Sister, Shut Up!
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But after the confession, the two confirmed their relationship, and the relationship was maintained in a state of slow growth.
After the National Day, it finally stabilized at around 6000 average bookings.
But in the last two days, average bookings have stagnated and no longer increased.
At this time, Jiang Miao knew that Ri Wanhe's bonus for confessing the plot had been exhausted.
If he wants to increase the average order in the future, he can only rely on the editor to arrange some big recommended places for him.
Looking at the 6000 average subscriptions in the writer's background, Jiang Miao was relieved, but also a little disappointed.
The gratification is that the book with an initial order of 3900 was pulled to an average order of 6000 after being put on the shelves without relying on a single recommendation.
This shows that readers still like what he wrote, at least it has improved a lot from the previous one.
But unfortunately, this new book still fails to have the potential to break through [-] orders.
The stage with the greatest plot tension and the strongest sense of anticipation has come to an end, and even if the follow-up rate increases, it will not be too exaggerated.
Jiang Miao estimated that if this book continues to be written, it will be around 8000 orders at the end of the book, and it is almost estimated to be 7000 orders.
For a college student who is just a sophomore, this is already a very good result.
He didn't even think about being able to stand shoulder to shoulder with those great gods in the early days of Internet literature. Being able to do this in this era is already enough for a young man to boast.
But now, Jiang Miao's mind is not on this.
Today, October 10th, Friday.
It was the day when he and his senior sister went to class together.
It was also Jiang Miao's birthday.
But Jiang Miao didn't care about her birthday, she didn't want to invite a bunch of people to eat and drink with great fanfare, just spend it peacefully.
Last year's birthday was a surprise that Su Huai Porridge had kept from Jiang Miao at the beginning.
This year, because Su Huai Porridge just went to the studio, he was very busy. Today, he took time to come back to class, and he didn't have much energy to prepare surprises for his juniors.
"so tired."
Jiang Miao walked out of the teaching building, hugged the senior sister who rushed forward, and listened to her complaining in her arms.
"I went to work in the studio for the first time yesterday, are you still used to it?" Jiang Miao hugged her, lowered her head and kissed her smooth forehead, and asked.
"It's okay... Master Ban said that he was not in a hurry at first, and let me and the two assistants get to know each other and get to know each other's habits first. Let's start slowly." Su Huai porridge limply in the arms of the student, enjoying this very much A sense of security as if surrounded by the whole world.
"The assistant is male or female?" Jiang Miao asked warily.
"What are you thinking?" Su Huai porridge rolled his eyes at him, but the corners of his mouth couldn't help but curl up, thinking that the junior who eats vinegar like this is very cute, "A man and a woman, the man is in his 30s and married Well, he has a one-year-old baby."
"I've only been working for one day, so you know that?" Jiang Miao raised her eyebrows.
"There is a photo frame of my son on his desk." Su Huai porridge covered his mouth and laughed, "It's pretty cute. If we two have a baby in the future, I want to raise a son too."
"Son?" Jiang Miao shook his head again and again, "How nice to raise a daughter, cute."
"Is it not enough for you to have me?" Su Huai porridge raised his eyebrows.
"..." Jiang Miao was speechless, and immediately laughed again, holding the senior sister's little hand and walking into the building, "Then just don't give birth, anyway, my senior sister is enough."
"Be careful when uncle and aunt hear you and hit you." Su Huai porridge followed him with a smirk and walked to the classroom.
The two took seats in the corner of the classroom with ease, and spent two classes happily.
After the afternoon session of "Psychology and Life", Jiang Miao and Su Huai Porridge walked to the dormitory building holding hands.
On the way, Su Huai Porridge turned a corner, first took Jiang Miao to the rookie station, and picked up a few couriers.
"What did you buy?" Jiang Miao watched her take out the big and small bags, and reached out to take some of them to help her hold them.
"Some daily skin care products and the like." Su Huai porridge said, and continued walking to the dormitory with Jiang Miao.
As a result, they walked downstairs to the dormitory, and the two of them were about to part after each other. When they went back to bed, Su Huai porridge suddenly stopped Jiang Miao.
"Student, wait a minute."
"Huh?" Jiang Miao turned her head in doubt, and then watched Su Huai porridge take out a box from several express boxes, and threw it into his arms.
Jiang Miao quickly caught the courier box, hugged it in her arms, lowered her head and glanced twice, then raised her eyes to the senior sister, and asked doubtfully, "What is this?"
"Birthday present for you." Su Huai Porridge said with a mysterious smile, "After you go back and take it apart, you must use it. I will check it next time."
"Still checking?" Jiang Miao laughed twice.
"Of course!" Su Huai porridge said seriously with a small face, "If the inspection finds that you are useless, hum, you can guess the consequences yourself."
After finishing speaking, Su Huai Porridge waved to his junior, and went upstairs with his courier in his arms.
Jiang Miao also took the courier box in her arms, went upstairs full of curiosity, and returned to the dormitory, just about to open it to see what was inside, when Chen Haotang, who was playing games on the recliner, suddenly looked at him :
"Jiang Miao, I wrote a beginning, can you read it for me?"
"That's it?" Jiang Miao was taken aback, put the express box on the table, sat down and opened the notebook, "Send it to me for a look."
Soon, Jiang Miao received the document from Chen Haotang. He opened it and asked, "What books have you read these days?"
"Some fantasy, game, and urban books are at the top of the rankings." Chen Haotang said, and added, "I've read your new book too."
Jiang Miao: "..."
There is really no need to say the last sentence... The corner of Jiang Miao's mouth twitched, and he began to read the beginning of Chen Haotang's novel.
