Sister, Shut Up!

This aspect is divided into settlements once a quarter, and the next time will have to wait until June.

But as the content of the manga gradually advanced, with the help of his juniors, he perfected the outline of the plot copy step by step, and with his increasingly proficient storyboards and line drafts, Su Huai Porridge has become somewhat handy with the manga.

She has been rooted in the painting industry for several years, and tried the form of comics on the beep station. Now, under the guidance of the boss Ban Ye and the help of Jiang Miao to help deduce the plot, Su Huai Porridge's comic is already on the right track.

In the future, the copyright share will only increase.

Even Mr. Ban has the idea to increase his comment on "Students, shut up!" ", hoping to make this work a signature of the studio, so as to attract more talents and support the comics department.

In contrast, Jiang Miao's side is a bit bleak.

The follow-up data dropped from 2000 to 1500. After he finished the second chapter of the second volume, the follow-up subscription of the new chapter dropped to 1300. It seems that the follow-up will continue to fall.

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The disadvantages of the late stage of daily articles have begun to become prominent.

Jiang Miao has gone through this process in the last book, and now she is not in a panic. She just deals with the situation silently and takes time to consider the direction of the new book.

"So you have a new book in mind?"

Su Huai porridge sat on the edge of the bed, propped his hands back on the bed, shook his legs and asked curiously, "I have seen so many inspirations from you before, which one should I write?"

"Well... I plan to change to a fantasy background, but I still focus on daily life." Jiang Miao said while preparing the outline, "The upgrade line of the urban background is too weak, and I always don't want to mess up the protagonist's career line. The hostility is too heavy to make it impossible to write any villains."

"The new book still wants to try as much as possible, combining the upgrade line with the emotional line, and can no longer rely solely on the emotional line to support the plot."

"Otherwise, every time the male and female protagonists are together, the grades will start to decline steadily, and the readers' appetites will always be hung up and they will be scolded. The writing will not be long at all."

"So what do you want to write?" Su Huai porridge asked curiously, "For the fantasy background, the invincible inn stream you mentioned earlier?"

"No." Jiang Miao shook her head, "I want to imitate the core of the book "Senior Sister Step on Me!" and use identity dolls to make it cool."

"For example?" Su Huai porridge tilted his head, a bit confused.

"For example, the female sword fairy is actually a giant in the devil's way, my son is a witch, and my younger sister is an undercover agent of the devil's sect." Jiang Miao spread his hands, "This kind of identity difference should be quite common, and now I am mainly thinking about the specifics of the male and female protagonists. Identity, and then construct the corresponding plot."

"After the framework of the hero and heroine is set up, we can start to expand the basic world view, deduce the follow-up plot line, etc."

"I did write fantasy genres when I was on the street before, but what I am good at is not at all the genre that purely upgrades and fights monsters. The core must still be based on daily routines."

Having said that, Jiang Miao leaned back on the chair back, holding the back of her head with both hands, sighed faintly, and asked the senior sister:

"Senior sister, do you think I will be killed by readers if I write a harem novel in the next book?"

253. Will readers beat me to death?

257. Su Huai Porridge Caught Rape

Hearing that Peach Jam said that he was going to write a harem novel, readers would not know why, but Su Huai Porridge looked at him with dangerous eyes, squinting like a cheetah staring at its prey.

"Oh? Write about the harem?" Su Huai porridge sat on the edge of the bed and moved a little closer to Jiang Miao's chair. His white and tender right hand stroked along the bed, all the way to the back of the chair, and finally landed on Jiang Miao's chair. Miao's neck, "It seems that you like the harem very much?"

Feeling the cool, cool and smooth touch of the little hand on the back of the neck, Jiang Miao's spine trembled, and suddenly he smelled a dangerous signal.

"How, how is it possible..." Jiang Miao said with a sneer, "I just said that, writing a novel is definitely different from reality."

"Hmph, I think some people have other little ideas about to germinate." Su Huai porridge grabbed the guy's nape and said angrily, "Does it mean that boys like harem?"

"Senior sister, you can't do it if you go up to gender attack. There are also a lot of articles about women and one-to-many." Jiang Miao tried to defend the male compatriots, "Harem articles and stallion articles are two different things."

"For example?" Su Huai porridge loosened his hands a little, tilted his head and asked, "What are the differences?"

"The stallion story is that no matter whether there is any emotional line or whether the emotional logic with the female character is reasonable, anyway, as long as there is a beautiful female character, it will be included in the protagonist's pocket." Jiang Miao explained, "This is called a kind of female character. Marvin."

