joined a pyramid scheme.
After Brother Liehuo appeased Zhuang Mo, everyone's manuscript was almost read.The two manuscripts received by Lie Huo were of high quality and appropriate subject matter, and they were unanimously approved.Next came Bai Shangshang's manuscript, Ye Shun cleared his throat in embarrassment, and was about to speak, but Lie Huo encouraged Tian Tian and Zhuang Mo to speak first.
This time, Bai Shangshang wrote a story about a 28-year-old girl retiring from her marriage. It tells how a young literary and artistic woman is dissatisfied with her current life and abandons everything to seek a poetic dwelling.
Tian Tian was asked to be the first to speak, so he bit the bullet and made it up: "Bai Shangshang is a great god...the writing is beautiful, the emotions are delicate, and the plot...the plot is very touching."
"Where is it touching?" Brother Liehuo was at a loss.
Tian Tian's head is as big as a bucket: "It's the heroine's yearning for Tibet... She abandons her family and husband and wants to go to Tibet. It reminds people of the movie that kowtows long heads... very holy!"
Brother Riehuo nodded: "Well, so it's like this... When I watched it, I couldn't understand the heroine's mood. I couldn't put all her thoughts into it."
"Actually, I can't understand it either!" Tian Tian said without hesitation after receiving a little encouragement, "I don't understand it at all!" After he finished speaking, he met Ye Shun's eyes , I was so scared that I added a sentence, "But the writing is still very good..."
"What about you, Zhuang Mo? What do you say?"
"It's well written." The emotion is delicate, and the perspective is close to life. It is suitable for women over 25 years old, and it shows feminist thinking about modern life.Zhuang Mo stared at the manuscript paper, breaking the inherent prejudice against Bai Shangshang.When he flipped through the stack of "New Painting" magazines, he felt that Bai Shangshang had no brains, only skills, and he didn't have the slightest passion when writing, just following the gourd.But this article made him feel that the author was not hopeless.She has something to say, and with the right guidance and support, she can transform into a successful female writer.
Brother Riehuo was a little disappointed with his answer, just like a student whose teacher looked at the first question and got it wrong.However, he didn't want to hurt the self-esteem of the newcomers, and he tried his best to conclude the coffin: "Let's not talk about whether the article is good or not, we four old men can't understand the thoughts of other young girls. This is not a light novel for young people. It is not youthful. , there is no very sweet love, and there is no complete story. This article cannot be used.”
"I'm sorry, I'll ask her to rewrite the article." Ye Shun apologized.
"Two days is no problem for her. Go and keep an eye on her, maybe she has been under a lot of mental stress recently?" Brother Liehuo asked.
"clear."
"Then it's..." Brother Liehuo found out the script of Koda.
Tian Tian was the first to speak this time, and Wang Po sold melons and boasted: "This is a real youth to the phantom novel! Passionate, hardworking, and friendly! Positive and positive energy!"
"That's what you say...Ye Shun, what's your opinion?" Brother Li Huo was tired of being a villain, and kicked the ball to Ye Shun.
"The characters are thin and don't have a strong sense of substitution; the story structure is a little simpler, and it might be smarter if you add a twist; the plot is very cheesy and doesn't give people a refreshing feeling. It's not very good in all aspects—and Why is his writing so useless? There are only four or five exclamation points, haven't you checked his punctuation?" Ye Shun asked Tian Tian.
"This is his writing style, he is an internet writer, that's how we talk!" Tian Tian argued.
Ye Shun smiled, as if laughing at the ignorant child: "But this is a physical book."
"Who are the physical books sold to? Isn't it still sold to the children of today? This author has many readers of the younger age group online, which shows that his writing style is loved by them! I can only see it online before. The text is printed on paper, and readers will frantically buy it!"
Brother Riehuo explained: "Most of our readers are middle and high school students, and they may not have a systematic concept of writing; for teenagers, physical books are like textbooks. We must convey the correct words and symbols, and we cannot follow the trend To mislead the trend. If we are only doing it for money, we might as well publish "Night Sailboat", Tan Si's fan base is bigger."
Tian Tian couldn't refute anymore, and finally accused Ye Shun wronged and angrily: "I know, I just rejected Bai Shangshang's manuscript, so now you have to return Ke Ke's manuscript too!"
Ye Shun: "..."
Brother Liehuo hurriedly started the fight: "Speak up if you have something to say, don't be noisy, don't be noisy."
Tian Tian couldn't understand them, so he turned to Zhuang Mo for help: "Say something!" He didn't know why at this time he subconsciously felt that Zhuang Mo would help him, and that Zhuang Mo's words would carry weight.
"The Internet sense is very strong." Zhuang Mo did not disappoint him, but that was all.He respects the perseverance of "New Painting".
In the end, brother Li Huo made a final decision: "Not good enough, let's keep it as a backup draft."
Tian Tian couldn't accept the result: "It took him three days to revise the seven editions! I also stayed with him for two nights!"
"Thanks for your hard work, Xiao Tianer," Brother Liehuo apologized, "But the quality is not up to standard, we have our own standards."
"What's the point of sticking to the standards?! Those articles that meet the standards don't look very good to me! It's because everything follows the standards that no one reads magazines anymore!" Tian Tian said excitedly. Don't hesitate to say, "If you don't follow the trend, you will be thrown away by the trend. We will show readers what they like to watch. Why do you have to set the right standard?"
Ye Shun glanced at Tian Tian.Although Tian Tian's character is naive, Ye Shun felt that what he said was not wrong.
But Brother Liehuo rarely put on a serious expression: "Because we are editors, we are obliged to choose good articles for readers. Otherwise, there would be no need for Jingyu in this world, only Guanwen."
Tian Tian was awed by his righteousness, and the sound of slamming the door when he ran out was louder than expected.
"None of your manuscripts passed." Lie Huo looked at the remaining two people, "The last review meeting will be in two days, come on."
The author has something to say: [Edit knowledge small class]
I don’t want to write about the topic that the editor proposed for me. I just want to write what I want to write. What should I do?
Many authors are very talented, but they write blindly and only care about their own pleasure. They never listen to the editor's advice and opinions.The result is that the authors are poor and the editors even poorer.
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