Sister, Shut Up!

If you want to really get a good result, the first 20 words of new books on the shelves belong to the golden stage of novel content, and you can't be sloppy at all.

Once there is a plot poisonous point in a certain plot, or the logic is wrong, or the characters are not likable, it will easily lead to a drop in the follow-up data.

This is because, when readers are reading new books, they have not been thoroughly cultivated by the characters and plots in them, and the cost of abandoning books is not large.

Only after it is on the shelves, readers pay for subscriptions, read dozens of millions of words, spend money and time, and emotionally resonate with the characters in the book, the probability of them abandoning the book will decrease.

Because the cost of abandoning the book is already relatively high at this time, readers will have a greater tolerance for some small mistakes and omissions in the book.

They will resolutely abandon the book only when they encounter a big poison point that cannot be avoided.

Otherwise, driven by the inertia of reading, even if the quality of the content in the later stage declines, they will still continue to watch.

For Jiang Miao and his new book, now is the golden stage of the new book period, and it is also the time when mistakes cannot be made.

At this time, the most straightforward and trouble-free method is to delete those bad comments, so as to avoid these comments from skewing readers who did not think there was a problem.

But Jiang Miao didn't like to do it.

His authority to delete posts and mute words is reserved only for those who ignore the logic of the plot, even conduct personal attacks, and even remarks involving elders and organs.

If he just discusses the plot and the characters themselves, and doesn't criticize the speaker himself, he doesn't think there is any problem.

The problem at the moment is that he feels that what he wrote is not a big problem.

But there are a lot of readers who express disgust.

At this time, the author's skills are tested.

Whether writing a book or being a person.

……

At eight o'clock in the evening, Jiang Miao withdrew from the codeword state.

In addition to making up the remaining few hundred words of the chapter in the afternoon, he wrote another chapter, a total of two chapters, and uploaded it all at once.

It is impossible to save the manuscript, and it can only make people lazy.

He always wrote it and posted it, otherwise he kept thinking about refining it in his hands, and in the end it was a waste of time, and the effect was not much better.

After posting today's new chapter, he looked at the comments of yesterday's chapter again. Although some readers thought it was okay, many people still expressed that they didn't like that female supporting role.

Headache.

But after he opened WeChat, he found that the senior sister had replied to him.

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: What's the matter?

Seeing that the time was half an hour ago, I don't know if it is still empty.

Thinking of this, Jiang Miao brewed some words in his heart, and then pressed his finger on the screen.

[Miao Miao Xi Yuhuai]: I read the book recommended by my senior at night. I saw the latest chapter yesterday, and found that many people hate that female supporting role. What is your opinion?

I thought I would have to wait for a while, but I didn't expect that this time, senior sister would reply in seconds.

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: I also hate that female supporting role.

Jiang Miao felt heartache when she said that from senior sister...

Even the senior sister who likes the books I wrote the most, thinks that the female partner hates it?

[Miao Miao Xi Yuhuai]: I don't feel very big, can you tell me the reason?

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: Huh?Is this still a question?

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: The female supporting role secretly took her brother's mobile phone and sent a message to the male lead to trick him into going to her house. It was obviously a prying act.

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: And I still know that the male protagonist has a girlfriend.

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: Generally, normal girls will definitely avoid meeting with boys who have girlfriends alone, let alone inviting people to go home.

[Miao Miao Xi Yuhuai]: But the character of the female supporting role is a spoiled rich second generation, so is it logical in behavior?

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: But this has nothing to do with us, hate is hate.

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: But I don't know what Peach Sauce thinks. Maybe the plot really needs such a character to promote the plot?

Jiang Miao looked at Senior Sister's reply and pursed her lips into thought.

[Xiao Miao Xi Yu Huai]: Maybe the author just set up such an unpleasant character, and then slowly reversed her concept in the subsequent episodes, forming a personality flip?

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: This is of course very good, but people who read the book can only see the previous content, and the update of pigeon essence is so slow, how can you think about the follow-up so much.

As soon as Senior Sister's words came out, she instantly woke up Jiang Miao, making him wake up from the dead end all at once.

There is a sense of relief.

"It turns out that the problem is here..." Jiang Miao chewed on the words of Senior Sister, and slowly realized the problem.

