Longevity Story

"Just one page to give them a happy ending? It's dangerous to think like that. Then again, Mashiro, why did he suddenly disappear from this very stylish rival in love?"

"……returned home?"

"Why is it a question again, you are the author, how can I know what you don't know?

after. .The last question is also the most important one... Don't you make a draft? "

"draft?"

Well, the truth is revealed, and Xing Ke feels that everything is clear now.

"Really, you have great painting skills, so you may not understand it very well. It is common sense that it is difficult to grasp the quality of the painting without drafting in the world.

Therefore, a simple, messy, abstract line that hits the point has become a cartoonist's savior. As long as the line drawing is completed, the rest can be shared with assistants. "

Returning the drawing to Shinshiro, Xing Ke continued:

"However, the role of the line draft is not only the auxiliary role of rushing to work, its other two more important roles are [experiment] and [practice].

First, draw a line draft and give it to an editor or a friend to see the effect and inadequacy. .It can then be easily corrected.

The time required to do it first is also very small, so you can complete multiple works in a limited time, and you can choose the best one and turn it into a finished draft.

If you draw it directly like you, it is the finished draft. Not only does it not have time to practice a few stories, but once it is finalized, there is no room for revision.Repainting becomes your burden.

I say this, do you understand? "

Xing Ke looked at Mashiro, waiting for her answer, while Mashiro looked at the draft and imagined another scene:

"This child, who only has lines, ends his life with such an empty interior. It's so pitiful."

"The poor thing is, how are you? Every night, the works that are produced after rushing through the drafts all night are not interesting at all in the end..."

"Then don't want them."

"Abandon them decisively, hello."

He was still looking sad just now, but now he has decisively thrown the sketch aside.

Is it just because of the sentence [uninteresting] that star carved just now?

This kid is very obsessed with 【Interesting Comics】...

7.

162. The outstanding contribution of the editing method of misunderstanding to video in the field of comics

This morning, Xing Ke was in the living room as usual, combing Zhenbai's hair. Because it was Saturday, Chihiro Chihiro, who was 30 years old and had breakfast leisurely instead of going out at this time, was sitting next to Zhenbai and Xing Ke.

"Double ponytails, single ponytails, three-strand braids, princess heads... Long bows, is it fun to change Shinshiro's hairstyle every day?"

"It's interesting...it's like raising a daughter."

"Say as if you have parenting experience, little virgin."

"Why not? The last time I raised offspring was [-] trillion years ago, but they all turned into unworthy offspring in the end. How can Zhenbai be so cute."

"Is it your middle school setting again? When you first met me, you said that you entered the Magic Academy when you were 12 years old..."

"That's also true... Okay! Today's hairstyle is a simple home-style marijuana flower. Today's Mashiro is also very cute!~"

After completing the daily task while speaking, Xing Ke put the mirror in front of Shiro and let her watch it by herself.

"Somebody, this girl is so cute, I'm going to draw it as a heroine."

"That's you, little idiot."

"Can't I be the protagonist myself?"

"You're so cute, of course you can."

………………

Chihiro Qianshishi is 30 years old and single, watching two young (?) men and women discussing cute issues next to her, she feels that her heart has suffered hundreds of tons of damage.

In an instant. .She felt that the bread in her mouth became less sweet, as if it had become dog food and it was difficult to swallow.

This kind of malice from another dimension made her blurt out involuntarily:

"Blast!"

........................

Let's ignore Senshi-sensei's idea that everything is good, and turn our attention back to the happy manga lecture hall of Mashiro and Hoshikari.

"Very good, this time all I used simple lines, but the movements and characteristics have been fully expressed. It is worthy of being a well-known young painter."

"Well, drawing manga has become faster."

"...Mashiro, I'm very happy that you can be very fast. But, can you tell me what's going on?

There are three different modes of corner encounters, collisions on corners, collisions on trams, collisions on bicycles...

The three endings of a rival in love are death from illness, death in a car accident, and travel...

Three modes for the perfect ending, first, to get married, even though they are still high school students and the dreams and struggles of the corners at the beginning of the story are gone.

