"She's your younger sister, so do you have that kind of hobby for those girl-controlled games you asked me for yesterday? Girl-controlled attributes?"

Ying Lili looked at Su Jie with a strange expression, and her eyes showed "I didn't expect you to be this kind of Su Jie", making Su Jie feel uncomfortable.

"I brought those games..." Su Jie wanted to explain, but was immediately warned by Tong Nai's murderous eyes. Tong Nai's secret belongs to the death of the light, and Su Jie immediately realized this. , changed his mouth and said: "I brought that game to my friends, don't get me wrong."

Ying Li Li said contemptuously: "I'm not a three-year-old child, so I want to use such a lame excuse to prevaricate me."

But at this time, Tong Nai was about to fall into trouble, and interjected: "My brother is a sister-in-law, and I went to participate in that competition yesterday, as if I wanted to stop my brother from getting those sister-in-the-game prizes, but I didn't expect that it would fall short in the end. I feel that my own safety is not guaranteed in the future.”

Su Jie almost didn't spit out a mouthful of old blood for this explosive speech, but Tong Nai even sued the wicked first. It's a shame you dare to say this, is there a sister who is so rude to your brother?

Jumping into the Yellow River now can't wash it out!

Ying Lili slowly moved away from the footsteps next to Su Jie, and took Tong Nao's hand to step back.

"Don't be afraid, Tong Nai, I have a wolf-proof electric shock device at home. I'll give it to you when I turn around. Remember that when your brother wants to mess around, you must call the police as soon as possible."

Su Jie was already full of black lines, and suddenly found that he was still too kind, and he was ripped off by the younger sister Tong Nai.

A sly smile flashed in Tong Nai's eyes. She used advance as retreat to completely get rid of the suspicion of revealing her special hobbies, but at the same time it also tricked Su Jie.

Seeing Tong Nai being pulled away by Ying Li Li, Su Jie guessed that his sister's accusation should be confirmed in Ying Li's eyes. This is really a crime to be added.

Chapter No.16: Weekly Shonen Jump Division

When Su Jie returned home, he didn't stay for a few minutes, and then hurriedly went out with a pile of drawings.

This is all of Su Jie's "One Punch Man" drawings, which are enough for the entry review of comic magazines. Su Jie doesn't want to delay too long. After drawing it yesterday, he will act immediately today.

Riding a bicycle, Su Jie rushed to the Tokyo branch of Weekly Shonen Jump, which was located on the bustling Haijing Avenue.

Because it was the afternoon, Su Jie set off after school, just in time for the rush hour, and the road was a little blocked.

Su Jie overestimated his speed, and arrived at the branch of "Weekly Shonen Jump" at nearly 07:30, which was set up in a certain building.

"Hello, sir, do you want to contribute?"

At the door, there are special personnel stopping here, and seeing Su Jie coming in with a drawing, although Su Jie looks very young, the beautiful front desk also smiles and asks Su Jie's needs .

"Yes!" Su Jie was an otaku in his previous life, and he had graduated and entered the society for a few years. He would not have stage fright in such a situation, and nodded his head.

"Please wait a moment, I will contact the free editor for you now."

The front desk made an internal call, and the editors got off work at seven o'clock, but it was normal for editors to work overtime. They often didn't get off work until eight or nine o'clock in the evening, so now Su Jie is not afraid of not having an editor.

Soon, the front desk hung up the phone and said, "Editor Truth Hui is free. It's in Room 103 on the second floor. Do you need me to take you there?"

"Don't bother, I'll just go by myself." Su Jie picked up the sketch and left.

During this process, Su Jie also looked at the situation of the "Weekly Shonen Jump" branch, and now it is past get off work hours, but most of the staff and editors are still working in an orderly manner, with documents flipping and phone calls coming and going.

There are not many cartoonists like Su Jie in the editorial department. After all, even if they want to submit articles or deal with problems, they usually don't come at this time, so Su Jie walking inside is a bit conspicuous, and people will look at Su Jie more when passing by. Eye.

When I came to Room 103 on the second floor, I knocked on the hidden door, and there was a nice, feminine magnetic voice from inside.

"Please come in."

After entering the room, Su Jie saw behind the large desk, a mature woman in her twenties who was wearing a black OL uniform, her legs wrapped in black silk, and raised her head.

The woman also wears rimless cut-rim glasses on her face, which looks extraordinarily temperamental, perfectly blending the feminine beauty and sophistication.

In addition to the desk and a printer in the editing room, the most striking thing is the row of figures at the back, all of which are the main characters in Jump's comics, giving people the feeling of instantly entering the comic atmosphere.

"Hello, sir, I'm the editor-in-chief of "Weekly Shonen", Makoto. Are you going to contribute to our Jump?"

Zhenhui got up and asked Su Jie to sit down, supported the frame, and fixed his eyes on the drawing in Su Jie's arms.

When I saw Su Jie for the first time, Maori was a little surprised. Although the ACG comic industry in Japan is not yet developed, there are many newcomers who want to become comic artists.

