Comprehensive: Biqigu's daily life will not meet the real thing

"There is no need to take it to heart at all!!"

"but......"

"What if the teacher is disappointed in me..."

Wugeng Liuli squeezed her fingers tightly.

All kinds of thoughts are mixed together in the mind.

Let the girl become more and more nervous and afraid.

Especially when every expression on Hikigu's face changes.

The girl's heart couldn't help being lifted up.

Until Hikigu's expression stretched.

Then he let out a long breath of relief.

Another half hour passed.

The time came to 11:45.

Hikigu finally turned to the last page.

Because it is reading the manuscript.

So the speed is much faster than formal reading.

Otherwise, with the girl's hundreds of thousands of manuscripts, it is not something that can be done in a short time if she wants to read word by word.

Read the last part.

Hikigu put the manuscript in his hand back on the table.

Close your eyes.

Organize in your mind the language you are going to use next.

Almost accompanied by Hikigu's movements.

Wugeng Liuli couldn't help but pause for breath.

The heart is beating like a "thump, bang, bang"!

Two emotions of anticipation and fear kept surging deep in my heart.

Hikigaya opened his eyes and his eyes fell on the girl.

The word "nervous" written all over his face can be seen by any individual.

"Don't be so nervous."

"I'm just a layman, and advice or something doesn't matter at all in the end."

"Just listen to whatever you want."

Hikigu comforted him, but it didn't seem to have as good an effect as he had imagined.

The girl laughed dryly.

layman?

Doesn't matter?

Just listen?

If you really believe this kind of words, then you are really naive!

At least Wugeng Liuli wouldn't believe a single word!

Not to mention that she knows the other party's level as a creator.

Even if the other party is just an ordinary author with publishing qualifications, the girl will listen carefully to the other party's suggestions.

After all, not everyone will be kind enough to help you find your shortcomings!

only......

Even if you are a fan of "Teacher Dubian", I really can't help but want to complain about this statement!

Can a layman win the Grand Prize of Fujimi Fantasia?

A big guy like you, who took the time to read my manuscript, would what he said be insignificant nonsense?

Even you just listen to your instructions... Where did I come from in your heart? ?

but......

"To say such a thing, the teacher is completely humble... No! It should be said that he is too approachable!!"

Thanks for this.

Wugeng Liuli's mood is still slightly relaxed at the moment.

"I feel... What is the teacher's feeling!?"

Wugeng Liuli opened her eyes wide, looking at Biqigu.

"I feel..."

Although I can feel the expectation in the girl's eyes.

But lying about this kind of thing will not do any good for the girl at all!

Based on this judgment.

Biqigu decided to tell the truth!

"The plot is too weak... No, it should be said to be too old-fashioned? Or where is the stitch monster more suitable!?"

Just this one sentence caused a critical blow to Wu Geng Liuli!

However, Wugeng Liuli actually had a premonition about this kind of thing.

Because I couldn't think of a good idea, I combined the things I had seen.

only......

"It really doesn't work that way!"

"People with a discerning eye can tell at a glance. At most, they can deceive those who haven't seen many works, right?"

When Wugeng Liuli was thinking about this kind of thing.

Biqigu didn't stop either.

"Obviously it should be the climax, but the incident was suddenly and inexplicably resolved..."

"A lot of things were laid out in the early stage, but in the end there was nothing to explain..."

"One thing has not been solved, just start the next thing..."

"There is also a big problem with the human design!"

"I can vaguely see the shadow of other works... This is not a big problem.

After all, the industry has been developing for so many years now, it is really normal for characters to bump into faces, but ah...

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If you want to imitate a character, then do it well!

If you want to be original, then integrate the emotions you want to express into it!

What is the situation of this inconsistency? "

"..."

Listening to the shortcomings that Hikigu found out one after another.

Wu Geng Liuli's eyes gradually became blank.

"So there are still so many problems..."

"Obviously I have let editor Machida read it for me so many times, and I have learned so many skills from her."

"...So I still can't do it!"

"really......"

"A guy like me shouldn't be thinking about writing novels, should he?"

"Obviously, except for a little faster hand speed, I don't have any talent at all..."

"Or... just give up like this."

"Anyway, I don't have any grades, and no one knows... That's it, study hard from now on."

"Live an ordinary life."

Wugeng Liuli was not without blows.

But that kind of blow is different from the current situation!

It doesn't matter what you look like in the eyes of outsiders.

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But ah!

...The person in front of her who is constantly giving her valuable advice is the person she respects the most!

Even he said so, why can't I not believe it! ?

and so.

Novel or something, there is no need to stick to it...

Wu Geng Liuli was like this, thinking in a daze.

The voices of the outside world seemed to be cut off from her.

"I'm so sorry, Hikigaya-sensei."

"It's so serious to help me find the problem, do I need to listen carefully..."

The girl keeps sinking in the closed world she created...