Tokyo Martial Arts Story

Yan Kai didn't expose it, and smiled slightly: "Thank you for the compliment."

After a pause, Yan Kai continued: "If senior Xia Zhiqiu thinks this manga is acceptable, can I do you a favor?"

"Why do you help first?" Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu slowly calmed down.

This manga, Kasumigaoka Shiyu only read about a hundred pages in half an hour. It’s not that she reads manga slowly, but that this manga has many details that need to be savored carefully. It’s different from those popular fast food manga nowadays. Just go through it with your eyes, and you don't need to look at it with your brain.

In particular, many of the dialogues have profound meanings and contain all the flavors of life. It is not enough for Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu to read it once.

Such a comic, if you want to say what Xiazhiqiu Shiyu can help, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu really can't think of it.

"It's actually like this." Yan Kai showed a bit of embarrassment on his face. Of course, due to the cover of the wide glasses, no one could see, "Half of my Japanese is taught by my aunt, and the other half is self-study to cope with daily life. It’s not too bad, but when writing the dialogue of the characters, I feel that it’s not right from time to time. Therefore, I would like to ask Kasumigaoka-senpai’s excellent literary ability to help me slightly modify the dialogue in the comics according to the original meaning of the dialogue, so that The dialogue can be read more easily."

It turned out to be like this...

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu came to a sudden.

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Chapter 4 My mother said...

The plot is compact, the logic is reasonable, the characters are distinct, and the storyboard is super strong. People watch it and make up the continuous action in their brains naturally. The sense of power and expressive tension are also full marks. Don't read the follow-up, just talk about Kasumi no Oka. Shiyu watching it now After seeing these contents, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu thinks that Yan Kai's comics are not much better than those first-line masters in the comics world.

Of course, it remains to be seen what the follow-up will be. Whether it can become a masterpiece can not be determined just by looking at the beginning.

And if there is something wrong with this manga, it is probably that there are some minor grammatical problems in the dialogue of the characters, but it does not affect the reading. At least Kasumigaoka Shiwa can understand the dialogue of the characters very well.

But it's okay not to mention this small flaw, but this mention, it pierced into Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's heart like a thorn, making Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's obsessive-compulsive disorder a little ready to move.

However, asking the future great writer Xia Shizi to do these small things would be too much of a sledgehammer. I feel that any student with a mandarin score of [-] or above can be competent. Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu is a little unhappy.

But considering that if I agreed, wouldn't I be able to see the follow-up of this comic for the first time?Xiazhiqiu Shiyu had no choice but to agree with her nod: "Okay, since the juniors are begging like this, then I can only help you."

The social relations in Dongying are very humane. Under the premise that the upper grades have the right to shout at the lower grades, they naturally have the obligation to help the lower grades. He refused to help even the slightest favor, which dealt a huge blow to the popularity of the senior.

So Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu decided to help this "poor", "weak", and "helpless" junior. After all, seeing how weak and introverted he is, he took out the drawing he had worked on for a long time and handed it to himself, so that he could correct him. It was also struggling and hesitating for a long time. As a senior in life, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu naturally couldn't hit his junior!

I haven't said a few words yet, why did it become a plea?

A question mark rose on Yan Kai's forehead, but it was not an important matter, Yan Kai just thought about it and then skipped it.

"In that case, thank you Xia Zhiqiu senior sister." Yan Kai said, took out a thick envelope from his arms, put it on the table, and pushed it in front of Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu subconsciously picked up the envelope and looked at it, and then her breath was suffocated.

It turned out to be full of Yuji ([-] yuan banknotes)!

"what do you mean?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was in doubt.

"It's nothing, the fee for writing." Yan Kai replied calmly, "My mother told me that bad people talk about ideals, and good people talk about money. If you ask someone for help, if you only talk about ideals without giving benefits, it doesn't look like me. Isn’t it hypocritical. So thank you must be given. I don’t know what Kasumigaoka-senpai likes, so I can only choose the most vulgar thing as a substitute, and I ask Kasumigaoka-senpai not to be offended!”

Kasumigaoka Shiyu swallowed her saliva, 100 million yen, even if her family belongs to the wealthy category, such a large amount of money is not something she can easily own at her age.

In her life, the first money she made on her own was the manuscript fee for "Love Metronome" plus the royalties from the publication of the novel, which added up to only 10,000+.

There is no way, she is just a newcomer writer, the manuscript fee is low, the royalty rate is not high, and 10,000+ yen is not a small amount of money, it is comparable to the income of ordinary working-class people for two or three months.

However, today, right now, 100 million yen was pushed in front of Kasumigaoka Shiyu without any mental preparation.

"No, no, it's not a big deal, it doesn't need such a reward!"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu refused firmly.