At the beginning, there were less than [-] words in total, as Jiang Miao expected, it was a game article, or a fan of LOL e-sports.
After all, Chen Haotang usually boosts this game, and this topic is also chosen for web articles, which is considered appropriate.
But after Jiang Miao browsed it briefly, he could clearly find that the beginning of this article was full of loopholes, and he couldn't bear to look directly at it...
First of all, let’s not say anything at the beginning. First, there is a detailed description of a game match. The first 5000 words are all about the protagonist playing a game, which is very intense.
The details are quite detailed, and even the protagonist has made up a few soldiers, and the skills and reasons for various positions when laning are clearly explained.
But the opponent on the opposite side didn't know who it was, they were just passers-by who had nothing to do with the main line. After such a game, Jiang Miao couldn't help but sighed while watching.
Finally, I saw more than 5000 words, the protagonist officially appeared on the stage, and there was no introduction, just a brief description of the cutscene, a bunch of trivial things, and then started the next game...
The remaining [-] words are all the details of the second game...
If this is the text commentary of the game, then I have to say that Jiang Miao thinks it is awesome. The descriptions of various details are very detailed, and even the reason why the protagonist operates in such a way is clearly written.
But this is fiction.
Chen Haotang obviously didn't even have a concept of the most important elements of the novel - characters and plot.
"Is it not working?" Chen Haotang could tell from Jiang Miao's face, "If there is a problem, tell me, and I will change it."
"I don't know how to say it." Jiang Miao scratched her head, feeling like teaching elementary school students to learn calculus.
"Well, let me ask you a few questions, let's talk slowly." Jiang Miao thought for a while, but decided to follow the advice, "What are the common characteristics at the beginning of the few game articles you read?"
Chen Haotang frowned and thought carefully: "The protagonists are all men?"
"..." Jiang Miao covered her face and continued to guide, "Think again, what are the characteristics of their protagonists? What are the same plots at the beginning?"
"The protagonists are all very powerful, or have very powerful systems." Chen Haotang concluded.
"Yes, that's it." Jiang Miao continued to ask, "What about your protagonist?"
"My protagonist is also very powerful." Chen Haotang nodded confidently, "And I wrote it very clearly. The reason why the protagonist is so powerful is all in those details."
Jiang Miao: "..."
"Indeed, but if you write about the matchups in the game as soon as you come up, readers don't know your protagonist at all, so they won't be able to get into your story at all." Jiang Miao said, "So the protagonist must be introduced at the beginning of the chapter. , and then introduce what is special about him, that is, what makes him better than others."
"There are generally two types of gold fingers for game texts." Speaking of this, Jiang Miao raised a finger, "The first type is that the protagonist is super strong, either reborn from time to time, or a former champion himself, because Retired for special reasons or something."
"The second is that the protagonist has awakened a golden finger similar to the system, and can forcibly increase the protagonist's strength by adding points, skills, buffs, etc."
"Only by letting your protagonist highlight an advantage over others, readers will feel happy when they become the protagonist."
"And this advantage must be well-founded, not just saying that the protagonist is very powerful out of thin air, because this will make readers feel unreal."
"The system is real?" Chen Haotang asked back.
He wasn't being arguing, but he really didn't understand.
"It's because the system itself is not real, so readers feel that it is real in the novel." Jiang Miao smiled slightly, "Of course, there are quite a few readers who are more resistant to the system, but for newcomers, if the control ability is not good, the system flow is not A more appropriate choice."
"Then I'll write the system?" Chen Haotang didn't care if anyone would hate him, he only cared about whether he could write results and make money.
"You can try it, but even if it's a system stream, the plot is still the most important." Jiang Miao said, "There are generally two ways for game texts, either live stream or e-sports stream, and there are also two-in-one streams, but generally they are one The main line is a foil, and it is enough if you can write one well.”
"Then e-sports." Chen Haotang did not hesitate.
Ask him to write the content of the live stream, and he will definitely not be able to write it. If he can play tricks and do a lot of work, Chen Haotang thinks he doesn't have that ability.
"Then the beginning is very simple." Jiang Miao reminded, "First, let the protagonist appear on the stage, give a reason why he must play e-sports, and then show his golden finger when the protagonist needs strength, which is the system. .”
Chen Haotang's foundation is too poor, and Jiang Miao can't talk to him about some too general things, so he can only give restrictions and ask him to write out the qualified beginning within the established framework.
When he can sign a contract, it will not be too late to talk about more in-depth things.
You don’t write about many skills and cores of writing, you just listen to what others say, and you think you understand, but in fact, only after you really write, you will find a lot of problems, all waiting for you to solve.
"Okay, then I'll change it again." Chen Haotang nodded.
"Come on." Jiang Miao couldn't say anything else, but could only encourage him.
At this time, Xun Liang had just woken up from the bed, rubbed his eyes and climbed down from the upper bunk, yawned and went into the bathroom to go to the bathroom. After coming out, he let out a "huh" and asked Jiang Miao, "
"Brother Jiang, what did you buy?"
Only then did Jiang Miao realize that the courier box that the senior sister had given him hadn't been opened yet.
"It's nothing, it's my birthday present from senior sister."
"Birthday gift?" Xun Liang frowned, becoming interested, "Take it apart and have a look, what did you get?"
"It's probably facial cleanser or something." Jiang Miao muttered, and took out the scissors to open the express delivery.
"Maybe it's some kind of security measure?" Xun Liang beamed, poked Jiang Miao's waist, and winked at him.
"What are you thinking about?" Jiang Miao gave him a blank look, but there was still a little bit of anticipation in his heart.
The box was opened, Jiang Miao opened it, and there were a few large characters written on the box inside -【Men's Underpants】
Jiang Miao: "???"
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