"What about harem novels?" Su Huai Porridge seldom reads novels with multiple heroines, and prefers novels with a single heroine, so he really doesn't understand the understanding and differences here.

"The harem text is not actually accepting women for the sake of accepting women, but the protagonist is indeed powerful and attractive. Under the circumstances of a reasonable plot, there are some outstanding women in the plot who fall in love with the male protagonist reasonably under a series of foreshadowings."

Jiang Miao continued to explain, "Most of the time, if it is a single heroine, most of the women's wishes cannot be answered, and only one of them can achieve a positive result with the male protagonist."

"This makes many readers feel uncomfortable. After all, outstanding women are portrayed in the author's pen, but the author himself cannot control which one the readers prefer."

"When the male protagonist confirms his lifelong partner, readers who prefer other female characters will naturally disagree. This kind of disappointment is like losing love."

"Harem Wen is like making up for this disappointment, so that these outstanding female characters can have a happy ending, instead of being depressed for a lifetime because of a lack of heart."

"The biggest difference here is that Stallion only cares about whether the female character is pretty or not, whether the identity and background can make people have enough desire to conquer, and whether the relationship between the male and female protagonists is reasonable or not is not important, anyway. What kind of beauties can be easily captured by a hero to save the beauties."

"However, each female character in the harem must set up their own plot lines to ensure that the relationship between them and the male protagonist has a basis for emotional development, a process of emotional development, special events that warm up to sublimation, and cultivation. A positive opportunity."

"To put it bluntly, it still satisfies your fantasy of holding three wives and four concubines on the left and right." Su Huai porridge snorted coldly, but unknowingly let go of the hand holding his neck, and said dissatisfiedly, "You want to write about the harem?" That's fine, but I'm sure I won't watch it."

"I didn't say I really wanted to write it." Jiang Miao said with a smile, "I just asked Senior Sister for your opinion."

"Of course I think it's a single heroine, what's the point?" Su Huai porridge opened his eyes wide and said, "Why do you want to write harem essays?"

"The upper limit of harem literature is high..." Jiang Miao looked helpless, "Anyway, so far, as long as it is a novel that focuses on emotional lines, at the same level and quality, there are very few single heroines whose grades are higher than harem literature. "

"Is there such a thing?" Su Huai Porridge didn't understand the market rules here, but it was the first time he heard about it, and finally curled his lips, "It's not because of you LSPs."

"You can't say that, it can only be said that it is human nature." Jiang Miao was ashamed, and explained a little, "A heroine can't write a long novel. In the past, 20 words can be considered a long novel. A heroine runs through There is absolutely nothing wrong with the full text."

"Currently, there are only 300-50 million words on the Internet, and a heroine's emotional line can support up to [-] words. Once the relationship between the male and female protagonists is confirmed, the plot of this emotional line will almost come to an end."

"And the advantage of the harem text is that it can move back and forth between multiple female characters. It is not like completely conquering a certain female character. After a little emotional progress, you can change the map and environment, and have another female character. story."

"Such a sense of anticipation is sufficient. Three or four emotional lines are advanced in parallel. Even if one emotional line is pushed to the end in the middle, it will not prevent the other female characters from whetting the reader's appetite."

"It can not only support a long novel of several million words, but also maintain readers' sense of expectation throughout the full text. This is the reason why harem novels are more attractive than single heroines."

Su Huai porridge propped his chin with both hands, quietly listened to Jiang Miao's explanation, and gradually understood the reason behind it, nodded slightly, thoughtfully.

Web writing is the art of pleasing the public.

Some newcomers who come to write online articles always feel that pleasing readers is a very low-level thing, even a kind of blasphemy against literature, and a compromise of commercialization and marketization.

But the market for web texts is made up of readers, and everyone who has received education and can understand text is a potential audience for web texts.

If you please your readers, you are pleasing people.

Some people say that they write books just for themselves, and that is just to please themselves, not necessarily superior to pleasing others.

Jiang Miao admires those predecessors who still insist on traditional literature, but the current era is a period when the whole people open up the wisdom of the people.

In the past, there were few people who read books, and the illiteracy rate was over 90.00%. After all, there were only a small number of people who could really read novels.

With the popularization of education, the number of people who can read novels has increased at an incredible rate, and the demand for novels in the new era has also skyrocketed.

Most people don't pursue literature so much, and don't pay attention to any profound connotations. They just want to read an interesting and novel story to relax their body and mind.

The web is such a product.

So Jiang Miao never thought it was shameful to write web articles to please readers.

And pleasing readers and pleasing yourself has never been a contradictory relationship.

Seriously thinking about the needs of readers, finding suitable themes, and constructing a story frame that can arouse readers' interest are the professional qualities of a qualified web writer.