In any case, the 100 million remuneration is too high. If you say to treat her to a few meals, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu will be ashamed to accept it, but if Xiazhiqiu Shiyu accepts such a large amount of money, she must have a bad conscience—— The work is not worth the price!

Or, what intentions does this Central Plains man have for himself?

Kasumigaoka Shiwa, who has the self-consciousness and conceit of "I am a beautiful girl without one in a million", immediately became vigilant.

Could it be that this Central Plains person wants to corrupt and lure me with money, and then do this or that to me?Do your Spring and Autumn Dreams!

After Xiazhiqiu Shiyu completed the three books of depravity in his brain, he was even more determined to refuse.

Yan Kai didn't know what Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu had imagined in such a short period of time, but he smiled and said, "It is true that it is not necessary, but I always believe that although a small effort may also get a big return, a big effort will get a big reward." The return may be higher, right?"

"This manga is my painstaking work, as long as it can be improved a little bit, I will spare no expense!"

"The reason why I gave 100 million yen is not that I am only willing to pay 100 million yen, but that the spare cash I am using now is only 100 million. If I have 1000 million spare cash, I will definitely not begrudge it! "

"If Xia Zhiqiu senior sister really thinks that her work is not worth so much money, then please make it worth such a work!"

Yan Kai said solemnly, this time even with those big glasses that obstruct eyes, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu can feel how firm Yan Kai's will is, he really takes this manga very seriously, even to the point where all the way.

As the creator, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has a lot of sympathy for Yan Kai's mood.

But, even so, you can't force others to be difficult like this!

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu felt angry, even if she played a D-level difficult task, she would not get an SSS evaluation!This is embarrassing her Xiazhiqiu Shiyu!

Compared to Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, who was struggling, Yan Kai was much more relaxed: "However, seeing that this amount of remuneration can make Xiazhiqiu senior sister feel pressured, then I am relieved. , you will definitely do your job to perfection, right?"

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu really thought in his heart, if he really accepted the money, how should he fulfill Yan Kai's commission with all his heart, but when he heard Yan Kai's words, he immediately became even more angry.

This Central Plains person seems to have a much worse personality than he looks!

Yan Kai didn't care how Xiazhiqiu Shiyu slandered him in his heart, he got up and called the waiter, and after paying the bill, he said to Xiazhiqiu Shiyu: "Senior Xiazhiqiu, I still have a part-time job, so I won't continue to accompany you, the drawing is a copy , you just take it back and look at it casually, and if you need to change it, just write it with a pencil. Of course, please don’t spread the drawing, thank you!"

Still going to work?

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu raised her eyebrows: "Your family should be very rich, but you still have to work?"

Even for ordinary adults, Yan Kai paid 100 million yen to Kasumigaqiu Shiyu without blinking an eye. According to Kasumiqiu Shiyu's thinking, Yan Kai must be a son of a rich family.

The private Shenjian school does not prohibit part-time jobs. Not only that, but also has good communication with many units that need migrant students. Every year, a fixed number of students will be sent to those units, and students will be allowed to work in those units. Well, no commission is charged.

But Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has never heard of a part-time job that can earn 100 million yuan!

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu had already learned that Yan Kai was an international student who came to Dongying this year, that is to say, if Yan Kai did not lie, he really earned 100 million from part-time jobs, then he only had about a month to work part-time. 100 million is a monthly salary.

If there is a job in any unit with a monthly salary of 100 million, let alone high school students, adults will grab their heads.

"Haha." Yan Kai smiled inexplicably, "My family does have some money, but to be honest, I'm running away from home now, because my family doesn't support me in drawing comics, I ran away on my own. I came to Dongying to study abroad, just to pursue my dream. Therefore, I was cut off from my pocket money by my family long ago, and the 100 million I paid you was indeed earned by my part-time job."

Yan Kai didn't shy away from his own situation, but he didn't say much.

Did the rich man run away from home in pursuit of his dream?This episode was used badly on TV, but it was really fresh when I saw it in reality.

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu looked at Yan Kai, and his favorability for him rose slightly.

However, if you earn 100 million by working part-time, what kind of work do you do, nightclub cowherd?Judging by your appearance, you don't seem to be able to eat this bowl of rice, do you?

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said poisonously in her heart.

Hey, wait, why did I just complain in my heart, but I couldn't say it?

Doubts arose in Xiazhiqiu Shiyu's heart.

She is not a reserved and gentle woman. On the contrary, among the two beauties in the second year department of the private Shenma School, she is different from Saeko Busujima who is regarded as "modern Yamato Nadeko" and admired by her younger generations and peers. Xiazhiqiu Shiyu is famous for her poisonous tongue, what's more, the reputation of her poisonous tongue is even louder than her reputation as a talented woman.

