[Yan Zan] "In short, find the time machine first!"

The forum in Rhodes Island was originally an internal forum built by the enthusiasm of the operators in their spare time. The usual output depends entirely on the mood of the grain-producing wives, and it is extremely vulnerable to the impact of Rhodes Island's personnel arrangements.Once the crisis contract came, the whole island entered a state of first-level combat readiness, which was stronger than a few elite senior operators, and they needed to run back and forth between different natural disaster locations, so to speak, without even giving them time to catch their breath.Under such circumstances, it is inevitable that the forum will... be interrupted.

The abandoned Longmen Outer Ring City is completely disconnected from the Internet.So when Yan Ke reconnected to Rhodes Island's network, it had been four days since they set off.

He seized the time to integrate the experience of the past few days into a document, and wrote nearly [-] words in a profuse manner, but he hesitated when he was about to release it: he is currently using the Shining account.According to Rhodes Island's internal itinerary, Shining should still be assisting the sniper operators in an uninhabited dangerous building that also belongs to the outer ring area of ​​Longmen at this time, and will not be able to return for a while.

As the saying goes, you have to do a full set of plays.Although he had already planned to take off his vest, the effect of taking off his vest voluntarily and being caught by someone through a time gap is always different.He dare not take this risk lightly.

So the [-]-word new chapter of "Employee Dormitory Is Not a Place Outside the Law" was held in his hands for another two days, and he waited until he heard the news that the Shining had returned to Rhodes Island with the team, and then hurriedly re-examined it. Once again, edits were sent to the forum.

【Flame Burial】Employee dormitory is not a place outside the law (R) (short story collection, latest update 824L)

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825L give me a cup of blood:

Update first kill! !

(Building in the middle of the building) A car of bread people replied to give me a cup of blood: Why do you always grab the sofa every time?

(Building in the building) Give me a cup of blood and reply to a cart of bread man: Secret!

826L Katsushika Hokusai Zhai Zhai:

It's the Shining update!I'm so excited!

827L==:

That... I... secretly followed this article for a long time, and it's the first time I replied today... I really like Shining novels...

828L give me a cup of blood:

What did I see!What did I see! !My tears turned into a river and flowed from the medical department to the staff dormitory!Why is it so poetic to put the crisis contract that our group of people have made into disgrace in Shining's pen!And how can you say that the undertaker doesn't know!Aren't you just blatantly worried!

(Building in the building) Reply with a cup of black tea and give me a cup of blood: It’s been a long time since you blow rainbow farts like this, what happened?

829L cup of black tea:

I can't say anything else.My heart and eyes are full of Yan Ke's heroic appearance when he slays and kills beasts... As expected of the Shining, both the plot and the writing have reached a level that I can hardly match.Wait, I have to write a long review to praise the ninth chapter of Outlaw Land.

830L nutritious meal unsalable help us:

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866L cup of black tea:

Long comment: They are the sun and the moon that attract each other——To the ninth chapter of "Outlaw Land"

(The following contains spoilers, please jump to 824L if you click directly from this building)

After seeing warfarin @give me a cup of blood scream, before reading the text, I always suspected that I clicked in because I read something wrong.The Shining usually updates at [-]:[-] p.m., with [-] to [-] words per update. It has never released a whole article in one go like this.However, after reading through the update, I have to admit that the short story updated this time can be said to be completed in one go, whether it is the plot structure or the emotional context. At least from my point of view, it cannot be truncated, nor should it be truncated.Readers must follow the author's hearty writing all the way to the end, in order to appreciate the ultimate romanticism of the ninth chapter of "Outlaw Land".

As we all know, this update started with a mission between the two of Yan Zan under the background of the crisis contract.I asked Ms. Wei Na @必场之王 to confirm that what was written in the article was basically the content of their mission, and the more than 30 mutant monsters at the last sniper spot were indeed killed by the two people who were watching the night. .I don't know who the Shining asked about the details of the mission. After all, not everyone in the elite team who participated in the mission has an account on the Liqu Forum.But just talking about this intention makes me admire the ninth chapter of "Outlaw Land".

I used to call myself a reductionist writer in the forum, but when I really wanted to write about the two of them, I always imagined more than I actually did.Even if I have been on the battlefield with them a few times, I can’t write about their heroic posture standing side by side in the flames of war. In the end, I can only write some exquisite daily emotional dramas, and even use the overhead world to rewrite their identities to forcefully make one. Love template.At this point, I admit that I am much inferior to The Shining.What she did was to truly restore them to the environment in which they lived, and use her words to urge their love to bloom on the soil of real life.

Yanke is like the sun.

