writer challenge

19.

"So, if I choose to break up, you agree?!" Yi Feng finally regained his train of thought.

"I thought I wouldn't lose you; at least not in this way." Ling Fan's tone was anxious again, his arms were pressed against the mattress, and he hugged the person under him tightly: "We're already reconciled, aren't we? ?”

"You have a good idea..." This time Yi Feng finally cleared his mind, and stretched out his hand to push him hard.

"How can I do it? How can we reconcile?" Ling Fan was also determined, holding his arms tightly and refusing to back down.

"What?" Yi Feng didn't have the answer in his mind, so he could only insist on saying, "I've told you the reason for breaking up!"

"I will spend time with you, eat western food, drink red wine with you, and stop eating instant noodles..."

"..."

"Accompany you on vacation, watch the sunrise and soak in hot springs, listen to music in a daze, don't hold your phone, don't hurry..."

"..."

"I, I will try to be more enthusiastic, talk more and give you more feedback..."

"You're enough! Do you think blind obedience is love?!" I'm not sure if I'll like Police Officer Ling who has no edge or sharpness!Yi Feng secretly thought.

"Blind obedience... as long as you are by my side, I am willing to follow blindly!" Ling Fan became more and more excited as he spoke, and grabbed Yi Feng's hand to cover his eyes: "It's like this——if you cover my eyes, I will listen to you!" You command; wherever you lead me, keep me by your side..."

"Just close your eyes and tell nonsense!" Looking at his ex-boyfriend whose face was half covered by his palm, Yi Feng's heart beat wildly—whether it was intentional or not, the matter seemed to be repeating itself according to a familiar script; just He had never seen it from this angle.

"It's not nonsense, Yi Feng..." Ling Fan lowered his voice, his face was hidden under Yi Feng's palm, and he couldn't see his expression clearly: "Actually, I have read all your articles, but I haven't given you any feedback. That's all. I change, I change everything, okay?"

"...Have you seen it all?" Yi Feng was bewildered, moved his palm away, and stared into the eyes of his ex-boyfriend.

20.

"Yes, I've read them all; I've read every article, every word—so I can't lose you, no one understands better than me why you only write suspense mystery novels; no one understands your writing better than me characters, and the affection between the lines..."

"But, I just wrote a shameful little sweet article... You must have never read it." Yi Feng was stunned by the truth, swallowing his saliva, word by word—fortunately, the little sweet article he wrote The article is only published on the newly opened special webpage of "Writer Challenge", so it should not be easy to find.

"What? You released a new chapter? Concluded?!" Ling Fan's tone suddenly changed.

"Concluded the essay... As requested, I mixed it with "Rainy Night", HE's sweet essay... What's the matter with you? Lao Ling?"

"It's nothing, I'm just asking." Ling Fan sat up, turned his head to look at the shiny computer screen on the desktop, and rubbed the space between his brows absentmindedly: "It's getting late, you'll have a stomachache if you stay up late, hurry up and wash up. "

Yi Feng was pushed into the bathroom.The doubts in his heart were wiped away by the thoughtfulness of his ex-boyfriend. He took a shower contentedly, and even a little bit of beautiful desire amidst the sound of the shower.

"Lao Ling, I'm done washing, you should go wash quickly too." A few minutes later, Yi Feng came out wrapped in a bathrobe, urging Ling Fan naturally, not at all like breaking up with him for three months. People who are still bickering talk.

Ling Fan turned around from the computer desk, with a gloomy expression: "I brought you stomach medicine, you drink it." He handed over a glass of water.

"Thank you!" Yi Feng drank it down with a smile, and slipped into bed.

Ling Fan stood by the bed and hesitated for a moment, took out his mobile phone and placed it carefully beside the pillow, took off his coat, and got in too.

"What are you doing? You didn't take a shower! Uh—" A small conflict broke out in the bed.

"Don't talk, it's time for rounds."

"Old Ling——" Yi Feng was stunned by the accurate lines and plot, broke away from the kiss, and asked in surprise: "Are you, after reading my little sweet article?!"

"I've seen it, I've seen it all." Ling Fan covered his head under the quilt and pressed it against his chest, just like what happened in Room 105 many years ago, and said in a muffled voice: "Why on earth did you write " "Rainy Night"? Want to write a little sweet article? The protagonist in the article can't escape the sniping of a perverted killer, but it's not a little sweet article..."

"What are you talking about, Lao Ling, I've written a little sweet article, Mu Ming saved Peng Shu, they are together, the ending is HE..."

21.

The next day, Yi Feng woke up dizzy.Ling Fan was lying next to him, naked, with two obvious dark circles on his face.