But for some reason, in front of Yan Kai, the poisonous tongue mode that would be turned on without thinking in the past has been shut down all the time, and he can't say a bad word.

Yan Kai left, but Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu had no appetite for a table of desserts, and could only look at the direction Yan Kai left and said, "What a weirdo!"

As for what kind of emotion is in these words, I'm afraid even she herself doesn't know.

Holding the drawing tightly, Kasumigaoka Shiwa downed the coffee, asked the waiter to pack the dessert, and got up to leave the coffee shop as well.

She obviously can't eat so many desserts by herself. She just wanted to make Yan Xin feel sad, but Yan Kai is willing to pay even 100 million yen without blinking an eye. It doesn't matter, a punch landed in the empty space, and now Kasumigaoka Shiwa not only did not have the joy of succeeding in a prank, but started counting calories instead.

With so many sweets, how much exercise is needed to consume the calories in them!I'm just a weak literary girl, I don't want to exercise!Am I being tricked by that bastard from the Central Plains?right?right!

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu said with a headache.

What?don't eat?What a joke, how is this possible!In this world, only delicious food can not live up to it!

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Chapter 5 Senior Sister No. [-]

The next day, Kasumigaoka Shiyu woke up to the melodious ringing of the get out of class bell.

Yesterday, in order to fight against the demon named Calorie, the warrior of wisdom and beauty—Kasumigaoka Shiyu fought hard for two hours before she was able to destroy them. Today, she was seriously injured. In class, she finally lost to Sandman He was dragged into the abyss of drowsiness due to the invasion of the world, and now he finally woke up from the call of the horn of God.

Well, in fact, she had exercised too much yesterday and was so tired today that she fell asleep as soon as class started, and now she was finally woken up by the bell after class.

However, other people, whether teachers or classmates, didn't think there was anything wrong, because she often stayed up late to write manuscripts and then used class time to catch up on sleep. As for the reason for making up sleep today, who is it? Can you tell?Is it a fairy?

Fortunately, since entering school, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu has never lost the throne of the first place in the education test. Among the teachers, there is a privilege. Otherwise, he should be standing outside the classroom carrying a bucket now.

That comic called "Sword Roaring Jianghu" is really amazing...

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu was rarely concentrating on writing the manuscript yesterday, but was reading the drawing that Yan Kai gave her yesterday, the manga called "Sword Roaring Jianghu".

Once was not enough, she read it three times, and did not fall asleep until two or three o'clock in the morning.

Because that manga is really awesome.

There are bloody fights, intrigues, tenderness, and pride. The plot is one after another, without being far-fetched or rote. The characters also show their personalities vividly and vividly in various conflicts.

Liu Shengyijian, who is devout in kendo, Yan Beifei, who is passionate and passionate, and Cangsong, who is wise and confident...

All these characters with distinct personalities come alive on the paper, which makes Xiazhiqiu Shiyu want to stop.

And Xiazhiqiu Shiyu also found a greater meaning in her work.

Before Xiazhiqiu Shiyu only saw the part where Liu Shengyijian knew about Yan Beifei's existence and wanted to challenge him.

In the following content, after Yan Beifei's wife Chu Xinru and Liu Shengyijian's wife Qianhuizi appeared on the stage, Xiazhiqiu Shiyu felt that his workload suddenly increased.

As a male, Yan Kai obviously can't control female lines to the same level as males. Although he can barely catch the eye, but in general, it lacks a lot of meaning. At least if Kasumigaoka Shiwa writes it, It can definitely improve several levels.

Junior, your 100 million is worth it!See how my senior sister corrects you!

Xiazhiqiu Shiyu, who felt that she was doing well again, carefully read the 300-page sketch three times overnight, in order to control all the existing plots, and then slowly revise the lines of Chu Xinru and Qian Huizi.

This is the first time that she has paid so much attention to works other than her own.

In the drawing for Kasumi Hills Shiyu, the dialogues of the characters are all written in pencil, and Kasumi Hills Shiyu can easily change them. Taking advantage of the time when get out of class is over, Kasumigaoka Shiyu took out the drawing and wanted to revise it first.

More than 300 pages of drawings, even if it is just to change the lines, this is not an easy job. It is estimated that it will not be completed in one day, and even stay up late at night.

However, even if I have completed the modification, where should I find the junior from Central Plains?

Yan Kai left in a hurry yesterday, and unexpectedly did not leave contact information for Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, this is what Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu realized later.

He didn't take the opportunity to ask for her senior's contact information and line number. This unscrupulous Zhongyuan junior will definitely be single for the rest of his life!