Sister, Shut Up!

Xun Liang: "..."

Well, one blow kills.

While they were chatting and waiting, another half hour or so passed.

The door of the ward was hastily pushed open by the nurse, and a mobile hospital bed was pushed into the room. Ding Ning's hair on the temples, which was exhausted and weak, was wet with sweat, and she was resting with her eyes half closed.

Chen Haotang followed into the ward, next to the baby who had been cleaned by the nurse, wrapped in a cotton blanket, only a small head was exposed, lying in the stroller, eyes still open , the two small hands sometimes loosen and sometimes clenched, as if they are testing this new world.

The moment they saw the baby, several people in the room felt their hearts melt.

Chen Haotang reached out to pick up the child, looked down at his newborn flesh and blood, and walked up to Liu Xiaoyun: "Mom, you are now a grandma."

"Yeah, yum." Liu Xiaoyun was so excited that she couldn't speak, took the baby from Chen Haotang's hand, and looked at it lovingly and dotingly. Even though the newborn baby was ugly, how did she see it? I can't get enough of it either.

At this time, Chen Haotang had already walked to Ding Ning's bed, moved a stool and sat down, held Ding Ning's little hand, and with the other hand, helped her push the wet hair behind her ear: "Thanks for your hard work!" .”

"Hmm~" Ding Ning closed her eyes, tilted her head, and rubbed Chen Haotang's warm hand.

On the other side, Jiang Miao asked curiously: "Brother Tang, is the baby a boy or a girl?"

Chen Haotang didn't look back, he looked at Ding Ning tenderly, and said:

"Her name is Chen Qingning."

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[Fighting Street Diary]: Wuhu~Congratulations to Chen Haotang and Ding Ning for becoming parents~

340. "Li Ming"

Little Princess Chen Qingning was born in the early hours of June 21st.

Because it was a normal delivery, Ding Ning recuperated in the hospital for a few days. After confirming that there was nothing serious, Chen Haotang took her back home and slowly recuperated her body.

Chen Qingning's cutie also returned to her home, blinking her big eyes and looking at the world curiously.

The boys like Jiang Miao, Wang Jin, and others only cared a little bit about the baby. After seeing it on the day of birth, they met again at Chen Haotang's house, and they only watched it twice in total.

But a few girls, including Zhou Qin who is usually quite busy at work, came to Ding Ning's side almost every day to see their future daughter-in-law, so that they knew each other well.

At the end of the month, they got their wish and received the undergraduate diploma issued by the Finance Institute, which symbolized that their four-year university journey had finally come to a successful conclusion.

Jiang Miao has also officially transformed from a college student to a full-time master writer.

After polishing nine editions at the beginning of the new book, the starting point was preliminarily determined. Now Jiang Miao is deliberating whether there is a better way of expression based on the beginning of the seventh edition.

Although it has been determined that the starting point is the incident of the heroine who is the class monitor at the same table renting a house, the starting point of the plot is still different.

Also, the heroine came to ask for rent, from the perspective of the hero, and from the perspective of the heroine, there are two completely different tastes.

From the perspective of the male protagonist, Jiang Miao can tell straightforwardly while the male protagonist is waiting for the tenant to come to the door, and at the same time, introduce the background introduction of the male protagonist after time travel, the current predicament, cheating fingers and personality.

This is convenient for readers to have a more specific understanding of the hero's character setting before the event of "the heroine comes to ask for rent".

Starting from the perspective of the heroine is equivalent to narrating the story from the perspective of the supporting role. You can use the heroine’s rent-seeking purpose as the starting point to clearly explain the reason why the heroine came to rent a house, and then describe the heroine’s character, family background and other special features.

And the information about the heroine, at the beginning of which the hero’s perspective is the entry point, will be used as follow-up supplementary information, and will be unfolded after the "rent-seeking incident" is over.

In the same way, from the perspective of the heroine, the information of the hero will also unfold after the end of the first episode.

This is the more conventional [information gap], that is, the information barrier that exists between the author and the reader.

At this time, the author has to think about one thing.