Especially "Weekly Shonen Jump", the most prestigious manga magazine in Japan, is never short of new manga artists who come here to try to contribute.

But usually they are in their twenties, and Su Jie is still a high school student at first glance, and there are very few if not none.

"My name is Su Jie, this is my work, and I'm here for serialization in Weekly Shonen Jump."

The female editor in front of her is mature and sexy, and she has the shrewdness and ability of women in the workplace. Su Jie always feels that the other party is looking at him carefully.

After taking the sketch handed over by Su Jie, the first thing that caught the eyes of the truth was a bald man with a shiny bald head, a bald cape, and a yellow uniform.

"One Punch Man." Zhenhui read out the name of the work on the sketch and couldn't help looking at Su Jie.

It's not a good name!

Superman is an American term, and there is also a punch. Together, it reads smoothly, but it seems a bit low!

Makoto's expectations have been lowered a lot. "Weekly Shonen Jump" is the best manga magazine in Japan. It is an affirmation for the increase of fame and strength. It is the first choice of every manga artist, but this also means Due to the intense competition, most cartoonists have fallen into the sand here.

A cartoonist who can be serialized on Weekly Shonen Jump must at least have a certain amount of strength, and not everyone can publish it on it.

Most rookie cartoonists can't meet this requirement, and it's not unreasonable that most of the cartoonists on "Weekly Shonen Jump" are not newcomers but veterans.

In addition to Su Jie's age, these are really not enough to constitute a convincing ability.

Just out of the editor's work attitude, Maui continued to turn over the manuscript.

Not to mention, truth benefit still has a good impression of Su Jie himself, no matter what purpose Su Jie serves, it is not an easy thing to be able to draw comics independently at this age.

Of course, good feelings are good feelings, and work is work. As a working woman, it is a strict and meticulous industry such as editing, and truth benefits can be distinguished.

Su Jie didn't know, but Zhenhui had already made up her mind. If Su Jie's comics were really bad, he would tell the other party in a tactful way, so as not to discourage the enthusiasm of the children.

As Maui turned over, the comic One Punch Man was slowly displayed in front of him.

In terms of painting style and mirroring, One Punch Man is not bad, and the name is only a passing level, which is normal. After all, Su Jie is still a pink and tender newcomer. incredible.

On the first page, a monster appeared, and then the image of the protagonist appeared. It was a bald man, his eyes seemed to be very cute, and his pupils were only drawn a little. Seeing the image of the protagonist, Makoto frowned slightly, the first impression of One Punch Man. Not the best, because Weekly Shonen Jump is not suitable for spoof manga series.

But the interesting thing about this comic is that in terms of plot, it has both the blood of the king and the hilarious and funny sections.

In the first episode of One Punch Man, starting from an ordinary rescue, the protagonist Saitama appeared in a yellow uniform and cloak, giving people the feeling of being a soy sauce.

This plot is not complicated. From the perspective of truth-hye who has been working as an editor for three years, she has seen many openings like this, and even she has already guessed the next plot, either the protagonist is defeated, which leads to the next plot, or the rescuer appears. , the most likely is the beautiful girl rescue, such a familiar routine.

Basically, this is also the style of this type of urban supernatural combat comics. This level and plot may still have the opportunity to be serialized in other comic magazines, but in Weekly Shonen Jump, which has more competition and more good works, This kind of work is still a little under-heated.

However, when Maru thought so, and even had given birth to classify this comic as unqualified, the next comic plot began to reverse.

The protagonist Saitama was not injured and fell to the ground, and no beautiful girl rescuer appeared, and some were just a punch.

One punch!

In the face of the clamor and strength of the enemy, the protagonist Saitama punched and attacked, and you didn't even feel that he was using his strength, as if he fluttered his fist out.

But when hitting the enemy, the power is like the power of a 203mm heavy artillery bombardment, instantly blasting the vaccine freak into minced meat, and solving the battle lightly, giving people a great sense of contrast.

What about the good plan?

One Punch Man did not play cards according to the routine at all!

The conjecture in Makoto's heart was ruthlessly overturned, and what appeared in front of her was a powerful protagonist with a high amount of force.

Among them, Saitama said, "I am a hero of interest." Compared with the crazy monster, the powerful punch, the eyes of truth and beauty gradually lit up.

In connection with the title of the work, One Punch Man, the plot just now seemed to explain something, which made Makoto's heart interested.

Even the image of the protagonist, which Maori thought was not good before, has completely changed in the style of painting during the battle. The sharp eyes and the bright bald head give people a powerful and invincible illusion, compared with before. There is a huge sense of contrast, which makes people want to follow and see what kind of person the protagonist Saitama is.

Faintly, Makoto had a feeling that this cartoon created by a high school student in front of her might be able to surprise her.

Chapter No.17: The Expectation of Truth Megumi

In the editing room, time is passing little by little, and the quiet atmosphere makes people feel that time is moving very slowly.

It was already half an hour later when Majinhui finished reading all the sketches of One Punch Man. The sketches that Su Jie sent were not too many, so it should not take so much time.