He was the more active side of their relationship from the start.He is radiant and dazzling, making the Undertaker unable to ignore his existence from the very beginning of the plot, so that he gets closer and closer to him.But he is not the aggressive kind of dazzling.It burns smoothly, just like the sun's 50 billion years of constant brilliance, nourishing the earth forever.His sunny disposition is fully reflected in the ninth chapter.In this article, for the first time, he has a comprehensive and detailed description of the battle, especially when he faced the frenzy of vermin alone before the mourners arrived, his calm judgment and smooth fighting movements were only black and white text I was so shocked that I forgot to breathe.We read it in the archives all the time, and Yankee's few all-out deathmatches all come across as crazy and extreme.But after Shining's artistic processing, I actually had the idea of ​​"I really want to see it once in reality".

And the love clue that runs through the second half of the full text, the mint stuffed into the mouth of the mourner, also reflects the gentle side of the sun's character.This is not only a piece of candy he stuffed to refresh the mourners, but also a shocking mouthful of candy for our readers.The Shining had previously posted in the water area that the "Land of Law" series will come to an end.At that time, the incident of the side story had just passed, and I was still thinking how could it end so quickly with the tepid progress of the main story. Even if it was a confession, it might be some kind of tacit love between them.But I found out that I was wrong.The ninth chapter let me see their throbbing like the beginning of love.Of course, they can't be the first love, after all, they even made the most in-depth contact at the beginning, but really, when I saw the mourner carefully put the bitten candy into his mouth, I His breathing actually accelerated unconsciously.

I have always felt that Yan Ke in Shining's works has a particularly frank and sudden feeling, which may be due to her familiarity with the deity in real life.On the bright side, his abruptness made up for the cautious and conservative aspect of The Undertaker's character, and became the driving force for the plot of "Outlaw Land".On the other hand, the plot always relies on tacit understanding and unilateral breakthroughs in the end, and the interaction mode is too old.Now that she finally started to write about the feeling of renewed love between this old couple, I realized that it's not that she doesn't know how to write this kind of interaction mode, but that once she writes it, it will be too lethal, afraid of us readers My heart can't stand it.

Let's talk about the undertaker.He has always been a moon figure in my mind.Of course, I'm not saying here that he just reflects the sun's rays, I firmly believe that he is shining by himself.The phenomenon we observed on the ground shall prevail here, please do not delve into it.

Apart from the mint part, the part that I remember the most is the scene where Yan Ke was trapped in a tight siege at the end, and then the mourner brandished two shotguns and came back to save people.The mourner in that section was really majestic, with the multi-layered wings of light behind him and the faintly glowing black halo above his head, it seemed like a real angel descended into the world.Having browsed through the same humanities in the forum, I can clearly say that there are many articles and pitfalls written about the handsome Yanke fighting, but when it comes to the description of the combat scene of The Undertaker, no one in the forum can match Mrs. Shining.Especially when he broke into the battle in an environment where it was difficult for Yanke to break out of the encirclement, it was an environment that even our god of war, Yanke, could not cope with, but he came in with two guns, and joined hands with his lover to kill the most difficult one. All the dog kings were killed.It's been a long, long time since I've seen such a strong and emotional couple. Where else can I find a couple who can save each other on the battlefield?They must be real!

In short, thanks to Mrs. Shining for bringing us such an excellent work as "Outlaw Land".I am also looking forward to the final chapter of the legendary confession, what kind of peak it will be.

Regarding the content of the whole building of "Staff Dormitory is Not a Place Outside the Law", it is considered exhaustive to climb here.

The mourner thoughtfully turned off his phone, but continued to keep his eyes open in the dark.

He had to sleep alone tonight, on the night train that was heading for support from an unmanned dangerous building.The driver in front was replaced by Glaucus, which was much better than Wei Na's death driving skills.But he still couldn't sleep.

He remembered that Yanke and Laplande climbed on the roof of the car to stop the dogs, he remembered touching the mint that was stuffed by his lips in the dark, and he remembered the distraught feeling when he found that Yanke hadn't followed. The ninth chapter of "Outlaw Land" has written all of this, except for one thing: there is no difficult dog king, and he did not rescue Yanke majesticly like a god, but because of his own negligence Careless, almost caused a major accident.He looked at the black and white text and pushed one honor after another to himself, only to feel that his eyes were blurred one after another, just like the screen of a malfunctioning machine covered with snowflakes.

Why do you want to do this?

The mourner opened the phone's address book, hovered over one of the names with his fingertips, but quickly moved away, and re-clicked on the forum interface in the browser to think about it.

The restlessness in Rhode Island's mile forums continues.Tonight is the day when the first team to explore uninhabited buildings returns to Rhodes Island, and there just happens to be another high-quality update, which is enough for the girls who have been disconnected from the Internet for six days to discuss for a long time.Seeing the beautiful words and phrases brushed up from floor to floor.The mourners followed their replies step by step, as if descending a long staircase.Every time he went down one floor, he felt that his mind became stronger.

(TBC)

ps: Ceylon's long review is written for Brother Yan's update. For the specific level of awesomeness, please apply the content of my previous chapter with a 33-layer writing beauty filter and transfer to No.1 title.Don't worry, everyone, in order to protect Brother Yan's image as a great writer who has reached the pinnacle of his generation, I dare not write the main text of "Land Outside the Law".