Sister, Shut Up!

"Cough..." Jiang Miao clicked on the codeword software, and pointed to "Chapter 1" to "Chapter 5" displayed in the directory, at least they have been built.

"Oh." Su Huai porridge sneered, and the hands pressing on his shoulders were a lot harder, "So the content hasn't been written at all, right?"

"That's not true..." Jiang Miao coughed twice again in embarrassment, clicked on Chapter 1, and a sentence came oncoming.

[August 8, hot Hangzhou. 】

"Hiss... Senior sister, please be gentle!" Jiang Miao's shoulder was pressed and hurt for a while, begging for mercy repeatedly.

Su Huai porridge snorted, let go of his shoulders and urged, "Hurry up and write! You've been fishing for two months!"

"Got it..." Jiang Miao sighed, opened the outline software and put it aside, and finally planned to start preparing for the beginning.

Su Huai porridge left satisfied, and entered the live broadcast room of Peach Jam on his mobile phone, and clicked [Share] with a proud face, and forwarded it directly to Jiang Miao's full subscription group.

[Qiuqiu's dog licking]: Everyone, come and see!Peach Jam live code word! (Link)

[Fuck?numbers?Does this dog know code words? 】

【Have you written a new book yet?Or is it more on the sidelines? 】

[There is no rush for a new book, when will the episodes in the group be updated? (dog head)]

A group of people flooded into Jiang Miao's live broadcast room.

But because Jiang Miao's mobile phone was used as a camera, and Su Huai Porridge didn't set up bullet screens for him on the computer screen, so Jiang Miao didn't know anything about it at this time.

The beginning of the new book is actually easy to write, but not easy to write.

The good thing about writing is that because the beginning is the starting point of the whole book, there is no previous setting and plot, and the author can create as he pleases.

As long as it is within the framework of the outline, it can be done arbitrarily.

So as long as Jiang Miao thinks about it, it is very simple to write a beginning.

For example, now, after Jiang Miao read the outline, he began to code words. In just half an hour, he had already written more than 2000 words without stopping.

The detailed outline of the first volume is relatively detailed. If it is just to advance the plot, it will not be difficult for Jiang Miao at all.

But the problem is that one's perspective is narrow.

And the beginning is the most important thing that determines the lower limit of a book.

Now readers are getting more and more impetuous, and many people will click the fork before even finishing Chapter 1.

If there are not enough attractive elements in Chapter 1, and the author is not a well-known master, it will be difficult for people to have the patience to continue reading.

Although the fragrance of wine is not afraid of deep alleys, it is always good to be able to get ahead early.

Not to mention that the recommended positions in the new book issue are all linked to the early reading, and it is impossible for the author to only consider long-term planning and ignore the importance of making a head start.

As an author who has already written a masterpiece, Jiang Miao naturally wants to take care of both.

But in the new book period, the two naturally have some importance.

He can only ensure the quality and attractiveness of the early stage as much as possible before talking about the long-term planning in the later stage.

Otherwise, if there are no results, no matter how long-term the planning is, it will be meaningless.

So from 6000:[-] am to [-]:[-] am, Jiang Miao wrote the beginning of about [-] words and sent it to several author groups. Please help me to see if there is anything to add or modify.

This is also a tradition among web writers.

Especially in the small groups of some authors, everyone is acquaintances, and they often post their own beginnings, and let the big guys in the group help to read.

Brainstorming is always more effective than working alone.

In the first edition at the beginning, Jiang Miao set the cut-in time of the plot after school starts.

He has always been hard at supporting roles, and what he is least good at is the admission of new supporting roles, so he subconsciously chose the entry point after school started, so that the main supporting role has already known the protagonist on the timeline.

In addition, the beginning of the new book needs enough explosive points. Jiang Miao did not write it completely according to the experience of himself and his senior sister. Death opens up the situation.

But soon, a big boss replied.

[Chapter 1 has too many characters, it is completely unnecessary, the two roommates can be left behind and take your time. For love stories, it is recommended to be more direct. It is enough to focus on the encounter between the hero and heroine at the beginning. 】

[It feels really exciting. It is set that the hero and heroine meet each other online and prepare for a face-to-face meeting, right?But after it was revealed directly at the beginning, I felt that it was difficult to write a long follow-up... It may be because I have never written a love essay. 】

【…】

Many people gave their opinions. After Jiang Miao read it carefully, he analyzed it bit by bit based on the beginning of what he wrote. He absorbed what was useful, and temporarily put aside what he thought was useless.

But now his mind is completely focused on the beginning of this edition, and it is easy to be subjective when thinking, so Jiang Miao didn't modify it at will after reading it, but put it on hold first.

Re-opening the coding software, Jiang Miao clicked on the old book, planning to write some fantasies first to change his mind.

In the evening or tomorrow, the impression of the beginning of the first edition is blurred in my mind, and then I will rewrite the beginning of the new edition according to the opinions of the big guys and my own analysis.

When preparing the new book, Jiang Miao had already made preparations.

At the beginning of a web article, his revision limit is three times.

Because he knows very well that with his current strength, it is impossible to write an opening that makes all the authors shout awesome after reading it.

So no matter how much he revises, there will always be other authors who find fault.

The point is whether Jiang Miao himself can gradually figure out his true sense of this book from the beginning of several editions.

This feeling is very mysterious and cannot be explained in words.