In terms of outline and character design, the female supporting role has gone from being rebellious and eccentric in the early stage to learning to empathize in the later stage, gradually becoming gentle and considerate. On the whole, it is indeed a relatively good character design.

However, once it is placed in a web article with a long update period and a huge number of words, the defects of the female supporting characters in the early stage will be infinitely magnified, and the beauty that can only be reflected in the later stage will not be displayed.

In the author's mind, this female supporting role is of course quite outstanding.

But for readers who have only read twenty or so chapters, it is not the same thing at all.

[Miao Miao Xi Yuhuai]: So that's the case, I'm sorry, Senior Sister, for disturbing you.

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: It doesn't matter, I quite like to discuss and discuss the plot like this~

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: But you seem to have done some research, junior brother?Do you feel like you're thinking about things from the author's point of view?

Cough cough... Seeing Senior Sister's doubts, Jiang Miao's heart beat wildly, and she quickly explained.

[Miao Miao Xi Yuhuai]: No, no, I just don’t think it’s easy for the author to write a book, and it doesn’t feel good to be criticized like this.

[Porridge likes to drink porridge]: Mmmm!Peach Butter would be delighted to know that there are new readers like you!

Jiang Miao: "..."

I am happy tortoise...

But thank you anyway, senpai.

At least the next plot, I really need to make some adjustments.

Jiang Miao took a long breath, reopened the comments, and gave a like to those readers who made negative comments.

Then he opened the codeword software again, intending to take advantage of the inspiration and write a little more.

And not long after, Jiang Miao's QQ also received new news.

[Porridge Boss]: Don't worry about those bad reviews, just write what you want.

[Porridge Boss]: I just finished reading the two chapters updated today, I have nothing to say, the dog food is full~ (thumbs~)

[Porridge Boss]: Oh, by the way, before you opened a book and promised your heroine's portrait, the first draft has come out, I will send you a look first~

[Porridge Boss]: (Picture)

[Porridge Boss]: Come on!

007. Don't make the bed dirty

[Under the table, Jiang Qiuyi also stretched out his slender legs and wrapped one of Chen Wen's legs]

[Even if you sit face to face, you have to stick with Chen Wen]

oh~

In the middle of the night, Su Huai porridge huddled under the covers and held her phone, the light shining on her delicate cheeks.

Because there were too few updates from Peach Sauce, she could only read it from the beginning until she saw Chapter 29, which was just updated today.

Every time I see the sweet and exciting content above, Su Huai Porridge's face suddenly shows a silly aunt's smile.

When the love is deep, he will even subconsciously clamp his thighs, imagining the content of the novel in his mind.

But I don't know why, I fantasized in my head, and inexplicably appeared in the evening Qi Lianyue doubted himself——

"You don't like that Jiang Miao, do you?"

Once this sentence came to mind, in the plot of Su Huai's fantasy novel, the image of the hero and heroine suddenly changed into Junior Brother Jiang Miao and herself.

"The Guard is Here"

Hmm...the thighs are tighter.

Su Huai's face flushed red, tossing and turning on the cramped bedroom bed to ease her shyness.

Even the bed creaked softly.

No, no, no...don't think about it anymore!

But to tell the truth, peach sauce is really handsome... Su Huai porridge thought of Jiang Miao who he saw today, and he sighed again.

Unexpectedly, Peach Sauce turned out to be a boy... She originally thought she was a cute elementary school girl, but in reality she was a tall and handsome sunny boy.

Who can imagine this? !

But it's still about love, right?

After all, he is his senior sister, but he can't eat young grass.

Besides, I usually have to take various orders for original paintings and illustrations in addition to things in school, so I don't have time to fall in love.

Long live single!

If you want to experience the joy of love, why not read the love novel written by Peach Sauce?

Su Huai Porridge thought so, and couldn't help but praise her wit.

"What are you doing?" Qi Lianyue on the opposite bed sighed and said, "If you can't help it, go to the toilet to solve it, and don't make the bed dirty."

Su Huai Porridge: "???"

"What are you thinking? I just turned over!"

Because the sophomore year had not yet come, they were alone in the dormitory tonight. It was quiet in the middle of the night, and the creaking sound of the bed after Su Huai porridge turned over was too obvious.

"Turn over more than a dozen times in one minute?" Qi Lianyue ruthlessly exposed her "sophistry", "Hurry up and deal with it, I still have to sleep."

Su Huai Porridge: "..."