Sister, Shut Up!

[Lemon is so sour]: It's nothing, I just heard that the voice of a Huahua anchor is very similar to that of Senior Su, it's really super like, I thought that Senior Su was broadcasting live.

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Qi Lianyue frowned, feeling that things were getting interesting.

Su Huai porridge usually knows about painting, and even knows that she will take orders to earn some living expenses.

But she really didn't know if Su Huai Porridge was secretly broadcasting live.

After all, Qi Lianyue is the deputy captain of the debate team and a member of the school debate team, so there are often school-level competitions to participate in.

In addition, she is the head of the Propaganda Department of the Youth Association, and she has a lot of work in this area. In addition to her studies, she is piled up in three aspects. She usually has no time to care about what Su Huai Porridge is doing.

Especially since both of them have fallen in love separately, they spend even less time together on weekdays.

So Qi Lianyue is actually not very sure that Su Huai Porridge is not secretly live broadcasting.

[Yuelian Obscure]: You send me the live broadcast room, and I'll go and watch it too.

[Lemon is so sour]: Huh?Do you really want it?Will it bother senior sister?

[Yuelian Obscure]: I'm fine now, you can just post it, I'll see it.

[Lemon is so sour]: Good.

[Lemon is so sour]: (link)

Qi Lianyue clicked on the link and jumped to the live broadcast room.

Just looking at this picture, she raised her brows, and found a clue that Ding Ning hadn't noticed.

The most obvious thing is that there is an obvious bump wound in the upper right corner of the ipad in the picture.

Qi Lianyue remembered very clearly that Su Huai porridge was in the dormitory some time ago, and accidentally dropped the ipad. It was fine, but the upper right corner was smashed.

In addition, there was a red string tied around the right wrist of the up owner. This thing was worn by Su Huai porridge all the time, and Qi Lianyue had an impression of it.

Let’s look at the nickname of the up master——[Congee Congee Painting Workshop]

Ha ha.

If this isn't Suhuai Porridge, who else could it be?

"The line drawing is finished~" Su Huai porridge finished the last stroke, stretched his waist and said, "I haven't done any filling in the previous issues, I can do it today."

With that said, Su Huai Porridge called out the previous comics and continued to draw.

And Qi Lianyue, who heard this voice, immediately confirmed her judgment.

[Yuelian Obscure]: It should be her. I really didn't know that she would broadcast live. It probably started recently.

[Lemon is so sour]: Wow!Then senior sister Su is too powerful, right?

[Lemons are so sour]: The comics she draws are super interesting!

[Lemons are so sour]: Hey, that's not right. If you think about it this way, the comics drawn by Senior Sister Su seem to be the story between her and Jiang Miao?

While chatting, Ding Ning suddenly discovered a blind spot, and the comics he read before suddenly had new meanings.

[Yue Lian Hazy Yarn]: Comics?The one she's drawing right now?

[Lemons are so sour]: Yes, yes!The manga drawn by Su Xuejie has even been made into a video. There are several episodes, all of which are super sweet!

[Lemon is so sour]: Thinking about it now, it seems that it is really the personal experience of Senior Sister Su and Jiang Miao.

Ding Ning thought it was amazing, and at the same time envied Senior Sister Su.

Because Jiang Miao in the comics is very active and provocative, and she is very manly every time!

Not only will he take the initiative to hold senior sister's hand and hug her as a princess, but he will also be a tough senior sister.

Wow!

Usually I can't see it, but Jiang Miao is so brave!

And Xuejie Su actually eats this set?

The more Ding Ning thought about it, the more she blushed, especially when she thought of the manga, where the male and female protagonists had already slept on the same bed, her face immediately turned into a steamy princess, steaming out of her face.

Too ashamed, right? !

Senior sister is so bold, she dares to draw this kind of content.

But compared to being ashamed, Ding Ning is more envious of Senior Su.

It would be great if her Chen Hao Tang could be more active like Jiang Miao.

Haotang has always been like a log, and he doesn't know how to take the initiative at all. Every time, Ding Ning has to accumulate courage for a long time before he can take a step closer to him.

But this is her Chen Haotang~

Thinking of this, Ding Ning showed a sweet smile on his face again, and the corners of his lips curled up silly.

Meanwhile, Qi Lianyue, who was on the opposite side, had already been completely aroused by Ding Ning. After talking to her, she clicked on the link again, entered the homepage of [Congee Congee Painting Workshop], and found out those comic videos to watch.

Then, there was a series of clicking sounds.

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At this time, Su Huai Porridge hadn't realized that things were getting serious. She thought it was just a simple Sunday afternoon, and after finishing the painting happily, in the evening, the junior WeChat called him to go downstairs for dinner.

Jiang Miao watched the senior sister's live broadcast contentedly, cleaned up briefly, and was ready to go downstairs to have dinner with the senior sister.

Xun Liang's ears were very sharp, and when he heard Jiang Miao's movement, he immediately poked his head out: "Brother Jiang! Pork chop rice with Coke!"

"I don't necessarily come back immediately after eating."

"It's okay! When you come back, bring me a copy by the way!"

"Okay." Jiang Miao shrugged and reluctantly accepted Gouzi's commission.

Walking out of the dormitory and going down the stairs, Jiang Miao was still thinking about who sent the barrage he saw earlier asking if up was Senior Su.

Then he was a little hesitant, should he remind the senior sister that she is now at risk of being exposed.

However, Su Huai Porridge still doesn't know about it until now. The younger brother has already known about her Beep account, and even secretly watches her live broadcast at ordinary times.

If I confess this to my senior sister, I don't know if the senior sister will die, but Jiang Miao probably will die anyway.

During the time when he went downstairs, Jiang Miao thought about it and decided to forget it.

The previous barrage was probably a classmate of the senior sister. He heard the voice and felt like it, so he had doubts, but it should not be sure yet.

Besides, it's just a live broadcast, so it's not a big deal.

Who can't have a side job among the young people nowadays?

The president of a certain country can still work as a maid, but what's wrong with the senior just drawing in her free time?

Compared with Jiang Miao's previous death experience, senior sister's is not worth mentioning.

Not to mention that people may just ask casually, and don't go into it if they don't answer the up. How many people can really get to the bottom of it?

Although Su Huai Porridge now has more fans on the beep station, there is still a gap between ten thousand fans.

With so many people in the country, how could it be possible to be seen by an acquaintance from the same school by coincidence?

Jiang Miao shook her head, feeling that it was not such a coincidence.

After going downstairs, I came to the door of the dormitory building. After waiting for a while, Su Huai Porridge from the opposite side also came out.

Today, the two of them are no longer the shy and nervous look when they held hands when they first fell in love.

When they met each other naturally, the two of them held hands together. They held each other's hands easily, chatting and walking towards the cafeteria.

"How much is the outline of the new book?" Su Huai porridge asked while holding his junior by the hand.

"For the time being, I just briefly planned the context." Jiang Miao yawned, "It's still early."

"What is a vein?"

"It's the main line of a book and a few climactic plot points." Jiang Miao briefly explained, "The new book is nothing more than three lines, the emotional line, the career line, and the social death line."

"Then determine which of the three lines will happen on which readers think the most interesting things will happen, the pictures or plots that can arouse the readers' emotions to the greatest extent."

"Slowly accumulate these things, and then reverse the outline based on the accumulated climax plots, and supplement the foreshadowing and foreshadowing of the climax bit by bit."

"It's troublesome to listen to." Su Huai porridge sighed, "That's what you wrote in the last book?"

"How is it possible." Jiang Miao looked helpless, "The outline of the last book is still relatively immature and not so organized. Humans always have to make progress slowly."

For this book, Jiang Miao had an idea at the beginning, thought of the theme of Bizhan, and felt that there was potential to be tapped. In addition, there was a very good love story in light novels at that time, which made Jiang Miao feel that this theme could be written. .

Hence the beginning.

Basically, as soon as the beginning was written, Jiang Miao communicated with the editor to release it. At first, there was no outline at all, but a few videos were simply determined as materials, and the word was just done.

It was not until some time before the release that Jiang Miao gradually perfected the follow-up outline, but this also led to the mediocre rhythm of the last book, the early stage was too fast, and the emotional line in the middle and late stages has basically been pushed to the end.

In order to avoid this problem in the new book, Jiang Miao plans to put more effort into the plot.

"I'm slowly getting to know the deeper aspects of web literature now." Jiang Miao chatted here, feeling a little emotional, "Be cool about this thing, to put it bluntly, it's actually poor information."

"Why does it make people feel good that the protagonist pretends to be a pig and eats a tiger? It's because there is a gap in information between the protagonist, the supporting role, and the villain."

"The bigger the information gap, the stronger the feeling of refreshment at the moment the information gap is released, which is commonly known as the moment of slapping the face and pretending to be coercive."

"But poor information is not just about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger."

"Any plot that can create information gaps and make readers look forward to seeing the moment when the information gaps are released can be written into online articles."

"For example, I want to write a love essay with the two of us as the template for the new book. The senior sister knew that I was Peach Jam in the early stage, but I didn't know that the senior sister knew that I was Peach Jam. It's just a layer of poor information, so I can write it. And it’s a big deal.”

Su Huai porridge was a little dizzy, and shook his head: "Then you don't seem to have such a gap in information in the last book, right? The relationship between the hero and heroine is pure love."

"Really not?" Jiang Miao smiled, "Actually, there are, but I didn't realize it before."

"I set the male protagonist Chen Wen as a straight male, initially purely to delay the progress of the relationship between the male and female protagonists."

"But in fact, the male protagonist's straight male thinking thinks that emotional matters should not be too fast, and often does not get the affection of the female protagonist, and the female protagonist can take the initiative to attack every time. In fact, every attack is filling in The hero's inner information is poor, let him know that it's okay to do so."

"It's okay to hug, it's okay to kiss, it's okay to touch."

"This is the process in which the information gap between lovers is gradually filled."

"In the beginning, when two people fell in love, neither of them knew what the other's bottom line and acceptance of intimacy were."

"When two old couples know their next position by patting their buttocks, the information gap will disappear, and there will be nothing to write about."