Second, the open ending standing under the cherry blossom tree, this one is okay, and the big picture spanning two pages is very good... But, you tell me, there was this tree at least 60 years old in the atrium on the campus before Big tree?

The third ending, this... is a bit of a passionate style. The two understand the beauty of youth and are ready to chase their dreams and agree to meet again after their dreams come true.

but……"

Speaking of which, Xing Ke didn't know whether to cry or laugh:

"Can you tell me, why is there a scene where the corner is studying hard in the comics positioned as youth romantic comedies! Is the genre wrong?"

"Someone, aren't these three comics interesting?"

Seeing Zhenbai's somewhat disappointed expression, Xing Ke suddenly thought of a good idea, and said mysteriously:

"Yeah, each of these three comics is a very boring work, and the various plots are old-fashioned plots from ten years ago, and the romance between the characters is completely unimpressive, but it is the difference between the pictures. It can touch people’s hearts.”

"Really? Then I'll go back to..."

"but!"

"Ok?"

"If you take these three comics together, and draw their protagonists exactly the same, and add some [] narration, it will be different.

That would be a very interesting...hilarious comic? "

"(⊙o⊙)?"

........................

Noon the next day.The rare Xing Mo, who slept in late, was in the living room as usual, tidying up the wet hair for Mashiro just after taking a shower, but at this time, Mashiro's phone rang, and the possibility on the other end of the phone was limited.

But Zhenbai still looked at the picture very seriously, and then confirmed:

"Yes, Ayano."

"Does anyone know your phone number besides Ayano?"

"Chihiro."

"The teacher is next door and sleeping with a hangover."

"Huh? It seems like this."

"Okay, just answer the phone."

This kid is so funny.Xing Ke thought so. .Temporarily stopped the noise of the hair dryer.I began to observe Zhenbai making a phone call, because the environment was quite quiet, so the voice over the phone was also revealed:

"Hello? Ayano."

"Hahaha, is it really white? It's so slow to answer the phone! You know...hahaha... I'm sorry, this manga of yours is so funny, and it has been well received by the editorial department! It's not impossible to serialize it like this! "

"Well, I see."

"Also, is this comic in the form of a serialization or in the form of..."

"Can you wait a moment? Ayano."

"Ah? Well, you can..."

Mashiro didn't show any surprise or any kind of expression because of the high praise of the comic, but hung up the phone and looked at Xingke and said:

"Manga... Ayano said it was very interesting."

"Yeah, I heard it, it means yesterday's efforts were not in vain, didn't it?"

Yes, the time went back to yesterday morning. After that discussion meeting, Xingke and Mashiro spent a whole Saturday day and night together, and they both revised, deleted, and added Mashiro's three manga lines. The plot of the draft.

Because the basis is still the manga that Mashiro has already drawn, so in just one day, a chaotic love story of the same neurotic man and woman in three parallel worlds crossing each other was born in Mashiro's hands.

The whole article focuses on the nonsensical plot and the narration commentary full of slots. When the reader thinks that the painting style is normal, suddenly interspersed with a very funny joke, and the character of the enemy who was originally a bit hateful, this is the case. It's a tragic character who becomes involved in the daily life of a neurotic couple...

And such a love comedy that is completely different from the original manga, to put it bluntly, it is just the effect of adding a narration voice after disrupting the order of the three old-fashioned shojo manga.

The additions and deletions are just a little bit at the beginning, and even the style of painting still maintains the cute style of the original normal girl manga.

It's just that it is so serious and serious, without adding Yan Yi's funny, the effect is really good, let's take a look at the contrast.

Sure enough, based on the editor's reaction, the manga works well.

However, even if it is so successful, Shiro has a different opinion.

"How is it? Shiro. Are you not happy? The manga has been recognized. And the opportunity to serialize has come."

"Happy, but...it's not my work."

The smile at the corner of Xing Ke's mouth changed a bit, becoming a little... gratified?

"There? Storyboards, plots, paintings... aren't these all your work?"

"But... leaving someone, I can't draw such a cartoon myself."

"Haha, Xiao Zhenbai is really a serious and persistent good boy.

I like such a good boy very much.

so. .Let's work together!There is still a lot of time. "

Xing Ke's words may have inspired Shinshiro, and her eyes became energetic again: