Although Tao Qingfeng has returned to his one-person apartment in Province A, he is always following the progress of the script of "The Witch of the Eastern King".The screenwriter girl sends him new scripts almost every day—he really admires her, or they, speed.At most, [-] words were sent a day.Although a large part of the reason is that some parts that have been written before do not need to be changed, but the total number of those brand new ones is still considerable.

"People are in the circle, how can they float without any speed?" When Tao Qingfeng asked why they were able to progress so fast, the little girl's yawning voice came from the WeChat voice: "Mrs. Night, do you know why? 24 hours a day to clean the tag, find out...I fell asleep..."

Although I don't understand what tag is, but I can vaguely understand the meaning of fast hand speed. Tao Qingfeng laughed, and then started to read the new script, and he was fascinated by it without knowing it.The adapted script is really full of tension, and there are no vulgar and cowardly parts.Even the places where the characters used to be finely divided are a little round and reasonable.It wasn't until he finished reading that he discovered an important question——

"What about Mei Wangxue's scene? Didn't she come to assassinate the emperor earlier?"

Tao Qingfeng still uses the touch-screen handwriting input method favored by the elderly to send messages.Although he has memorized 26 letters and almost learned pinyin, he is still not proficient in applying them. He still writes by hand when he is in a hurry.

The little screenwriter girl who vowed to "sleep" replied almost instantly: "It's too stupid, I deleted it and rewritten it. Once Mei Wangxue is about to assassinate, whether Yu Shanhai helps or not, he will lose his IQ. Coupled with the emotional scene, the plot will collapse so that it cannot be watched directly. Mrs. Mingyue and I are talking about the stalk, Qingfeng, you should also think about it. The main point is: You must fall in love without falling in love..." The voice became more and more The more confused, this time I really fell asleep.

You want to fall in love, but you don't want to be in love?Tao Qingfeng began to rack his brains, but this is really not his field of expertise, and he has no experience in relationships, except...he quickly shook his head, that has no reference value, Mei Wangxue is a girl.

So Tao Qingfeng began to recall the emotional line of the original script, hoping to get some inspiration from it.

Originally, the refreshingness of the emotional drama is an advantage of the original work.The first version of the web drama script was changed beyond recognition and turned into a love triangle.At the beginning, Yu Shanhai and Mei Wangxue agreed with each other, but he gave Mei Wangxue to the emperor of the enemy country with his own hands. He couldn't forgive himself, so he drank his sorrows all day long.Then the two became strangers, and Mei Wangxue's heart was ashamed.Later, she was rescued from the palace by Luo Langning, and was gradually moved by his gentleness, but she still couldn't forget Yu Shanhai, and became entangled between two excellent men.

As soon as Mei Wangxue fell in love with Luo Langning on the way, he was recalled to the capital by the emperor. Before Mei Wangxue could be notified, she once thought that Luo Langning was dead, so she blackened and tore up a large number of sects.Later, Mei Wangxue and Yu Shanhai, who had been stripped of his undercover identity but was still misunderstood as a traitor by the Central Plains martial arts, met again. The two explained their misunderstanding, cleared up their previous suspicions, and got back together...

In the original script, Yu Shanhai and Luo Langning were rivals and rivals in love. When the palace went undercover at the beginning, although the two had opposite positions, they were both martial arts masters and cherished each other.Later, the two competed for a girl and were jealous of each other, one disliked the other.But occasionally rescue each other, hard-spoken and soft-hearted.It wasn't until Luo Langning's cousin had an accident that he realized the true love in his heart, quit this love triangle, and fulfilled Yu Shanhai and Mei Wangxue...

Tao Qingfeng originally felt that this love triangle was written inexplicably, and it had a devastating effect on the character design.He couldn't understand at all how they would get back together after Yu Shanhai made the suffocating operation of sending Mei Wangxue to the enemy emperor—this was much more terrifying than the pre- and post-sequence.If it is really filmed like that, he will probably become the first actor in history to be scolded and boycotted by the audience.What's more, Mei Wangxue transferred her love to Luo Langning halfway, and even killed him because of him (not to mention that this love brain violates her chivalrous principles, it is enough to drink a pot).In the later period, she fell back into Yu Shanhai's arms for no reason—the heroine would probably also be labeled as a flirtatious woman.As for Dongjun Luo Langning, didn't he have a faint, unknowing affection for his cousin who had been with him all the time?How could it be possible to fall in love with Mei Wangxue all of a sudden, but then dislike her again and choose her cousin again-does this help in shaping the character?Apart from explaining that Luo Langning is a passionate seed who is easily tempted, what else does it explain?

Tao Qingfeng learned from Su Xun that although many thunder dramas are hot on the eyes, they have the wonderful effect of relaxing and decompressing, and laughing and complaining.He felt that according to the setting of the original script, it would not even be able to "make a joke", it would only make people feel depressed and vomit old blood.