"This man, didn't he sleep all night again?" Ling Fan was also a frequent sleeper because of his work. Yi Feng was always familiar with the dejected appearance after staying up late, and felt distressed and resentful.Rubbing his swollen temples, Yi Feng felt that he had slept too deeply; looking out the window, there were dark clouds and the sky was dim. "How long have I been asleep?" He took out his watch, opened his eyes and repeated the identification three times, and then threw it out in shock—"Wow, it's already five o'clock in the afternoon?!"

He vaguely remembered that last night he was nestled in Ling Fan's arms, talking about the ending of Xiao Tianwen, but his consciousness was blurred for a while, and then he fell asleep directly.Then when I woke up at five o'clock in the afternoon, my head was still dizzy.

"Could it be that Lao Ling drugged me last night?" After all, he was writing a suspense novel, and his brain circuit was habitually jumping. Thinking of Ling Fan's strange performance last night, Yi Feng's brain began to diverge; The stomach medicine that made him feel sweet, also suddenly lingered black smoke of conspiracy.

He turned on the computer suspiciously, logged into the "Writer's Challenge", and then jumped up - the final chapter he sent last night was deleted!

"This section has been removed by the author."

A striking and silvery reminder here.The deletion time is two o'clock in the morning.Yi Feng calmed down and began to recall—he should not have slept at this time, yes, it was Ling Fan who pushed him to take a bath, and it was Lao Ling who deleted the article while he was taking a bath!So when he came out of the bathroom, he really saw Ling Fan turn around from the computer desk with a gloomy expression; and then, that cup of suspicious "stomach medicine"...

But why did Lao Ling delete his article?Lao Ling should have read all his articles, which can be confirmed from his words and deeds; just read it, why delete it?This is the final chapter. If you can meet the requirements of the fan jury, there will be a third stage of rewards...

Although the article has been deleted, the comments are still there.Yi Feng read one by one:

The Wall Breaker: Finished flowering!It really is HE, so sweet, so sweet, Mu Ming saved Peng Shu, it's so touching...

Boiled Peanuts: Huh, why was the article deleted when I appeared? !

Qiuyuezui: I saw it and took a screenshot, so it’s useless to delete it hehehehe...

Fireworks Leng: So, is the ending going to be rewritten?

Ask Xifeng: Yes, it needs to be rewritten.

Wallbreaker: Who are you upstairs?A false spokesperson?Please correct your position!

Boiled Peanuts: Hehe, we should be the ones who decide the fate of Mr. Xushi, right?

Qiuyuezui: It can even decide your fate, Mr. Fifth Judge...

Fireworks Cold: Seeing your performance, you understand.

Ask West Wind: I have come.Before the final chapter comes out, the outcome is still undecided——I hope everyone will abide by the agreed game rules!

Wallbreaker: Yes, everyone must abide by the agreed game rules!However, please be reminded that this event is limited in time!

Boiled Peanuts: The Final Chapter Always Happens...

Qiuyuezui: Will it rain tonight?

Fireworks are cold: inexplicable expectations.

Ask Xifeng: I am also looking forward to it.

22.

Confused.

This 4VS1 dialogue with a peculiar style of painting obviously didn't say anything special, but it was hidden in a clever way.

Yi Feng felt that he needed to wake up.He didn't wake up Ling Fan, and lightly filled the bathtub on the terrace with water - a beautiful bath on this beautiful terrace should be the most eye-catching selling point of this hotel!Although it's not sunny right now.The sky was overcast with dark clouds, and the coastline in the distance was choppy, creating a scene of stormy weather.However, stealing half of the leisurely and peaceful sky amidst the turbulent wind and clouds around - this kind of strong contrast is also a rare happiness, isn't it?

Yi Feng thought about it, and poured two more glasses of red wine on the small table in front of the bathtub before going into the water—after all, he is a literary youth with perfect romantic feelings, not to mention, there is someone he once loved or still loves deeply People, stay under the same roof with him; there may be some romantic plot happening in the next second...

The warm water relaxes the body, while the intoxicating heat of red wine stirs the mind.Bursts of colorful lightning flashed in the clouds in the sky, and Yi Feng's brain began to discharge——

What the hell is the five-member fan jury arguing about?Why did Lao Ling suddenly appear?

Why did my selected article be "Rainy Night", and the Xiaotian article for the competition had to be written together with "Rainy Night"?

——"Rainy Night" is a suspense thriller novel; like most of my works, under the shell of suspense, it always explores the core of emotion.It's about a perverted killer who specializes in attacking couples.For the last time, the couple broke up in front of him.Unwilling to let this go, the killer temporarily changed his policy of not killing anyone who is not a couple, saying: If you can reconcile before this rain, I will let you go...

