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With a good start, the rest will go smoothly. This Adam's version of "Jurassic Park" has seven chapters with the original version, but compared with the original version, it uses two chapters to describe in detail the birth of dinosaurs and With the emergence of Jurassic Park, this version of Adam has reduced the content of this aspect.

The main reason is that although he has done a lot of textual research, after all, he has no professional experience, and it is difficult to explain a lot of theoretical knowledge clearly and transparently (that is, he cannot achieve the kind of ignorance of the original work), so he has self-knowledge The content in this aspect has been shortened.Even if he's well aware, the cutback might cost him some of the sci-fi awards Jurassic Park won in an alternate world.

But this choice is not all bad, at least for most ordinary readers, the lack of this part of the content can make people enter the thrilling plot faster, stimulate the opponent's adrenaline, and make readers (or audience) to focus faster.

At least that's what Adam reported from those listeners.With the vivid pictures on the small blackboard, people can't help but be dragged into the Jurassic world by Adam's narration, and experience a thrilling journey with the characters inside.Even when talking about the exciting plot, Michelle leaned tightly in the arms of her mother Catherine and covered her eyes, for fear that dinosaurs would really come out of the small blackboard behind Adam.

From six o'clock in the evening, when the whole story was read, it was close to eleven o'clock. Perhaps Adam's voice became hoarse at the end of the story. This reading session ends before midnight.

Because the time was too late, the whole reading session lasted too long, both Adam who was reading and the audience were a little tired after going through this thrilling journey, so Adam did not ask them to give their feedback back immediately, Instead, he thoughtfully changed the task time to tomorrow.

"Adam, can you lend me this book? I think I need to read it carefully again. You know, a good book always needs to be pondered over and over again." After tidying up the living room together, Carol walked to Adam Said in front of him.

"Can I take it as a compliment? Haha. There is no doubt about it!" Adam handed the manuscript to him without hesitation, and then said, "But it's a bit late, do you want to take it home and read it?"

"If possible, can you let me stay? I just need a small space." Carol held the manuscript and asked: "You know, it's always difficult to walk at night."

"Of course, you can share the bed with me! Bro!" Before Adam could answer, Brett came out of nowhere and put his arms around Carol's shoulders, saying very boldly.

"Since Brett has no objections, I naturally have no problem." Adam shrugged, pretending to have nothing to do with it.

After finishing speaking, he went back to the room, took his clothes and towels, and went to the bathroom to take a shower. After taking a shower, he returned to the room. Adam saw that Carol was already lying on his usual work table, looking at the first draft of his novel very seriously.

Adam went back to the kitchen to make him a pot of coffee, and after sitting and discussing with him for half an hour, he finally fell asleep.So after apologizing, he left Carol alone to continue reading at his desk, and he couldn't bear to go to bed.As for his elder brother Brett, although he was also quite interested in the stories written by Adam, that was all he could do. He went to bed after washing up a little and slept like a pig, and when Adam went to bed, he snored loudly.

The next day, Adam woke up from the bed after having a few nightmares, and then found helplessly that Carol was lying on his bed at some point, and he was sleeping with all kinds of claws.Since the space of the bed is not too big, the positions of the two of them on the bed naturally overlapped, such as the other's thigh □□ between his two legs, which made him feel that his lower body was going to go numb. Those muscular arms lay directly across his chest—and this caused Adam to have a night of nightmares.

Reluctantly, Adam tried his best to ignore the hot air exhaled by the other party in his ear, and the male object that was obviously thriving on his legs, and used his hands to remove the other party's thighs and arms from his body, and finally he was able to breathe a sigh of relief.The only good news is that the other party is not drooling anyway, and is still beautiful in the morning light shining through the curtains into the room, which makes up for the trouble the other party has caused him.

Adam carefully got off the bed, stood on the head of the bed for five or six minutes, until his numb legs finally regained full consciousness, then limped to the desk and sat down, dozing off with his chin half lying on the desk .

The morning wind blows in from the window, bringing the unique chill and fresh smell of the morning, making Adam gradually fully awake.He flipped through the first draft of the novel he had lent to Carroll, and found that there were many revision marks on it. Seeing the revision marks on it, Adam suddenly blushed.

I have to say that although he tried his best to adapt, absorbed the English knowledge given by the original body, and frantically learned to read and write English in the past six months, but in this first draft, he completely exposed the roughness that he had tried to cover up. out.

Almost every page can be seen with grammar, inappropriate words, and even extremely superficial mistakes such as tense in some places, which makes Adam, the client, feel ashamed.

Adam quickly and briefly read it from beginning to end, and found that almost the entire book has been carefully and carefully revised, and there are even large paragraphs on the back of some pages marked with thoughts on the development of the plot. It's relatively obvious, but some still make Adam's eyes shine or discover ridiculous loopholes that he hadn't discovered before.

After reading this, he turned around and looked at Carol who was sleeping on his own bed. Adam's original unhappiness because of being disturbed by the other party's sleep dissipated immediately, and the rest was full of emotion.Although the entire first draft is only less than 20 words, it must be said that the workload is astonishingly large to complete the revision of the words and grammar of the entire novel in one night, and even add some plot considerations. Authors have to admit they couldn't do it, but Carroll did it.

Adam couldn't even think of when Carol came back to bed after completing this tedious task, maybe in the middle of the night, maybe not long before he woke up, but in any case he didn't sleep for a long time .

At this moment, Brett woke up. Adam could imagine that the other party must make a series of noises as usual, for fear that the other party would wake up Carol who had just fallen asleep. Adam stood up and turned to Brett's He jumped on the bed and covered the other's mouth that was about to open his mouth to scream.