Furthermore, in the new version, Yu Shanhai and Luo Langning have become half-brothers, and they have a love triangle to compete for a girl, which is really a bit too vulgar-in fact, Tao Qingfeng doesn't know, if it is changed A screenwriter who likes clichéd dog blood, adding brother stalks will inevitably have brothers fighting for a woman, and also euphemistically called: brothers have the same taste, like the same girl, to create more intense dog blood conflicts.

But Tao Qingfeng was deeply influenced by brother and brother Gong's outline, thinking: how can brothers compete for a woman?Even if they didn't know that they were brothers at the beginning, they should try to avoid this kind of routine.Besides, Yu Shanhai has the heavy responsibility of undercover assassination, so how can he have the energy to distract himself from talking about love?In terms of emotion, it should be "suppression" and "acceptance", but it can express that kind of affection instead of recklessly "publicizing" that kind of emotion.

Since Tao Qingfeng wanted to challenge the role of playing two roles, he spent time thinking about Yu Shanhai, trying to find a way to fix the reason for the inconsistency.Already figured it out a bit.There are two relatively big problems. One is that because Yu Shanhai was suddenly stimulated by the truth, he instantly aroused the nature of father and son. He failed to kill the killer and was knocked off the cliff by his father's guards.As long as you don't act so sensitive and sluggish, like an idiot who has lost his IQ, but add helplessness, so that the audience can see that he is struggling between his family relationship and his mission, that's fine.The second is the ferocity he displayed when he was chased and killed by the martial arts. In fact, he only needs to pave the way for those comrades whom he called friends in the past to use all kinds of despicable means to chase and kill him.Let him see through the face of this group of "hypocrites among the decent families", leading to a change in temperament, becoming preoccupied and indifferent, so the occasional bloody show is justified to a certain extent.

In addition, Tao Qingfeng also pondered over the issue of Dongjun Luo Langning's fine points, and slowly sorted out some clues.

Luo Langning had a withdrawn and cold personality in the early stage. Many nobles disliked him, but they couldn't help him.This part of the character traits is relatively easy to grasp.But in the later stage, when he returned to the imperial capital to solve the case, he gradually dissipated his hatred for the royal family, and became like a duck to water, and there was not much foreshadowing for struggling to resolve it. This part made Tao Qingfeng feel that he needed to make some changes.Politically, Luo Langning yearned for the "rule of sages and great unity" in the ideal of the Central Plains Confucianism, and in life he admired "independence and self-care". Although he was a foreigner, he had already "centralized" in spirit.Such a son of an aristocrat, returning to the hands of the emperor who admired "hegemony" in his country, and stepping into the court where "ten thousand horses are silent", should be tortured mentally.Not necessarily easy to let go.

Tao Qingfeng was still thinking: Under such mental pressure, how should Luo Langning's feelings be settled?The cousin in the original work has very little ink, and her personality is very pale. It is only vaguely written that she was naughty when she was a child, but she is a gentle woman when she grows up.She didn't know much about Luo Langning's ups and downs in the court and in the arena, but she just waited for him for decades.Tao Qingfeng vaguely understands the reason why his cousin doesn't even have a role in solving the case—maybe the meaning of this character creation is just Luo Langning's temporary spiritual safe haven like a blank sheet of paper.But it's hard to dramatize.

Coincidentally, on the second day, Tao Qingfeng received a letter from the screenwriter about the new plot of the cousin's major revision - the screenwriter changed the love triangle in the first version of the plot.Add drama to the cousin and create two pairs of main CPs.There is no such thing as brothers grabbing a woman, or two girls loving a man.Plant a radish in a pit.

However, Tao Qingfeng's jaw almost dropped from shock—the screenwriter and Mrs. Mingyue changed the cousin's character 180 degrees (it can't be said to be changed, because the original work didn't have many strokes), and turned it into a brand new subversive character.In layman's terms, she became a "witch".She is also Luo Langning's cousin, she was still very naughty when she was a child, and she had a secret love affair with Luo Langning since she was a child.However, he was trained by the family and secretly cultivated his skills. When he grew up, he accepted the job of assassin in the "Xuelingfang", a terrifying assassination organization specially used by the emperor to execute disobedient courtiers. He was an eagle dog serving the dynasty.

Tao Qingfeng restrained his shock: Is this changing my cousin into a villain?In the end, how could he and Luo Langning make friends with Qin and Jin?He turned to the later stage of the script, and as expected - he was not married, and even the confession was very tragic.The cousin died in the end.Luo Langning didn't get out of the heart knot of being out of place with the government and the people, and even more wanted to leave the turbid government and the people, and he didn't want to be released into the turbulent rivers and lakes, and fell into the confusion of not being able to find a home.But the ending hasn't been written yet, he should still do something for his brother.

Tao Qingfeng didn't immediately raise an opinion, although this direction was very depressing.But Tao Qingfeng vaguely felt: For Luo Langning, this is actually a suitable place for him.The tragedy of dislocation of his identity and spiritual pursuit - it is impossible to be happy for a lifetime; under the circumstances at that time, he could not find a way to go into the world.

And Tao Qingfeng can probably understand why the cousin is set as the villain: by comparing the similar background and different paths, the conflict between Luo Langning and Huangcheng will be more three-dimensionally increased.In addition, the tension of the cousin's role has been enhanced for a long time, and the plot of solving the case can add a lot of roles.She herself was able to "come alive", even if she "died" in the end.