In the opening plot, whether it is more attractive to readers to explain clearly why the heroine rents a house and conceal the heroine’s personal information, or vice versa.

In other words, it takes a lot of ink to explain the information of both clearly and it is easier for readers to understand the plot.

Or do not disclose the information of the two at the first time, detonate the "rent-begging incident" at the beginning, and then crush the above information into the progress of the incident and draw it out bit by bit.

These are things the author needs to think about.

Of course, most authors actually have subconscious habits. If they don’t take the initiative to think about it, they will often directly choose the most familiar and convenient way of writing.

This often forms an author's unique narrative style.

For novices, the most well-regulated mode is to cut in from the perspective of the male protagonist, and everything will unfold the plot centered on the male protagonist.

Because most people can't master the other types well.

Adding the web text is an entertainment method to substitute the protagonist and get the pleasure of reading, so it is actually very important to have the protagonist appear at the beginning of the chapter.

Only those master platinum authors, out of the need to pave the way for the plot or highlight the character portrait of the protagonist, will hide the protagonist at the beginning and use other perspectives to expand.

Jiang Miao doesn't have the burden of a great master, writing books is fun, of course, how to write it is as good as it looks.

He also didn't have that strange pursuit of so-called literati, and he had to be unique and different from ordinary people to be called outstanding.

The more straightforward and simple it is to speak to the broad masses, the easier it is to resonate and gain popular support.

Since the end of June, Jiang Miao has entered the state of depositing manuscripts.

After solving the opening problem, Jiang Miao's thinking is very clear because he has written a waste manuscript of 10,000+ words before, and he is familiar with the plot line in the early stage, and he can write more than 8000 words every day.

Especially under the strong urging of Su Huai Porridge, even before the book was published, Jiang Miao had already returned to the original code word state in advance.

If it weren't for the beginning of August, the wedding matters would have to be confirmed and prepared step by step. Jiang Miao estimated that giving him half a month, he would have saved 50 million words before publishing the book.

But now, with nearly 30 words of manuscripts, it can be regarded as sufficient ammunition.

"Oh~ let's go!"

At nine o'clock in the morning on August 8, at the door of Room 3, a group of people gathered around a stroller and headed for the elevator.

Chen Qingning has already passed the full moon. After recuperating for more than a month, Ding Ning does some exercises to adjust her body shape every day, and her body is slowly recovering towards her pre-pregnancy.

But Chen Haotang didn't mind, Ding Ning was very petite and thin.

Now after having a baby, her body looks a little more sensual, and one thing to say is that it feels good in the hand.

"You, don't surround Qingning, keep the air flowing." Ding Ning waved to their uncles and aunts, protecting her daughter like driving away monsters.

"Ding Ning, you're so stingy. Before giving birth, you said we were all her godmothers." Song Huanhuan reached out and pinched Xiao Qingning's pink cheeks, "And now I'm eating vinegar all day long."

The elevator arrived soon, and the eight of them went downstairs together with Xiao Qingning.

Nine people and three cars headed towards Qianyuan Jiayuan in Linping District.

After recuperating for more than a month, Chen Haotang and Ding Ning planned to go to see the house.

Zhou Qin has already understood the situation there. Xun Liang's father invested here a few years ago. Although he doesn't have any direct influence, it's no problem to say hello and give him an internal price.

As for Wang Xin and Song Huanhuan, they just came here in advance to check things out. Whether they can buy the house or not is another matter.

Although Wang Zi's current "End of the Song Dynasty" has a good momentum, after more than two years of serialization, the number of words has accumulated to more than 300 million words, and the result is about [-] average subscriptions.

But with Jiang Miao and Chen Haotang, the two animals are definitely not incomparable.

The former has more than 4 subscriptions for the leader of the Demon Cult, and the income is several million. If the channel explosion income is included, the total income is estimated to have reached the threshold of tens of millions.

The latter are two ultra-long ten-thousand-book LOL fanfiction. Although there is no hope in terms of copyright for the time being, pure subscriptions should not be underestimated.