It can only be said to be a kind of impulsive feeling of "after reading the beginning, I want to write all the follow-up plots in one go".

Writing online articles requires passion. Once there are too many revisions at the beginning, the author himself may feel bored, and the passion will slowly wear off.

So Jiang Miao only planned to revise it three times, and then choose a version that he was most satisfied with.

Thinking of this, Jiang Miao shook her head, and began to write an episode of the old book.

It has been written before that the children of the hero and heroine in the old book are born, and the follow-up will be the daily life of the hero and heroine's son after they get married and have a baby.

What Jiang Miao was thinking about was a pair of twin daughters born to a man and a woman, and the stomach medicine plot that unfolded with the son of the hero and heroine in the process of growing up.

When I thought about it at the beginning, I thought it was super interesting, but he had never written this kind of plot, and he didn't specially prepare a detailed outline for the extra chapter, so he wrote it very slowly.

Jiang Miao didn't intend to really finish writing. After the hero and heroine gave birth, in fact, it can be finished at any time later, it just depends on Jiang Miao's mood.

After the beginning of the new book is finalized, Jiang Miao will probably end the old book directly.

As for the follow-up daily content of the second-generation stomach medicine, let it stay in your mind.

Maybe in the future when I feel better, I will write casually.

Thinking about it this way, Jiang Miao wanted to fish again.

But just 2 minutes after he left the keyboard, the door of the guest bedroom was pushed open.

Su Huai Porridge came in from the outside with a smile, holding a mobile phone in his hand, and recorded all his bad deeds of fishing.

"Senior sister..." Jiang Miao raised her hands in surrender with a helpless expression, "I have finished writing the beginning, I need to cool down, and I will revise it at night."

"Write it out?" Su Huai porridge's eyes lit up, and hurried to Jiang Miao's side, "Show me!"

"Okay." Jiang Miao took advantage of the situation to wrap her arms around the slender waist of the senior sister, and hugged her into her arms.

Since you can't fish by yourself, wouldn't it be good to hug your senior sister and fish together?

And in addition to touching fish, you can also touch other things by the way.

Jiang Miao blinked, watching the senior sister looking at the beginning with great interest, the hands supporting her slender waist had already moved quietly.

211. Parent present*

"Let me see, let me see."

Sitting in the arms of his junior, Su Huai porridge held the mouse and clicked into Chapter 1 written by Jiang Miao. When he saw the two roommates he wrote, he suddenly laughed.

"This is Xun Liang and Wang Xin, right? You're so impolite, just use it."

"Hot pot restaurant~ I chose this for the opening chapter?" Su Huai porridge saw the description at the end of Chapter 1, where the hero and heroine were in a hot pot restaurant, and found out that each other was of the opposite sex, and asked with his head tilted, "Has it really changed? "

"What do you think, senior sister?" Jiang Miao's hands unknowingly protruded into the unknown valley, "Will you comment?"

"I don't understand this, but it's pretty good anyway." Seeing the feeling of deja vu in the content, Su Huai Porridge felt a little lost. After all, such a revision changed the story of her meeting with her junior.

But this is a matter of creation, Su Huai Porridge does not intend to interfere too much with Jiang Miao's decision, but chooses to support him unconditionally, just like Jiang Miao has always supported her painting.

But in the next second, her complexion changed, her cheeks suddenly became rosy, and she felt something strange in her chest, and she said coquettishly, "What are you doing? Don't touch me!"

"Senior sister." Jiang Miao softly blew into Su Huai Porridge's ear, "I've finished the exams, so I don't need to recharge my batteries, do I?"

"No, no way..." Su Huai porridge twitched, and resisted forcelessly.

Jiang Miao had already remembered the so many "truths" that the senior sister said yesterday when she was drunk, but felt that the senior sister's resistance was also interesting and added a lot of interest.

But they both seem to have overlooked one thing.

[Future]: Huh?Why is there still a girl's voice? !

[Drunken Cold Qianzhou]: What the hell is a senior?

【Jun Jiu】: What the hell?

[Ming Kai Yehe]: Doesn't this room look like a dormitory?Did Peach Jam live with her senior? ? ?

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[Feng Qingyue]: Hmm? ? ?Peach Jam has a girlfriend?

Although Jiang Miao and Su Huai porridge died in a serial club before, many of his book friends knew that he was exposed to write novels in school, and even found the advertisement video on the beep station. Senior sister talks about love affairs.

There was a bit of sourness in the full book group before, but there are also many book friends who don't usually focus on these things, and they still look confused.

Some people even thought that Peach Jam was for girls, but now they still couldn't tell whether it was the man or the girl.

[Huiyue]: Hahahahaha!I knew it last year! ! !I finally don't have to hide it from holding it in until now, woo woo woo! ! !

[Nanfeng]: So what are you doing now?Senior sister wants to read the beginning of the new book written by Peach Jam?I want to see it too! ! !

[Xuantian Xiaoxian]: Why does this arm look so white?

[Do not eat steamed fish]: Damn it!Is senior sister sitting on Peach Jam? !

Because Jiang Miao used the camera of his mobile phone to broadcast the live broadcast, and the camera was aimed obliquely at the keyboard and computer screen on the desk, and he could barely see two legs under the desk overlapping the other two legs from the lower right corner.

But that alone is enough to make people think.