The new ending of Yu Shanhai and Mei Wangxue has not been written yet.But the direction is very new-Mei Wangxue became the leader of the martial arts, taking on the important task of uniting the martial arts in the Central Plains, and the role of the scene is very heroic.

After Tao Qingfeng paid attention to the progress of the script, he turned to Blueberry Culture Media Company to reorganize the progress of this project.

Tao Qingfeng has already conveyed the suggestion of revising the script into brothers, and he wants to play two roles.The producers have agreed.Because they read the new version of the script together, they were all full of praise.And for the producer, it saves the trouble of finding another male role, and only needs to increase Tao Qingfeng's salary.

But the problem now is that we need to find two more actresses.And it would be best if one of them belonged to Yu Ci too.After all, Sun Wuyou's agent had talked about a partnership before, so it would be more convenient to push another one over.

During this period of time, Tao Qingfeng, besides comprehending the script, is also trying to exercise another aspect: physical fitness.

Most of the martial arts in martial arts novels are fictitious, but during the filming process, there are indeed many martial arts movements that require coercion and physical strength-Tao Qingfeng therefore recognizes the only one. He can't make a short-term assault. Stand-in: Martial arts stand-in.

On the cast and crew list, there are five or six substitutes for Tao Qingfeng, but most of them are the kind of substitutes who stand up in different groups or show off the background.Tao Qingfeng felt that it was unnecessary.In addition to needing a professional martial arts stand-in.

Unexpectedly, it was a girl—but Tao Qingfeng understood after thinking about it. He was very thin, and the clothes he wore were in the style of a corset with elegant sleeves. Tao Qingfeng's cut waist really only had a girl as a substitute It's not against the peace.

Fortunately, Miss Wu Ti is 175, which is considered tall among women. Although she is still slightly shorter than Tao Qingfeng, the dynamics of martial arts will not be obvious.

Of course, Tao Qingfeng couldn't help being surprised when they first met, "Is it a girl?"

"What's wrong with the girl?" Ms. Wu Ti probably acted as a stand-in for the stars too much, she frowned, and said in a stinging tone, "It's not worse than a man at all!"

Tao Qingfeng hurriedly confessed: "Teacher Zhai, calm down, I have never had the slightest intention to look down on women."

Tao Qingfeng understood this truth in his previous life.Because the number one scholar over him and Yan Dansheng—even with the weird alias of "Ying Daqie"—is a girl with profound knowledge and ability.Tao Qingfeng accidentally discovered the secret of her disguise as a man.Although I don't know the girl's real name, I really admire her.

This Wu Ti, named Zhai Yan, is the junior sister of a well-known star-making actor.I have also been in the entertainment circle for three or four years, and I have seen all kinds of stars.After seeing that Tao Qingfeng was not the kind of ignorant starlet playing big names, his attitude softened.

Tao Qingfeng asked her about some basic exercise methods. Although they can only be used to shape the shape at most, and can't even gain muscle in the short term, at least in terms of appearance, try to get closer to the "knight-errant" appearance.Zhai Yan also recommended to him an ordinary person with zero foundation, the only set of martial arts routines suitable for direct practice——

Tai Chi and Tai Chi Sword.

So in the past few days, after Tao Qingfeng got up at four or five o'clock every day, he went to follow martial arts videos and practice Tai Chi on the green belt of the community-more like the style of the elderly.Fortunately, he was haunted too early, and the young people who knew "Tao Qingfeng" in the community hadn't woken up yet.Only some old grandparents noticed him.

After a few days, a few grandparents were amazed and followed him to practice Tai Chi.Fortunately, these uncles and aunts don't pay much attention to entertainment news, and they don't know Tao Qingfeng. They just think that this handsome guy is really a rare love for health preservation.I don't know if I can lead this community to expand the "traditional health preservation" and compete with the "square dance troupe" that is in the middle of the green belt every day.

Tao Qingfeng had no idea what kind of strange successor expectations he had been crowned with.He has always respected the elderly very much. If they want to follow him in Tai Chi, they are free to do so.There were a few old grandparents who had practiced Tai Chi for a long time and had some brushes. Tao Qingfeng went back to ask them for advice.Gradually, the 24 forms of Taijiquan and the fifty or sixty forms of Taijijian are still practiced in style.

It's a pity that this weekend he had to suspend this pleasant activity, and took Xu Rongrong's company car to drive him to the airport, flew to Huajing to shoot commercials, and came back tomorrow night.

This is Tao Qingfeng's first time flying on a plane after passing through. Although the original owner of the body has an impression in the memory, it is different when he actually sits on it.Looking down from the window of the first-class cabin to see the sea of ​​clouds and gradually shrinking buildings.Flying up in the sky, as if all frivolous imaginations could evaporate into golden sunlight, Tao Qingfeng leaned against the window and watched in a daze, and couldn't help—although this was not the first time he had such an idea—thinking: In this era, what is really happening? OK.

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