In particular, Chen Haotang's current book "What is Sacrifice Shooter" was published later than Wang Xin, but it already has more words than Wang Xin.

With an average score of more than 2 yuan, plus the manuscript fee of the previous book, the money saved is at least 300 yuan or [-] million yuan.

In particular, Chen Haotang's channel performance is not bad. This figure may be conservative. If Zhou Qin can get the internal price, the full price is still enough to buy a house.

It happened to be ten o'clock in the morning when the group arrived at Qianyuan Jiayuan.

Qi Dian's manuscript fee was about to be released, Jiang Miao casually opened the writer's background and took a look, the total manuscript fee was 61.

Compared with the previous income when the channel exploded, this manuscript fee has dropped a lot.

However, with the support of the main website and channels, the half-year subscription of [-] hit books can still bring him a huge profit.

The little money I saved in recent months is more than enough to buy a studio store for my senior sister.

"Let's take you to see the house first." Zhou Qin had already learned about the situation here, and after contacting the staff of the sales department here, he took them to the building of Jiang Miao and Su Huai Porridge.

"Our new home is here." Su Huai porridge pointed to the direction of Unit [-], Building No. [-], Qianyuan Jiayuan. After entering the door, turn right, and it is very convenient to enter and exit.

"Are you on the 12th floor?" Zhou Qin led them into Building 1, pressed the elevator and said, "Then let's go to the 12th floor first."

"Yeah, no one has bought the room next door to us yet, see if it suits you." Su Huai Porridge happily recommended, "We can continue to be neighbors then."

"The area here is 140 square meters?" Chen Haotang asked doubtfully after taking an introduction booklet from the staff who followed.

"No." The staff immediately explained, "There are four households on the tenth floor and below, and each household has an area of ​​140 to [-] square meters. Two households on one floor, about [-] square meters."

"I see." Chen Haotang nodded, and asked again, "Is the small apartment on the tenth floor sold?"

"Not yet, three of the four rooms are vacant, and only one has been sold."

"Are you interested in small apartments?" Zhou Qin asked.

"Well, I want to buy one for my mother." Chen Haotang said, "If possible, I'll buy another set for the eleventh floor. It happens to be two sets for the upper and lower floors, and it's very convenient."

"Eh?" Ding Ning was a little puzzled, and hesitated, "It's okay to let mom live with us, more than 140 square meters is very big."

"You think it's okay now, but you won't be sure in the future." Chen Haotang raised his hand and touched her head, "This is better, although it is said that we live separately, but in fact it is just a matter of going up and down the stairs."

The group first went to the twelfth floor and looked at the vacant room next door to Jiang Miao's new home. The interior layout was the same as Jiang Miao's new home, but the direction was changed.

Then they went to visit the new house next door that had been renovated.

After entering the door, turn right and come to the corridor. The dining room and kitchen are on the right, the living room and balcony are on the left, and further inside are the bathroom, study, guest bedroom, master bedroom and cloakroom

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After visiting, Ding Ning was full of envy, and couldn't wait for their new home to look like after it was completed.

"Brother Tang, if you want to buy the 11th floor, then I will buy the room next door to Brother Jiang?" Xun Liang followed behind for a tour, and said with a smile, "If the prince also comes to buy a house in the future, I will buy your 11th floor. Next door, perfect!"

"Is this close to the subway?" Wang Xin asked suddenly.

"It's very close. Go out from the south gate and turn right one block to the Long'an subway entrance. This year, it just connected to Hangzhou Line [-]. It only takes an hour to get to the West Lake in Hangzhou." The staff next to him said quickly.

"Is the subway nearby?" Wang Xin reconfirmed.

"Yes, it will take a few minutes to walk." Jiang Miao nodded and said, "And it's the first stop on Line [-], so it's quite convenient to grab a seat."

"En." Wang Xin nodded, then looked at Song Huanhuan who was teasing Xiao Qingning, walked up to her and asked, "What do you think?"

"Do you want to buy it?" Song Huanhuan asked curiously, "Should I ask my parents first?"