The kind of self-satisfied people who get good grades, attribute all the credit to themselves, and blame the readers and the market for poor grades. People who are lonely and self-admired there just don’t understand the rules of the profession of web writers.

Jiang Miao started writing books in high school, and it has been almost five years now, slowly figuring out these principles, so he doesn't mind getting close to the reading tendencies of current readers and writing stories that more people love to read.

"However, the main task now is to finish the current book well." Jiang Miao closed the outline of the new book, stretched, and opened the coding software to start today's update.

Su Huai porridge also got up and sat down at the desk, starting tonight's work.

"Sister."

"Ok?"

"If I write about the male and female protagonists later...cough cough...that..." Jiang Miao suddenly thought of his mother's advice, and also thought of his own follow-up plot, so he couldn't help asking, "Is it possible to use materials?"

"...You have a good idea!" Su Huai porridge stomped on him, blushing and turned his head, "You said it as if you had some material when you wrote it in the last book. I saw the details written outside your group. Very plump."

"My knowledge is all theoretical knowledge. According to the thoughts of our great predecessors, the combination of practice and theory is the correct way." Jiang Miao said solemnly.

"Then you're also writing it in the side story, not in the main text, what the hell are you doing?" Su Huai porridge let out a babble, piercing his fantasy, then his face sank again, and he stretched out his hand to grab his ear and questioned , "Then if you write harem essays in the future, do you still plan to find other people to draw materials for? Huh?"

Jiang Miao: "???"

"How is that possible!" Jiang Miao yelled, "If you want to collect materials, you must find senior sisters to obtain materials."

"I'm just one person, how can I get enough material for an author." Su Huai Porridge snorted mockingly.

"One person is enough." Jiang Miao smiled and touched the back of her hand, slowly tore off her little hand, squeezed the palm and stroked it carefully, "Senior sister, it's fine if you play multiple roles alone."

Su Huai Porridge: "???"

"Think about it." Jiang Miao suddenly became excited when he mentioned this, "A normal harem, if it is in anime, the most common configuration is black long straight stockings and a cold tablemate, and the blond hair and ponytails next door are arrogant green plums, The intellectual curly-haired glasses student from the same club, and the warm-hearted short-haired sports student."

"At that time, if we really need to get materials, senior sister can try them all, I think it's completely fine!"

Hearing what he said, Su Huai porridge suddenly became ashamed and annoyed, and went to grab him again with a blushing face, but Jiang Miao nimbly avoided him.

"Isn't that okay?!" Jiang Miao fled to the bed and shouted, "Even if I write a harem article, I always have only my senior sister in my heart! Every female character has a shadow of a senior sister. Is this still true? not good?"

"Shut up!" Su Huai porridge blushed, thinking of changing into a JK uniform and black stockings to act as a cold tablemate, and wearing a golden wig and ponytails to act as a proud girl, I have to pretend to be a senior or something, my head is buzzing like a hot kettle.

This is just a simple urban background.

Judging from what Jiang Miao said before, it seems that there is still the intention to develop towards a fantasy background.

At that time, wouldn't she have to change into an ancient costume and dress up as a holy goddess, a sassy female sword fairy, a cunning and charming witch, and a carefree Taoist nun to draw materials for her juniors? !

Think beautiful!

The more Su Huai porridge thought about it, the more angry he became, he threw Jiang Miao onto the bed with a slap, and punished him with teeth and claws.

But a few minutes later, Su Huai porridge, who was pressed on the bed and kissed, flushed cheeks and panted slightly, felt the hands of the junior in the clothes wandering, turned his head shyly, and the image of himself appeared in his mind. In the scene of playing various female roles, I bit my lips lightly, and suddenly felt that it was not bad.

It was so delayed for so long that Jiang Miao started writing at six o'clock in the evening and continued to write until after ten o'clock in the evening before finishing today's 4000 words.

After all, I have already been squeezed dry by the senior sister, so let's talk about adding more later when I have the energy.

After finishing typing in the evening, Jiang Miao tidied up and went back to grandma's house.

It's not that he doesn't want to sleep with senior sister, but young people still have to learn to restrain themselves.

Because Su Huai Porridge went to the studio last semester, there were very few opportunities for the two to be intimate.

Now that they are taking online classes at home, Jiang Miao and Su Huai Porridge visit each other every day, and if they accidentally shoot their guns and go off, they still have to exercise a little restraint.

If she sleeps with senior sister, she will definitely not be able to bear it at night. For the sake of long-term sexual happiness in the future, Jiang Miao thinks it is better to go back.

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