My Daily Life with Gosara Ayase/my Sister Can't Be Ayase's Little Angel

No wonder I let other people call me Ryunosuke without much problem.

"Ryunosuke, you are really humble." Shibakizuo gave a flattery at the right time.

Ryunosuke shook his head with a smile when he heard the words, and looked at Shibakiza's work again.

It's still Juggernaut Academy. In terms of plot, the previous ones haven't changed much, and the latter ones haven't been finished yet.

However, the typos and the like have all been corrected.

The wrong sentences have also been revised, although a few inappropriate places can be found after careful reading.

The sentences are also much more fluent and natural. Although it is simple and straightforward, without rhetoric like flowers and flowers, it is okay.

Even the specific secondary school words have been simplified a lot, and some unique names are also annotated at the bottom of the draft.

If you perform at this level, let’s not talk about whether the story is good or not, at least you have the qualifications to contribute to the competition.

However, Ryunosuke raised his head and said, "Well, why is the protagonist's name Shibakiza Yoshiki?"

When Chai Muzuo heard this, his face turned slightly red, and he pretended to be heroic with his arms akimbo and smiled:

"Hahaha, I just wrote the adventures I experienced in my previous life as a memoir, so the name should be recorded truthfully."

Long Zhisuke couldn't help laughing and cursing in his heart: I'm really not ashamed.

He smiled and looked down again.

Next, there are some new plots, and the writing is not bad, there are twists and turns, and there are no mistakes.

Ryunosuke nodded and praised:

"The new plot has not been modified by Yukinoshita and me, and you have written it quite well."

"Haha" Shiba Muzao laughed out loud again, which attracted Ayaka Totsuka, who was practicing over there, to watch for a while.

"Before, it was just because the memory of the previous life was too mottled, so the records were a bit messy. I just tidy it up a little bit and it will be fine."

When Ryunosuke heard the words "previous life", his eyes moved slightly:

If a person wants to improve his writing, how can he improve in a few days?

It's like you can improve your grades if you learn mathematics by surprise, but you can't do it if you don't accumulate Chinese.

Could it be that Chaimuzuo was crossed by someone?

Ryunosuke stared at Shiba Muzao's face and looked carefully: It really is suspicious.

Angrily scolding Hayama and Yumiko's behavior is not quite like Shibakiza.

Wumm didn't dare to look at them with his back turned, and he had his own style.

Hey, could it be that he was influenced by the original Chai Muzuo?

Or

Seeing that Ryunosuke had been staring at him, Shibakiza thought Ryunosuke didn't believe it.

He patted his chest and said to himself:

"Don't underestimate me. I also passed the entrance examination and was admitted to the best public high school in Chiba. I still have some Chinese skills."

Ryunosuke nodded slowly, which can be explained, but:

"You can't be a fake firewood seat, can you?"

Chai Muzuo was puzzled at first, and then said: "How could it be?"

Ryunosuke tried it out and saw that his pupils didn't shrink, so he believed it eight percent.

Let's continue to observe in the future.

Seeing that Ryunosuke was still looking at him, Shibakiza coughed lightly: "Okay, I'll be honest.

The previous ones are actually written by myself, and sometimes the tip of the pen can't keep up with the plot that emerges in my mind.

That's why there are so many low-level mistakes. "

Saying that, Chai Muzuo nodded: "Well, this time it's a version for others to read."

"Okay, I understand." Ryunosuke pondered for a while and didn't ask further.

Next, Ryunosuke thought for a while, if the basic skills are okay, then the key point is to watch the plot.

But the plot is mostly the same, with only a few new plots.

So is it possible to quickly look at it, the kind that sees ten lines at a glance?

Ryunosuke thought it was okay, but

He looked up expectantly and approvingly?Looking at his firewood seat carefully:

"Well, since there is nothing wrong with the text and the plot is roughly the same, I just read it quickly?"

Chai Muzuo thought about it for a while, and nodded his head when he felt that there was no problem.

Only then did Ryunosuke feel relieved to use his reading speed beyond ordinary people. Although it was not six times, there were still three or four times.

Chaimuzuo looked at the drafts that were constantly being flipped over, and gradually had some doubts in his heart. Did Ryunosuke really see it clearly?Are you trying to fool me?