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I am a layman but this person in front of me is a professional, let him help me see if that kid has any hope of success.

"After talking about this, please help me read a novel written by a friend of mine. By the way, tell me the shortcomings in it. Next time I meet him, I will tell him."

"???"

Asakawa Zhiyi was a little confused. When did Gilles have a friend who wrote a novel, and he brought it up just when he came here.

"no problem."

In other respects, Asakawa Zhiichi may not be able to guarantee it, but he still has eyesight after being exposed to literary works for a long time.

"Jers, I wonder if you have any spare parts for your friend's novel?"

"It's over there. He was still there when I left just now. I don't know where he has gone now."

Jayers pointed to the position that Chen Yu had made just now.

Looking in the direction Jayers pointed, Asakawa Zhiyi found that his son wanted to say something but dared not.

"Asahi, what happened, you look nervous."

"Father me"

Asagi didn't know how to describe what was happening in front of him.

He heard the conversation between his father and uncle just now, and the uncle asked his father to find Mr. Ewa, whose works are not enough.

I'll continue for a second for my father first.

Although Asahi didn't say anything, his hand hinted Asakawa Zhiichi, making him notice the bag next to the sitting posture and the manuscript inside.

If my father saw this thing, he could roughly guess what novel his uncle asked him to evaluate. After all, this bag and the manuscripts inside were read by his father not long ago.

It's a pity that Asakawa Zhiichi didn't see his son's hint.

As for Jayers, he stood up and handed the novel that Chen Yu had just written a page to Asakawa Zhiichi without even reading it.

In his opinion, such a novel is not worth reading. Let friends find out the shortcomings in it and pass it on to him, which will severely hit his momentum.

"Zhiyi, feel free to ask any questions, my friend is planning to enter this line of work."

It's time for that kid to experience cruelty. There is no so-called all-rounder in this world, so he doesn't believe it. This kid can write novels well.

"Gels, before I read it again, let me remind you that the competition in this industry is cruel. Don't look at those well-known writers. They have made efforts that many people don't understand behind their backs to get to this point."

"Well, because of this, I want you not to give me face, just find out the shortcomings in it, so that I can convey it to him and let him get rid of this idea."

That's it, the harder you criticize, the more he will lose face later on, and I'll see if he's still the same as before, looking like he doesn't care much.

Thinking of Chen Yu's attitude towards him, Jayers became a little angry.

It seemed that the other party didn't take his identity as Eri's father seriously at all, and he at least agreed with what he proposed, not to mention completely agreeing with it.

But he is so good, he ignores what he says, but he still has to follow his rhythm, which is completely different from what he expected.

In order not to deliberately bully and suppress him in Eri's view, Geers has been looking for ways to make Chen Yu suffer.

Now that the opportunity has come, if the other party sticks out his face and asks him to hit him, then he will not be polite.

(To be continued.)

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Suspicion

thoughtful

The hands holding the manuscript are trembling

This is Asakawa Zhiyi's expression after seeing the manuscript.

Why is Mr. Eba's manuscript here?

Asakawa Shiichi will never forget the handwriting and novel style of Ewa-sensei that have been imprinted in his heart.

When seeing the manuscript for the first time, Asakawa Shiichi felt a little familiar, but he didn't recognize it immediately at that moment.

After thinking about it for a while, I suddenly thought of where this familiarity came from.

Then came the inner surprise.

Today, all college students can meet Mr. Ewa

Could it be that the friend Jayers mentioned is Mr. Ewa? ?

"Zhiyi, if you have any comments or suggestions, feel free to ask."

""

Seeing Asakawa Zhiichi with a strange expression on his face, although Jayers was a little puzzled, he temporarily suppressed his doubts after thinking that it was best to hit that kid well.

As for Asakawa Shiichi, he didn't know what words to answer Jayers.

Brother, can I call you brother? If it weren't for seeing you in the dark, I would doubt if you deliberately wanted to see me embarrassing.

That's right, asking Asakawa Zhiyi to comment on Chen Yu's novel, in Asakawa Zhiyi's view, it was purely to embarrass him.

The reason why Zhiyi Asakawa had such an idea was that after reading Chen Yu's novels, other professionals in the industry could not give any opinions. What opinions can he, an outdated person, have to offer?