But in the process, Makoto has seen the excellence of this comic, and unknowingly put all his energy into it, and did not miss any details of the comic carefully, from the plot, style of painting, mirroring, character building, etc. evaluation, which is why it takes so much time.

I have to admit that this comic is very exciting, and even the editor of truth Hui couldn't help being attracted by the plot.

The setting of the manga protagonist Saitama invincible kills any enemy with one punch. Compared with the ordinary and simple life style, there are many funny plot dialogues interspersed with it, and at the same time, the pretence is maximized. When the enemy despises the bald protagonist Saitama the most, it is When the face is the most refreshing.

Several times I saw interesting plots, such as a child with a butt and a chin, I became bald and my funny language became stronger, and the fighting style was exaggerated to the point of being invincible with one punch.

The story told by One Punch Man is not complicated, there is no huge and complicated world view setting, and there is no all kinds of beautiful girls that often appear in urban comics, but the wonderful plot is unstoppable, often in your After watching the routine plot of anime, it will give you an unexpected reversal.

Especially the one-punch setting of the protagonist Saitama, people can't wait to watch it to see if there is an enemy who can defeat Saitama, or...take Saitama's punch.

Raising her head, Makoto showed a smile on her face for the first time, and said, "It's a very good comic, no, to be precise, the level of excitement in this comic is beyond my expectations, it's the same age as you, and it's a pleasure to work with you. "

The evaluation of truth Hui is very high, most new cartoonists will encounter a wall in front of truth Hui, and the works they get are often the same. The works cannot meet the publication requirements. Please continue to work hard. "The answer.

"Happy cooperation." Su Jie heard the truth and knew that the other party had recognized One Punch Man and had hope of serialization.

One Punch Man comic Su Jie has a lot of confidence, it is normal to get the editor's approval, and it is abnormal if he doesn't pass.

Therefore, Su Jie's face was very normal, and in the eyes of truth Hui, he valued Su Jie again.

It's rare to have such a mind of being so arrogant and impetuous at such a young age. This is the most famous manga magazine in Japan.

Even a manga artist who has worked on several manga works will show excitement when he learns of the hope of being serialized in Weekly Shonen Jump. It is rare for Su Jie to be so calm.

"To clarify, I will submit your work to the editor-in-chief for review. It's not a big problem. I'm very optimistic about your work. In the end, the editor-in-chief still needs to decide whether to serialize it on "Weekly Shonen Jump", which is not guaranteed yet. Your work can be featured in Weekly Shonen Jump."

Zhenhui told Su Jie about the next operation. Before coming, Su Jie had already checked the relevant information on the Internet.

The editors of Weekly Shonen Jump are divided into three levels: Editor-in-Chief, Editor-in-Chief, and Editor-in-Chief.

The editor-in-charge is responsible for negotiating and communicating with ordinary cartoonists, managing drafts, reviewing, operation, etc. It is the editor that the author contacts most often, and truth benefit is the editor-in-charge.

The editor-in-chief is responsible for managing a division, conducting a second review of the comics that the editor-in-charge is interested in, or negotiating with veteran cartoonists. For example, the division where Su Jie is currently working has an editor-in-chief who manages more than a dozen editors in charge.

The editor-in-chief, as the name suggests, is the largest editor of the entire "Weekly Shonen Jump", and the editor-in-chief of the branches all over Japan belong to the editor-in-chief.

If a comic wants to be serialized on Weekly Shonen Jump, the editor-in-chief thinks that it is useless. Finally, the editor-in-chief has to hold a meeting, call all editors to make a decision, and select the most promising ones from many comics for serialization.

The success of "Weekly Shonen Jump" is also related to this layered editorial structure. The strict review level ensures that the level of comics that can be serialized on "Weekly Shonen Jump" will not be too bad.

Su Jie's "One Punch Man" has passed the preliminary review of the editor in charge of the truth, and has to pass the review of the editor-in-chief of the branch. Finally, along with several new comics from this branch recently, it was sent to the headquarters of Weekly Shonen Jump for review. The final review confirmed that the editor-in-chief and more than a dozen editor-in-chief voted to resolve that only the comics that passed the final review could be serialized on Weekly Shonen Jump.

Of course, this is for Su Jie, who is a newcomer. If you have a few veteran cartoonists with good results, you can directly contact the editor-in-chief and skip the editor-in-charge. If you are a more powerful top cartoonist, you can deal with the editor-in-chief. Yes, the chances of entering the serialization of "Weekly Shonen Jump" will be much higher.

Marie now values ​​Su Jie very much, and believes that the manga work "One Punch Man" has enough potential. Even if it enters the final stage of final review, there is a 70.00% hope that it will be serialized in "Weekly Shonen Jump", and it is very likely to become a hit stand up.

At the moment, truth Hui went outside to pour a cup of coffee for Su Jie, and then carefully explained the rules of the serialization of "Weekly Shonen Jump", as well as the points that need to be paid attention to after the successful serialization, and guided Su Jie patiently.

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