Before the novel was finished, he saw the activity notice on the "Writer's Challenge" on the Callousy website, so he tagged all "Rainy Night" with the "Writer's Challenge" as required, and participated in the competition.

A flash of lightning in the sky seemed to illuminate the doubts in Yi Feng's mind—the scene where Lao Ling pressed him against the door and kissed him as soon as he entered the door was the first act of the couple in "Rainy Night" under the gun of the killer. move...

After Lao Ling came to the hotel, whether intentionally or not, many of his actions were exactly the same as those in the novel. It was like reenacting the novel as a script!

At this time, there was only a soft "pop", and a red wine glass exploded strangely on the small table next to the bathtub, and the dark red liquid gurgled and splashed.

Yi Feng sat up straight from the bathtub in amazement, looking at the miserable red wine glass, puzzled.

"Yi Feng!" came from behind after a short drink.He turned his head, and before he could see what happened, he was pushed into the water.

23.

"What are you doing?!" Yi Feng was tightly wrapped in the quilt, and his voice of protest came muffled: "You hurt me so much!"

Yes, he was almost pushed into the bathtub by Ling Fan with his whole body just now.He opened his eyes in the water, and saw his ex-boyfriend's beautiful and anxious face smashing a layer of clarity and coming towards him, with some kind of magical special effect... He raised his chin involuntarily, as if he wanted to catch something too.But then he was picked up, dragged into the house, thrown on the bed, rolled up with a quilt, and wrapped tightly.

It took him a long time to reveal his head, and saw Ling Fan standing in the middle of the room drenched, with his back turned to him, frantically pressing the phone.The white shirt was dripping on the man's body, honestly outlining the simple and attractive lines——Yi Feng shook his head, feeling that his focus was really not right at this weird moment; he was wrapped in a quilt Jumping off the bed, he rubbed towards Ling Fan step by step, trying to see clearly what else he could do with his mobile phone in this place where there was almost no signal.However, when he turned his eyes away, he pointed to the bathtub on the terrace and exclaimed:

"Lao Ling—water, water is red!"

Ling Fan heard the words and looked, the water in the pure white bathtub really showed a slight color difference.When he turned his head, the panic in his eyes became more intense, he strode forward without any explanation and hugged Yi Feng horizontally, carefully put him on the bed, peeled off the quilt, and looked up and down Yi Feng's body.

Wu Jiacheng's face turned red.Because he was just picked up from the bathtub, he was naked...

"Old Ling! Yes, your feet are bleeding..."

Ling Fan lowered his head in a daze, suddenly his body went limp, and he knelt down in front of Yi Feng's knees.

"Old Ling! What's the matter with you?" Yi Feng leaned forward to pull Ling Fan's head buried between his legs;

"You scared me to death!" Ling Fan's face rubbed wet on Yi Feng's waist, and he couldn't tell whether it was the water on his body or the tears on his face.

"I'm fine, why are you so nervous?!" Yi Feng complained: "It's just a broken glass, you ran over nervously, you must have stepped on broken glass!"

In such an instant, the nervous person changed.Yi Feng stood up resolutely and stripped off Ling Fan's wet clothes. He also pushed him on the bed arbitrarily, found the alcohol cotton gauze in the hotel medicine box, and cleaned Ling Fan's injured foot carefully.

There was a sudden silence in the room, and the two people who were busy interacting with each other were caught in their own emotions, not noticing that in this dark room, the two had unintentionally "sincerely" facing each other.

"Does it hurt?" Yi Feng raised his head and asked.Because Ling Fan kept staring at him with red eyes, he was not at all like the tough guy he knew.

"With me here, I won't put you in danger, not at all."

Yi Feng's heart skipped a beat, and he changed the subject: "You deleted my article, right? Why?"

"Because...Mu Ming is not as good as you write..."

"Don't be so sentimental, please take your seat! It's a novel, it's creation! Besides, the organizer is asking for a sweet novel..."

"I also read the unpublished part you locked. It's not sweet there. That's your real thought, right? I'll help you rewrite it..."

"How do you rewrite it?"

"We never broke up; Mu Ming and Peng Shu have always been together."

"You're 'asking Xifeng'... so uncreative!" Yi Feng confirmed the guess in his heart, and then added an insincere comment.

24.

"Are you hungry?" Yi Feng sat up straight and reached for his bathrobe: "Steak, pasta, and instant noodles are also available, which one do you choose?"

The dark clouds in the sky seemed to have condensed to the last moment.There was a loud thunder, and all the lights in the room were suddenly extinguished.

"Wow..." Yi Feng dodged instinctively, and shrank into someone's arms; then immediately bounced up, and weakly concealed: "Is there a power outage?"

In the darkness, Ling Fan stretched out his hand and fished the stiff figure into his arms:

"Choose you."